Talk:Alliance/@comment-26285531-20160131020356



THIS IS GOOD OMG. I haven't actually read the series this show is based off of, but you describe things very vividly and explain how things work in a concise way but still accurately, so I can still find myself being able to follow along with the story. Great job!!

You've really indented on what exactly parabatai are and just how special the bond that connects them is. Britt and Jem seem like the unbreakable and perfect combination that can do just about anything while they are together. It's come to a point where I can't really pick between one or the other, because they're just so together, and they're more like one, though Jem seems to be more calm-minded and more of a clear thinker while Britt seems to have quite an attitude. ;)

Hmm. Fish seems totally unrelatable and has a spicy temper, but I can see that below the attitude he's actually hurt about being "useless" and is overcome with (self?) pity. I think Jem surely loves his siblings but it came to the extreme that he was being overprotective over them. Fish seems more of an independent cat, so his and Jem's personalities really clash and I'm guessing this certainly won't be their last fight.

Like Firey said, there were a few human attributes that didn't mix well with the cats, but I'm guessing that's because I didn't read the series yet so I'm partially confused. But it still did make good sense, and I really love your character development so far, as Jem is completely relatable to me and I find that to make the story really good. Great job, I'm super excited for Sea's episode!! <3 :D

