Talk:Changlings: Split stars/@comment-5277627-20131119084540

Like Firey said before me, this is a great start! This story sounds really interesting and I hope you continue.

I don't mind chapter length, but you should probably not make it all one paragraph, and also, I'd change the writing from heading 3 to normal. Having it in heading 3 creats extra headings on the content thing and it's really confusing. (e.g. you'll have a heading for chapter 2, and because the typing is in heading 3, the entire chapter itself is classified as a heading. This was a little confusing to me.

So, keep writing, but change the typing from Heading 3 to Normal to make it better. Thanks!