Talk:The War Of DawnClan./@comment-24156685-20130529020518/@comment-7270915-20130529031502

I don't think its bad. I would recommend that you adjust your paragraphs - they seem to be blending into one another at the moment. Also, I can understand why you color letters to add emphasis, but using bold or italics would be better, because different-colored letters distract from the writing.

Otherwise, you're doing pretty good. Keep at it.