Talk:Frostpool's Rage/@comment-28076378-20170124235501

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The idea of this story is interesting. The prologue is really short. If you can, you could make it longer. There are also spelling and grammar mistakes.

You should add some more commas and periods, and adding some more description wouldn't hurt.

But otherwise, the story and idea is nice, and it has great potential! My favorite character so far is Eaglefang. And as much as it annoys me when people ship characters who you've hardly seen much of... FrostXEagle.

I will continue to read this story as you write. Great work!

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