Talk:Misfortune's Path/@comment-25022447-20140702131912

It's quite good so far! :) I suggest you to start a new paragraph when a new cat speaks though, so that the story won't be a really big paragraph, e.g. "hi." meowed Talonstar. "hi." meowed Fernclaw. instead of: "hi." meowed Talonstar. "hi." meowed Fernclaw. That way it would look a bit better :)