Warriors Fanfiction talk:End Of The Clans, (New Story By Elijah=Waterfang2016!)/@comment-29491342-20160517130114

If you need help, I'd suggest making a blog post.

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I like Nightpaw already! Tricksters are the best!

I like the idea of sending Widowpaw into the tunnels for a prophecy. Its ancient aura is perfect. Is Widow going to have to find her way out on her own, or will they transport her back?

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Overall, this is great. I do have some advice, though.

There are a few grammar and spelling errors. Also, just a suggestion, instead of typing numbers like this- 2-, try typing it in word form, two. It's more professional.

That's all.