Talk:The Beauty System/@comment-25630395-20150624052906

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That's an awesome idea for a dystopian-type world, Firey! Great idea of yours to explore Brownhare's past in this show, which I am very much looking forwards to reading. I noticed a few grammar errors, but nothing that impeded on my understanding.

I was a bit confused at first about the Beauty System. It honestly didn't seem that bad and I still don't understand what it's for? Is it basically deciding which cats stay in the Beauty, and the ones who 'fail', leave? That could have been elaborated on a little more, and maybe more about why it's so deterimental to the cat community. It kinda reminds me of The Selection in a way.

But great job! Looking forwards to reading more.

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