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Goldenflower's Pain

This is a poem that's kinda in response to the poem His Loss Which by the way I LOVE!!! So anyways here it is.

The tom loved power

More then his mate
And more then his life they say
And he forgot about the she-cat that he pledged his heart to.
The she-cat loved him
But felt so betrayed
And her heart was broken
When he went away
And their kits were scorned

Though it wasn't their fault

So one ran away to try to live in peace
And one prove his loyalty
And if you can understand the pain of that,
How the tom would ditch his mate for power
Then you have just begun
To feel the pain of Goldenflower.

Not very good I know but anyways, tell me what you think.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:28, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

If you like this you should read His Loss by Leopardkit.

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