Talk:Seeking Revenge/@comment-5488450-20130914163705

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I’d like to start with how absolutely BE-U-TI-FUL the ending was, I swear, it sent all these shivers up my back. Shade speaking to Susan almost brought tears to my eyes and during the ending it was just shivers all the way up my back.

And Talonpaw being their sibling? OHMYGOD. This story was seriously, fantastic. The format was great and if I have to be honest I read this one last because it was longest, and yet it feels like I saved the best for the last. No offense to anyone else, but this is the best one I’ve read for this week, and oh my god.

First, I love how much you put Susan through. Her life was so hard it just makes us wish you had killed her and stop the torture, and to push a reader to that point means you have to be really good about writing tragedies. I suggest you try some more about loss-you’re really good at it :)

Also Scratch was a fantastic addition. We never knew what to think about him, sometimes he was good, sometimes he was a traitor, but often he was just confusing. And that cat that she met at the twolegplace who you /killed/. What was his secret, btw?

I love how well you made it play along with the storyline of The Drakest Hour because that was also really impressive, just like the whole of this story ^0^

Okay theres nothing bad about this, seriously, you have to be proud of this or I don’t even know anymore, okay? Keep writing Stormy, you’ve left me in awe :)