Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-25630395-20170103103725

hello dogfod! c: SPOILERS and commenting as I read.

Whoa, that was one really intense prologue! I love the way you introduced the confusion and sheer madness of what was going on- I could really sense how distorted everything must have been through the eyes of the cat (?). Perhaps you could have emphasized the pain a bit more, but it was very, very intense.

Chapter One was cool. I liked how you introduced the whole issues of 'Kindlings', so they're a bit a like pyromaniacs? And I'm curious to know exactly why the Clan hates them so much. I also like how they all have fire-related names, but it does seem odd for a group hating cats with firepowers so much.

Ooh, the bone pit meeting. It's getting intense, but I nearly laughed out loud at the interaction with Rock. And also the whole den thing with " I wish he'd go to StarClan already" was hilarious. Just going to take the time to mention I love your characters, they're so fleshed out and unique.

Oh, my gosh. Okay. That got really intense quickly (perhaps a tad too quickly?) and I need to go read the next chapter now.

So who is this Frost character? And why can't Torch control her powers? And the whole Sand things, urghhh, you need to write more. This is literally amazing and I can't wait for you to update <3

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