Talk:On the Side/@comment-15560748-20160221192730

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While I already know what happens (I'm on Season 3, I think), I still felt like I had to reread, starting from Season 1. And so I'm back here, giving you a better comment. So here goes:

So I have a feeling that Storm's "better" featurs are seen by everyone but herself. Like she doesn't think she's able to lead the patrol, but Shade does. And I have a feeling that the others in her patrol will be able to see the good in her that Storm can't find herself.

I'm very curious about Shade too. Storm's descriptions of her help me imagine what she looks like - kudos to you for that. She's broken inside - I can easily see that - but I think that she's holding herself together for Storm. Sisterly love <3

I have a question about some of the information present here? Like you said that Shade would run away and not come back for moons, but if Storm is eight moons, she must've been maybe 4 or 5 moons if Shade left? And also, you said that Storm was 8 moons old when Leaf died, but how can Shade also ditch her when she's 8 moons old and come back "after a few moons" and Storm is still the same age? Idk.

But anyway, great episode! I'll try to get in a few more comments in for today :)

<3

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