Talk:The Hidden Elements/@comment-8248793-20141214174850

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I finished reading the rest of it!

I love how you actually delved into their powers (well at least some of them) and I honestly love Nightkit's the best, though I don't like him being so evil D:

You were a bit kittish with some dialogue, like the kits would say "Yay!" which like I know they're kits but cats don't usually say stuff like "Yay! Woo!" you know what I mean?

This is definitely a great start, your details are still very good, and I can definitely see where this is going! I can't wait for them to get together and form their little "we have powers group", and I can't wait for more, Jay! <3

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