Talk:Intoxicating Touch/@comment-26285531-20150716184539

Great story, but...

I WANT MORE. Wait, is there any more? Still, YOU HAD BETTER CONTINUE IT!! ☻

Anyways...

I'm very confused about the relationship of Winterleaf, Burntpaw, and Melodypaw. So Melodypaw is Winterleaf's younger sister, but Burntpaw is Winterleaf's adopted son? So how could Melodypaw love Burntpaw? .-. If you added something at the beginning clearly stating the relationships between the cats I'm sure I would have understood better....but nevertheless, your story is pretty great! One more thing, is Spiderstar was her mate, was he the leader of a Clan, and which Clan? When and how did he die, if he did die?

Excuse me if I'm just being ignorant, I tend to annoy people by not understanding ANYTHING. But please, please, please add more, I'm dying to know what happens!