Talk:Diary of the Wanderer/@comment-5488450-20140112165203

I really like this 'diary' idea, I think it's really unique as I've never seen it used on a warriors fanfiction before(if we exempt spoofs). I think you could take this further if you put a little more details(what time it was when she was chasing the mouse, her initial reaction to being locked in the tunnels, her relationship with her mentor prior to that) but I can see you going really far with this!