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Whitestorm's walk to the great oak
Prologue
" Watch out! Mousefur" said a ginger she-kit to the cat sitting outside the elders den, "coming through" said a brown and cream tom catching a ball of moss in the air, running straight into the elder, knocking her over. "Kits!" yelled a tortishell queen "stay by the nursery when you're playing, and say sorry to Mousefur." the she-cat was slowly getting up, "Sorry Mousefur" said the two kits "you'd better be" stated the cranky elder flatly. "I can't wait till they become apprentices." she muttered "oh they'll be apprentices soon but for now let's go sun ourselves on the rocks" said a tabby tom sitting down right behind her. "Fine, but I bet Starclan doesn't have to deal with crazy kits like those two." and the two elders walked off to the warm rocks together.
Chapter 1
Whitestorm was headed to the great oak to meet with his mother, Snowfur, and Bluestar. They were going to talk about the past Thunderclan and what was to become of Thunderclan's future. When he was crossing the river on the slippery stepping stones he saw Oakheart sitting on the small island in the middle of the river "Whitestorm how are you?" said the russet tom "I'm good, Oakheart, and yo...ahh" Whitestorm fell into the river "Whitestorm!" Oakheart jumped in to save him. "Oakheart, help!" yelled Whitestorm but his cry was muffled and he only saw the dark water all around him. He was running out of air! All of a sudden a muscular force hit him in the side and got his head above water, pulling him out of the river. He could breathe "Thank you, Oakheart" said Whitestorm still catching his breath. "Don't you have to go meet with Bluestar and Snowfur today?" said Oakheart. "Mouse-dung I'm going to be late" Whitestorm said still dripping wet. "Thanks Oakheart" and he sprinted off toward the trees. When he finally got there he was surprised to see Bluestar's son as well "Whitestorm, you know Stonefur" Bluestar said to him calmly. "Yes, hello Stonefur" Whitestorm said out of breath. "What happened to you?" asked his mother worriedly noticing his wet fur. "I fell in the river and Oakheart saved me." "Are you okay?" asked Bluestar also noticing his wet fur. "It's okay, I'm fine." Whitestorm calmly stated "Are you sure we could make you a warm nest, or do this some other time" said Snowfur. "No!" Bluestar and Whitestorm said at the same time, then Bluestar continued "We have to do this today, this is about Thunderclan's future." Whitestorm sat down beside Bluestar and his mother. "So, where shall we begin?" "Well..."
Chapter 2
Flametail felt the life being drained out of him he couldn't breath, Jayfeather had tried to save him but, that ugly cat told him it was his time to go. He didn't want to die! He had to a least try, so Flametail pounded into the ice one last time it wouldn't work, he saw a cat with a runny nose and stars in its fur, Runningnose, he had a sad look in his eyes, like they were saying I'm so sorry there is nothing we can do, it's time. Flametail felt the last gulp of air enter his body and followed Runningnose up to Starclan. When Flametail got there it was night he followed Runningnose down a long dirt trail which led to a camp-like clearing. Flametail glanced around and saw some of his warrior ancestors Nightstar, Fernshade, Stonetooth, and Mossheart, laying outside of giant dens, sharing tounges, then Flametail noticed somthing, where were all the apprintices and kits? All the cats had the same expression on their faces, sadness. All the cats sat around as runningnose got their attetion "everyone, sadly we have a new cat here today Flametail please step foreword." Flametail did as he was told and all the cat's eyes had that look again. "Tomorrow Flametail will recive his Starclan mentor" the cat's eyes brightend slightly "I will go with him to the great oak." the cats went back to shareing tounges. The great oak, Starclan mentor what was Runningnose talking about? Runningnose probably saw the look on his face because he padded over and asked what was wrong. "What are all those things you were talking about?"