Talk:Fallen (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-8248793-20141101002912

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omg that was a sad ending. I wasn't expecting that at all D:

This was kinda rushed, but not so much. It was only rushed at the end, perhaps because you ran out of lyrics to keep writing x3 I thought you positioned each line very well, I shipped DaisyXClover so hard until... D:

Song! I've missed her attitude, though I kinda felt sad that she just murdered Clover because he probably broke her heart. I really liked this series, it was very creative, and just exciting to read! I'm so glad you finished it so quickly xD

I only felt that the last part was rushed, like you didn't tell us how Daisyblaze died, and how Cloverstar lost seven of his lives.

(I don't think Clan cats would use /Pony/ as a name js)

Overall, this was great!

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