Talk:Songflight's Pain/@comment-8248793-20130827155017

SPOILER ALERT

I must say, Brighty, I love this already. :D

But, Songflight would never scream something like that as fast as that. Because she's like a mature figure, so I suggest you change that. Troutstream and Songflight... um... they almost have no love. Like they love each other, but what are they really to each other? I dunno, cause I never supported TroutXSong :P.

One part, right before the end of this part, you wrote "soem" instead of "some". But I didn't find any other mistakes.

Good job Brighty! Now I'm interested in reading this again, so write more soon! <3

END OF SPOILER ALERT