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| + | |position = [[The Four Seasons]] |
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| + | |predecessor = None |
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| + | |name = Second Chance |
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| + | |successor = [[The Lion's curse]]}} |
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| + | {{Contains|Bllod,vilonce and gore.}} |
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| − | |Box title = The Survivors |
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| − | |Row 1 title = Blurb |
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| − | |Row 1 info = after the battle with the Dark Forest, most of the clan cats have died. But the rest of the clans have scattered into small groups. So then they must start a quest to find eachother and rentuinte, but they will face dangerous challenges. Will the cats find eachother again? Or will they stay the same forever? |
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| − | |Row 2 title = Charries |
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| − | |Row 2 info = Coming soon |
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| − | |Row 3 title = Rating |
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| − | |Row 3 info = Worse |
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| − | |Row 4 title = Reasons for writting this |
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| − | |Row 4 info = To entertain |
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| − | |Row 5 title = The Message |
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| − | |Row 5 info = ''Never say never.''- Just-A-Beaver |
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| − | |Row 6 title = About the author |
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| − | |Row 6 info = Moonstar is a young girlwho loves to read Warriors. she often writes about them, and loves anything about cats. |
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| − | |Row 7 title = Written By |
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| − | |Row 7 info = [[User:Moonstar10|Moony]]}} |
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| − | ==Triva== |
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| − | *This a Warriors Super Editon. |
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| − | *This is long so it may be in two or three parts. |
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| − | *Don't go complaining to me about any of the charries dying. |
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| − | ==Introduction== |
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| − | Separted.... |
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| − | Lost.... |
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| − | Abonded.... |
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| − | Broken..... |
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| − | Dead..... |
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| − | Yes. That was what happened when the Dark Forest Battle happened. A lot of the cats died in painful, harsh deaths. But the survivors split up into small groups, not clans. Some cats were alone. There were either seven or less cats in thr groups. |
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| − | It was quit a journey. We were in different groups, all destined to lead them. It was hard, but we did it. We had hard times trying to find eachother. |
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| − | And there is a tale here to be told, so listin carefully. This is a magifent tale about our journey, these ten choosen warriors. |
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| − | Now it all beguins here....... |
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==Proluge== |
==Proluge== |
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| − | The wind blew hardly above the valley. A undersized light gray tabby tom was running through the grass and bushses, panting heavily. The grass tickled at his paws as he ran. The wind blew all into his small face, forcing his eyes to water. |
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| − | "Jayfeather!" A voice yowled above the roaring wind. Jayfeather looked around wildly. He had heard the voice, but he couldn't see anyone. |
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| − | "Hello?" Jayfeather mewed loudly, trying to speak louder above the harsh wind, "Anyone there! Show yourselves!" |
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| − | A brown tom emarged from the braken behind Jayfeather. He slyly padded beside Jayfeather. He was very starnge, his fur was oddly long, his yes were brown and his tail was fluffly like a bird's feather. |
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| − | "Who are you? What am I doing here? Are you from StarClan, you don't have stars in your fur!" Jayfeather asked very sharply so the tom could hear. He could tell he was old. |
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| − | The tom let out a muffled chuckle, "Ah, young medicine cat. You ask too many qustions." Jayfeather's paws prickled with annoynce. |
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| − | " Well can you answer any of them?" Jayfeather asked. |
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| − | The tom nodded his head and rasped, "Name's Soren. And i'm not a warrior of StarClan, I'm actully ''alive.''" Jayfeather stared at him with a confused eyes. No wonder why Soren was so old. |
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| − | "But if your not dead," Jayfeather started, "Then is this a dream? Or is this real?" |
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| − | "It's real," Soren rasped. He sat down on the soft grass and settled his paws underneath him. "But when youy feel asleep, you were transported over here." |
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| − | "What do you mean "transported''?" Jayfeather asked, not getting what the eldery Soren was talking about. He surly was a mouse-brain!'' |
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| − | "You'll see," Soren meowed briskly, " Now it's time to get serious. There's something I have to tell you. Come closer, Jayfeather." |
