Talk:Two Birds/@comment-27725192-20170127204209

Spoilers

Prologue

Wow, that's a nice way to open up the fanfic! I wonder who killed Talonkit and Creekkit's mother. And I think they're being rescued by Clan cats.

Chapter 1

I wonder why Talonkit gets more love than Creekkit. Probably because Talonkit shows some energy and potential and Creekkit's just...scared. But he wants to make friends. I like that Talonkit is really protective of Creekkit but I think she should in fact let Creekkit try to sort things out himself for once, otherwise he'll always be dependent on his sister