Talk:Snow White; The third Fairytail/@comment-25653434-20150412051432

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Wow what a clever prolauge, I like how the strange cat is not a clan cat but something else adn I like how lillystar is like the evil queen.

I have notices a few small spelling errors here and there but nothing major. Also, in chapter one the paragraph is HUGE maybe break it off into another one when the image of the strange cat pops into her head and when Whitekit's mother comes in. Just an idea

Overall, I really like it, keep it up Blazey!

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