Talk:Morning Finds You/@comment-25630395-20160803174119

aloha, a better comment this time c:

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rainy, that ending was not okay. *throws pie*

the beginning was really powerful... i love how you painted this picture of an innocent, sweet kit- soon to be ruined when her father came to get her. right from the beginning, you had me roped in. i felt so horrible for her, having to see all that killing when she was a baby D: and as she went on, i really felt for Morningpaw. she's the character that the reader wants to protect, because she's so helpless, but she's got the fire inside her that'll come out in the end.

omg, this story is intense- i love how you use the subtitle things, because they really help illustrate her development. Morningpaw's character development was very strong even though the story was short. Her last act of courage hit me right in them feels.

wolfpaw... i don't know how i feel about their relationship. it seemed like a good friendship, and i thought morningpaw was taking it too seriously when she said she loved him. but in the end, i guess, love doesn't have boundaries? in any event, i thought the ending was heartbreaking and sweet </3

this is a beautiful, powerful story, and i love it so much! amazing job!

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