Talk:Fighting Fire/@comment-5137480-20151004163258/@comment-24810042-20151004174657

Okay, I've read this whole comment, and I can answer a few questions you have.

Blurb-

I meant to use loner as a trait, not a position. So basically: "Steve never hangs out with anyone. He's such a loner." But I do see how you could be confused, and I'll need to reword it.

Allegiances-

I guess we spell gray differently, because I spell it with an A and you with an E. Also yes, I do over-capitalize, but it's just something I do and that I've been doing for so long that I can't get over it. I must mention, as you might not know, all cats in FireClan are related to past loners, rogues, and kittypets, so they could just pick up a word like razor. I mean, it's not razor like the thing you shave with, it's razor as in really sharp. If his name was Razorclaw, he could have really sharp claws, if his name was Razorpelt, he could have really spiky fur. Also, the prefix Eel has been used in the canon warriors series before, and I just really like the name.

Prologue-

I have nothing to really add to this one, other than that the 'ashes' in the prophecy aren't refering to Ashstar, as he wont even be seen that much after the first few chapters.

Chapter One-

I didn't really have much to work with, as I want to try to even out each chapter. I wanted to leave off somewhere where Brams could start with her chapter. The chapters are however going to get longer in the future, because the plot will be more developed and there will be much more to work with. Yeah, I don't like the fact that one chapter will be longer than another, but it's just a quirk I have I guess. Also, I mentioned this in the chapter, Razorwind and Eelwhisker quarrel out of annoyance. It's not Razorwind doesn't like Eelwhisker, he does (he's his daughter's mate btw), but he's a pretty strict deputy and just expects more out of him.

Other than that, I'll fix the spelling mistakes and other stuff. Thanks for the heads-up!