Talk:Fate/@comment-5488450-20130908185331/@comment-8248793-20130908230653

Thanks Roo :D

Um, some parts of the story is like Sunkit talking to us in the future, like she's explaining her past.

As for my tenses, I'm horrible at those, I can't really tell when I changed them, because I write as I think.

As for the pic, I made it on Paint, I wrote it myself. But thanks for the info! I didn't know how to do that. :3

As for the maturity, its the way I express my feelings. Maybe a little warrior like, yes, but its kinda like Sunkit and Moonkit talking to us in the suture, explaining the past. :D I'll change a bit because it is a bit confusing.

But, that helped a lot, and when I got the time, I shall fix the problems :D Thankies.