Talk:Downfall/@comment-8248793-20140524193529

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Yes :D You wrote some of Chapter one!

I love Kali so far, and I was actually hoping that was Fire XDDD She's so fiesty :3 I hope Fire shows soon and all :PPPP

OKay, I love how you started with a battle against the Clan cats, and how haughty the rogues sound when they are defending their territory, almost as if they're another Clan, only made of rogues instead of Clan cats.

I really like the voice and the description you've added already, and it really fires up the story. I extremely cannot wait for more of Downfall <33333

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