!!MUST READ,OR ELSE IF YOU FOUND ANYTHING UNPLEASANT AND DIDN'T READ WARNING THEN IT ISN'T OUR FAULT!!
Hey guys,this is a Collab with Stormstar and Featherstar! NO,not very a collab but a lot of time I would be editing and doing stuffs because Stormstar is busy or having problems. But oh uh..you might see that FEATHERSTAR is the one writing it right now,because Stormstar have some very personal trouble with his computer so yeah. Let's get started!ontain blood,and violent. If you are afraid of those,please don't read. But don't worry,I would try not to make it to harsh (A.K.A Stormstar AND me)
Credit And Notes
This story is inspired by a wonderful author called Feathercloud479 make sure to check her out and of course,people should not EDIT UNLESS YOU ASKED AND I OR STORMSTAR SAID YES. Let's let allegiance BEGAN.
Another: HUGE WARNING: I saw people still editing this story even after reading my notes, (AKA ME AND STORM NOT), I won't said who,but that person,please stop. I saw you deleted Kel from the Sharp Fighter and I don't appreciate it. If you want to do a story like this,inform Feathercloud479,and see what she said,but please don't edit it
BloodClan Codes and Rules
- The leader is always respected,no matter what
- The seconder is also treated with respect
- The seconder can't not ever led their own attacks without the leader permission
- All the fighters must respect the leader or seconder,or else they can get exiled,get lower down into a worse rank or worse
- Sharp Fighters can never ever led their own battles or disobey the leader or seconder,they can get punished by move down into another rank,being wounded or worst
- Only Sharp Fighters and cats with ranks above them get to have collars
- To become a sharp fighter,you must kill a dog bigger than yourself and bring back the body as proof
- Fighters must hunt if their leader ordered them to
- When a servant die,the weakest kits of a litter would become servant,no matter how young,if there are no weak kits the weakest Fighter become servant
- You can get tooth by killing other cats or dogs or any animal is fasten it's tooth on your collar
- A Queen can only become a queen if their kits are almost born,or else they are still a Sharp Fighter/Fighter
- Servants cannot have kits,they would be punished if they do
- The first quarter moon,the prisoner have nothing to eat,after a quarter moon past,they can eat the left over
- The leader can do whatever they want and won't be punished
- Once a seconder become leader or die,the Sharp Fighter with the sharpest tooth and the most get to be seconder
- All the preys should be brought back to eat,if you ate when your hunting you would be punished
How To Become A Sharp Fighter
How do you become a Sharp Fighter?
- Find yourself a collar
- Kill a dog bigger than yourself and bring the body back as proof
- Wrench the dog tooth out and fastened it to your collar after you bring the dog back and the leader agreed to make you a Sharp Fighter
- Kill enough preys to feed the whole Clan
- And then your a Sharp Fighter!
Rules In Battle Training
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- You can unsheathe your claws in training but you cannot kill
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- If you kill,you must be punished
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- If your a Fighter and kill,you would be punished by wounding
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- If your a sharp fighter and kill,you would be lowered down to Fighters until you learn not to kill
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Mentoring
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Wonder do BloodClan mentor? The answer is...READ TO FIND OUT!
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- A kit/kits must be mentored by it's mother
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- If the mother die,the father is responsibility for the kits
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- If both parents die,the leader can choose whoever to be the mentor
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- If the kits is servant,the mother/father must find time to train them
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Being A Leader
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How do become a leader/what are you responsibility for?
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- To become a leader,you must be very loyal
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- You must kill a great amount of cats/dogs so you can get as much teeth as possible
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- You must be a seconder
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- When you become leader,change your name to whatever you want
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- You must care for your clan and never betray it
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- If the leader betray their clan,the seconder get to take over
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How do Servant become higher rank?
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- They must be loyal to the cat they are servanted to
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- They must wait until their Sharp Fighter die
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- They must kill enough prey to feed the whole clan on that day
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- They must kill two dog,size don't matter
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- Then they get to be higher rank
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- IMPORTANT NOTE: They have only two days to do all this before they are going to be servant to another cat
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Eating Time
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Different ranks get to eat at different time,so here is the time Stormstar and I appointed and of course,some of them are by Feathercloud479
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Leader: Leader get to eat whenever they want,as long as they don't waste the foods deliberately
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Seconder: Seconder get to eat whenever the leader is done eating (They also can eat whenever they want as long as the leader said it's all right)
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Sharp Fighter: They get to eat at sunhigh,dusk and they also have a free meal they can choose when to eat
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Fighter: They can eat a little bit at Sunhigh so they have enough energy to hunt and at dusk.
