Talk:Violet Dusks/@comment-27725192-20170122175746

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Chapter 1

So I'm glad you made Rabbitpaw's reaction to popularity a little realistic, that's how i'd react if people fought over me like all the time. I wonder how she got super popular in the first place. And yeah, it's weird that a warrior is mooning over her but it's happened before. Like sometimes one cat is a warrior by the time their mate is born so yeah.

I see Rabbitpaw's a flawed cat and that's probably going to injure her fame. It makes sense that she's really scared but it was also a little...annoying? She was all like "I can't! Oh my, it's too high!" Says the cat who has the whole Clan parading around her giving her boosts of confidence. I think Dustybrook will like her less now.

Wow, a prophecy! So technically Rabbitpaw is standing alone...well she doesn't want too much attention and her Clan is beginning to realize she's not that brave and amazing. Plus, it's very normal to get beaten in training, lots of cats have. Rabbitpaw was all like "How is that even possible" which indicates she's probably a little spoiled due to her Clan's unbearable confidence in her.

Anyways, I actually quite like this story and I'll keep watch for updates :D

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