Talk:Falling Petals/@comment-25531638-20140218030809

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I really liked this episode a lot, and to be honest, I don't have much criticism other than little nitpicky things.

So, I'll start with the way that I loved how we got to see Dewheart and Reedtail watching from StarClan, it was so sweet. So sad how they never got to have kits and stuff :(

And I really love Storm's fury in the beginning. She usually seems like a pretty sweet she-cat, so it's sort of cool when those sweet she-cats go badass :3 And agh, poor Leaflower. I think that you described her death rather well. So much death, why do all the charries keep dying ;(

And now, for the little nitpicky things. In the beginning, I think you typed "lung" instead of "lunged". And where it says Minnowfur's eyes were "getting red with tears". That doesn't make much sense, considering that she's a cat x3

Anyways, over all, I really liked :D

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