Please tell me which one you think is better! I bolded the changes.
Poem #1
- A sleek starry night
- Giving off shinning light
- Giving strength back
- To those who lack
- Warrior ansestor's with power
- Forgiving those who cower
- Each star a brave cat
- Better than a worthless rat
Poem #2
- A sleek starry night
- Giving off shinning light
- Giving strength back
- To those who lack
- The warrior ancestor's with power
- Forgiving those who act sour
- Each star a brave cat
- Better than a cowering rat
Please tell me which one you like better!!! --♥Shinestar♥ 00:37, April 29, 2010 (UTC)