Talk:Mousefur's Secret/@comment-72.93.100.10-20120820180619

Wow, this is kind of pitiful. It's a copy of Bluestar and Thrushpelt's conversation from ''Bluestar's Prophecy. ''Also, even though fanfiction isn't supposed to be consistant with the real books, it's just so clumsily written. You may have potential, but pay more attention to plaguerism, and in fanfiction, work things out more smoothly.

Don't get me wrong either-I don't hate you.