Talk:Fire It Up/@comment-1703139-20140106002514

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I really reaaaallly like this. :D  A quick-flowing, entertaining plot with some very relatable problems that the main character deals with. I think Violetflame is pretty well developed- we see her struggles although you don't tell us 'Violetflame is sad because her parents are dead.' You let the reader makes the connections, and that's the sign of a really great writer.

The only thing is that there's a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but they were pretty scarce. Overall, very excited for more!!