Talk:Squirrelflight and Ashfur/@comment-4751506-20120523235048

It was great at the beginning, but then it kind of got unfocused, and the spelling/capitalization was a bit...off. The storyline was pretty awesome though, and I always imagined Brambleclaw (lol, autocorrects to 'brainless' xD) as evil.

One of the other parts I wasn't as fond of was the CloudXLeaf bit...Cloudtail deserves better than...(ick.) Leafpool.