Talk:Mapleshade Speaks: Thrown Out/@comment-8248793-20140107012724

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That was a great, evil plot HIMG :)

I really loved the way you portrayed Mapleshade, how she was so loyal, and a nice and caring she-cat. Then how you showed her losses, and how she still hates him.

You made Bluegaze so endearing, and then ruined the love story by having him become cold-hearted. I don't think a cat who's truly in love would just abandon his mate like that, so maybe you should show that he w=doesn't want these kits, but he still half loves her?

I really did like this story, and I'm going to read the next one soon :)

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