Talk:Seeing Red/@comment-24143898-20150330054358

(Competition Post yes)

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First of all, this is an amazing story so far. Duskpaw being able to see spirits... :O It's a really unique idea, and I like it.

The voice in Duskpaw's head when Brightheart dies sounds like a Dark Forest cat. Is it? If it is, that's a really good idea. <3

And Dawnpelt is still a loser. I don't like her. D:<

Anyway, this is a truly excellent story, Vee! I can't see any faults in it so far. Looking for more! <3

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