Talk:Case Closed/@comment-8248793-20130729151219

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I love how the title is "Case Closed" but really, the case isn't closed. it reminds me of War, with the episode, Normalcy. Where everything goes wrong, and it isn't a normal day.

And this show is getting better and better, though I have to agree with Robo, I actually think tis is better than The hidden. Sorry... but Vale just rules. :D Everything you write is getting more and more suspenceful, and it leaves the reader with a cliffhanger, and the need to read more. I'm sure you'll be a successful writer one day.

Blackheart is like the most obvious cat in the whole world. That part was well written, because he was very obvious that he was protecting someone. Though how did Breezepaw know that it wasn't him? I really love the story about Blackheart, because it gives us inside info why someone would kill Shinecloud.

Though Duskwatcher is a little rough. I think he should have been Daisypaw's father, except for the fact he's way too rough for Daisypaw. i mean, they both overreact a lot. Though if he was her father, then she would have to suffer even more, so no. That idea wouldn't work.

<3 this show, Rainy!

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