Talk:Goodbye/Keep Your Heart Young/@comment-5342796-20130708231834

This series is going to be amazing, Arti. I can already tell that. Sad, but beautiful. The way Red put it is the ony way I can think to phrase it: it's final.

Obviously, I wasn't there when Shi, Icy, and Maple were here(though I've met Icy) but from what I've gathered through stalking the wiki, I can see the parallels in your writing. Probaby not all the symbolism and experiences, because I wasn't there, so I apologize, but from what I do recognize, I can already see the wiki as we know it, starting to come to be. (Omg that sounded so... epic?) Your message is so clear and well-voiced in this, really. It's like in the movies, when they have two people speaking at once. I can hear you, Arti, right now, but I can also hear Bramble/Arti's voice from the past, speaking out about her/your experiences. That was a confusing way to put it. :P

Now to the actual like... other side of it. Like... if this wasn't what it was, and if it was just a songfic(which it's not but... BLARGH, you know what I mean). This was amazingy well-written. Even though it was only during the span of one songfic, the changes in Bramble were notable and heartwarming. I also really appreciate the way you went over time periods. You went to all the important events, but without confusing us. I still knew where we were in the story at all times, and the flow was just perfect.

Pebble really broke my heart too, but I am glad for Bramble. Already, I'm really attached to the characters. This is just... such a plotline/story you can fall in love with. And when I mean story, I dont mean like book, I mean like story. Lives. All of that.

<3