Talk:Prior Trials/@comment-8248793-20150818145236/@comment-25653434-20150819090103

Thanks Firey!! I do need to develop more of the characters but I was planning of doing that a little more next episode. Lol I'm trying to make Sandpaw very flawed cuz a perfect main character is very boring and its like whoopdedoo. Yeah I realized that and I do need to fix that, I am still very much improving on my writing. It is one of my main goals this year. Yeah I should have explained that but I kind of rushed this episode a little, whoops hehe... But anywyas thanks for commenting, it means a lot ot me!