Talk:Light Up the Forest/@comment-8248793-20131218042033

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I love Fernpaw right now, and my guess is she's gonna be Earthstar :3 I also like Amberpaw, and her loyalty to her sister. Brackenpaw and Lionpaw remind me of Lionblaze and jayfeather, Lionblaze being the excited one, and Jayfeather as the grumpy one.

That last speeching part astonished me, and the way you described Fernpaw's horror made my heartbeat, and I could feel her panic. Why did you have to make her leave D: (maybe this proves that she's gonna be Earthstar :P)

I like how you always described each character before moving on, to make sure we're never confused. I really love this so far, and I hope you do more soon! (Do Down and Out too :D <33333)

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