I Won't Be Coming Back

By Bloodstar18 This is about a clan cat, two rouges, and few loners and their trials and tirbulations.

Blurb

Alissa, Grace, Joel, and Raymond, a few loners, just escaped an animal shelter and are learning to live in the wild. But who in their group can be trusted?

River and Spark and two rouges with a misterious past. But will they have a future at all?

Forestclan, Iceclan, Sunclan, and Smallclan are four clans that are at war with each other. How will the smallest, Smallclan, ever survive?

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"it was great please make more"-otterstar

• This is a great story, it urges me to read more and more and my eyes don't even hurt! Beautifully written and interesting. --Spookystorm 02:03, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Prolouge

Alissa woke up next to Raymond. Is was about midnight. She missed her House-folk. They had been living in the wild for a while now. Mabye three days, five at the most. She was geting tied. She was starting to wonder if leaving the Shelter was the right thing to do.

Spark and River were walking up a steep hill, and saw a huge tree with a bunch of cats under neath it. They had finially found their destenation. And then they ran, like the wind, down the slope.

Antstar was addresing the cats gathered beneth them. Silverpaw was watching him closely. Silverpaw didn't trust him. His former mentor, Whitestar, had been kill by Antstar, but nobody believed Silverpaw. This was a time of war, and Antstar wasn't the right leader for Smallclan.

Chapter 1

"Wait, River, what if they don't...welcome us."

"Spark! Don't talk like that!" Yelled his mate.

"I'm sorry, but it is a possibility." He said softly, "After all, we have been stealing prey."

"But we have to eat!" She exclaimed.

"Let's just wait a few days, and watch them, see what they do and how they do it, okay?"

"Alright."

Chapter 2

"Silverpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?" Asked Antstar.

"I do." Answered Silverpaw.

"Then by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior name. Silverpaw, from this moment on you will be known as Silverwisker. Starclan honors your thoughtfulness and courage, and we welcome you as full warrior of Smallclan.

Silverwisker had just got up. His virgil last night had been tiresome. As he blinked sleep out of his eyes he thought: I'm such a mouse-brain. I slept in the apprentices den. As he walked out quitely, so no one would see him, he heard his older sister, Brownear, giving birth. Whitestar had been the father. Silverwisker looked down. He would avenge his dead mentor.

Chapter 3

Alissa was eating a juice mouse, outside of the camp they had made. A fox had come around sniffing for food. Raymond, of coruse, had to be the hreo. The fox had badly injured him, and he was on the verge of death. Now, Grace had to go and find so herbs to heal him. He can be so stupid sometimes, she though.

It had been four sun-rises since the fox attack, and Raymond was closer to death. Alissa didn't know what she would if he died. No matter how mouse-brained he was, she did love him.

Chapter 4

"Spark, its been almost a moon since we started watching the clans. We need to go and ask if we can join them."

"River, we haven't been around long enough to learn what we need to know."

"Are you sure? We've been here a while." She said, tired of this recurring argument.

"I swear, by next quarter-moon we will have made contact with the clans."

"Alright, I guess, I can wait that long."

Chapter 5

Silverwisker was playing with Brownear's two kits, Whitekit and Forestkit. Whitekit was a white tom with one gray paw and blue eyes. He was very adventerous, and was always ready for a fight. Forestkit on the other hand, was a light brown and gray she-cat with green eyes. She was also adventerous, but she was smarter than her brother. She wouldn't go charging into battles. She would strategize.

Silverwisker wished he could have both of them as his apprentice. But sadly, it was forbidden to have two apprentices.

"I miss Whitestar." Said Brownear dismally.

"It's okay Mommy.....don't worry Daddy's in Starclan. I'll become Leader one day and avenge him." Said Forestkit.

"I know you will, sweety." She said lovingly, "I know you will." 

Chapter 6

Raymond had survived, but only just. He still could hunt, the mouse-brain. He'd better hope he gets better soon, or I'll claw off his ear. Alissa thought contemptuously. Alissa was watching Raymond closely.

"What are you staring at, darlin'." He asked softly.

"A sick, fox-brained, and fool of a cat." She said coldly.

"I did it to protect you." He said melancholicly.

Alissa didn't pitty him. "I dont need protecting!"

"I...I'm sorry. He replied downcastedly.

Alissa just wouldn't stop. "Who do you think you are? I din't need help getting out of the shelter, did I? If I can handle Two-legs, I can handle a bloody fox!"

"Alissa!" Joel walked in. "Stop it this instent! Raymond dosen't deserve this!"

"Who are you to determen what he or anybody else deserves?"

"Your friend, and your leader."

"Im outta here." She said walking out.

Chapter 7

Spark had decide they would join Smallclan.

"Why Smallclan?"

"They need more people."

"How would you know?" She had asked.

"Well,....I've talked to Antstar, and it seems their losing the war."

"Theres a war?!?" She yell, "And you never told about it? Why would we join the the losing clan anyway?"

"He promised me the deputyship. It's one step down from the leader."

"I don't give a muse tail about you being the deputy."

"But I could kill him and become leader."

"What? So now your a double-crosser? I don't see how I ever fell in love with a monster like you!!!" She screamed at the cat before her, who she had fallen in love with two seasons ago. "I'm leaveing you, and I won't be coming back." She said running in the direction of the setting sun.

Chapter 8

This was Silverwisker first day on the battlefeild. It. Was. Terrible. Silverwisker clawed some cats face off. Forestclan, Iceclan, and Sunclan had teamed up on Smallclan, they had become Brambleclan. Bodies littered the ground. Most of them where Smallclan warriors. Smallclan wasn't that big before the war but now they could barely hunt. Thats when Whitestar had comanded that no apprentice was to step foot on the battlefeild.

A warrior was charging at Silverwisker. Silverwisker realized it was his friend, Embereye, from Forestclan. Silverwisker was devestaded. Why would my so-called friend attack me? He wondered. Well, nows not the time to ponder why stupid cats do stupid things. Silverwisker slashed at his former friend's side. Silverwisker sented Embereye's blood on his pads. Embereye flung himself at Silverwisker. Silverwisker let him have it, he clawed his belly, bit his neck,ears, shoulders, and broke one of his paws.

As Embereye ran away Silverwisker called out "Thats right, run away you fox-hearted crow-food eater, go cry to your mommy.

Chapter 9



Chapter 10



Chapter 11



Chapter 12



Chapter 13



Chapter 14