Talk:Assassin/@comment-26285531-20150716022710

Beautiful story, I love the plot! Great ideas, and I hope to see more content from you in the future!

There were a few small errors here and there, but hey, no one minds those! In the beginning, where you stated the bond between the kits, I enjoyed how put-together they were. Most kits are more rough-and-tumble in fanfictions.

One thing I think you could have changed is in the very beginning, where you tell that the storyline begins 20 years after SkyClan's leaving the forest. Since the cats' time doesn't run in weeks, months, or years, it would have been a tad bit more authentic to have stated the date in "moons".

P.S. Great how Rainfeather got special thanks. I absolutely LOVE people who give credits because it's a really kind thing to do. Hope to see more from both!