Talk:Red Fox/@comment-7270915-20130619015443

Well, you have a decent story so far. I would reccomend fixing the grammar mistakes. And why exactly are they just sending out one apprentice to investigate the mysterious disappearence of a patrol? After all, if a patrol disappears all of the sudden, that suggests something strange or bad happened that should be dealt with by more than one cat. And why didn't they tell Redpaw who was on the patrol?