Talk:Snow Heart/@comment-5342796-20150411124731



Okay, I was shipping CrowXStorm but I'm still sad that Dewheart dies. It was so sudden :( Poor guy. I feel bad for Snowbreeze too. Gah, why must you play with my emotions this way, Firey?

Also, I'm still waiting for Reedtail to show up, drinking a cocktail and professing that he was merely getting a Brazilian blowout for his fur and a massage. Because that's what going to happen. He will not be hurt :D

A little bit of constructive criticism: try to transition between some scenes a little more fluidly. Like, one moment Storm was reflecting on the tom she loved, and then a fox attack was happening. But this is one of the earlier episodes, and I'm certain your magnificent writing has improved even moreso with time, so don't worry about it. Awesome job!

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