Talk:Shadows in the Night/@comment-70.58.184.30-20110720224239

Hey, Zaffie, it's me, SpoofDarklion44, too lazy to log in. :P

This is really good! It has a good beginning, a great plot, and it's well thought over, I can see.

I just have one question, really- what is wrong with Rainkit? It's like he hallucinates or something. He can't really be blind if the sees imaginary things, but it's kind of strange.

One more thing: When are you gonna finish it?! I"M DYING TO SEE THE END