Talk:Legacy of TrappedClan/@comment-25630395-20150501052059

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Darkstripe (??? Is that what I call you xD), this is amazing. Amazing. There's no other word to describe this.

So I've seen quite a few fanfics like this, but I must say that this is the best. The beginning really set the tone for the story and gave an introduction to Darkstar's character. I have question: are he and the other cats Dark Forest cats, or just rogues who managed to take advantage of the battle?

Some events in the story were a bit rushed, and sudden, but they weren't common errors. I also like how all the rogues seem so complicated, even Flea. The part with Pouncer made me want to bash Brutal's head against the wall in my fury. >:D sorry.

The thing I also like about this is Squirrelflight's relationship with her daughter. It seems so sweet, and feels like the former is clinging to the latter like she's a lifeline.

And then there's IVYPOOL (I'm sorry, I saw her name once and I freaked out because I love her to bits).

Like I said before, amazing work! I hope you update this soon because I'll be reading... and watching... *stalker face*

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