Talk:Warriors Flaming Legacies: Extinguished/@comment-26285531-20151217022203

Oh wow, this is really good so far! You put a lot of description into the plot and characters, which I like about the story. In the parts where there was action involved, the wording describing the action was awesome, and the characters' emotions/reactions were well-timed and thought out, it seemed, too.

There were a few grammar errors here and there, but not bad at all! I can't wait for you to update!