Talk:Daughter of Scourge/@comment-8248793-20141130230037

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This was an interesting concept, but very fast paced. It would be good to slow down, and try to lengthen the chapters and the plot instead of speeding through it. The story was rather short, but I definitely liked it!

This was a very interesting concept, and I'm glad you chose for Ravenflight not to be evil, because Shard seemed very kind.

The death and everything were very sudden, but they held a lot of meaning in them, and it made me want to read more about Ravenflight's death.

And the ending was very surprising! I wasn't expecting it at all, and I can't wait for more :) I hope you do a sequel to this!

<3

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