Talk:Wings/@comment-24143898-20150311045604

Um... *hackhack* (competition post :o)

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They're all cruel, those kitties (except Thistlekit, who's nice, I really like him <3). I like the way how you portrayed the descriptions, they're so... um, descriptive :3.

The prologue was also very good - it really did hook you in.

I noticed that 'Clanmate' wasn't capitalized once in Chapter Two. If it wasn't meant to be, leave it, I just find it better if it's capitalized.

Oh, and btw, are Hopekit and Wishkit a reference to (SPOILERS) Yellowfang's and Raggedstar's two deceased daughters??? (END SPOILER)

This is really good, Ebony, looking forward to more <3

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