Talk:Flight of the Storm, Feather of the Crow/@comment-8248793-20130925043122

SPOILER ALERT

I read this some time ago, and reread it.

Wow, this is a good idea for a story, and it seems to be very interesting.

SilverXGray was portrayed wuite well, their love, their emotions and feelings for each other showed in your words.

I do like the actions in your other chapters. They were quite exciting. I want to clarify something. The prologue takes place in StarClan correct?

Other than that, I hope you compete this, and Keep going!

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