Hello, this is a story about my OC, Breezeleaf. This is the first FanFiction that I am going to work tirelessly on. I would appreciate it if you could type your opinion on this as well as improvements I could make and minor plot points I should change into subplots. Thank you, and enjoy reading Breezeleaf’s Choice.
Allegiances[]
RiverClan[]
Leader: Heatherstar- brown and pale ginger tabby she-cat
Deputy: Goldfoot- dark brown tom with golden paws and green eyes
Medicine Cat: Breezeleaf- silver tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
Warriors:
Quailshine- blue-gray tabby she-cat with green eyes
Grayfur- gray tom with green eyes
Frostwhisker- white tom with blue eyes
Blackstream- black she-cat with yellow eyes
Brightsong- ginger tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Stormpool- gray tom with yellow eyes
Marshtail- brown-and-white she-cat with black splotches
Rowanflame- brown tom with amber eyes
Echopool - gray tabby tom with green eyes
Dustwhisker- brown tabby she-cat
Fernstripe- gray tabby tom
Whitestep- white tom with pale gray paws and yellow eyes
Birdflight- blue-gray tom with amber eyes
Stonetail- black-and-gray tabby she-cat with a long tail and yellow eyes
Dapplefrost- white she-cat with silver tabby splotches and ice blue eyes
Greenwhisker- brown tabby she-cat with green eyes and whiskers that are green in certain lights
Dawnpool- golden and pale ginger tom
Milktail- silver she-cat with a white tail
Queen:
Sunspot- white she-cat with a bright ginger spot on her chest (nursing Redkit, a dark ginger tom; Smokekit, a very dark gray tom; and Windkit, a white tom)
Elders:
Maplesong- ginger and white she-cat
Berrypelt- pale ginger-and-black tortoiseshell
Sandgaze- pale ginger tom
ThunderClan[]
Leader: Duststar- brown she-cat with amber eyes
Deputy: Honeywing- golden tabby she-cat
Medicine Cat: Leafdawn- dark brown tom with pale brown paws
Apprentice, Yarrowpaw
Warriors:
Rabbitfang- brown tom
Badgerface- black-and-white tom
Featherpool- pale gray she-cat
Wrenpelt- brown tabby tom
Dandelionear- brown tabby she-cat
Rainfur- thick-furred speckled she-cat
Gingerfrost - ginger-and-white tom
Apprentice:
Yarrowpaw- fluffy white she-cat
Chapter 1[]
Breezeleaf opened her eyes. She squinted against the morning light that pieced through the reeds of the medicine den. She shook her silver tabby pelt and walked out the entrance of the medicine den. She saw that Hollykit and Hazelkit were already up. She mumbled a small prayer to StarClan, begging that the kits didn’t wreck her herb store today.
The she-cat began to walk towards the warriors' den in hopes of seeing her sister or brother awake. But when she looked in, she was disappointed to see her siblings were still asleep.
She began to walk towards the camp entrance instead when she realized that she would likely need to check on Dapplenose. His joints had been aching the night before. Breezeleaf walked back over to her den and grabbed some of the little feverfew she had in store, then made a mental reminder to collect more later. She then padded over to the elders' den. There, she stood at the entrance of the den. Dapplenose was talking to his denmate, Roseheart, about prey and whatnot. The medicine cat tilted her head in annoyance, the small leaves of the feverfew tickling her nose. The rustling must have caught his attention, because Dapplenose looked away from Roseheart and up at her.
“You finally came!”, mewed Dapplenose.
"How are your joints?” , Breezeleaf asked him. Dapplenose shifted his paws under his belly. He nodded and she knew he meant that he was fine.
She sighed and headed back towards her den. She carefully placed the feverfew in its store and headed out towards the camp entrance. The reeds brushed her fur as she smelled the familiar, moldy smell of the river.
Breezeleaf sat beside a small patch of reeds right next to the river. The river's rush filled her ears as she looked around to see if there was any alder bark laying on the soft ground. She sighed when she saw that there was none. It wasn’t like she could climb up the trees and get it. Everybody knows that RiverClan cats can’t climb trees! There was simply no need to. However, there was a patch of fennel beside a stone by the river.
Chapter 2[]
Coming Soon