Talk:Drowned/@comment-26285531-20150721021208

Ahhhhh OMG, this is amazing!! But Stormstar is soooo MEAN!! D::: he kills innocent kits! Stormstar deserves to go to the Dark Forest, that's for sure xD Also. A tiny thing I like was that you also included a cat from the Tribe of Rushing Water (or the Ancients, as of Dawn of the Clans.) So this story took place a while ago? Sweet, and unique. FERNPAW DIED! Why did you do it? D::: I know, I know, it increased the drama of the story and makes it more interesting. But that doesn't mean I have to like it! xD The goodbyes that hurt the most... ...are the ones that were never spoken