Talk:Something Bright/@comment-1829516-20141227031914

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Storm needa chill. She can't start taking charge of a Clan she's not even in! She gettin so snappy to the point where I wouldn't be surprised if cats started runnin her out.

Perhaps more description next time on the "knocking out" of the guards? I would've loved to see a descriptive scene of Dawnfur in action. Not to mention she's pretty brave for saving Snowbreeze all alone like that, but I can see some scolding in her future. Brave but stupid! Why would you go on your own? At least take someone, Dawnfur!

''"Dawnfur laughed. "You should have always respected me." Her eyes were twinkling, and she nudged  me playfully." ''Dang man, you're killing me here. They're so desperately in love, they just can't see it yet <3