Talk:Singularity/@comment-7235369-20170622005528

YO THIS STORY IS SO GOOD

needless pros: I really, really like the suffix Sage. idk why, I just do. Sageheart is an amazing name too.

And wow... Dawnstar. This story is really intense. I really like the pacing and how you've directed Dawnstar and Sageheart's characters, especially the former. I love how you made her sadistic and psychopathic- I've been yearning for a good villian in a Warriors book/fanfic that isn't a one dimensional psychopathic dark broad-shouldered tabby. The writing and similes are excellent as well- I've noticed a few errors here and there but other than that, it's great!

I enjoyed the presentation of Dawnpaw's first few predictions. I was bewildered, and it was amazing how everything followed her 'not prophecies.' I also liked the more recent chapters that show how far she's willing to go to achieve... Something? I'm not sure what, but her steadfast dedication is incredible. I'm assuming she blackmailed Robincall and Brackenstar into setting up that scene so that she could become leader.

I'm really enjoying the story so far and I'm excited to see how it relates to the ever-mysterious singularity- and what the heck is up with Dawnstar!