Talk: Ravens that Don't "Caw"

I know the narrations are cheesy, but I felt like I needed some... explaining? I don't know. I did that randomly. And the weird settings are cheesy too. But, otherwise, do you like it? I did this at GB's request, so hopefully it isn't horrible. 4 the 4est! 21:03, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

This is good! I was waiting for this story to start cuz I saw it on your user page and it looked interesting, so I wanted to read it........and now I can! But I don't really get how he (Hawkstep) changed his name (Bloodfang) and why he killed her (Sunshadow) and stuff... Clover 17:08, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

First, your siggy ROCKS! I love it love it love it...

And second, that was a story for later... don't worry. You'll understand when I do. I'll put it into the story somehow. I already have moments planned out. Other things come to me. I don't plan, I just write. Planning makes the possibilities limited. I set my mind free. 4 the 4est! 20:07, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is cool! I was waiting forever for you to start it :D -Leafwhisker 21:20, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is BRILLIANT! You are srsly talented, Forestpaw. :) --Littlesong 06:26, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Littlesong! Like I said, you are too! (like, Pebble Forest = AMAZING! (from the math geek in me...)) 4 the 4est! 16:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Wow. Two words; Absolutely amazing! I cannot wait until you write more! :D Shistar ^{Mai Talk Page! =)} 15:36, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! I love the ending! I wonder what kit(s) the next book will feature! ^_^ Rubystar ^{"The Tribe is coming..."} 23:38, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow that was brilliant!! You know, when you started it off with It was a dark and stormy night, I thought it wass the pirate story thing!! Anyway amazing!!! Smudge^{A cat like no other…} 09:44, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I forgot about this! I'm glad I wrote it. :) Freedom^{in the forest} 22:11, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. My. Gawsh. This is the most epic story I've read so far in WFW :D My favorite part? Everyone else's! I was like. YES. He started speaking. I can just imagine him having a voice like some hot 17 year old >_> Or is that just me. *Ivy