Talk:Ghost Baby/@comment-5197876-20130926135735

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This idea is coolio. I like all the supense that;s put into it.

The prologue is mysterious, and Grassclaw is too. If he's a rouge, why does he have a Clan name? (thinks)

The emotions fit together, and while I don't usually go for love at first sight stories, (even thought sometimes I write them myself. Argh, I am such a hypocrite)

This is really well done, and I excite for more!