Talk:Working Man (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-8248793-20141101002400

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This was one of the better songfics of this series :)

I'm sorry if I've been too critical for the whole series, I'm sorry :ccc But this one was definitely more planned out, and it didn't feel as rushed as before. You chose the right time to skip unimportant parts, and everything flowed smoothly.

I also liked how you had Kayleigh come right out quickly with her signs. It's better that you don't drag out things like deputies and medicine cats, and I thought I should say you did a good job making that part quick.

I liked Kayleigh's name XD It sounded so nice c:

I also liked how you had everyone choose their own name, it's a unique way for cats to get their warrior name, but it definitely showed that Cloverstar is going to be a great leader.

<3

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