Talk:Quillfeather's Assassin/@comment-5488450-20121227021504

WOW. Now I know I need to be constructive so hear we go.

The ending was EPIC. I was like... OMSC WHAT JUST HAPPENED? Out of the blue and sad. Poor poor Shadewater and poor poor Toadpaw. I mean, he loved Quillfeather right? I love how you tear the reader with the conflict that hardly lasts xD Your chapters were pretty short, and there wasn't that much of a plot, you seemed to skip over a lot of details, but you covered everything that needed to be covered for a great story to take place. I might reccomend adding some more detail. I never caught what color Shadewater's pelt was and for a moment I wasn't sure if they were Shadowclan or Thunderclan. Still GREAT JOB Feather :D Amazin, like all yoru other stories!