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Queen: They can only take what they needed,they cannot eat more than three pieces of preys a day
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Servants: They can only eat at sunset
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Getting A Servant
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You can get a servant after being Sharp Fighter for a quarter moon,if there is kits to spare. Leader get to have two servant if they wish,others must be rank Sharp fighter or above to have a servant.
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Servants cannot have kits or mate without the cat they are serving to permission.
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Prisoner
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Rules about Prisoner
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- The first quarter moon,they may not eat
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- They eat left over
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- They must not speak out,or would be punished
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- They would be prisoner for as long as the clan leader said so
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- If they try to escape they can get killed
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- after being free from prisoner the leader would decide if they are fighter or servant
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Is it okay to leave BloodClan?
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Is it okay to join BloodClan and leave?
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The answer is no,if any cats is caught leaving they would be killed. If they successfully left,the leader would try to hunt them down,if they found them,they get to kill them,if not,the cat that escape found on their territory throat would be tear out painfully. (Sorry if this is harsh)
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Warning/Notes
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Some parts of those story might contain blood,and violent. If you are afraid of those,please don't read. But don't worry,I would try not to make it to harsh (A.K.A Stormstar AND me)
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Oh and,also a lot of time a leader won't let there be more than twenty Sharp Fighters,because them they would be more powerless.
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AND LOL I KNOW KIRA IS A GIRLISH NAME BUT I DISAGREE :P
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BloodClan Allegiance
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Leader-Streak,huge muscular gray tom with black streaks and amber eyes matched with blue collar stunned with two dozens teeth.
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Seconder-Kira,small black tom with one brown ear, green collar with around ten tooth and blue eyes
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Sharp Fighter
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Dove-white she-cat with gray spots, (red studded collar with around seven tooth
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Spine- brown dusky tom with black spots (Black studded collar with around dozen of tooth
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Snow-white shiny sleek she-cat with brown paws(Black collar studded collar with around dozen of tooth
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Dapple-toriseshell she-cat with amber eyes(Brown studded collar with dozen of tooth
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Kriack- Black midnight tom with burning amber eyes (Grayish studded collar with around ten tooth
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Striker- Brown tom with black spots and yellow eyes (Brown studded collar to match his pelt with around nine tooth
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Kel- Gray tom with light brown under belly,tail tip and muzzle (Purple studded collar with more than dozen of tooth
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Lynx-brown tabby she-cat with short temper and goldenish eyes (Purple studded collar with more than dozen of teeths
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(Servant: Lemon)
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Fighters
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Couno-pale brown tom with amber eyes
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Mallow-Sweet light brown she-cat with white chest and white muzzle,black ear tips
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Silver-silverish gray she-cat with white ear tip,tail tip and belly.
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Frank-small gray tom with fluffy fur
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Luna-Silver tabby she-cat with white chest
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Spike-Black and brown tom with spiky fur and amber eyes
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Harper- Dark golden tom with yellow eyes
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Asher-Light gray tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes
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Yuki-Snowy white she-cat with blue eyes
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Mike-Gentle Ginger tom with a black stripe down his forehead
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Queen (A.K.A Kit Mother)
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Iskin-Pale gray she-cat with light blue eyes, (Mother to Kel kits, Dusk,Bone and Snake)
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Puma-Pale black tom with yellow eyes (Expecting Mike kits) ~Fun Fact~ She was expecting his kits by ACCIDENT
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Servant
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(You guys get to choose,COMMENT DOWN!)
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Lemon-gray fluffy small tom with dark blue eyes (Cat he is serving to: Lynx)
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Prisoner
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~None~(so far)
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Prologue
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A huge tom curled his deadly claws into his pads,he glanced up coldly at the stars that were shining bright above. His lip cured into a sneer when he remembered the Clan cats words. They would live to regret it! he vowed angrily,scraping the ground with unsheathed claws again. A toriseshell she-cat with amber eyes make her way over to him in the dark.
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She settled down beside the tom,and the tom,grateful for her warmth for a moment did nothing. "Are you still mad they killed so much of our clanmates and our former leader?" she asked softly.
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The tom flattened his ear and hissed at his mate, "I would always be mad and I won't rest until we have revenged!"
