Talk:Ghostwhisper's Prophecy/@comment-26432133-20170802030507

WFWA JUDGING

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Okay, so this is pretty good! I like where the story is going. When I consider this and the story you submitted for my contest, I must say one of my favorite characters is Moonshadow, since his character motivations and actions are really cool! My only nitpicks are that Ghostwhisper is a pretty odd name, and the prophecy feels a smidge cliche? The chapters could also be a bit longer and the pacing's a bit too fast, but other than that this is great!

Now, you nominated Ghostwhisper for Best Protagonist, and he fits it well! I love how he takes charge and faces ViperClan. He also rises to deputyship with Spidernose/star, and the time skip between the kits being born and the kits becoming apprentices was done nicely. I especially enjoy how there wasn't a "six moons later" thing Spongebob-style, which always feels off when put in a story. Good luck in WFWA!