Talk:Radioactive (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-7410018-20141025151424

Spoilers~

Wow. I'm getting surprised with the increasing quality of newer user's work. I thought this was surprisingly good. I found Flamegaze to be the most fascinating cat in the story. I love how she was  a mixture of sweet yet cold blooded. Although, I would describe the reasons why she became a killer a bit more. Like, does she like the blood? The fight? Is she just angry and lonely? Did she have a bad kithood?

Another thing I thought was a bit abrupt was in the beginning, when Bramblefoot's mood shifted after seeing Mosspaw's new move.

I really liked the fact that Flamegaze was so clever as well, and Mosspaw was so naive, and he keeps her secret. I ship them a lot; I hope they get together later haha (assuming that this is a series following the same story).

All right I'm off to read the second one, I will definitely read everything out of this series