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The toriseshell backed away in alarm before brushing her muzzle across his, "I know you would never stop being mad. I would never forgive the clans for taking away my sister and so many of my beloved clanmates too." she breathed.
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The tom glanced at the stars again. I would revenge... he promised again quietly.
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Chapter 1
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"Come on!" hissed a brown tabby she-cat,glaring down at her face,the brown tabby unsheathed her claws and sank it into a snowy white she-cat.
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"Ouch!" cried the snowy white she-cat. "Stop! Please,Lynx."
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"Then get up,Yuki!" ordered the brown tabby called Lynx.
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Yuki forced herself up,turning to lick her wound while wincing. Lynx's paw slammed into her flank again. "What are you waiting for? Wake up your denmate!" she ordered.
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Yuki,wincing turned away toward her denmates and pawed the ones that were still asleep. Asher,a gray she-cat woke up,scrambling to her paws at once before eyeing Lynx nervously,who was now scolding Mike.
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"Now all of you! Go hunt! I am hungry,expect you,Yuki,I need you to find mosses and clean my nest!" Lynx ordered them. Yuki gritted her teeth, Why not get your servant to do it? she wondered angrily as she lowered her head in cold respect before barging out of the Fighter Den and into the Sharp Den. On her way,Mike gentle breathed into her ear, "Don't worry,you can short the bedding out soon."
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Yuki blinked at him before murmuring a, "Thanks." Yuki quickened her pace and entered the Sharp Den,she dragged the dusty bedding out and wondered, Why can't Lemon do this for you?! He's your servant! And that's what servant for! the answer come to her herself, She's in love with Lemon! Every cat saw the way she act around her. she throw the bedding out of their camp before nosing around some roots for fresh mosses. Some cat shoved her and she turned around,stopped herself just in time from hissing at the seconder,Kira.
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Kira was strong,from a small black tom,and in fact,Yuki thought he looked handsome. "A-are yo-you going somewhere?" stammered Yuki when Kira turned his blue gaze on her.
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"Yeah,I am going to catch something good for myself." Kira flexed his claws. BloodClan lived in a not so big forest near the Twoleg Place,so the forest preys aren't plenty,a lot of time the cats find food the Twolegs have left. "What are you doing?" Kira flicked a brown ear.
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"Oh,uh.." Yuki shuffled her white paws in embarrassment, "G-gathering mosses for...Lynx."
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"Oh," Kira narrowed his eyes, "she should have her servant doing that," he growled. "I am sure Streak would want you to hunt instead."
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Yuki,surprised at what he said,blushed. "I am fine with cleaning bedding and gathering mosses." she muttered. She wished he could stay longer but Kira turned away calling over his shoulder, "See you later,Yuki."
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Yuki returned to her work,tugging at the mosses,after gathering a wad she padded back with her mouth stuffed full with it. When she got back,Lynx was talking to Lemon,muttering something into his ear,as soon as Yuki entered Lynx looked up swiftly. “It took you this long to find this little mosses?!” She snarled at Yuki, “learn to work faster, weakling!” Don’t mind her, Yuki thought to herself fiercely as she entered the Sharp den. She’s a dumb fox-hearted old badger.Yuki whiskers twitched with amusement at what she said to herself and thought more, She a dumb old fox-hearted slug,a blind bat,who can't even see in front of her own whiskers!
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"Come on,Yuki! Clean it up!" Lynx yowled from outside. Yuki placed the new mosses in place and padded out,Lynx have stalked over with Lemon trailing behind her,like Kira Lemon was small,but he wasn't as strong as Kira. Beside,realized Yuki, Kira is actually twice his size! Yuki herself wasn't what she call a big cat,but at least she's almost as big as Kira. Dipping her head coldly to Lynx she meowed as respectfully as she could, "Do you want me to do anything else?"
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"Oh,yes!" snickered Lynx. "Go eat that mouse I picked out for you,-don't need to thanks me,-and then go hunt!"
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Yuki brushed past Lynx,pelt hot with anger but careful not to stomp,padded over to where the mouse was. It was left over,probably already eaten by another Fighter,she crouched down and ate the left over. At least I am lucky to get fed. Better have something to eat rather nothing. She thought as she licked her lips to get the last trace of mouse scent off.
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Chapter 2
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"Mouse-dung!"
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Asher stared after the squirrel,who was sitting on a branch,waving it's spiky looking tail triumphantly while staring down at the furious cat.
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"Mouse-brain! Is that the best you can do?" Asher turned around on surprise to see the seconder,Kira.
