Talk:Twisted/@comment-7270915-20130605010003

Well, obviously there isn't much here yet, but what is here so far is very good. Poor Stonepaw. And I wonder what Embershadow's plans are - and why exactly he wanted Fallensong to become a warriors so badly. (Don't tell me - I don't like spoilers.)

Anyway, already you've introduced complex characters and a great plotline in like, five paragraphs. Great job.