Talk:Pumpkintail's Guide How Not to Make Mary-Sues/@comment-26432133-20161023070029

Just looking for another opinion to see if Ruincreek or Pecan are Sue/Stues! You know them, but FILLIN' OUT DA FORM ANYWAYS

Names: Ruincreek, Pecan

Gender: She-cat, Tom

Description: (Ruincreek) patchy dark gray tabby she-cat, (Pecan) tortie tom

Past: (Ruincreek) Well you know that, (Pecan) Well you also know that

I'll refresh your memory anyways! Ruinkit, first named Creekkit, was born to Ashheart, who was still being obsessed over by Leafpelt, who wanted to kill every reminder of Ashheart not being his mate. Pecan's mother was a kittypet and his dad was a WindClan warrior who once returned to his Clan only to be killed. Then Pecan's mother and sister went on a journey to find their dad, not knowing he was dead. They were separated in a storm and then Ruined happened.

Family:  Ruincreek : Mother: Ashheart (dead), Father: Silverstreak (dead), about three dead siblings (too lazy to go back to the prologue and check)  Pecan : Mother: Mango (dead), Father: Flareburst (dead), Sister: Viola (also dead)

Mate: well they're not mated yet but they will be

Kits: DEY WAY TOO YOUNG FOR DAT

Three-word description: Ruincreek- playful chicken lion, Pecan- playful bear dolphin

Do other cats like them?: yes, they like each other and have an awesome point system

Discrimination or Bullying: Ruincreek- Yes, from Leafpelt because she is Ashheart's daughter, Pecan- Yes, from the Clan for being protected even though he's putting the Clan in danger by being alive