Talk:Unsheathed Claws/@comment-5342796-20150418174529



Whoa, the ending was really a twist from the path I was expecting Wisp to take. He's quite a tenacious cat isn't he? You weren't kidding about the title "Solitary"; he literally chooses to focus on himself above everything. Not that I'm saying that as a negative about the show. With all the hype about heroes being selfless, it's cool to have a charrie that's like "um... funny story, my life matters to me." xD

I really like this. There were a few mechanical errors. For example, this sentence (after the second asterisk: "As I reached the ForestClan border, I tasted the air, to see if any of their cats were nearby, when I confirmed that they were not nearby, I stepped cautiously into what was now their territory."

It's a run-on; it'd work better if you put a period or semi-colon after the word 'nearby'. And no comma after the word 'air'. But again, just minor mistakes, very easily fixed and ones that don't subtract to the story. Overall, I seriously loved this episode.

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