Talk:Loyal Seas/@comment-11651046-20140704033749

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Ok, so this was a great story!

Seatail x Shinescale wasn't really my favorite pairing, but I guess they were better together than Shinescale x Marshfur.

I noticed a spelling error or two, but not many.

Ok, the thing that bothered me was the chapter headings, and how there was no spacing between the chapter title and the number/colon. For example:

Chapter 13:Solution
should be

Chapter 13: Solution
Sorry if I'm being picky, but it just bothered me a bit~

I rate this story a 17/20