Michief is so cute<333
Also I like the new view on ShadowClan. Though I feel as though you've made the bad cats a little too kind bc they're not really showing their dark side or doing what I felt they would have done regardless if Rusty was in ThunderClan or not c:
I really like Boulder though, and I'm glad we get to see more of him. There was no real development for that cat so I like that you've given him something.
You've made Mischief really cute and I like how even though she's naive, she's not completely stupid or like insolent. (OR NOT LIKE BOUNCInG EVERYWHERE) She's controlled and intelligent even for her age.
sorry this is short :c but I really do love this story <3