Talk:Fancies/@comment-8248793-20131029024503

SPOILER ALERT

I wanna write a comment each time you write more.

So from the point where I left off last time, I found it interesting that Featherpaw had to have such a collision. And I actually thought that tom was older, well, older than an apprentice.

And the way Stormpaw acts, makes me just know that Feather X Storm's gonna happen :D (I ship it anyways)

Though you used "girly" "boyly" "gentlemanly" a lot. These are cats, not humans... so would those still apply to them? (Maybe change that into she-cat, and tom...? I dunno)

But I love how everything is turning out, and I can't wait for more!

END OF SPOILER ALERT