Talk:The River/@comment-5342796-20130730235204

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OMIGODOMIGOD THE SHIP IS DEDICATED TO ME? I'M SO HONORED! <3 AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN "SHORT SHIP"? SCARXAQUA WAS CLEARLY MADE TO LAST FOREVER. IT IS TRUE LOVE. But seriously I swear if you break them up...

THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOME EPISODE! HOME SHIPPINGS ARE JUST SO <3

Before I get arrested by the Good Comment Police, I'd better give you some constructive-ness-ess-ness. Er... well... the only thing I can think of is that  you switched from Scarpaw to Clawpaw again. And the part where Saur came to visit them was a little sudden; I feel like that could've been confusing to some, though I got it.

I really liked this episode. A lot. :3

And I LOLed at the other apprentices. It's just so cute! I love how you portrayed a seemingly carefree date, but showed that there is still trouble on its way with Saur's message. It was very cleverly done.



KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :D