Talk:Reunited/@comment-5342796-20150813033533



OMG I LOVED THIS EPISODEEE

I am SO excited; I can tell that this marks the beginning of a new branch of the show, now that they've finally met the rebels and officially joined. And I'm convinced it's going to be even more awesome, which no one is ready for, but everyone is excited for.

There were a couple typos with names, like Amberforst and Brownhare's name was misspelled as Sea mentioned. But other than that, your usual impeccable grammar and writing style.

Rain and Hawk got a reunion!!! Awww <3 My lil' boos. And Snow and Lion having their own lil' chat during dinner *snickers* Definitely sounds like them. I love how you make their personalities come out even more when they're together; I think that's exactly how to realistically portray couples.

Brownhare's parents are SO sweet; the contrast between them and Amberfrost's mother was very well-done and well-placed. Great thinking, Firey. Parenting lesson learned: if you're a jerk to your daughter and her friends, she'll run away and join the rebels. Or something along those lines x3

I must say, I really enjoyed Flareheart being told off and ignored in the beginning of the episode--is that mean of me? She sort of reminds me of Draco Malfoy, to be honest. Is there any redemption in sight for her? (Probably not, seeing what she did to Larkpaw/Laura.)

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS REBELLION GOES AND WALK THE JOURNEY WITH MY LIL' GROUP OF MUNCHKINS (who are not apprentices anymore, sob. All grown up).

AMAZING SHOW, FIREY. AMAZING EPISODE TOO. ILYSM AND I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

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