Talk:Days Until Heartbreak/@comment-5342796-20150716050617



OKAY LIKE I TOLD YOU BEFORE, I LOVE THE PART WHERE ICE STOPS SARI FROM KILLING SHINEBLOSSOM. Like he's so determined to protect her from everything, including her own demons. He's so convinced that she isn't who she think she is, and he refuses to let her fall into the trap of putting herself down and thinking of herself as less. That's SO important.

This story is honestly amazing. I don't even know how you can write so many parts so quickly and so well; it's an incredible testament to your determination and tenacity as a writer. I don't even know how you do it!

All the cats in Sari's group are so unique, and I like how you show that it's okay to have different personalities. There are softer cats and harsher cats, cats who haven't learned the lessons life has tried to teach them and cats who have, who regret their past decisions.

It's all so complex and such an accurate portrayal of how life works out; if you choose to get crazy or obsessive like Kayli or something, you're going to make enemies. If you live your life as a controlling, cruel leader like Sari, you're going to have enemies even when you find yourself changing.

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK. I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT MAN, BUT THIS STORY IS JUST SO AMAZING.

And of course, Ice is as wonderful and adorkable and perfect and dreamy as ever <3

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