hmph i cannot let brighty be the #1 fan
Hm...I can see how Rusty not coming will soon affect ThunderClan. I'm just interested to know how you'll change the events that happen. Again, I still think this is fabulous and the idea is just so unique :)
Ravenpaw! He's one of the few that I remember clearly from the first series that didn't quite make it through the great journey. I want to see how he'll fare in ThunderClan, and I really do like the way you wrote the fight. Like Brighty said, it was really intense and you're def a good fight scene writer. You also described ravenpaw's fear really well and I'm so eager for more!