Talk:Shimmer of Teardrops/@comment-7410018-20141029142005

Spoilers~

This story so far was a bit confusing, yet it seems to be an idea that hasn't really been used before, which is a good thing, because it makes the story more intriguing. Siyea seems like an interesting character, although I was a little bit confused about her at first. The 43% cat thing is something I'm curious about. Like, were her parents different animals or something? I'm sure it will be explained in time.

The gems confused me a little bit too, but that's probably another thing you will explain. I must say that you did a really good job describing them, I could picture them perfectly.

I would make this comment a bit longer, but there's not that much of the story yet, so I'll have to leave it here. Keep writing!