Talk:Capture/@comment-25630395-20150427105829

SpOiLeRs

Wow. Just... wow. I'm normally not a fan of supernatural-ish books, but this one is short but extremely good.

First off, the format of the 'chapters' are very interesting, as with this whole concept. The beginning especially, it gave me the shivers. I love how this has such a cryptic feel to it. Wonderful job!

The end was also creepy, with that line about 'true forms' and the pale eyes ending.

The one thing I wished was that we had more of an introduction to the surroundings/cats. It was probably meant to be like that, but some events were a little jarring, like 'wait, hold up a sec' moments. But again, the story was probably meant to be like that.

Good job, Blade! Looking forwards to reading the second book!