Talk:Thunder Rising/@comment-27393649-20151010014533/@comment-25926899-20151011040812

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ohhhh i didn't notice this comment!!!

thank you so much!! ugh i think my part 2 dialogue was poor in comparison but ty ty dialogue is something i struggle with so that actually means so much

tbh this is exactly how i imagine brokenstar, yet everyone is commenting on how unexpected his reaction is etc. it's interesting lmao. but in my head he's the cool collected leader who puts on a nice disguise of a cat just trying to do the best for his clan and his ulterior motives are just between he and his deputy. also tbh i had to avoid any confrontation with mischief bec she is a small kit and i couldn't risk giving her super powers and the ability to somehow kick brokenstar's (of all cats) butt.

thank you so so much for your comment!!