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(REEEEEEEEEEEE I changed the prophecy!)
 
(REEEEEEEEEEEE I changed the prophecy!)
   
Bramblestar lay on the moss bed below, and an anxious Jayfeather tended to his many wounds. He was dying. "I-It's your last life..." Alderheart whispered beside his father. He turned and saw Squirrelflight, Tawnypelt, and Sparkpelt waiting outside, their pelts dripping with water as they waited in the rain outside. "W-We brought Tawnypelt as soon as we could." Squirrelflight stammered as she shook her pelt and lay beside Bramblestar. Tawnypelt's eyes darkened. "H-he's going to...?" Jayfeather nodded. "Even I cannot save him." Jayfeather meowed, his voice cracking. Why am I so... sad? He betrayed us with Squirrelflight!N He thought, but a pang of guilt answered him. He didn't know either... It wasn't his fault. And he loved me like a father would. He sighed and turned to Squirreflight. "You must now say your goodbyes." Alderheart spoke, eyes teary. Tawnypelt nodded first. "Bramblestar, you were never a tough fighter," she teased, but her eyes were clouded with sadness. "But really, you were a good brother. You saved Firestar from Hawkfrost, you proved you were not the cat Tigerstar was. You changed so much for our family." she spoke weakly. "You are a good and noble cat." she backed away, tears in her eyes as Sparkpelt spoke. "Father, you were so good to me. When my kits died, t-then you helped me. You knew just how to be a father." she cast a swift glance at Jayfeather before continuing. "You helped me mentor and train them to be the amazing apprentices they are now. I couldn't be more thankful." She blinked at Alderheart, as if she invited him to speak next. "I-I um...uh... dad.. I felt as if you were never proud of me, and I felt like I needed to please you no matter what. But I figured out that you always loved me. But Bramblestar, Father, I am not a noble cat. I am not deserving of your pride." he whispered the last part in his ear, and Jayfeather only heard barely. Alderheart turned to Squirrelflight, "Your turn." he mumbled. Squirrelflight nodded gloomily as she licked Bramblestar's ears. "You were there during the great journey, you were there when I was apprenticed. You were there for me my whole life." she whispered. Bramblestar turned to face her, eyes weary and dark. "I never deserved your love." he murmured, voice raspy. "I didn't trust you when you warned me a-about Hawkfrost...." he rasped. "I hated you when the secret was r-revealed... y-you did it for Leafpool... Your kin... a-and I didn't trust y-you w-with the Sisters. I never deserved your love, o-or leadership." he licked her ear. "I think I finally understand why you did what you did." he murmured.
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Bramblestar lay on the moss bed below, and an anxious Jayfeather tended to his many wounds. He was dying. "I-It's your last life..." Alderheart whispered beside his father. He turned and saw Squirrelflight, Tawnypelt, and Sparkpelt waiting outside, their pelts dripping with water as they waited in the rain outside. "W-We brought Tawnypelt as soon as we could." Squirrelflight stammered as she shook her pelt and lay beside Bramblestar. Tawnypelt's eyes darkened. "H-he's going to...?" Jayfeather nodded. "Even I cannot save him." Jayfeather meowed, his voice cracking. Why am I so... sad? He betrayed us with Squirrelflight!N He thought, but a pang of guilt answered him. He didn't know either... It wasn't his fault. And he loved me like a father would. He sighed and turned to Squirreflight. "You must now say your goodbyes." Alderheart spoke, eyes teary. Tawnypelt nodded first. "Bramblestar, you were never a tough fighter," she teased, but her eyes were clouded with sadness. "But really, you were a good brother. You saved Firestar from Hawkfrost, you proved you were not the cat Tigerstar was. You changed so much for our family." she spoke weakly. "You are a good and noble cat." she backed away, tears in her eyes as Sparkpelt spoke. "Father, you were so good to me. When my kits died, t-then you helped me. You knew just how to be a father." she cast a swift glance at Jayfeather before continuing. "You helped me mentor and train them to be the amazing apprentices they are now. I couldn't be more thankful." She blinked at Alderheart, as if she invited him to speak next. "I-I um...uh... dad.. I felt as if you were never proud of me, and I felt like I needed to please you no matter what. But I figured out that you always loved me. But Bramblestar, Father, I am not a noble cat. I am not deserving of your pride." he whispered the last part in his ear, and Jayfeather only heard barely. Alderheart turned to Squirrelflight, "Your turn." he mumbled. Squirrelflight nodded gloomily as she licked Bramblestar's ears. "You were there during the great journey, you were there when I was apprenticed. You were there for me my whole life." she whispered. Bramblestar turned to face her, eyes weary and dark. "I never deserved your love." he murmured, voice raspy. "I didn't trust you when you warned me a-about Hawkfrost...." he rasped. "I hated you when the secret was r-revealed... y-you did it for Leafpool... Your kin... a-and I didn't trust y-you w-with the Sisters. I never deserved your love, o-or leadership." he licked her ear. "I think I finally understand why you did what you did." he murmured as he let out a shallow breath, closed his eyes, and never took another breath again.
   