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| − | "How do you know my name if your not from StarClan?" Jayfeather whispered as he leaned his ear near Soren's face. The tom's brisky breathing pressed hard on Jayfeather. |
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| − | Soren ingored his qustion but mewed, "Listen carefully.I-" He paused and closed his eyes. |
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| − | "Well," Jayfeather hissed, "What is it? Hurry up and speak louder!" |
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| − | "''After the darkest battle, four will became fourteen, and the five can save them, but they must never give up because the bloodest emeny will arise.''" |
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| − | Jayfeather gasped. Another prophecy! He was rather confsude by it, too. What did he mean the darkest battle? |
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| − | "What does-" Just as Jayfeather was about to protest, everything dissapeared and Jayfeather woke up to blackness. He was blind again. |
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| − | Jayfeather stood up from his nest made of feathers. He still couldn't get the prophecy out of his mind. |
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| − | "Jyafeather! Come quick! Briarpaw scarcthed her eye on a bramble!" A voice yowled. Jayfeather shook the prophecy out of his mind and quickly sniffed for cobwebs in the small crack of the storage area. He found it and picked it up and ran out of the den. |
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| − | But no matter ehat he did, Jayfeather still couldn't get the prophecy out of his head. |
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| − | But he never knew that it would create an incrible journey..... |
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| − | ('''A/N: The proluge took place during The Fourth Apprentice, when Dovepaw and Lionblaze went to find the otters or beavers, whatever. Anyways, comments?''') |
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| − | ==Chapter 1: Two Years Later......== |
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| − | Sunlight burned through Dovewing's golden eyes. She awoke and yawned. Beside her sleept her friend Bumblestripe. He was curled up tightly snoozing soundly. |
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| − | " Let all cats gather here beaneth the highleadge for a clan meeting, " Firestar's yowl rang through the camp. |
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| − | Dovewing leaned closer to Bumblestripe and nudged him smoothly. |
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| − | " Wake up," She meowed gently, " Firestar called a clan meeting." Bumblestripe's eyes slowly opened. |
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| − | " Alright," He mumbled, "I'm coming. YOu go ahead." |
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| − | Dovewing nodded and padded out of the den. She lifted her nose up and sniffed the warm breeze. Most of the clan were gathered under the highleadge, all muttering instetily. Firestar was sitting on highleadge, looking nervous. ''He's been like that since he found out about the Dark Forest Battle,'' Dovewing thought. |
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| − | Three moons ago, the dark forest had launched a suprise attack at the gathering. The clans won, but the Dark Forest vowed that there would be a battle in three moons. The clans refused at first, but the dark forest didn't lisetin. Then the clans found out about the four, and they knew that they would protect them. |
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| − | Lionblaze, Jayfeather, and Dovewing herself were the three. A moon ago, Cinderheart had been annoucned by StarClan as the fourth cat who could help them. They all had powers, Dovewing had great hearing, Lionblaze could never be beaten, Jayfeather could read cat's minds, and Cinderheart had amazing sense of smell where she could smell anything three miles away. |
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| − | Two moons ago, the clans decided they should unite as one to defet the DArk Forest. Many of the cats from the clans have been seceretly trainning with them, and most of them decided to stay with the Dark Forest. Dovewing's heart lurched as she remembered her sister Ivypool staying with the Dark Forest. |
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| − | Dovewing sat between LIonblaze and Brightheart. Brightheart's kits sat beside her paws tumbling with eachother. Two moons ago, she had three kits, a brown toim named Stickkit, a white she-kit named Snowkit, and a ginger she-cat named Gingerkit. |
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| − | "As you all know," Firestar started, his voice shaking. He was shocked to find out his enemy had come for revenge. " Tommorow is the battle with the dark forest. We will meet with the other three clans at WIndClan's terrioty, then we will go to the island to fight them." He closed his eyes but countined, "And I want to remind you to be storng, have courge, use all your streangh and show no mercy. We will do our best to defet the Dark Forest. But we have the four at our side." |
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| − | He gestured his tail at Dovewing, Lionblaze, Cinderheart and Jayfeather to highleadge. Nervously, Dovewing slowly padded up highledge with the other three at her tail. Dovewing sat down, noticing every cat staring and muttering at them. Jayfeather and Cinderheart sat next to her while Lionblaze stood next to Firestar. |
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| − | "We know that they will protect and guide us, and we will depend on them to help us." Firestar meowed. |
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| − | "Lionblaze! Jayfeather! Cinderheart! Dovewing! The Four!" The clan cats shouted. Dovewing gave her chest a couple of embrassed licks. |
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| − | "We will do our best to defend you." Jayfeather meowed with pride. |
