Talk:Days Until Heartbreak/@comment-26285531-20150824233415



(Competition Comment)

I'm so behind with this series! D:

Lost and Found~

That's quite the plot twister. O_O At first, I was kind of mad for Ice to leave Sari again, but at least it isn't for Shineblossom. And yey, Sari is finally back with the group! I missed the strong, independent Sari who was in charge and very capable of the anti-tom group. The only thing I would say is that the transition of Aura on bad terms with Sari and when Aura began liking Sari was a bit cut short, like one moment Aura was spiteful and the next she was asking for Sari's help. But other than that, great job! This was the really great twist that I was waiting for in the story. C:

Light~

I'm happy Sari can finally do what she can do well - fight! c: Seriously, that was awesome.

And Pearl was so spiteful toward Sari, yet in the end she gets beaten. I feel soo satisfyed when that happens, idk. But the best thing about Light was that SARI IS FINALLY HOME! <3~

Perhaps Sari's life won't be so confusing and daunting anymore. c:

(And I'm kind of starting to ship SariXIce now welp SHHHH)

