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My First story! Snickers 19:38, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Chapter 1

Goldenkit was excited.Greenshine was having her kits! She focused on Greenshine and started waiting. "Uuunhhh" Greenshine groaned."It can't be long now, Gre--Here comes the first one!" The medicine cat, Copperpelt meowed."Why don't you go outside and play with Snakekit?" Her mother, Cloudfur meowed."I don't wanna." She replied." "I want to stay and watch Greenshine." "Okay, but don't get under anyone's-She was interupted by Copperpelt meowing:"Well done Greenshine, you've had four healthy kits!" "Jaypelt, come meet your kits!" He yowled to him outside of the nursery. Seconds later, Jaypelt burst in. "What shall we name the kits?"Greenshine asked."How about the dark tabby tom, Tigerkit, the light gray she-kit, Featherkit, the pale striped tom, Longkit,and-" "The gray tabby she-kit, Silverkit."Greenshine finished."Wow."Goldenkit thought."They have nice names...Just like me!" She finished proudly."This is going to be a fun day."

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	:Goldenkit was excited.Greenshine was having her kits! She focused on Greenshine and started waiting. "Uuunhhh" Greenshine groaned."It can't be long now, Gre--Here comes the first one!" The medicine cat, Copperpelt meowed."Why don't you go outside and play with Snakekit?" Her mother, Cloudfur meowed."I don't wanna." She replied." "I want to stay and watch Greenshine." "Okay, but don't get under anyone's-She was interupted by Copperpelt meowing:"Well done Greenshine, you've had four healthy kits!" "Jaypelt, come meet your kits!" He yowled to him outside of the nursery. Seconds later, Jaypelt burst in. "What shall we name the kits?"Greenshine asked."How about the dark tabby tom, Tigerkit, the light gray she-kit, Featherkit, the pale striped tom, Longkit,and-" "The gray tabby she-kit, Silverkit."Greenshine finished."Wow."Goldenkit thought."They have nice names...Just like me!" She finished proudly."This is going to be a fun day."		:Goldenkit was excited.Greenshine was having her kits! She focused on Greenshine and started waiting. "Uuunhhh" Greenshine groaned."It can't be long now, Gre--Here comes the first one!" The medicine cat, Copperpelt meowed."Why don't you go outside and play with Snakekit?" Her mother, Cloudfur meowed."I don't wanna." She replied." "I want to stay and watch Greenshine." "Okay, but don't get under anyone's-She was interupted by Copperpelt meowing:"Well done Greenshine, you've had four healthy kits!" "Jaypelt, come meet your kits!" He yowled to him outside of the nursery. Seconds later, Jaypelt burst in. "What shall we name the kits?"Greenshine asked."How about the dark tabby tom, Tigerkit, the light gray she-kit, Featherkit, the pale striped tom, Longkit,and-" "The gray tabby she-kit, Silverkit."Greenshine finished."Wow."Goldenkit thought."They have nice names...Just like me!" She finished proudly."This is going to be a fun day."
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