Talk:Honeykit and the 4 stars chapter 1/@comment-34633311-20160911203509

...You realize you can put it all on one page, right? That way, your readers won't get confused about where the first chapter or any other chapters are.

I am also having a lot of trouble reading your story due to the lack of paragraphs - it's very hard to read! Big chunks of text are something that makes it a bit hard to read - if that could be changed, that'd be great!