Talk:Shame, Hope, and Darkness/@comment-8248793-20140114033434

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This is great so far :) I just love how Dawnpaw's life is just horrible so far, and how every option she chooses seems to fail. You make it so that I hate Silverpaw a LOT, and that really makes the story interesting.

I have just one question. If Silverpaw and Hollypaw are her sisters, then how come they aren't accused of being a kittypet? I mean if they were true sisters, they would have the same mother and father. Just wondering.

I really like Dawnpaw's personality, how she controls her feelings, yet has the same reactions as any normal person being bullied like that. But even though Hollypaw suggests that she doesn't, it isn't very logical that Dawnpaw doesn't go tell Foxstar. Just saying :P

I'm really into this story, and I hope you add on to this soon!

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