Talk:Shadows of the Dark/@comment-24143898-20150311050725

(competition post :o)

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Interesting prologue so far, I must admit. There is some suspense going on... I think Goltentail and Nightleap will have to do with something in the future. :3

Moving on to the first chapter, however... I was a little bit confused. How did the five kits get so close to WindClan territory? If I was to suggest improvement, I would extend that bit a little more, so it could be less confusing.

Otherwise, Fallen and Cinder, this was very good, and I'll be looking for more <3

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