Talk:Fire It Up/@comment-5197876-20141111173219

I thought I commented. Don't kill me.

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I really enjoyed Fire It Up. While it's not quite as good as your more recent work, it's still very enjoyable. The characters were realistic (since most of them came from actual people XD) and I had no trouble believing most of the actions of the characters.

Violetflame felt like she wasn't as important as the other characters. I felt she lacked a some development, and needed a bit more time in the spotlight.

The kits asking for a story, oh that hit right in the heartstrings. Innocent kits are my favourite thing to hear about, and it just made me cry, knowing about Violetflame's true nature.

WindClan beliving Wetsream was a traitor felt a bit rushed, but that doesn't drag the story down.

I enjoyed this story very much :D

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