Talk:Rainwhisker's Revenge/@comment-5342796-20131222221236



I agree with Blue, the chapters are a little short and fast-paced. This is far from an epic fail, though! Have a little faith in yourself, writing is all about improvement, and that's what this wiki is great for :))) Rainwhisker is a very underrated character in my opinion, and I'm sure you're going to do him full justice in this story.