Talk:The Forbidden Files/@comment-1333071-20111231224520/@comment-76.106.89.218-20111231234758

Don't say sorry! Thank you so much for this. It was very helpful. I will for sure add a table of contents when ever I can. I added a chapter... Okay, I get what you are saying about the present tense thing. I read this after I posted the second chapter, so I may have repeated some of the same actions in the new one. This computer doesn't have a spell check, and I'm ten and am horrible at spelling and I know nothing about grammar, so this is extremely welcome. I will start to edit these chapters much more, and thank you for pointing out where you were confused. Sometimes when I write, I'll read over it, and it makes sense to ME because I wrote it, but may not to other people. The present tense thing is difficult because in school and in my role plays, I have to do it the other way around, so I get confused. I've always been bad with indenting :P

Thanks a lot !