Talk:An Untold Story/@comment-15560748-20150905133754

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This story is actually really interesting right now; it's nice to see what would happen to Purdy's mate.

And I can see that Raindrop isn't too good in the head.

Okay, so this story had good grammar, and the characters were portrayed really well, which is good :)

I can't wait for more!

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