Talk:Bejeweled/@comment-25630395-20160618195107/@comment-8248793-20160618195727

I think whoa should be my statement because this comment really took my by surprise haha I love you <333

Ahhh you make really good points. I didn't seem to put enough shock in it, and I guess I was too into the plotline of get her out of the palace to care about simple emotions and reactions. Same goes with the escape scene lol I couldn't think of another way to get her out of there and I'm really bad at description so :C

I'm glad you seem to like Zach because I feel like he's the relatable character in the entire story and the anchor to the craziness that Kaytani goes through.

Thank you so much for the comment!! <3