I like the setting because most people don't put it in this place. Brokenstar seems a lot nicer, because I sort of expected him to just ruthlessly decide to place Mischief in a fight without any sympathy but this isn't that much of a difference.
I really like the way you potray MIschief. She's just so innocent but defiant for such a young age that I'm instantly drawn to her. You really do draw out her cuteness but also show her fierce side (or attempt to). I can tell she's probably going to be my fav charrie
Again, great setting!! I'm so pumped to see what Brokenstar decides to do to her and how she'll see Clan life after it.
Sorry this comment is so short :c