Talk:Echo & Lark/@comment-8248793-20151220161207

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I really, really like your description! It's so full of scenery that it really enhances the story. I would advise not throwing in a bunch of description at one time and space it out with your dialogue. I feel like you're really just piling in the description to perhaps avoid the dialogue?

But that's fine! Most people don't put enough description, so I'm glad you describe your surroundings thoroughly.

Echo seems really cute but super defensive. I assume it's because of what happened at first. But the relationship between echo and Lark is super cute and I was quite disappointed you only wrote two chapters!

Great start, please do write more :)

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