Talk:Last One Left Over/@comment-24766822-20140802010950

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FINAL SONG

Wow... that's just about all I can say.

So, there is one thing that I really like. And that is the whole name thing. This reminds me a lot of Gathering Blue, a book where, as you age, you receive another syllable in your name. So you would start out as Ki, and in your second year, you would be Kia. So very clever, once again, Blade.

And With... interesting name to start out with, Blade. There are so many things that could go with that; so many possibilities.

You know, the Spirit Woods remind me of the Moonpool and the Moonstone.

You have excellent descriptions; Your describing style reminds me very much of my own, sometimes.

Oh, and With... his wanting is so strong, he even wants to die, just to receive his name? Such a strong emotion, Wanting.

Another strong emotion is Uncertainty, and a lot of that is seen during the beginning. It leaves many questions to be asked in the reader's own mind.

You amaze me, Blade.

COLD HEART

I feel such sympathy for Solden, although I don't think he would appreciate it!

He didn't want the sympathy of the other cats, because they thought he was weak. He didn't want to be known as weak. And because of the scars these cats gave him, he has become hardened.

Wow.

I can't wait to learn more about Solden. He seems like he's a very interesting character, and is very well written.

Overall, this is great story, Blade! I really like it.

You have impressed the mighty Darkstripe! X3