Talk:Half/@comment-26285531-20150720050708

Oh, this is amazing. I love how, in the reconcilation of Heathertail and Lionblaze, they call each other by their "DarkClan" names. 'Heatherstar and Lionclaw'. OMG, I JUST LOVE IT!! <<33 Thanks, Sparrowsong!

Also. Other than a few mistakes, I think the story is great. But did it go a little quick? No—probably just me reading fast. But still, nice concept! And I'M JUST SOOOOO MAD AT BREEZEPELT 'CAUSE HE'S SO MEANNNNN! DDD::: OMG HE FORCED HEATHERTAIL TO BE HIS MATE. I'm sure most everyone can agree that he's a bad, bad cat ::((