Warriors Fanfiction
Warriors Fanfiction
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Please tell me which one you think is better!
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'''''Poem #1'''''
 
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:The warrior ansestor's with power
 
:The warrior ansestor's with power
:Even forgiving those who cower
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:Each star a brave cat
 
:Each star a brave cat
:Better than a worthless rat
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:The warrior ancestor's with power
 
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:Even forgiving those who cower
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:Each star a brave cat
 
:Each star a brave cat
:Better than a worthless rat
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:Better than a '''cowering''' rat
   
   

Revision as of 00:38, 29 April 2010

Please tell me which one you think is better! I bolded the changes.

Poem #1

A sleek stray night
Giving off shinning light
Giving strength back
To those who lack
The warrior ansestor's with power
Even forgiving those who cower
Each star a brave cat
Better than a worthless rat


Poem #2

A sleek stray night
Giving off shinning light
Giving strength back
To those who lack
The warrior ancestor's with power
Even forgiving those who act sour
Each star a brave cat
Better than a cowering rat



Please tell me which one you like better!!! --♥Shinestar♥ 00:37, April 29, 2010 (UTC)