Talk:The Fatality/@comment-5342796-20130804171255

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Wow. Oh wow. Poor Shimmerbreeze! Her death was just... um, perfectly tragic, to put it in a Rainy-esque way. So sad... even though I didn't really know her that well/remember her, but it was still sad. xP

I think this was a really excellent, gripping, and mysterious way to add to the whole danger within theme. It really shook up the entire Clan, and I'm really glad that Bramblestar actually addressed it and told the entire Clan, because so many writers(mostly me XD) make it so only one cat knows what's going on and all that- that's a good setup, but this is refreshingly unique, and makes it more Clan-like. Because honestly, some people don't seem to realize that just because they like the main character best doesn't mean all the other characters are stupid.

Mini-rant over, I'm really liking where you're taking this series. Two teeny itty bitty things, I think you said "Clab" for Clan in one place, and THERE WAS NO MENTION OF SCARXAQUA. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?

Overall, an awesome episode!!! <3