 
== Chapter Eight ==
 
== Chapter Eight ==
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Jayfeather mumbled uncertainly beside Briarlight, who was helping sort leaves with him. He felt oddly so-so squeamish, but she was a friend, why would be feel awkward around her?
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(WaH i NeEd iDeAs!)

Revision as of 17:30, 17 November 2019

This will be updated AT LEAST once every week.

Chapter One

"Jayfeather!" Called a hyper Briarlight. Jayfeather always slept in, but it was fun to wake him, even though he snapped at her, but today she had a more special reason. "Great Starclan! Can't a tom get some sleep?" He hissed. Briarlight wasn't affected by this, though, and crawled her way over to Jayfeather, who was now trying to sort herbs. "Jayfeather!" she mewed, her voice high with excitement. "What?" Jayfeather grumbled. He glared at Briarlight, and his clear eyes seemed to stare through Briarlight's. "Ugh, I thought you would remember!" Briarlight playfully grumbled."Today is the day Blossomfall's kits were to be born!" Jayfeather's head snapped up in alert. "Please bring her to me." He meowed. Briarlight nodded, and crawled out of the den and to the Warrior's den. Jayfeather stopped what he was doing, and actually put thought into Blossomfall's kits. How would they feel with no father, and two mothers? Blossomfall had kits with a rouge named Sun, but he died a few days after she learned she was expecting. The whole clan knew, but there were still some whispers every now and then. Jayfeather grumbled as his thoughts trailed to Ivypool. She was Blossomfall's new mate, but still, Jayfeather always wondered how two cats of the same gender could be mates. He shrugged, and turned to the den entrance when a shriek sounded.

Chapter Two (Sorry for forgetting!)

Jayfeather rushed towards the nursery, where Briarlight was looking at her sister in shock, and Ivypool's eyes were wide as she entered the den. Jayfeather grumbled. "Get Alderheart! NOW!" He snapped, and Ivypool nodded, rushing to Alderheart, who was talking to Squirrelflight, who was still on her leg brace after the landslide that had killed Leafpool. Jayfeather sighed as he began to push on Blossomfall's flank. "Stay calm." He urged, yet anxiety was in his voice. "It'll be over soon, stay still." Blossomfall nodded, and winced. "A kit's coming!" Jayfeather meowed in delight and fear. He pushed on her stomach, and helped the kit be born.

(A few hours later.)

Jayfeather relaxed as Briarlight licked the final kit. "What are their names?" Briarlight asked. Blossomfall smiled. "I was thinking Graykit for this one, after my father." she said, lapping at a fluffy gray tom-kit's pelt. Briarlight smiled, and Jayfeather felt a surge of happiness. Ivypool smiled and licked Blossomfall's forehead. "And this is Rainkit." Ivypool said, smiling as she nuzzled a tiny white she-kit with gray spots. "And this one, we both decided." Blossomfall smiled as she licked a small, white tom-kit's head. "He's the littlest." Ivypool said, smiling. Blossomfall nodded. "And this is Darkkit." she said. Briarlight smiled. "A perfect name."

