IVE MISSED SHADE HOORAY
I seriously think you did a brilliant job in this episode with the changing POV's. Like that's often a challenge for most writers but you just sailed through that and it's very impressive!
I personally do ship CrowXSnow, idk, she seems more mature that Storm but I mean they are both cute I guess. A little wittle tear poked out of the corner of my eye when reading the sad scene where they decide it won't work.
AND IM SO EXCITED TO SEE WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN WITH REED THEY BETTER SAVE HIM PLS
My only suggestion would be to read over it for repitition; often I felt like you would state something several times, in a couple different ways, both when desciriing a situation and in dialogue.