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| − | “It’s almost sunset, are you sure they are coming?” Scar asked calmly. “I’m sure, they wouldn’t leave us, but they could be in danger.” Rage answered. “No, Tack is the best tracker in the clan she could smell a dog before it knew it was following her, and Kill is one of the best fighters. They couldn’t be in danger. They should be here soon.” Hiss replied. Right when she said that Scratch who was standing guard meowed. “They’re back!” And the three she-cats padded in. “Sorry we’re late.” meowed Kill “This she-cat was hard to find.” Tack mewed flicking her tail at the ginger she-cat standing in between them. “It’s okay,” Rage meowed. “I’m just glad you could find her. Claw, Hiss, Scar come talk with me. Slash go stand on guard with Scratch. Flash go find a place for Tack and Kill to rest then take Scratch to hunt for them.” Rage ordered. “As for you, mother you can join me.” Rage growled evilly. “What do you want, Rage?” the she-cat hissed. “Don’t act like you don’t know, but I’ll play along, Scourge died now I’m leader, and most of my clan is gone, but I’m guessing you want to know why I sent Tack and Kill to find you and make you prisoner, well that’s because you left me and my father at the last second and now he’s dead, and you will be part of BloodClan, weather you want to or not.” Rage sneered. “How can you make me?” the she-cat asked calmly. “I have my ways, don’t you know why father named her Kill? If you don’t obey you will not live.” Rage hissed. "That's one of the worst rules your father made, who ever heard of the leader naming all the kits." The she-cat grumbled. |
+ | “It’s almost sunset, are you sure they are coming?” Scar asked calmly. “I’m sure, they wouldn’t leave us, but they could be in danger.” Rage answered. “No, Tack is the best tracker in the clan she could smell a dog before it knew it was following her, and Kill is one of the best fighters. They couldn’t be in danger. They should be here soon.” Hiss replied. Right when she said that Scratch who was standing guard meowed. “They’re back!” And the three she-cats padded in. “Sorry we’re late.” meowed Kill “This she-cat was hard to find.” Tack mewed flicking her tail at the ginger she-cat standing in between them. “It’s okay,” Rage meowed. “I’m just glad you could find her. Claw, Hiss, Scar come talk with me. Slash go stand on guard with Scratch. Flash go find a place for Tack and Kill to rest then take Scratch to hunt for them.” Rage ordered. “As for you, mother you can join me.” Rage growled evilly. “What do you want, Rage?” the she-cat hissed. “Don’t act like you don’t know, but I’ll play along, Scourge died now I’m leader, and most of my clan is gone, but I’m guessing you want to know why I sent Tack and Kill to find you and make you prisoner, well that’s because you left me and my father at the last second and now he’s dead, and you will be part of BloodClan, weather you want to or not.” Rage sneered. “How can you make me?” the she-cat asked calmly. “I have my ways, don’t you know why father named her Kill? If you don’t obey you will not live.” Rage hissed. "That's one of the worst rules your father made, who ever heard of the leader naming all the kits." The she-cat grumbled. "He didn't name ''all'' of the kits!" Rage snapped. "He only named the ones that deserved it ones that were named horrible things like Tiny! I'm done with you, for now!" Rage hissed. "Claw, Scar, find a place to keep her, and have a cat stand guard. Hiss, take a patrol at sunrise to find a new camp, take Scratch, Tack, and Flash." Rage ordered " Yes Rage, but Flash isn't a half member yet." Hiss replied gently. "Oh, yes right." Rage called the cats. "Flash, you're a half member now, Hiss will teach you." Rage yowled. "Yes, Rage." Flash called as she dipped her head to her leader. Rage dismissed his clan and walked to the edge of the clearing. ''Brick will learn her lesson'', he thought to himself and drifted to sleep. |
==Chapter 3== |
==Chapter 3== |
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Revision as of 20:51, 11 August 2011
okay this story is about when bloodclan finds a new territory and well read to find out...
Alligences
BloodClan
Leader:
Rage - Black tom with yellow eyes.
Deputy:
Claw - Golden tom with dark brown eyes.
Full Members:
Scar - Black tom with a scar on his right eye. (Claw's brother)
Hiss - Gray she-cat with yellow eyes.
Scratch - White tom with golden eyes.
Tack - Dark ginger she-cat with yellow eyes.
Kill - Light brown she-cat with green eyes. (Tack's sister)
Half Members:
Slash - Orange and white tom with orange eyes. (Scratch's younger brother)
Kits:
Flash - Orange she-cat with blue eyes.
Rogues:
Willie - Brown tabby tom with light green eyes.
Brick - Ginger she-cat with green eyes.
Snipe: Brown and black tom with amber eyes
Prologue
He watched as Scourge lost more and more blood, realizing his clan had lost, he yowled at the remaing cats to retreat, "Retreat, we've lost meet up at camp!" When they turned to run to the twolegplace there were cats blocking them off. "Run!" Some of the Bloodclan cats turned the oppisite way and ran but most of them broke off a ran back to their home, he was too smart for that he led the rest of the cats past the marshland until they were sure the cats chasing them left and they were safe.
Chapter 1
“Rage, your father is dead.” A gray she-cat meowed. “Where’s my mother?” Rage growled angrily. “And where’s Willie and Snipe and the others?” “Your mother left right before the battle and most of your father’s followers ran away, back to our old camp, or were killed only eight of us stayed.” Hiss meowed. “Tell Tack and Kill to find my mother, bring her back here, and we will take her prisoner if we have to. As for the others, tell Claw to take Slash, find Snipe, see what he’s doing, and tell him where we are. Now, go!” Rage hissed. As Hiss turned to leave Rage stopped her. “Send Tack and Kill in.” “Okay.” And Hiss left.
