Talk:Passing All Odds/@comment-5342796-20150716030500



WHAT THE HECK.

WHAT. THE. HECK.

THAT WAS SO INTENSE.

That was a really good season finale. It completed season one's subplot in the overarching storyline, and ended on a bittersweet note. Success as warriors is tainted by both the fact that a) they are warriors for a regime they've come to despise and b) they have sacrificed and killed and been killed for this moment, and they have friends who didn't make it to join them on this day.

I love your characters and I love your development. The timeskip certainly has changed them, and the fact that they separated themselves for so long to gain their mentors' trust speaks a lot to their determination.

As does the fact that Amberpaw killed another cat to ensure that they'd be warriors. That was a critical  point made about who she is and what she believes in. And it was really unexpected, I was like "whoa, danggg".

This was so well-written. Honestly, the maturity in writing and the thought that goes into this series is incredible. The plot is developed so well! And I know that it's gonna get more and more intense, so I'm SO excited :D :D :D

GREAT JOB FIREY <333333

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