Talk:About the Clans/@comment-25630395-20150112074345

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Good job, Brams! I liked your descriptions, both of surroundings and emotions. But you left me on a cliffhanger :P I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I thought that Wisp's personality has changed... not drastically, but a lot. He used to be kind of 'angry' and turned inwards. But now he's more open and has a softer heart, if you know what I mean XD And now the only reason I want Wisp to join the Clans is for there to be a Cinderwisp haha. Blossomwisp is ''okay... ''but Cinderwisp is better.

I like Flame for some reason. She better not die ;P

I think you made Wisp react a little too emotional to the 'Twoleg's drove out Tree/ForestClan' thing. Just my opinion C:

( oh and I noticed some weird phrasing when Blossomheart says: It caused so much death to the Clans, it did. )

Awesome work, Brams! Keep it up!

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