Talk:The Night Prophecy/@comment-24519368-20170422110104

After three chapters of reading, this was looking to me like the run-of-the-mill warriors fanfiction debut: special powers, main character in a prophecy, etc. Furthermore, the grammar needs work, and there are some spelling errors too.

Characters and dialogue sounds so ''generic. ''Maybe try shake the writing style up a bit, or stop going down the linear plot route and turn quadratic or something? Throw in something unique to make your story stand out more.

I barely saw any development in Sealeaf/Streampelt's relationship. (Maybe I was reading too fast and I wanted to be over with the story so I could get to the review.)

The main problem is, your story isn't unique at the beginning, so it doesn't hook in the reader.