Talk:Warriors:War in the Hills/@comment-27393649-20151014232129

Eh, it could be better, but I guess it's okay in some ways. I do like it, though. It's very interesting and the first few chapters seem to pull you into the story and makes you wonder what's going to happen next. I like the enthusiasm you gave in some of the characters, and the dialogue was a bit overused, in my opinion.

There seems to be alot of Clans, which really gives a good taste to the story. Though it seems when you first started out the story everything was a bit sudden, and you just jumped into a random spot without giving us any idea of what's going to happen later on.

I loved the story, and I was very glad to be a part of reading it. Though you could also use headers, which makes it look more organized and neat.