Talk:Catching the Sun/@comment-25531638-20130925025302

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Oh my gosh. This is simply amazing. The whole story seems to fit together in perfect order. And honestly, I was expecting WillowClan to be the main enemy of the story, so I was surprised when the Tear came into play.

Also, the subtle, teasing hints about Runningpaw and Sunnypaw's love were great :) It made me wondering when the big confession was going to happen. Sometimes it's better if the love is unexpected, but not in this case.

You also have a knack for coming up with unusual yet great names for your cats.

I can tell where you sort of brought science into this also, when you said how the Tear would just take all of Sunnypaw's energy.

It made me so sad, when you made Aolani die. She was such a wonderful character, just the fact that she would make that big of a sacrifice ;( I love her past as well, it's a good addition.

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