Talk:Withered Rose/@comment-7270915-20130624003828

This is good, Brighty! I have to disagree with Roseheart - she's not acting like a drama queen in that first scene. I mean, she just got her heart broken - the cat she loved turned away. That's something to cry over.

And you spelled speck "spec" once, but I don't see any other mistakes. Keep up the good work!