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| − | "Who are you and what have you done to Jayfeather?" Cinderheart muttered. Jayfeather was usally grumpy. |
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| − | "Good," Firestar said, "Now I want everyone to get perpared for the battle. All warriors who have been in the BloodClan battle, I want you to help the younger warriors get perpared. Jayfeather, get all your herbs ready." |
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| − | ===Chapter 2: The Battle== |
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| + | ''Echos of voices mummured off the trees and bushes of the forest."The forest was huge,and very dark.There were thorn bushses and brakens everywhere. Black mist covered almost everything. There was no moon nor stars in the sky.'' |
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| − | ==Chapter 3: "This Is What You Get......"== |
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| + | There was a huge rock,with cats circled around it. They were scary,huge cats,their fur covered with black mist and their eyes red. A dark brown tabby tom leaped on the rock slyly. |
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| − | ==Chapter 4: Falling Apart== |
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| + | "It's time," He yowled harsly above the cats,"we are finally going to destroy the world and clans!" The cats yowled happily. The tom gestured his tail and the crowd was silent. |
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| − | ==Chapter 5: Broken== |
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| + | "Now,you know that we have stolen StarClan's power, "The tom meowed, "we can take over the world! Those mangy twolegs won't know what hit them. And then we would rule the clans!"The crowd yowled once more.The tom grinned evily,his red eyes sparkling with delight. |
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| − | ==Chapter 6: A Message== |
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| + | "But ''when'' are we going to destory the clans?" A silver tom whinned from the front of the crowd, "I'm getting really impationt,Tigerstar!" |
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| − | ==Chapter 7: Lost Forever?== |
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| + | Tigerstar narrowed his eyes at the tom and spat,"Didn't you listin last time,Darkstripe?"He rolled his eyes as the silver tom shook is head. |
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| − | ==Chapter 8: Lionblaze's Plan== |
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| + | "We attack tommorow." |
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| − | ==Chapter 9: The Capture== |
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| + | **** |
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| − | ==Chapter 10: Revenge or Regret?== |
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| + | A light gray tabby tom was running through a forest. The long grass tickled his paws. Rain fell steadily above the forest, turning the sand to mud. The tom skirtted through the mud, covering his paws with mud. He let out an angry hiss. |
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| − | ==Chapter 11: Remember Who You Are== |
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| + | " Hello? Anyone there?" He yowled. No one answered. He tried again. No one answered. |
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| − | ==Chapter 12: " What Message?"== |
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| + | "It's time, it's time, it's time," Voices murmmed above the rain. It was coming from four trees circling a rock. The tom's ears pricked. |
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| − | ==Chapter 13: Shadows== |
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| + | "Who's there?" The cat yowled sharply. But the voices kept mmuttering. The cat slowly crept foward |
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| − | ==Chapter 14: Under The Wave== |
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| + | The tom slowly walked fowar |
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| − | ==Chapter 15: Finding Our Way== |
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[[Category:Fan Fictions]] |
[[Category:Fan Fictions]] |
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Revision as of 16:02, 28 January 2012
| The Four Seasons | ||
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| Preceded by: None |
Second Chance | Succeded by: The Lion's curse |
Proluge
Echos of voices mummured off the trees and bushes of the forest."The forest was huge,and very dark.There were thorn bushses and brakens everywhere. Black mist covered almost everything. There was no moon nor stars in the sky.
There was a huge rock,with cats circled around it. They were scary,huge cats,their fur covered with black mist and their eyes red. A dark brown tabby tom leaped on the rock slyly.
"It's time," He yowled harsly above the cats,"we are finally going to destroy the world and clans!" The cats yowled happily. The tom gestured his tail and the crowd was silent.
"Now,you know that we have stolen StarClan's power, "The tom meowed, "we can take over the world! Those mangy twolegs won't know what hit them. And then we would rule the clans!"The crowd yowled once more.The tom grinned evily,his red eyes sparkling with delight.
"But when are we going to destory the clans?" A silver tom whinned from the front of the crowd, "I'm getting really impationt,Tigerstar!"
Tigerstar narrowed his eyes at the tom and spat,"Didn't you listin last time,Darkstripe?"He rolled his eyes as the silver tom shook is head.
"We attack tommorow."
A light gray tabby tom was running through a forest. The long grass tickled his paws. Rain fell steadily above the forest, turning the sand to mud. The tom skirtted through the mud, covering his paws with mud. He let out an angry hiss.
" Hello? Anyone there?" He yowled. No one answered. He tried again. No one answered.
"It's time, it's time, it's time," Voices murmmed above the rain. It was coming from four trees circling a rock. The tom's ears pricked.
"Who's there?" The cat yowled sharply. But the voices kept mmuttering. The cat slowly crept foward
The tom slowly walked fowar