This is really good!!!!! Write more!!!! Please!! lol --ArtiCloudy Days... 22:05, March 17, 2011 (UTC)
I haven't worked on this in so long that I forgot it was mine. *faillllll* A you can see, I'm not good at sorking on stories. If I ever wanna write as an adult, like, short stories are for me!! --Particulary Good Finder Hufflepuff!!! 22:07, March 17, 2011 (UTC)