Talk:The Story of Icewrath, Featherswirl, and Craneheart/@comment-1839575-20130320001545/@comment-5331607-20130320021654

Thank you, Zaffie. :)

This is just an early stage. Everyone one goes through it, such as me and this one kid pretended we were dating back in kindergarten *blush*. And I originally was only going to make a love triangle, but then I came up with Electric and Marble, mostly to make their social rank boost a bit sinc Marble and Electric are semi-popular. Then everybody LOOOOOVED Troublekit (Feather HATES trouble, and Stormlily made a good guess: there will be SpottedXTrouble)so I decided to just poll on as many toms her age as I mentioned in the story, just to see what everyone thinks. It still is mostly a triangle, because her true feelings would be for Ice or Crane.

I'm still trying to improve, but thanks.