Talk:Take a Stand/@comment-8248793-20150716221600

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Okay wow I suck I haven't been commenting :C Honestly why is there only two comments on this story D: I can't believe nobody's bothering (sighs)

Anyways, I really love how you weave the story, each event flows smoothly to the next and there's no flaws in the way you write. You perfectly excecuted having everyone suddenly listen to Coldfrost's instructions and Firehawk's hostility.

Seriously though, I hope you continue this story and finish the series because I love this as much as I love Prison :) (I REREAD THAT BTW I WILL COMMENT HOPEFULLY IF I CAN FIND THE TIME SOON)

Your characters are so well developed and I really like the base of this story :) Please write more Stareh :DDD <3

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