Talk:Whispering Echoes/@comment-29491342-20160605123847

I love this.

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Dewbreeze believes her mate should be exiled, not die. I find this realistic, considering he betrayed her and murdered the leader, but they were mates.

I think everyone was too quick to accuse Emberstrike of killing Drizzlestripe. They should have tried to see if he was set up, or his fur 'accidentally' ended up in his claws. There's a lot of stories where a mother receives a prophecy about her kit(s) causing destruction and murder. Dewbreeze, the mother, is following the tradition of teaching her other kits to mistreat the other, and Rowanfang, the father, is following along. I belive this is setting the kit up for failure. I hope you take a unique approach to this.

Also, practically everything reminds Dewbreeze of Emberstrike. This seems reasonable, for she's probably grieving.

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