Talk:Scarce Grief/@comment-25531638-20140114022611

!spoilers!

ok, first i'm going to apologize for the terrible grammar in this comment because i am just being lazy right now.

the emotion in this episode omg. it was heartbreaking. like, maybe Dewheart's death was a bit sudden, but the aftermath was great. i mean, the beginning was almost poetic. the only thing i'd recommend is maybe... slow things down a little with StormXCrow, ya know? i mean, i ship them, but it just seems a little cruel for Storm to go traipsing after Crowheart right after Dewheart's death.

this episode was short, but i actually think that it worked out rather well.

and towards the beginning, you spelled "devastated" wrong. just thought i'd point that out :3