Warriors Fanfiction
Warriors Fanfiction
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:The warrior ansestor's with power
 
:The warrior ansestor's with power
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:Forgiving those who '''cower'''
   
 
:Each star a brave cat
 
:Each star a brave cat

Revision as of 01:19, 1 July 2010

Please tell me which one you think is better! I bolded the changes.

Poem #1

A sleek starry night
Giving off shinning light
Giving strength back
To those who lack
The warrior ansestor's with power
Forgiving those who cower
Each star a brave cat
Better than a worthless rat


Poem #2

A sleek starry night
Giving off shinning light
Giving strength back
To those who lack
The warrior ancestor's with power
Even forgiving those who act sour
Each star a brave cat
Better than a cowering rat



Please tell me which one you like better!!! --♥Shinestar♥ 00:37, April 29, 2010 (UTC)