Talk:Shining Again/@comment-7410018-20150912074638/@comment-8248793-20150913042955

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--prologue.-- Well I mean it'd just make a really cheesy ending and since I'm all about heartbreak so no ;)

--1.-- Hm yeah now that you mention it they were really welcoming, but I suppose it's because they are teh group of au and yeah.

--2.-- I always liked the idea of having cool secret names, and while that may have been confusing, I thought it was like secretive and cool XD And yeah, I suppose so, but I always thought of it as "group of honor" not "group of Honor".

--3.-- Yeah it's a bit confusing at first but I think after awhile you kinda get used to it (hopefully). And thanks for the compliments :)

--4.-- Yeah Kato isn't really meant to get attached to, but her role is to set up the murders and start the chain of turmoil and terror that pretty much is the rest of the story. I think Fano did it because he was blinded (no pun intended) by rage. And yeah I meant feckless I was trying out new vocab words.

--5.-- Rose/Taito = <3

--6.-- Hm yeah I suppose the scene was too sudden and fast; and idk I needed a coverup for how she realized the body was the thing she was stepping on so the first thing i could think of was a stick :P

--7.-- Haha so I guess it's good it was surprising. Ice always made me pretty sad too because like you said he never achieved what he wanted: happiness. If I remember correctly it was a vision from StarClan...?

--8.-- I really didn't know what to do I suppose and I thought it could somewhat work. Yeah, it's not realistic but sometimes we can still make good stories with different sorts of ideas (unrealistic ones I suppose) c:

--9.-- She was supposed to make you guys think that Taito was the murderer (fooled a lot of them apparently lol)

--10.-- I'm glad you really liked this chapter :) I wanted to wrap up the story in a suffice way that showed the reality of Rosepaw's life

--epilogue.-- Thank you!!

Again, thank you so much for this comment :) <3

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