Talk:Singularity/@comment-17759525-20170628194411/@comment-17759525-20170704233246

(I meant to mention this in my second comment but got so wrapped up in emotions that I forgot about it oops)

There /are/ a couple of minor mistakes in here - "your mind cannot compete with mind" and "she think a simple threat..." are two of the notable ones I can remember. But otherwise the writing is flawless. It's really impressive.

"Enjoyable" is a strange word for the experience given the subject matter, but it was certainly involved and thought-provoking. and in some dark, twisted way it was kind of enjoyable seeing Dawnpaw gradually spiral into madness in such a perfect and satisfying (?? that's not the right word at all) way.

You're very welcome ^.^ (also lies. LIESSSS. This story easily trumps any of mine.) Hoping for more spectacular writing like this from you in the future... no pressure or anything xD