Talk:Intoxicating Touch/@comment-7662967-20140822034940

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Oh wow. This is so cool!

XD the Smoke cat things are creepy *shivers* But then they're neat at the same time, and they really add a lot.

Like you have to come up with something new and exciting, a new twist to your basic Warriors plot.

I do agree with Firey, that you need more about the war and such, but hey, I always make my readers wait to hear explanations like that :)

Melodypaw's death was sudden, and maybe to soon, but you could balance it out by developing Burntpaw really well, and how he get's along without her, or whatever XP

What happens to Winterleaf next, now that she refuses to kill Quailstar? I can't wait!! :D

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