Talk:Red Riding Hood/@comment-24143898-20150412045849

Another competition post raids the scene :3

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The prologue... much death is all I have to say. Hawkflight is a bad kitty - I hope he rots in the Dark Forest.

AND BRIGHTFROST. :OOOO Does this relate to Sleeping Beauty, somehow? >:DDDDD

Is Poppykit gong to rebuild ThunderClan, or something?? :o There was a certain scene that made me suspicious of this...

Hmm, there were a few times that cats were named incorrectly, of which some include Pinebird being called Pinenose, and Redstar being called Rosestar.

Also, once again, there were some large paragraphs that could be done with being broken up into smaller chunks.

Apart from those, this was a detailed piece of writing! <3 I do hope that you continue this!

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