Talk:Normalcy/@comment-4751506-20130622150243

Mreh, I try not to read Rainy's comments before I do mine (if she gets there first >:D) so that ours aren't repeating / me copying hers, but then I read them to make sure I don't copy, but that never really works...but anyways.

This episode was, shall I say, normal. (heh heh) It reminded me a lot of how all of the episodes used to be, when the FireClan cats did just hate them for being WaterClan. But now, as Rainy said, you've thrown in a heck of a lot of outer conflicts, mixed with Brookfall's somewhat-introverted inner conflicts. Yeah, she's gotten rid of that jerk-face Sunstreak, but she never wanted to kill anyone. And the fact that she didn't actually kill Sunstreak but was an "accomplice" (even though he suicided...to save her...from a future attack...from...himself), yet she thinks she did...oomph. I love it. :3

There were a few minor grammatical errors, but, like I said, minor. Nothing too large. There was one part where you said 'I was told instructed try' when Sunstreak spoke, and then when 'Anyone gone hunting.' you forgot to add a question mark.

Otherwise, this episode was completely normal ;D