Talk:Loss Of Her Beloved/@comment-3159474-20110709090402

This is supposed to be mostly just Ravenkit/paw/call/star's memory of her past. I showed that with "the last I remember from being a kit is feeling the warm, milk-scented security of Swiftrain's belly", or "My mother had eaten a bad piece of prey(I can't remember which type)", showing she cannot remember every tiny detail of her past, and only bits of her history that stayed in her mind will be included in the fanfic. I was originally going to write squirrel instead of just vague "bad piece of prey", but I figured it would be more realistic if I didn't say a specific type of prey, since I wouldn't expect anyone to remember something like that.