Talk:Singularity/@comment-26432133-20170430202503

SPOILERS

CHAPTER THREE

Dawnpaw whoooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I love the end and how she predicted it all. It makes sense, in a way, that she doesn't exactly have prophecy- she just understands (or Dawnpaw's understood how to reach through a story and figured out how to brainwash me XP)

And everyone's so spooked by Dawnpaw and consider her a freak; tbh, I would too, but I also know that would just be wrong. Gosh Foxsong's so sweet but so mean to Dawnpaw it's killing me.

RavenXSage siohdaoijasdio I like it so much, Sagepaw deserves a little happiness after the chaos that is Dawnpaw.

"The little back cat rose to her paws and cast her shadow across the entire Clan." oH MY GOD I LOVE THIS LINE BLAZEY YOU WRITE SO WELL AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

EVEN BETTER I LOVE THE PART WHERE EVERYTHING THAT DAWNPAW PREDICTED HAPPENS

like not bc dawnpaw predicted it and it came true, I love how you wrote it with the hyphens to pause and add effect god i love it so much blazey u write too good man

Dawnpaw's hubris, I love it. She kinda deserves to be so prideful/confident/cocky, yet being too proud is rude. "How dare you put StarClan above me" really gets me- it shows a lot about her and it's amazing

Blazey write moooooorrrrrrreeee this is so good holy cow