Talk:Thistles and Leaves/@comment-27838201-20180421202814

I'd suggest spreading out the characters, and labeling the Allegiances. Don't know how? When edit a page, there should be a tool labled 'Paragraph'. click on that, and serveral options will pop up. The only ones you'd want to mess with is 'Heading', 'Sub-heading 1', 'Sub-heading 2', 'sub-heading 3' and 'sub-heading 4'

Heading will label different chapters, or label the Allegiances in this case. Once you do that, my personal recommendation is to use 'sub-heading 1' to separate the clans, and 'sub-heading 2' to label the different ranks. It makes things much more organized and easier to read. Apart from that, I like that you used the canon alliances with your own twist. It gets me hyped up for the actual story.

Just another suggestion: try putting a gap between each character, so it's less jumbled up. I used to make the same mistake, and I didn't have anyone explain it to me. I had to figure it out on my own. I hope this helps! Happy writing!