Talk:Believe./@comment-26936355-20170325001425



So far, this is great! I love the concept of this story, and I hate India's family. Like what is your problem man???

Just a lil' nitpick- in Grandma's conversation in Chapter 1, you forgot a full stop. It shoud be "And smartness is the key to life."

Except for that, everything's flowing smoothly, and I can't wait to read more!

>Spoilers<