Talk:I Will Conquer/@comment-24785102-20140714230137

This is a great story, but I found a majoy mistake.

"Shrewstep's having kits early," Windpaw remarked, as Fallowbreeze left the den. "He only received his warrior name a quarter-moon ago, with Mouseleaf."

"I know," Mudpaw mewed. "I presume Fallowbreeze was expecting them before he got his warrior name."

Windpaw nodded slowly, and started to scrape away the dirty bedding from Mistfur's nest. Mudpaw did the same, with Featherdrift's.

I don't think that a tom could have kits though.Isn't it a "she"?

Anyway, great job and continue :)