Talk:Shattered Barriers/@comment-24143898-20170123203754

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SMOKEY WAS WOUNDED/KILLED BY THE VIPERS WASN'T HE :C (AND AURA NO)

The Vipers totalllyyyyy know something about Bryce's parents deaths, anyway. It's obvious xP

Terran <3 Yeah, he's definitely a good cat, although I don't like/dislike him at this point in time. Just the way he comforts Bryce after that nightmare... yeah, he's definitely going to appear more later, I can just tell. He also doesn't want to hurt Bryce, I can tell... poor Terran :C

also the flashbacks are really interesting!!! now we can see a little more of Bryce's past - what makes her how she is today. She's right, though, that her sisters have been through a lot </3 from the first flashback, it seems as though Bryce's kithood was a lot more carefree than that.

and yeah, like the other people have said, you can definitely feel Bryce's pain </3 and it makes you want to read more so yeah :D

yeah this isn't a very long comment for me tbh but that's all I have to say xP Good work, Firey! I didn't see any mistakes/things to improve by looking through it :D I will be reading the next episode~

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