Talk:Alliance/@comment-8248793-20160129015110

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Oh man this is certainly intense! I do love the way you start off the show, with the bonds between Britt and Jem apparent. I'm certainly drawn towards Jem, but Britt is actually rubbing me the wrong way (I get the feeling she's supposed to be like Jace? Though this is off a ship I don't know and perhaps you two are basing them off that couple)

Jenna is suspicious to me. Despite my uncertainty towards liking Britt much, I feel like she has a sixth sense for right and wrong already. You can tell she draws a clear line between good and bad, and despite her cocky attitude, I'm sure she knows in her head when is too much. The fact that she doesn't like Jenna makes me suspicious of who the she-cat will me.

Church! And the runes! I'm so glad I've read TMI cause now I know what all of these are. I'm not completely lost and clueless c:

Hm, it seems the cats are adapting fairly well to these human like qualities and I'm glad you didn't make it too unrealistic to the point where they were fairly close to being a human race. I also like how much you incorporate into this story from TMI, although I worry for the users who haven't read the series. They won't really know what's going on... Maybe a guide would help?

Again, nice beginning! I'm sure Sea's next section will be just as brilliant <3

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