Talk:Into the Wild (Rewritten)/@comment-26432133-20160913070149

This sounds good! Golden fur...hmm all I can think of is some weird twist where Sandpaw is Sammy and Caramel's daughter. Or an entirely new character. The part where Spottedleaf and Bluestar talk, like Moo said, is a lot better than the original one. It presents hopelessness and how harsh the world is--and then you can really see how StarClan's sign breathes life into Spottedleaf.