Talk:Strong Oaks/@comment-4751506-20130114232822

Ooh, I really liked this, Cinder! There were a couple of mistakes in spelling and grammar, but they weren't overly abundant, which is nice. I like how you didn't make Redfeather his blood father, rather, one who they would be ashamed of being the son of. I also really loved the end bit, where you put in the parts about blood not mattering as much. Bravo! *makes ominous tick marks on her clipboard* :)