Talk:Leafpool's Memoirs/@comment-24766822-20140722184714

I applaud you, Warriorlover! This is a very impressive poem, and it has a certain rhythm to it. The final line is by far the most beautiful; Saying that the memories will be in a line that is bumpy and curvy is a very good way to describe it. This really shows what grief Leafpool had to go through in such a sensational way. Amazing work!