Talk:Unsheathed Claws/@comment-8248793-20141209045327

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This was a bit too fast paced in my opinion, you switched from Wisp being non social, to getting involved with the Clans because they were too /close/ to his tree.

I find Wisp annoying, idk why. He's not very interesting in my opinion, he's like a charrie who lets everything be the same. Maybe had some spice to him to make this more interesting and make his charrie more unique.

I still liked the episode though, it's not what I expected, but you definitely built up suspense and tension for this event.

You have very good details, and I can visualize everything you want me to see, and the way you position each detail and section is perfect because it flows well with the next. Can't wait for more!

<3

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