Hi. This is my first fanfic (that was made with a plot in mind, anyways XD). If you find a spelling or grammar error, feel free to fix it. Hope you like it! Ravenflight92 02:27, February 26, 2010 (UTC)
PS, plz suggest a rating. I have no idea what to rate it! kthxbai
It's pretty good, but a bit annoying to read without chapters, and medecine cats just annoy me, sorry.
But, it was good.
If you want people to rate it and stuff, you should talk to them for a bit first, and they will read your stories anyway.
Now I've done this for you, can you please vote in the polls on my talk page? thanks, Zaffie 03:00, February 27, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, I agree with Zaffie. Pretty good for a first fanfic, but need a few improvements. I suggest looking around at the other stories on here (including mine, in my not so humble opinion).--Shaf Girl 03:29, February 27, 2010 (UTC)
I seem to have unwittingly selected only the most common Warriors names in the making of this fanfic. I have seen two Ravenflights, two Foxstars, a Cedarstripe, a Fawnspots, and a Badgerstripe. LOL! Ravenflight92 Woodenshippers Unite! 15:45, February 28, 2010 (UTC)
Plus, for those of you who find meddies boring, the next set will be one of those "rise of a leader" stories. So watch Leafkit closely *foreshadowing*! Oh yeah, I've seen another Leopardheart, too. Grizabella: The Glamor Cat 23:43, March 3, 2010 (UTC)
why are you deleteing this Just Be A Queen 22:24, March 29, 2011 (UTC)