Talk:Falling Petals/@comment-5488450-20140131042018

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I thought this episode was really cool in the way that you are kind of bringing everything together! It's really a nice twist, especially when they continue battling!

My favorite part is doubtlessly the other cats watching her over StarClan, that was really sweet and honestly it gave a totally different perspective to what was going on!

AND LEAFFLOWER AWW I FEEL SO SAD NOW

The only thing i may point out is that you sometimes writer things in paranthesis before changing the POV and I personally find that to be a little unprofessional, if you know what I mean c:

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