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| ⚫ | My sister Leopardkit makes really good stories about sorrow with cats when stuff happened, so i though i could try one about when Swiftpaw died. Here it is! --[[User:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:pink;background:red">'''♥Shine'''</span>]][[User talk:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:purple;background:red">'''star♥'''</span>]] 01:30, February 17, 2010 (UTC) |
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The world had ended. All feelings hazardous. Longtail slowly padded up to his dead apprentice's body. Cats tried to comfort him, but that only made him madder. How dare they think that just saying they were sorry was going to make him forget about Swiftpaw? This was Fireheart's fault! He sent Swiftpaw back as a useless messenger during battle in which he could have proven his rightful warrior skills. Why not his precious former apprentice? Longtail pressed his nose into Swiftpaw's fur. Swiftpaw, who would have been rightfully Swiftfoot, a warrior name he chose, was dead. |
The world had ended. All feelings hazardous. Longtail slowly padded up to his dead apprentice's body. Cats tried to comfort him, but that only made him madder. How dare they think that just saying they were sorry was going to make him forget about Swiftpaw? This was Fireheart's fault! He sent Swiftpaw back as a useless messenger during battle in which he could have proven his rightful warrior skills. Why not his precious former apprentice? Longtail pressed his nose into Swiftpaw's fur. Swiftpaw, who would have been rightfully Swiftfoot, a warrior name he chose, was dead. |
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| ⚫ | My sister Leopardkit makes really good stories about sorrow with cats when stuff happened, so i though i could try one about when Swiftpaw died. Here it is! --[[User:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:pink;background:red">'''♥Shine'''</span>]][[User talk:Shinestar|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;color:purple;background:red">'''star♥'''</span>]] 01:30, February 17, 2010 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 23:28, 24 February 2010
The world had ended. All feelings hazardous. Longtail slowly padded up to his dead apprentice's body. Cats tried to comfort him, but that only made him madder. How dare they think that just saying they were sorry was going to make him forget about Swiftpaw? This was Fireheart's fault! He sent Swiftpaw back as a useless messenger during battle in which he could have proven his rightful warrior skills. Why not his precious former apprentice? Longtail pressed his nose into Swiftpaw's fur. Swiftpaw, who would have been rightfully Swiftfoot, a warrior name he chose, was dead.
My sister Leopardkit makes really good stories about sorrow with cats when stuff happened, so i though i could try one about when Swiftpaw died. Here it is! --♥Shinestar♥ 01:30, February 17, 2010 (UTC)