Talk:Pumpkin Moon/@comment-26432133-20170801185333

wfwa judge's comment-

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This is a really interesting concept! I like where the story is going, and it's really good! The whole cats with powers thing is pretty cool, and Squeak's a duckling? Nice!! Target seems pretty good as a bad guy, and Shade is wonderful for some reason he's my favorite. As for nitpicks, I feel like the chapters could be a little longer. Also, the pacing is a little too quick and doesn't slow down to build things up. But this is definitely a good story, you should be proud!

My reactions to this story went something like this- NOOOO - oh cool - aw that's cute - interesting, very interesting - PFFFFFFFFFF xD - dun dun duuuunnn!!!

I'd love to see where this goes. As for you nominating Gouda Best Protagonist, I can see that! He steps up, and is a key part of the team in this story. His role moves along the story, so great job! Best of luck in WFWA!