Talk:Warriors: The New Era/@comment-5342796-20130725205309

Okay, I read this this morning but my stupid commenter editor thingy wouldn't load, so I'm commenting now. x3

I think this is a great start to the story; the prologue was well-written and very intriguing. As Robo pointed out, it is helpful to start a new parrie when someone new speaks. Other than that though, this was really well done. I'm definitely eager to see where this goes.

One thing I felt compelled to point out was that the prophecy seemed a teeny bit sudden. Which is okay for a prologue, of course, but I'd reccomend having a nice build-up in the story - just a suggestion of course, and you might've been planning to do that anyway.

Overall, great story. :D Keep up the good wokr!