“Yes, Rage?” a dark ginger she-cat padded in quickly with a light brown she-cat behind her. “I want you to find my mother, and since those clan cats will be here soon we will have to leave we will be at the edge of their territory meet us there at sunset with my mother, and we will find a new territory where we can keep an eye on those clan cats.” “Yes, sir.” Tack mewed calmly. “I want her alive, and don’t fall for her tricks they will just waste your time” Rage called as the she-cats left. “It’s time I go talk to my clan” Rage whispered to himself and left his den.
“As you know, my father is dead, and many of our members left us. Those members were weak!” Rage yowled, and many cats yowled in agreement, Rage quieted them. “There are only eight of you left, but with your help and with me as your leader BloodClan will return to its former glory!” The cats yowled again. “First, though we must find a new territory, where we can watch over the clans that betrayed us and when they are weak we will pounce.” As he said that Claw and Slash padded into the clearing. “Ice and Snake have started a new BloodClan!” Claw called to his new leader “and Snipe is part of it!” “What! How dare they, my father told everycat I was to be the new leader if anything happened to him. How many of them are there?” Rage growled with fury. “A lot.” Claw answered. “We could fight them, but if we did we would have injured cats, and since there not the true BloodClan they will not survive one season. We need to find a territory…” Rage talked to himself, while the cats watched their leader work the problem out. “We won’t fight them.” Rage called to his clan. “We will let them destroy themselves and they will return but we will only let the true BloodClan cats stay.” The cats were surprised but did not disagree with their leader. “We won’t fight them but if you see any of them, attack, without mercy.” Rage yowled. “Now we must leave this territory but before we do I would like to make Slash a full BloodClan member!” All of the cats yowled with excitement, and Slash walked up to his leader. “Slash you have worked hard to become a full member and my father knew you deserved to be one, you are a smart cat and a great fighter.” Slash bowed his head as Rage finished his father’s words “You are now a full BloodClan member.” And Slash raised his head. “Welcome.” Rage meowed. “Welcome.” The other cats repeated. Slash dipped his head to his leader and the other cats and walked into the crowed. “We must go!” Rage said. “Claw take Scar, and Hiss and run ahead, I will take the others and follow behind." "Yes, Rage." And they ran off, Rage gathered the rest of the cats and began to follow.
Chapter 2
“Hi Rage.” An orange she-cat meowed happily. “Hi Flash.” Rage grumbled. “I’m sorry about what happened to your father, I was really sad when my parents died.” Flash mewed. “Yeah, he was a good teacher, I guess” Rage meowed. “Do you miss him?” Flash pressed. “Well of course I miss him!” Rage snapped, Flash whimpered “Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you.” Rage meowed. “I miss him, but life must go on, I’m leader now and I will put things right. No cat will ever touch my cats again.” Rage growled. “That’s good, because I will always be a part of it.” Flash purred as she moved closer. “Good, we need all the cats we can get” Rage meowed as he started to pull away and pick up the pace. If we are going to get there by sunset we need to speed up, Rage thought to himself, but he couldn’t push away his conversation with Flash, What’s wrong with her? He asked himself What if she’s sick? No she’s not sick but there is something odd about the way she was acting, I’ll ask Hiss to keep an eye on her. And he pushed the pace even harder.
“It’s almost sunset, are you sure they are coming?” Scar asked calmly. “I’m sure, they wouldn’t leave us, but they could be in danger.” Rage answered. “No, Tack is the best tracker in the clan she could smell a dog before it knew it was following her, and Kill is one of the best fighters. They couldn’t be in danger. They should be here soon.” Hiss replied. Right when she said that Scratch who was standing guard meowed. “They’re back!” And the three she-cats padded in. “Sorry we’re late.” meowed Kill “This she-cat was hard to find.” Tack mewed flicking her tail at the ginger she-cat standing in between them. “It’s okay,” Rage meowed. “I’m just glad you could find her. Claw, Hiss, Scar come talk with me. Slash go stand on guard with Scratch. Flash go find a place for Tack and Kill to rest then take Scratch to hunt for them.” Rage ordered. “As for you, mother you can join me.” Rage growled evilly. “What do you want, Rage?” the she-cat hissed. “Don’t act like you don’t know, but I’ll play along, Scourge died now I’m leader, and most of my clan is gone, but I’m guessing you want to know why I sent Tack and Kill to find you and make you prisoner, well that’s because you left me and my father at the last second and now he’s dead, and you will be part of BloodClan, weather you want to or not.” Rage sneered. “How can you make me?” the she-cat asked calmly. “I have my ways, don’t you know why father named her Kill? If you don’t obey you will not live.” Rage hissed. "That's one of the worst rules your father made, who ever heard of the leader naming all the kits." The she-cat grumbled. "He didn't name all of the kits!" Rage snapped. "He only named the ones that deserved it ones that were named horrible things like Tiny! I'm done with you, for now!" Rage hissed. "Claw, Scar, find a place to keep her, and have a cat stand guard. Hiss, take a patrol at sunrise to find a new camp, take Scratch, Tack, and Flash." Rage ordered " Yes Rage, but Flash isn't a half member yet." Hiss replied gently. "Oh, yes right." Rage called the cats. "Flash, you're a half member now, Hiss will teach you." Rage yowled. "Yes, Rage." Flash called as she dipped her head to her leader. Rage dismissed his clan and walked to the edge of the clearing. Brick will learn her lesson, he thought to himself and drifted to sleep.