Talk:Proposition/@comment-24143898-20170111230615

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Oh these Clans are in chaos... this makes for an interesting premise. Idk if we'll see much of them though - at this point I feel as though the focus is going to be on Odin training up these corrupt cats to be 'heroes' - but the Clans... they appear to be fighting among themselves as well as the rogues. It shows how fragile the Clans really are (in a sense), and this makes Odin's proposal very interesting: it makes me wonder that if these cat become 'heroes', how are going to stop all this?

goodness I have no idea where this os going to lead at all... it's gonna keep me guessing for a while, and I like this.

Odin's proposal seems interesting, to say the least. I'm not sure if it's going to work, especially considering he's gone and chosen the most unherolike cats in the forest - but at the same time, it's also trying to prove his goal. As for heroes, what sort of heroes will they be? Like the other people that have commented have said, it's really testing the word's definition, and that just makes it so intruging.

also helios <3

I saw one minor grammar mistake - losing only has one o in it - but I couldn't pick up anything else.

Great job with this pilot, Blazey! I'll try to comment on the next episode when it comes out C:

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