Talk:Let It Burn/@comment-25926899-20151010041651

part one (spoilers)

okay so this setting is super like whoahhhh how did you even come up with this its super original and i love!! it!! nice dystopian i feel like extreme environments are unfortunately looked past when people write dystopian uh human stories but they make a really interesting base for the plot, so this is rly great and unique and just whoah.

i really like all these characters so far (well, except her father seeing as he just appeared and i haven't had the chance to form a proper opinion but as far as phoenix's impression of him he seems like he's going to be a sad character to read about). phoenix is well-rounded already and so is elliot, and their clashing opinions made me cringe a tiny bit to read because i already like them both and want them to get aloooong. and gale and ray are cute and their innocence makes me v sad but it's a nice contrast to the rest of the story.

i will read more soon yes i promise bec this is a REALLY intriguing fic and i love it already.