Talk:Time/@comment-25630395-20170709022923/@comment-7235369-20170709153744

thank you so much for your comment!!

I honestly really like amberpaw/fang as a character. when I was younger on here I had a story where the main chara was such a mary sue. literally named echospirit. so I made a pact w/ myself to try and give my characters flaws, so I'm really glad u like grumpy, explosive amberboy.

thanks for the advice! I'll make sure to do that- though there probably won't be many new characters in the rest of the story.

maplepaw/splash is such a sweetie. I love her a lot and wanted to make her calmer, someone who likes to stick to the sidelines. she sure is having an affect on amberfang, helping him to understand that having relationships aren't that bad. and as for the first two ____ is too long enders, amberboy feels like he's accomplished everything he has to do in such a short time, before (insert time period here) is close to ending. cuz u know the world revolves around him.

and yeah, amberboy is really scared that if he gets close to maplesyrup, everything will change. he won't have control of his life anymore. everything he does will be for her. and that terrifies him.

yep, you're correct! and who knows? a moment could be as long as several heartbeats- or it could be as short as a split second glance ;) i hope you enjoy the end cuz it's coming up soon! i'm really happy you've enjoyed it!! <3333