Talk:Leaf Falls/@comment-8248793-20130827163939

I love this Roo. <3

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Okay so, there were a few grammar mistakes, but I caught one. Or I remembered one. In the Epilogue, you wrote kitty pet, instead of kittypet. I do that a lot with my names too.

You write gently a lot. One time, you wrote he gently smiled. But you could use a different word. I noticed this with Home too ;)

I really like this, and I love how each chapter brings a new setting. :D <3

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