Talk:Cheater/@comment-25531638-20130920023903

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Despite this being old, I think that it's great :D

The originality of it struck me, as well as the excellent character development. I love how you gave Darkhope a past, instead of her just being some depressed she-cat.

The 'Enchanter" idea is interesting, as well as the "Mystic" rule that goes with it. Very original :)

Sometimes I thought that the chapters were a little bit short, but nothing too bad. Maybe slow things down at some points would be good.

Yellowstripe's death was a good idea. A nice death :3

Can't wait to see how this will turn out.

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