Talk:False Peace/@comment-25250489-20150209193600

This is all very interesting, and as soon as I post this comment I will start reading the next book!

I love how well you make all the characters act their age! (I am having a very hard time doing that in my fanfiction, and I was wondering if you could maybe help me with that? Like, edit my fanfic once I post it on Wikia, and help me make the characters act like their ages?)

But anyways, as I said this is very interesting! I really like your character Gem/Gempaw, and I can't wait to see how awesome her warrior name will be! Unless anything happens to her.... But I will find out when I read the next books.

It's so cool how you included SkyClan in you story! But only, how and when did they come back, and what part of the land around the lake did they claim? Well, I guess I didn't mean for you to answer these questions, I was just wondering these things while reading this book.

I also really like all these new warrior names that I never would have thought of making up, like Sparkpaw, Flyingpaw and Skylark. :)