Talk:Days Until Heartbreak/@comment-5342796-20150621014840



Introduction

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I LOVE SARI.

SHE'S SO WICKED.

I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT HER HISTORY IS OR WHATS HER DEAL WITH TOMS BUT... JUST... ''DANG. '' A she-cat who dislikes toms, but can also acknowledge that one is "hot", who fiercely cares for her friends, who assumes leadership. She's flawed and I'm pretty sure she knows it. She's tough and has a fiery temper, she's just... She's so complex and I'm so excited to see how she progresses.

Complicated

Well. Uh. That was unexpected.

I'd say "complicated" is the perfect description for this chapter.

I think it's really strange how Sari already thinks she's falling for Ice, when they've barely interacted. She really doesn't know much about love, does she? Especially given the way she treats others.

I loved this chapter, mostly because we see how dark Sari is. I think the last sentence is fairly accurate. She definitely has a part of her that's a monster. In so many stories the hero's flaws are small and inconsequential, but in Sari's case, they're glaring. You could easily argue that she's more evil than good--although you could also argue that she's just trying to keep the group together the only way she knows how. Shrug. It's debatable.

Aura is fantastic, I love her. Especially the way she's the voice of reason, trying to shed some light on Sari when she slips into the shadows.

I can tell that Sari's path is really difficult already, and I'm seriously scared :O You better not break my heart while I read this Firey!

Amazing job, though. Fantastic start. I'll read the rest ASAP.

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