Talk:Lost: Death of the Clans/@comment-8248793-20140428020139

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Omg I still love this fanfic so much <3333

One thing. I'm pretty sure at the beginning of the journey to the new home, Russet said she was seven moons old. Then you had them ask her again, and she said ten moons old. Did like three moons pass in ten days? xDDDD

I love Sunsplash, and I love how your writing flows smoothly with one another and it just makes the story so suspenceful and interesting :) I noticed that you stopped mentioning Ghost even after they stayed near his territory.

And what happened with Waspflight? There was a lot to read and I don't quite remember who and what he was doing xD

I certainly love this story (so long tho) and I hope you continue it soon :)

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