Talk:Drowned/@comment-24810042-20150419212549

Holy cow this story is awesome! It really caught my eye! (I think it would pretty much make everyone happy if Stormstar dies, just a suggestion)

Besides that, there's one thing I dont get.

1. If a mother teachs her kit to swim and is caught, the mother is drowned. Thats one less female in the clan.

2. If the kit fails in swimming, it drowns. There goes more males/females.

3. Stormstar could really count a lot of things as defying his law, causing him to either kill or exile more cats. Even less males/females.

Really there is no way a clan like this could survive long-term unless the females had kits like crazy. But even then that makes a higher chance of more and more cats dying. Could you maybe shed some light on this?

Outstanding story though! :)