Talk:The Ocean/@comment-28076378-20180101005034

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Wow... this was a lovely story! I like how it starts off in the battle, but it ends so fast... poor Foxfang, I have a feeling I would've liked him :c

Oooh, no Hollytail, stop blaming yourself! It's not your fault the plan didn't work, not everything works out sometimes. Man, I just feel bad for everyone so far, Hollytail, Finchflight... I wish the Clan wasn't losing faith in Hollytail, I can understand their concerns though. They need a strong deputy to help lead the Clan.

Aww, Wave is so cute! ... I knew she was probably going to end up being the cat who killed Foxfang. I liked watching Hollytail and Wave develop - if only things could have ended differently! I wasn't expecting Hollytail to get so angry at Wave; I know she swore revenge on her friends killer, it was in her mind for so long, and Wave lied... but at that point, I thought her love would have overpowered her anger.

I wonder what ends up happening to Hollytail? I hope she is okay, where ever she is.

Hollytail is a great character - everyone is. I wasn't bored at all while reading! Your description is also awesome! Longstar was called Tallstar a few times, but other than that, I didn't notice any mistakes C:

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