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Kira was carrying a chaffin,his tail lashing. "Don't you know how to hunt?" he sneered at her.
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Asher forced herself to lower her head in shame instead of leaping at him and clawing his eyes out. Have you never miss a piece of prey? she have often hear stories about Kira being clumsy when he was a Fighter. "Sorry," she muttered through clenched teeth, "I should have caught that squirrel."
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Kira smirked, "Okay,so what have you got so far?"
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"Tw-two mouse,a shrew and I think I should check the Twoleg place for any left over food from Twoleg next..." Asher stammered,careful not to show her anger.
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"Only this little?" snapped Kira, "keep hunting,I already send Mike and Luna and Frank to check the Twoleg place." the bushes rustled and Yuki appeared with a squirrel dangling from her jaw.
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"Hi Ashe-" Yuki stopped mid sentence when she saw Kira. "Oh..h-hello!" she meowed shyly. Asher forced herself not to twitch her tail tip in annoyance. Yuki was in love with this malicious furball?! Asher almost lashed her tail!
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Kira glanced at Asher before meowing coldly, "Hello Yuki." then he turned and stalked away,Asher wondered if he have see the hurt in Yuki eyes. As soon as Kira was out of earshot Asher hissed, "Your in love with that stupid furball? He nearly claw my eyes out just because I missed a squirrel!" she remembered just in time to keep her voice low in case Kira was still around.
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Yuki soft eyes hardened. "So what if I am? It doesn't matter,does it?"
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"Of course it does!" Asher exclaimed, "we are only Fighters,he's a seconder,beside,it's probably to early to think about having a mate when we aren't even Sharp fighters."
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"We are lucky to be chosen to be fighters instead of servant..." murmured Yuki.
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That's true. mused Asher. In BloodClan every litter of kits,the weakest one would be servant while other be fighters. "I still think you are wrong to like Kira,he nothing but a menace." she ignored Yuki hisses of annoyance and anger. Asher can scent another squirrel,I would catch this one this time! she vowed as she crept forward. The squirrel was close to a oak tree,but luckily the long grasses and fern hided Asher gray pelt. She crept one pawstep at a time and she was about to pounce when another cat launched forward with a caterwaul,trapping the squirrel between her claws and killing it.
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"That's mine prey,Mallow!" cried Asher,half angry half proud at her friend.
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Mallow looked up,her eyes wide with surprise, "Sorry,I didn't know you were catching it!" she apologized.
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"It's alright. At least we caught it,didn't we?" Asher purred.
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"Yes." Mallow began burying it,Asher noticed she have a new scratch on her ear.
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"What happened? That ear wound looked fresh." Asher meowed gently.
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Mallow looked up,her eyes were fierce with anger,not pain. "I missed a sparrow that could have feed all the kits and Kira almost sliced my ear off!" she snarled angrily. Asher titled her head back to get a better look at the ear before turning to see if Yuki was still there,sure enough Yuki was gone. She leaned closer to her friend and whispered, "And Yuki still like that furball!"
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Mallow looked surprised. "Surely it's too early to think about getting a mate? I decided once my fighting skills improved I would try to be a Sharp fighter!"
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"Wow!" breathed Asher, "I want to try to! We can do it together!" she give her friend a friendly slap on the shoulder with her tail.
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"I think we have enough." meowed Mallow after they caught a few more mouses.
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"Me too. Let's get back,we won't want to miss meal time." Asher belly rumbled as she dug out her preys,she wished that they can eat everything they caught,but she didn't want to take the risk of finding out. Asher and Mallow bounded back to their camp. Mallow ear was looking sore so Asher meowed, "I think you should get some dock leaves for that ear...I think dock leaves are good for sore pad or ear.."
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"What does dock leaves look like?" wondered Mallow.
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"I think they are kind of curly,green leaves you can find in some clumps of grasses." Asher meowed uncertainly.
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"Thanks!" Mallow blinked gratefully.
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"But don't use them if your ear don't sting!" warned Asher.
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"'Kay." muttered Mallow around her preys.
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When they got back,the other fighters were already getting ready to eat,Kriack,a black tom stalked over to them. "Only caught those?" his amber eyes glowed when he spoke,without waiting for a reply he snatched the biggest prey they were carrying and took it away to eat.
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"Lazy mouse-brain idiot!" hissed Asher under her breath so only Mallow can hear.
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Mallow nodded hard. "Right!"
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