Talk:Squirrelflight and Ashfur/@comment-5322509-20120723163305/@comment-5322509-20120723191645

I'm no one to criticize other fanfics, but when the wiki contributors started changing it at Chapter 9 it just went complete off topic, I never meant to sound mean or superior and I only wanted to share my opinion so if you prefer I didn't I won't post any more of my opinions and you can have what you want, no problem.