Talk:Veiled Love/@comment-25407144-20140919035425/@comment-24143898-20141005042650

A tip for grammar is to start a new line when a cat is speaking. For it to separate when published, there needs to be a spare line in between each line. And Silverwind is right - no-one wants to read a block of words. It's easy to lose your place when reading.

However, apart from that, keep up your hard work!