Talk:Lost Love/@comment-26998763-20151215220436

That was really good!!

Just a few things:

1. I don't really like the name Falconblossom, but that's a matter of opinion.

2. When it says, "Falconblossom looks at me with feint surprise in her eyes.", the word feint is not used correctly. The word feint means a deceptive or pretended blow, thrust, or other movement,  especially in boxing or fencing or  a mock attack or movement in warfare, made in order to distract or  deceive an enemy.

3. Cats are not able to produce tears, so it would be impossible for Birchpelt to cry.

Bye!!!

-Katy