Talk:Thunder Rising/@comment-8248793-20151124044108

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part four

Mischief is my fav charrie, and although I love Ravenpaw, I do like reading about Mischief more (maybe it's bc she's your OC for this fic but I think it's more bc you've really developed her and I just love her sweet and innocent sort of vibe)

I seriously love the vibe you give all your charries. Like I really do like how you create sort of an alternate personality for them since in the main series they weren't really given a strong personality (they like were flat characters). Like Brokenstar, how he seems to have a good side. And Blackfoot!!

ooh mysterious! ShadowClan is one of my fav Clans and I'm so glad this is taking place there :) you're really giving us an insight on what could have happened to anyone who accidentally went to ShadowClan at this time!

part five

Yellowfang!! She was one of my fav cats in the first series and I wonder what will happen to her if Firepaw doesn't find her... This is definitely an interesting tale you're riling up :)

Like I said before, Mischief is amazing! I love her so much and I loved how fiesty she was against the other apprentices.

Sorry this comment is like super short for both sections... :c but I seriously do love it! :) <3

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