Talk:Darkness Around Us/@comment-7410018-20150906042407/@comment-8248793-20150906044005

I freaking love your comments.<3

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--0.-- Yeah I think Ice's POV really shows the insight of the so called "antagonist". I'm glad you like it :)

--1.-- Haha someone probs told me that I spelled a few words wrong but I never bother going back to fix them so :P Hm yeah you're right. I think I rushed it because there were a lot of things I wanted to fit in the middle and just the setting didn't seem right without them arriving idk

--2.-- Lol was Ice really that bad? XD (maybe I'm mistaking him for the Ice in a separate story I have written.)

--3.-- I really suck at hiding my secrets. That was supposed to be the whole secret of the story, though I do believe the sequel does a better job of hiding the secrets c:

--4.-- I do believe in representing gay/lesbian rights so they're often in my stories! (duh actually will have a main shipping that is lesbian)

--5.-- Agreed.

--6.-- That part might have been more difficult but yeah, he wanted the kits but some things happened in between that ended with them being separated. (idk if I ever want to try to explain it because I don't even know lol) (I wasn't very organized with this story tbh)

--7.-- I actually have not read that, though all my friends encourage me too so we'll see about it. I don't remember having a flashback not in italics O: I usually have them in italics haha

--8.-- I don't know if I created Cherrypaw to be like that back then or if it was intentional. I don't really love her that much tbh, as she was fairly self-centered and the story was hard to write when it was all about her. But you're right, it was a bit too much.

--9.-- Mm, the effects of losing everyone you love.

--10.-- Oh? O: I don't remember what I wrote but thanks :)

--epilogue.-- I actually forgot to the end of the story that she went insane. It was a last minute edit to kind of add it in since I didn't want to change the prologue to fit my needs for the ending.

Thanks in general~ <3

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