User blog comment:Rainsplash987/murder & mystery, oh my!/@comment-26285531-20160113010230

(your intro so is fancy i'll try too)

also this story takes place in a king/queendom but there doesn't actually have to be a palace and stuff lol it can be in a forest or such~

Once upon a time, in a land far far away, lived two star-crossed lovers, {insert name} and {insert name 2}. They loved each other since they were very young and vowed never to leave each other. They don't have any family so this isn't like romeo and juliet okay

Then {he} has to leave the kingdom for grinding events in another kingdom and he promised {her} that he would be back as soon as he could. It turns out he COULDN'T come back, and no one in the kingdom is concerned because he's like, not that important I guess??, but {she} is truly worried for his safety and informs the kingdom assembly (like a circle of rulers) They don't really care and shoo her because they don't care about him

So she sets out to look for him and she reaches the kingdom he had been visiting, when she found another tom -- her long lost love from seasons and seasons ago. he has a high position in the kingdom and is well-known. they recognize each other and she gradually...you know... e.e she forgets about {him}

One day she's reminded of him (something creative reminds her of him idk) and she realizes she's forgot about him for moons. she asks the other tom if he'd seen her, and he just shrugs but he looks peculiar. at this point she's heck of worried.

So she's out in the woods taking a walk one day when she meets a really ugly, mangled tom. He was missing an eye, had a bloody swollen leg, and overall looked hideous. but she has a soft heart for him and helps him out, leads him somewhere safe and hunts for him. He thanks her and she leaves, but she visits him the next to day to check on him and so on and so forth, it becomes a habit for her. the other tom is getting suspicious of why she's out in the woods so often and he spies on her. When he sees them together he gets really mad for some reason, and starts attacking them

She tries to fight back but the wounded cat urges her to go and {insert obstacles here}Tthey run away together and you could probably see this coming but when they're well away from the other tom he reveals to her that he's the tom from the beginning, her star-crossed lover and the other tom set guards to wound him, because he's a convict for stealing from the other tom. They would probably kill her if she stayed with a convict because she would have tried in vain to protect him and that would have gotten her killed.

So he sacrafices himself to the other tom and his guards (who kill him), and she, who is shocked and disgusted by the other tom, runs away and is never seen again. [the end]

omg this was so irrelevant to your blogpost o. o"