Talk:Equinox/@comment-28076378-20161118235922

So far I think this is a great story

(I'll make a better comment in the future, i promise) But right when I began reading this it reminded me of a song (which i forgot the name of) that i constantly listened to when i was a little younger.

As soon as they started talking about fighting I got alert (i love stoires with fights in them)

Are they siblings? I don't recall if it said they were or not

But I'm really looking forward to reading more!