Talk:The Monologue/@comment-8248793-20150118160131

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Holy I was not expecting that. I like how you wrote this one, it's like, you expected some kind of happy ending, and just the style was unique and different from other stories.

I definitely love how you started out with simple things that showed that they were "best friends". Then in the middle, you made us feel like something was wrong but we didn't know what. Then you hit us with the ending and it was seriously surprising.

You should turn this into a story form, like write out a full story about the two characters (or have someone else do it idk) I'd be interested in reading this as a story too c:

<3

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