Talk:My Dirty Little Secret/@comment-26432133-20170730230220

Okay so I'm picking up Firey's stuff for WFWA, and since I already commented, I guess I'll add on my thoughts for this as "Best Potential (unfinished story)"

I'm all caught up on this now, so-

Since the category MDLS was nominated for is pretty much "Best Story But It's Not Done", I must say this is absolutely wonderful and I love it. I'm tentative to dive headfirst into shipping mode because something feels slightly off about him. I'm not exactly sure what it is lol. It's in his interactions with Brindlefrost though I think. You do a really good job at writing a ship, nice to see that on WFW lol. I'm sorry I'm doing so bad at judging this, the category's pretty vague haha. I really wonder what's going to happen to Brindlefrost and Brownfire, are they gonna pull a Leafpool and throw the kits at someone or keep them?

Also Squirrelpaw is easily my favorite character she's so precious <3

I don't really know what else to say, this story is amazing and good luck in WFWA!