Chapter Three

It had been two moons since Blossomfall's kitting, and already they were making a big mess. "Ugh!" Jayfeather grumbled. "Rainkit, go play with Graykit and Darkkit or something!" Jayfeather growled at the little kit who was rolling in his organized leaf pile. "But Darkkit's so boring, and Graykit's busy! Darkkit only wants to talk with the elders and hears stories." "That's not an excuse." Jayfeather mumbled, "Now go."

An hour later, Briarlight walked in. "Watcha doing?" She asked, and Jayfeather sighed, turning his blind gaze on the paralyzed cat. "Sorting leaves. What do you want?" He muttered. Brairlight dragged herself up to him and plopped on the ground right next to the gray and blind medicine cat. "Great Starclan! I just want to talk. I was going to ask, 'Would you like to take a walk with me? I heard Stormcloud talking about a new stem of catmint.' But you don't care." she pouted. Jayfeather sighed and rolled his eyes. "Fine, let's go." He grumbled as he got up, and Briarlight extended her front legs as she began to drag herself.

"Wow, this sure is a lot of catmint." Jayfeather said as he plucked the leaves from the stem. "I wonder how we didn't know about this before!" He said. Briarlight smiled. "I guess you just didn't /look/ hard enough!" She said as she broke oput into a cry of laughter and Jayfeather rolled his eyes. "Come on, I got enough to last us until, next New Leaf." Briarlight playfully pawed him in the shoulder. "You're no fun!" She mewed as she dragged herself beside Jayfeather.

Chapter Four

Jayfeather glanced at Briarlight from behind before padding over to his den. He sighed. "Briarlight, can you sort these for me?" He asked. Briarlight nodded, and crawled over to the pile of leaves and began to sort them. Jayfeather grunted his thanks, and walked off into the Elder's den to check Mousefur, Purdy, and Longtail's ticks, but suddenly, a shriek filled the air, and Jayfeather's fur stood on end as he ran to the nursery, Alderheart following shortly behind as he entered camp from the forest. /Odd.../ Jayfeather thought. /Why would Alderheart be in the forest? He has no herbs, so he couldn't have been getting those, and we'll all in stock.../ but he shook his head as he entered the nursery to hear a wailing kit and his mother. "What happened?!" Jayfeather meowed. "I-I... Darkkit a-and Graykit w-were playing but then... but then Darkkit got carried away..." Blossomfall whined in between sobs. Ivypool was nuzzling her softly and licking her ear fur. "It's okay... Jayfeather and Alderheart will help..." she soothed. Jayfeather picked up Graykit in his scruff as Alderheart examined the poor kit. "He's badly injured. This is more than carried away. It looks like an experienced Warrior did this. Look, these scratches look deep, and they're all over his belly, face, and neck... the weakest spots on a cat. He's badly injured, very badly. I'll take him to the medicine den, Jayfeather. Can you stay here and ask Ivypool and Blossomfall and Darkkit what happened?" Jayfeather nodded as he gently placed down the weeping kit ground.

Chapter Five

"So... you remember, /nothing/?" Jayfeather questions Darkkit, who was sobbing. "I-I... I remember... playing... and then... this." He sniffled. Jayfeather tilted his head. "Okay, thank you, just know you are not in trouble, Darkkit." "But you are...." A she-cat's voiced rasped with the wind. Jayfeather turned his head, but others didn't seem to notice. He shrugged, and sat down next to Ivypool and Blossomfall. "He remembers...nothing." He began. "Odd. What you remember?" He asked Blossomfall and Ivypool. "I-I was asleep..." Blossomfall whined. Ivypool licked her head before turning to the blind, gray, tom. "I was awake. I was watching them, and suddenly Darkkit stopped and collapsed. Graykit prodded him, and Darkkit stood up, but something was off. Then, he leaped onto Graykit and attacked him... something's wrong.." Ivypool sighed. Jayfeather nodded, his blind blue gaze sweeping over the nursery. "I-I must go to the Moonpool." He said suddenly. "Nothing like this has ever happened, and Darkkit seems to not remember... /anything/." He sighed. "I'm going NOW. Tell Alderheart for me." Ivypool nodded and Blossomfall gave a weak, "Okay..."

