Talk:Rogue at Heart/@comment-27725192-20160703202235

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Compliments =

Wow I've always wanted to see a main character being a Clan rebel and now this story has one! I like Pepperkit's daring behavior and she is my favorite character :)

Concerns =

The Prologue is only four sentences and three lines and it didn't complete a conversation. Were you already planning on expanding it? Okay, to organize a story, please add a new line with every dialogue. Other than that, I find it fine :)

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