Talk:Legendary/@comment-26285531-20151119052750

INTRO

Okay, I am like wowed at right now, the beginning was so good.

You made great use of the surprising introduction by jumping right in, and you put a lot of desciption into the words, so I could visualize and feel Rose's pain. And this leaves me wanting to know what happened to Rose's mother, what made her feel this way!

ONE

I liked how you introduced the situation with the Legendary and whatnot in a calmer tone, so you don't go overboard and explain it right away, but you still explain it subtly. It gives it a nice balance.

When you were describing the battle it was so accurate, I could really visualize it in my head. And I was secretly rooting for Tess ;) I could also partly understand Dalia's emotion, because her tactics (especially her first move) on Tess were brilliant, but she still didn't get to become a Legendary.

Is this based on Legend? Because the name Tess and Legendary... C: