Talk:We Can't Stay/@comment-8248793-20160729040737

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Oh my god even though I knew the twist, this was still shocking to me. Like I forget some key points and like when I read it again I was like "GAHHHHHH WHAT HAPPENED D::::"

Okay I really loved this story and I still do! You portrayed Gorsethorn's craziness amazingly, like yes I can tell there were hints but at the same time they were so subtle! Amazing job on his character design, and I'm glad you put so much thought to make him the way he was. You excel at writing these kind of stories tbh

Stormshine :C She was kinda a whiner to me but I understood her thoughts because I can't actually imagine always having a burden that isn't yours (easier to love kits when you gave birth to them!) I actually forgot they stayed kits til the end, I thought they became apprentices lol

SMOKEWISP I LOVE THAT TOM I STILL DO gosh he's so adorable and like ahhhhh he will remain the best!

Just the clarify, at the end, did Stormshine leave? I think I forgot whether or not she left, because I couldn't really tell from the wording.

ALSO RED DIED EBULLIENT D: I didn't even remember she died omg like when I read that part I was like "holy goodness Red joined SeaClan and Stormshine murdered her?????"

But amazing job! I'm glad I decided to reread this story :) <3

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