Talk:Clouds from Beyond/@comment-25531638-20130925232459

Poor Shadowflicker. Having to put up with all of that :(

I love the names that you gave the Clans, I think that they're very interesting and original :) As well as this whole idea.

Having the prisoners be abused is good for the story xD but I think that you should probably show a more detailed example of how they're mistreated.

You're building up a lot of tension with this... can't wait to see the rest :D