As Jayfeather pressed his nose to the Moonpool, a chill swept along his spine as he fell asleep.

Chapter Six

(Author Note: The plot point is not gunna always directed towards Jayfeather and Brairlight, bc love lakes time :3 )

Jayfeather rolled his now-seeing eyes as his gaze landed on Yellowfang. Why did /she/ always have to be the one to talk to him? But he let out a sigh and turned to the gray, dirty, scarred she-cat. "You know why I came here." Jayfeather growled, and Yellowfang nodded. "Darkkit is... special.." she sighed sadly. "I can tell you no more than this: Before Destiny is fulfilled, the stars will be silent and dark. One with the shadows will destroy, unless the other two save. That is all, Jayfeather. I'm sorry..." she meowed ominously, but she trembled as she spoke.

Jayfeather woke with a start as he remembered the dream almost instantly, his blind blue gaze looking around himself, his pelt prickling. He sighed as his pelt smoothed and he walked away, back to the clan camp.

Chapter Seven

(REEEEEEEEEEEE I changed the prophecy!)

Bramblestar lay on the moss bed below, and an anxious Jayfeather tended to his many wounds. He was dying. "I-It's your last life..." Alderheart whispered beside his father. He turned and saw Squirrelflight, Tawnypelt, and Sparkpelt waiting outside, their pelts dripping with water as they waited in the rain outside. "W-We brought Tawnypelt as soon as we could." Squirrelflight stammered as she shook her pelt and lay beside Bramblestar. Tawnypelt's eyes darkened. "H-he's going to...?" Jayfeather nodded. "Even I cannot save him." Jayfeather meowed, his voice cracking. Why am I so... sad? He betrayed us with Squirrelflight!N He thought, but a pang of guilt answered him. He didn't know either... It wasn't his fault. And he loved me like a father would. He sighed and turned to Squirreflight. "You must now say your goodbyes." Alderheart spoke, eyes teary. Tawnypelt nodded first. "Bramblestar, you were never a tough fighter," she teased, but her eyes were clouded with sadness. "But really, you were a good brother. You saved Firestar from Hawkfrost, you proved you were not the cat Tigerstar was. You changed so much for our family." she spoke weakly. "You are a good and noble cat." she backed away, tears in her eyes as Sparkpelt spoke. "Father, you were so good to me. When my kits died, t-then you helped me. You knew just how to be a father." she cast a swift glance at Jayfeather before continuing. "You helped me mentor and train them to be the amazing apprentices they are now. I couldn't be more thankful." She blinked at Alderheart, as if she invited him to speak next. "I-I um...uh... dad.. I felt as if you were never proud of me, and I felt like I needed to please you no matter what. But I figured out that you always loved me. But Bramblestar, Father, I am not a noble cat. I am not deserving of your pride." he whispered the last part in his ear, and Jayfeather only heard barely. Alderheart turned to Squirrelflight, "Your turn." he mumbled. Squirrelflight nodded gloomily as she licked Bramblestar's ears. "You were there during the great journey, you were there when I was apprenticed. You were there for me my whole life." she whispered. Bramblestar turned to face her, eyes weary and dark. "I never deserved your love." he murmured, voice raspy. "I didn't trust you when you warned me a-about Hawkfrost...." he rasped. "I hated you when the secret was r-revealed... y-you did it for Leafpool... Your kin... a-and I didn't trust y-you w-with the Sisters. I never deserved your love, o-or leadership." he licked her ear. "I think I finally understand why you did what you did." he murmured as he let out a shallow breath, closed his eyes, and never took another breath again.

Chapter Eight

Jayfeather mumbled uncertainly beside Briarlight, who was helping sort leaves with him. He felt oddly so-so squeamish, but she was a friend, why would be feel awkward around her?

(WaH i NeEd iDeAs!)