Warriors Fanfiction
Warriors Fanfiction
 
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Please tell me which one you think is better! I bolded the changes.
:A sleek stray night
 
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'''''Poem #1'''''
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:A sleek starry night
 
:Giving off shinning light
 
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:To those who lack
 
:To those who lack
   
:The warrior ansestor's with power
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:Warrior ansestor's with power
:Even forgiving those who act sour'
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:Forgiving those who '''cower'''
   
 
:Each star a brave cat
 
:Each star a brave cat
:Better than a cowering rat
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:Better than a '''worthless''' rat
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'''''Poem #2'''''
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:A sleek starry night
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:Giving off shinning light
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:Giving strength back
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:To those who lack
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:Warrior ancestor's with power
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:Forgiving those who '''act sour'''
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:Each star a brave cat
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:Better than a '''cowering''' rat
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I dunno, i might write more to it, but it's not as good as all of you guy's writing. --[[User:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:pink;background:red">'''♥Shine'''</span>]][[User talk:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:purple;background:red">'''star♥'''</span>]] 00:28, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
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Please tell me which one you like better!!! --[[User:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:pink;background:red">'''♥Shine'''</span>]][[User talk:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:purple;background:red">'''star♥'''</span>]] 00:37, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 02:06, 1 July 2010

Please tell me which one you think is better! I bolded the changes.

Poem #1

A sleek starry night
Giving off shinning light
Giving strength back
To those who lack
Warrior ansestor's with power
Forgiving those who cower
Each star a brave cat
Better than a worthless rat


Poem #2

A sleek starry night
Giving off shinning light
Giving strength back
To those who lack
Warrior ancestor's with power
Forgiving those who act sour
Each star a brave cat
Better than a cowering rat



Please tell me which one you like better!!! --♥Shinestar♥ 00:37, April 29, 2010 (UTC)