Talk:Peace Before the Storm/@comment-25630395-20150729212553

SPOILERS.

This beginning episode is such a great introduction to the show! The pace is perfect... slow, but it's letting us become familiar with the main character(s) before you launch into the action. It's actually really effective, it never seemed boring at all, and it gave us time to understand the setting and what's going on. After all, the title is 'Peace Before the Storm'.

I was a little confused on Fawnsteps' gender... then I checked your character subpage and was like OH A SHE-CAT. Though I got the sense from her name and who she was friends with... yeah.... I like Fawnstep actually, she seems like a character I'd like, reasonable and calm though not wimpy. For some reason I thought she was deputy (is she??).

That was a great ending and the Gathering was a nice transition into the action. I find the system of how these three Clans choose leaders interesting. And I absolutely love Brightstar idk why though.

Great job, Vee!

ENDING SPOILERS >:D