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== The Stick of the Fallen ==
 
== The Stick of the Fallen ==
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''When the fire died,''
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''And brambles rose,''
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''The jay's feather''
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''Found a stick.''
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''Scratching six lines,''
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''That cat said:''
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''"This is the''
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''Stick of the Fallen."''
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''The first scratch said:''
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''I died from''
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''Fighting hard, strong.''
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''Killed by a''
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''Dark Forest tom,''
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''After I had''
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''Done my duty.''
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''Mousefur. I am Mousefur.''
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''The second scratch said:''
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''I died after''
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''I saved one.''
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''I left, but''
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''I then returned.''
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''He was Hawkfrost.''
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''He killed me.''
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''Hollyleaf. I am Hollyleaf.''
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''The third scratch said:''
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''I died from''
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''Wounds I sustained''
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''Fighting for ThunderClan.''
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''I survived, but''
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''Then I died -''
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''I wasn't saved.''
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''Foxleap. I am Foxleap.''
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''The fourth scratch said:''
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''I died fighting.''
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''I fought for''
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''The kits of''
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''Sorreltail and Brightheart.''
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''The five survived -''
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''I was satisfied.''
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''Ferncloud. I am Ferncloud.''
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''The fifth scratch said:''
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''I died after''
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''The ferocious battle.''
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''I hid my''
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''Wounds, but it''
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''Cost my life.''
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''My kits survived.''
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''Sorreltail. I am Sorreltail.''
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''The final scratch said:''
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''I died of''
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''The wounds sustained.''
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''I thwarted the''
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''Cat I hated,''
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''But my flame''
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''Was put out.''
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''Firestar. I am Firestar.''
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''The six mark it.''
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''The Stick of''
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''The Fallen Cats.''
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''Today, all apprentices''
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''Learn their names,''
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''As a tribute''
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''To their sacrifice''
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''To save the Clans.''
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== Author's Note ==
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Yey - I love writing poems about ''Bramblestar's Storm'' right now <33333
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This the end of another poem - I do hope you enjoyed it! Feel free to comment below - constructive criticism is appreciated. Don't be mean please.
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Until next time,
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--[[User:Bramblefire3118|<span style="color:darkblue;">Wit beyond measure</span>]] [[User Talk:Bramblefire3118|<span style="color:brown;">is man's greatest treasure</span>]] 21:34, October 2, 2014 (UTC)
 
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Latest revision as of 21:34, 2 October 2014

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Remember that this story is non-canon. It may contain false characters, plots, or locations.
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This is a poem by Brams (again). To see my other poems, click these links.

NOTE: Spoilers for Bramblestar's Storm ahead - if you haven't read it, read at your own risk! It contains major spoilers. (Poems about Bramblestar's Storm are fun - this is my second. <33333)

Anywho, enjoy <3 :)

The Stick of the Fallen

When the fire died,

And brambles rose,

The jay's feather

Found a stick.

Scratching six lines,

That cat said:

"This is the

Stick of the Fallen."


The first scratch said:

I died from

Fighting hard, strong.

Killed by a

Dark Forest tom,

After I had

Done my duty.

Mousefur. I am Mousefur.


The second scratch said:

I died after

I saved one.

I left, but

I then returned.

He was Hawkfrost.

He killed me.

Hollyleaf. I am Hollyleaf.


The third scratch said:

I died from

Wounds I sustained

Fighting for ThunderClan.

I survived, but

Then I died -

I wasn't saved.

Foxleap. I am Foxleap.


The fourth scratch said:

I died fighting.

I fought for

The kits of

Sorreltail and Brightheart.

The five survived -

I was satisfied.

Ferncloud. I am Ferncloud.


The fifth scratch said:

I died after

The ferocious battle.

I hid my

Wounds, but it

Cost my life.

My kits survived.

Sorreltail. I am Sorreltail.


The final scratch said:

I died of

The wounds sustained.

I thwarted the

Cat I hated,

But my flame

Was put out.

Firestar. I am Firestar.


The six mark it.

The Stick of

The Fallen Cats.

Today, all apprentices

Learn their names,

As a tribute

To their sacrifice

To save the Clans.


Author's Note

Yey - I love writing poems about Bramblestar's Storm right now <33333

This the end of another poem - I do hope you enjoyed it! Feel free to comment below - constructive criticism is appreciated. Don't be mean please.

Until next time,

--Wit beyond measure is man's greatest treasure 21:34, October 2, 2014 (UTC)

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