Talk:Rosestar's Heart/@comment-37001457-20181223174605

Maybe work on the first book before you throw specials at us...

Anyways here is some constructive criticism

In my opinion the facing is a bit too fast and there is a bit to much information to take in a once. There is also some grammer and spelling mistakes. I would suggest editing a chapter before you post it.

Anyways here are some things I like about it

I think that this might work as sort of a little chapter by chapter puzzle put into each of the killers books so we can get another story that we could put together.

Just a idea. I don’t think this could work as a whole story seeing as we only so far see Rosestar once in the books. Thought that it could work like that.