Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-8248793-20151212221153

SPOILERS part ten

Ah nice! We got to see more of Cecily, this time in Everly's perspective, and if even she describes Cecily as beautiful, I'm a little worried about Lucifly... Also since it was interesting to see Lucifer have the ghost of a smile while he was with Cecily. Whereas with Everly he kinda just explodes constantly but he still cares for both of them I suppose.

I kinda skimmed through this (oops) bc I had read half of it before you finished the rest (I KNOW YOU SAID IT WAS UNFINISHED AND I SHOULDNT READ IT BUT I COULDNT RESIST LOL) But the part with them at the beginning of the chapter kinda showed their relationship <33 I liked that

part eleven

Whoa a little confusing there but what just happened?? (commenting as I read this!) You've definitely started with some action but I'm super confused on why he is suddenly obeying greer's whims...maybe it was a bit abrupt? But I've also read like ten paragraphs only haha

Oh. Oh snap, Greer controls him with that haze...doesn't she? Something she did to him causes him to believe that he was her wolf so suddenly he obeyed her. That's scary and nevermind, your beginning wasn't abrupt but I still feel kinda jumbled from the confusion.

Oh frick that was an intense chapter. I'm excited to see how Everly is affecting Lucifer's drugs and what will happen between them. I'm so glad you updated PZ!! I'll try to refrain from reading the next chapter as long as you promise to write it soon ;)

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