Talk:Delve/@comment-1333071-20120616162409

I only noticed one mistake in this, and that was the absence of a word. Otherwise, this story is EXTREMELY well-written and thought-out.

Also, until closer to the end of this (or what you have now) I thought Leopardpaw was a girl. Ah, well. It's still really good. :)

I hate Crowclaw. But I love how Leopardpaw doesn't want to hurt anybody just to get what she wants for herself. She uses her power for goodness and stuff.