User blog:NightshimmerXD/CONTEST WINNERS- MUST READ PLEASE!!!!

It's that time of day, folks! The one... the only... WINNERS FOR NIGHTY'S CONTEST!!

And, obviously, some commentary on your stories from moi.

Commentary first:

The Venom of a Snake- Unfinished, but overall pretty good. I liked how Talon developed Snakefang, and I liked his response to his mother dying. Even though it only has two chapters, it's a very nice story, though there are quite a few grammar errors. Elements required: 2 out of 3 | Ranking: 3 out of 5

Against My Own- Unfinished, but a very nice story. Wetty develops Sunpaw and Rowanpaw very well- from the first chapter I can tell their personalities. I would like to see more of this, since there's only one chapter and a prologue. Wetty's an epicsauce writer, but I wish she's wrote more. '''Elements required: 1 out of 3 | Ranking: 3 out of 5'''

Three Strikes- Unfinished, an alright story. Since there's only a prologue, I can't really tell where Misty's going on this one, so the plot is a bit hazy. I love you to death, Misty, but this isn't really one of your bests :( Sorry Elements required: 0 out of 3 | Ranking: 1 out of 5

Heron of Light and Eagle of Darkness- This one is finished! *wipes forehead* Okay, Rainy did AH-MAY-ZING with this. She combined romance and action perfectly, without making it sound like Twilight. She portrayed Heronpaw as the sweetest little soul, and I felt SO sorry for Eaglepaw, and, I must confess, I almost cried at the epilogue. Well done Queen Rainy! Elements required: 3 out of 3 | Ranking: 5 out of 5

The Snake That Rattles- Finished. I actually did cry on this one. Robo is an amazing writer, and just... gah. Like, I could clearly picture Snakerattle. Words do not describe the emotion I sense in this story. And with the snake? If I could steal Robo's brain right out of her head with all her ideas, I would do it. A message to Robo: WRITE MORE DEPRESSING THINGS!!!!! YOU'RE GOOD AT IT!!!! Elements required: 3 out of 3 | Ranking: 10 out of 5

Graypaw- Finished. This was a good story, Cinders, writing-wise, but the plot was a bit... fast paced, on the verge of confusing. I must admit, though, I didn't see the betrayal coming, which is quite unlike me, honestly. I, like, have a betrayal sixth-sense xD Elements required: 3 out of 3 | Ranking: 4 out of 5

'''AND NOW.... THE WINNERS! :D'''

First Place: Robo, with The Snake That Rattles. You deserve it <3

Second Place: Rainy, with Heron of Light and Eagle of Darkness. Again, you deserve it.

Third Place: Cinders, with Graypaw.

Fourth Place: Wetty, with Against My Own.

'''Talon and Cinders: I won't leave y'all with nothing!!!! Y'all get....a PARTICIPATION CERTIFICATE!! WOOOO!!! *claps wildly*'''

So, that's 'bout it. Hope y'all had fun in mai contest c: Halloween is in the air... Prepare to be scared! 23:31, November 1, 2012 (UTC)