Echoing Hazel

This is my story for Fuz's contest. P.S. Me no likey prologues, so no prologue. Person: Die potato! Potato: Not today! *pulls out weapon* Person: *backs away*   Person to The Potato in ASDF Movie 2

Chapter 1 - Echopaw
I'm Echopaw, an apprentice of BerryClan. Nobody likes me. Really. My best friend is from another Clan. Once, my mentor Blazeclaw forgot that I was his apprentice. It hurt so much. He ignores me and only seems to care about his two sons, Firepaw and Flashpaw. Those two are another story. This is what happens with Blazeclaw. "Blazeclaw! Can I go train with Flashpaw?" I asked him. "What? Who are you?" He screeched. The only one that notices me is my mother, Specklewing, my sister, Forestpaw, and my father, Darkflight. Forestpaw gets everything she wants! Specklewing spoils her, and she hates me. So does Forestpaw. "Blazeclaw! That is Echopaw! Your apprentice! And my daughter!" Darkflight tells him. Darkflight is the only one in my family that likes me. Blazeclaw rolls his eyes. "Your only daughter is Forestpaw." Blazeclaw says. Darkflight shows me to him. Blazeclaw smirks. "Really? She isn't even a BerryClan cat!" Blazeclaw yells. Flowstar steps in. "Blazeclaw! She is a apprentice of BerryClan!" Flowstar yells at him. She turns to me. "Echopaw, I think we can get you a much better mentor. How about Runningwhisper?" Flowstar asks. "Great!" I say. I really mean it. Runningwhisper is shy, but a great hunter and fighter. And, I would be her first apprentice. I am happy with this deal.