Talk:If Spottedleaf had lived/@comment-67.169.215.116-20120811045532/@comment-43731521-20190905064540

This was a pretty good story! But... there are a few things that bug me, first thing was she or he was using the word "Tomcat" I would much prefer "tom", second thing she or he used the word "said" like the part where spottedleaf was speaking to muosefur, i would prefer "Mewed mousfure" not "said Mousfur" and Lastly.........................I DO NOT LIKE ASHFUR AT ALL! SQUIRRLFLIGHT SHOULD HAVE BEEN WITH BRAMBLECLAW!!! IN THE WARRIOR SERIES ASHFUR TRIED TO KILL SQUIRRLFLIGHTS KITS FOR GOD SAKE! So yeah, and I think you should do another part too :) .