Talk:Rogue/@comment-17759525-20170718130223/@comment-17759525-20170728123057

THIS IS NOT OKAY. I HOPE YOU KNOW HOW NOT OKAY THIS IS.

So the section with the poppy seeds is a bit confusing. I'm sure it's meant to be, but like, she recognizes Astrid, and then she almost gives away their secrets, and talks like Astrid like she's talking to someone else...

And then you did something horrible ;w;

I thought it was gonna be Sorrel. I was gonna be sad but it was gonna be okay, like fuel to Breeze's fire while she fights. AND THEN YOU CHOSE ROWAN INSTEAD. Whyyy did you have to do that? He was pretty much my favorite character here ;w;

But, like, assuming you were going for super emotional writing here, you definitely hit the bull's eye. Even if it's not fair and I don't like it and arghhhh >w>

please write more soon so I'm not stuck over here writhing in agony over the last line ;w;