User blog comment:Bluestar&Brightheart/Moo/@comment-24866170-20140330031630

FRICK THE THING ERASED MY DETAILED COMMENT D:<

ahem so

what was the original idea XD it can't be that bad

anyway here's mah form (again)~

Name:  Flareshadow (or -paw if you want)

Description: Short-furred pale ginger tom with a stumpy tail. He has pale white patches dotting his flanks. He has a lithe build, and his legs are long and his paws are small. His eyes are clear blue, with a lighter shade around the pupils. The fur around his shoulders and neck are a bit thicker than the rest of his pelt. He has a long scar running down his right shoulder to his right hind leg. He has a snowy-white collar-like patch of fur running around his neck.

Personality: To some, this newer warrior (or older apprentice) may appear quiet and shy, when in reality, he just doesn't want to talk to anyone. He is rather dark, and he would perfer being alone over being in a large group. He is very stubborn and quick to argue, often being hushed by older cats. He hates being silenced, and may defy the cat that cut him off. He can also be a bit irritating when giving someone the cold shoulder. Despite all of that, he is loyal to the warrior code and would break it only if he felt what he was doing was right. When he somehow manages to ally with someone, he will defend them with his life.

History:  As a kit, he left the band of rogues he lived with to explore (originally written as explode owo) the Clan territories when he wanted to join one of the Clans. So he did, and as he grew he became darker and darker. When he was a young apprentice, his tail was bitten off by a badger he was fighting. He lost after fainting, and when he woke up, he was startled when he saw that his once-long tail was missing, replaced by only a short stump of ginger. Flarepaw was enraged after being taunted, and he decided to seclude himself from all other cats.

(if an apprentice: He was stubborn with his mentor, often not listening to him/her. When le mentor had a long talk with Flarepaw, the ginger apprentice decided that he would never be a warrior if he kept being secluded and stubborn. He then wanted to train to be a loyal warrior.)

(if a warrior: He somehow managed to pull through his warrior ceremony without hissing at another cat, and he is a young warrior.)

Oh wow that was kinda long O_o' meh