Talk:Rookies/@comment-4751506-20130508115003

LOL. OAKCLAW. Mmph, I love him. Especially Gorsefur, because young Gorsefur is so cute because he's so silly and just plain adorable. And he and Cherrysplash should definitely be together, but then there's Brookfall coming up after they get drafted with Badgerstrike, and oh no! /o\

Anyways, this...bit...after the...commercial, I guess [because they're not chapters, but, y'know] was fantastic and probably the best bit aside from their introductions, because you could really see their personalities coming out. Robinfur's gentleness, and Oakclaw's maintained arrogance. And then Shadowsong's steely determination, and Gorsefur's sweet disposition. And then Grayfur wasn't really there much, but then Willowheart is just so awkward and never does anything (but I love her already. I like how you're giving subtle hints. :3).

...so, basically, to sum it all up, Carthage must be destroyed.

Just kidding, I'm not that Roman dude Cato.

To sum it up in actuality, this is another phenomenal snippet by Arti the amazing. <3