This is by bloodstar18 for Whitestar7's writting contest
Prologue
"We should tell him."
"No! He needs to learn his lesson by himself."
"But...but my son deserves to know what will happen to him, Cloudfrost!"
"Bluebell, calm down. If it'll make you be quite, I'll send a Prophecy."
"Thank you." She wisperd."
A small golden-brown and black tabby tom-kit was suckuling his foster mother. His real mother and to fight during a battle with Nightclan. She had been protecting her brother Crow-wing, when a warrior attacked her.
"Tanglekit." Called a soft voice.
"Yes?" He looked up, and saw a starry cat. "Are you from Starclan?"
"Yes little one. My name is Bluebell. I have come to tell you something."
"Yes, what is it Bluebell?"
"The tangles of life may seem difficult, but the fading light of day will save you."
"What does that mean?"
"I'm sorry but I cant tell you." She said sadly, and faded away.
Chapter 1
"Tanglepaw, Tanglepaw!" THe words echoed in his head from the previous night. His older brother, Ravenheart, had chered the loudest.
"I'm so proud of you....and mom would be too." He said.
"Thanks." He said sadly.
"Don't be sad Tanglepaw..."
"Why did Starclan take her!" He cried.
"I...I don't know...but it was for the best."
"How do you know?"
"I don't." He said simply.
Chapter 2
Tanglepaw was hunting with his mentor, Hollyshadow.
"Yes, that was perfect." She said prasing her apprentice's hunters crouch. "What do you smell?"
"Vole...no, mouse, and...Nightclan!" He growled"
"Well, we are close to the border..." She trailed off.
"No! It's coming from the otherside of us."
"I'll go and get a fitting patrol." She said.
"Wait!...No, it's just one cat." and out poped a the most beautiful white she-cat he had ever seen. She had black ears, paws, and a tail.
"Help! Nightclan are under attack!"
Chapter 3
As Fadinglight jump out of the bush she was hiding in, she saw him. He was only and apprentice, but she knew she would love him forever. "Help! Nightclan are under attack!" She said despreatly.
"Why." He snarled.
Fadinglight was taken aback by his hostiletly, "B..b..because.....well.....your the clan thats sapost to help other clans in troble." She said, on the brink of tears.
"I don't think this scrap of fur is worth our-"
"Tanglepaw! We should help others in need. You know what your mother had said 'Treat others the way you would want them to treat you'." She quoted Bluebell.
"SO!," Hes said outraged, "That is the crow-food of a clan that killed her!"
"I don't give a mouse tail we should help them, and will." She added to Fadinglight.
Fadinglight felt as if she shouldn't be here. An apprentice, from another clan, was being scoalded because of her. "Actually...nevermind, aperantly it's to much trouble." She piped up.
"Nonsense."
"I should be going." And with that she left her love, without turning back.
Chapter 4
Tanglepaw had just gotten back fro his hunting patroal. Hollyshadow had gone to tell Treestar what had happened. When he saw Darkfire walking toward him from the dirt place tunnnle.
"Hi Tanglekit." He said teasing Tanglepaw.
"Im Tanglepaw mouse-brain." He snarled.
"Oh your just so small, I had forgotten." He keeped on bullying, as Tanglepaw lowered his head.
"Shut up you fox-hearted cat," Said Ravenheart. "don't tease my little brother about his size. As i recall you were even smaller."
"You can't protect him forever Ravenheart," He said darkly. "one day I will get him."
"D..d..don't Darkfire. I'll kill you if it's needed."
"I would hold my tongue if I were you." He said threatingly and stalked off.
"What was he talking about?" Tanglepaw asked his brother.
"We need to talk tomarrow." His brother replied, barely above a wisper. "Meet me by the Nightclan border tomarrow at Sun-high."
"O..okay."
Chapter 5
As Fadinglight organized the border and hunting patroals of the day, her mind started to wonder to Tanglepaw. What was he talking about yesterday? There was never a battle between Nightclan and Mistclan. Darkfire had been band from Nightclan and went to live with them but thats the last interaction our clans have been through in seasons. Oh no ! She thought. Surely Darkfire's hate for Tanglepaw's family didn't... She trailed off as Emberstar walked out of his den.
"Fadinglight, come with me. Bring a warrior or two." Emberstar told his deputy.
"Yes sir." She obeyed.
"Foxfur, Hawkfeather, and Airpaw," She called, "Come with us."
As the patroal walk to the Mistclan border, Emberstar told them what they were to do;
"Airpaw go with your mentor and hunt, so we can perswade Mistclan to let us talk to Treestar. Hwakfeather go scout ahead and catch a patroal. And Fadinglight, I need to talk to you priveatly." As they went off to do their jobs, Fadinglight turn to her leader.
"I need you to go and find Tanglepaw."
"What! Enter a clans territory with their promestion?"
"Yes."
'Well......, okay, if you say so.
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8