Talk:The Claw of The Moon/@comment-25531638-20131017043252

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Holy crap. This is you, Holly? Wow. Your writing has improved significantly, as well as your grammar. Except that you misspelled "Prologue" as "Proluge".

The story flows very well, and moves at a perfect pace. The scene where Spiritheart gets 'eliminated' was very well written, and I am certainly curious about what this is all going to mean. Can't wait to see the rest of this plot :)

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