The Arrival

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My First story! Snickers 19:38, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Allegiances

ShineClan

Leader:Rosestar - a light brown she-cat with amber eyes

Deputy:Grayclaw - a large dark gray tabby tom with green eyes

Medicine Cat:Copperpelt: A dark ginger tom with one white paw and bright blue eyes

Apprentice:Gingerpaw:A very bright ginger tom with amber eyes

Warriors

Blackpelt:A black tom with white ears

(More coming soon)

Chapter 1

Goldenkit was excited.Greenshine was having kits! She focused on Greenshine and started waiting. "Uuunhhh" Greenshine groaned."It can't be long now, Gre--Here comes the first one!" The medicine cat, Copperpelt meowed."Why don't you go outside and play with Snakekit?" Her mother, Cloudfur meowed."I don't wanna." She replied." "I want to stay and watch Greenshine." "Okay, but don't get under anyone's paws!" "Okay." A moment later Copperpelt meowed "Well done Greenshine, you've had four healthy kits!" "Jaypelt, come meet your kits!" He yowled outside of the nursery. Seconds later, Jaypelt burst in. "What shall we name the kits?"Greenshine asked."How about the dark tabby tom, Tigerkit, the light gray she-kit, Featherkit, the pale striped tom, Longkit,and-" "The gray tabby she-kit, Silverkit."Greenshine finished."Jaypelt, I'm not the first queen to give birth. Go take care of those deputy duties. I'll be fine." A second later, Snakekit walked in."Cloudfur, I'm tired." "Go to sleep, both of you." She urged gently. "You'll be tired if you don't." "Ookaay," She closed her eyes and blackness engulfed her.

Chapter 2

"Where are we going, Flower?" Blue asked. "I don't know yet, Blue." Flower answered. "Flower, I'm tired." Light meowed. "We'll rest here Light." Flower answered wearily. "Where are we going?"Blue asked again. "I mean, you snatched us up and ran us to here, and we started walking. Why?" Flower sighed. "Do you want the full story?" "Yeah." both kits mewed."Okay. As you know, I had to snatch you up and run, correct? I'll tell you the true story of why we had to run. While you were sleeping, your father, Stick came to our shelter. He said he wanted you kits to be with him. He apparently wanted to take care of you, but-but-" "Go on." "He actually wanted to kill you. I don't know how I knew, I just had a bad feeling in my stomach when he was talking to me.I said no, and we fought. He was going to win, but Sparky turned up and he ran. Sparky urged us to go, and here we are." Light gulped. "You mean-our father wanted to kill us?" "Yes." "But...why?" "I am going to level with you; I have no idea."

Chapter 3

"Can't catch me!" Goldenkit mewed. Snakekit raced after her and she dodged nimbly aside. Snakekit reared up and brought his whole body down on her, knocking the breath out of her. "Hey! That isn't funny!" Snakekit rolled her over onto her back and placed a paw on her chest. "It is to me!" He mewed happily.Then a little brown paw appeared outside of the nursery. "Look! Tigerkit's coming out!" Goldenkit mewed. They raced over to the entrance of the nursery where four bodies were trying to shove through. Silverkit finally pushed out. "Wow!" she meowed, turning as she took in her surroundings. At 1 moon old, she had never been outside of the nursery before. The other three kits pushed through. Tigerkit tripped and stumbled onto her feet. He looked up at her with pleading amber eyes. "Wanna play?" he squeaked. "Sure," she meowed. "Who do you want to be?" he mewed. "I'll be Goldenclaw! Brave and true!" She meowed. "I'll be Tigerstar!" Tigerkit mewed. "I'll be Longcry!" Longkit added. I'll be Crylong!" Featherkit mewed with a sparkle in her eye. "Isn't that Longcry backwards?" Longkit mewed as he pounced on her. They wrestled until Featherkit shoved him off. He skidded until he bumped up against a cat. That didn't smell like ShineClan.

Chapter 4

Longkit cried out and slowly inched his way back to the other kits. The intruder ignored the kits and gave a yowl, "NightClan! Attack!" and all of the kits bundled into the bramble nursery. Cloudfur raised her head drowsily. "What's wrong?" She meowed. "There are cats out there, attacking!" Silverkit squeaked in terror. Even inside the nursery, they could still hear screeches and growls and crys as claws met in flesh. Cloudfur sat up, suddenly more awake. "What?" She said in an urgent tone. "There's attackers, outside! They said they were NightClan." Featherkit mewed. Her fur was bristling and she was shaking. Cloudfur jabbed a paw into Greenshine. She raised her head a little. Before she could do anything, Cloudfur meowed, "Attackers! NightClan!" Greenshine wordlessly sat up and stuck her head out of the nursery. She almost instantly pulled back in, like she had been clawed. "A big brute tried to claw my muzzle off. I'm okay though. I got a small whiff, but it's definentely NightClan." she growled. Cloudfur let out a small sigh and mewed almost inaudibly, "Not good."