Talk:Cheater/@comment-8248793-20130919030745

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I just realized this was adopted a longggg time ago O.O

Wow, is this done? It better not be xD

I really like your idea of the Enchanters, and the Mystic name thing. Deerleap, or Mystichope is a very unique character, and I would have thought Darkhope would be an Enchanter. But very cleve, making a side character have an important role.

I'm glad I got to read this, because this totally sparks an idea within me. They way the story flows is amazing. It's so smooth, not choppy at all. I really love this.

Though the part where Yellowstripe died was confusing. Maybe make it more clear, instead of jumping, but not moving, and then falling...?

Other than that, it was an amazing fanfic, and I hope you continue if you aren't done!

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