Talk:Trial/@comment-8248793-20150625021805

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I'm fairly excited for this because even though it's like the Hunger Games, it has a taste of your writing which actually makes it more interesting. Though I feel like you should have explained the Trials more (unless you plan on doing that afterwards) cause I don't quite get it. Do all the cats who don't win die? Does that mean an ordinary cat never wins cause the Leading family always win? O:

Smoke strikes me as a boasting, obnoxious and self-centered cat tbh. He's kinda focused on being a strong suit in the Leading family, and I don't like his attitude towards Cinder. Though I find his POV interesting because many people tend to go the "perfect" route.

I'm like hoping Cinder kills him or something XD

You've done a great job with this and I'm already excited to see this happen! <3

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