Talk:FirexSpotted- What could of happened/@comment-24.57.204.29-20130316174633

I might today. XD. And your welcome!

Oops, I made a few errors and left a few errors slip away from my eyesight. Sorry if I am annoying you :P

Imma make this Post short and quick.

"Don't worry, their just not used to this." Should be "Don't worry, they're just not used to this." (Sorry about that)

Clan Meeting should be capitalized, since it is in the Warrior Series.

warriors should be capitalized. Always. Capitalize. Warriors. The Books called Warriors, its capitalized, and when The Narrator said Warriors in the Warrior Series they always capitalized it (:

Gasp's should be Gasps. Who Gasp's? What does he look like? Gasp's what?

"One cat sneered, it was Longtail." There should be a period after sneered, not a comma. I forgot to mention removing a period and comma and adding a and doesn't always work. It only works with some sentences, because "One cat sneered and it was Longtail." doesn't really make sense, does it? So add a period at sneered and remove the comma and capitalize the the I so its "One cat sneered. It was Longtail."

So much for a short Comment XD