Talk:Let It Burn/@comment-25630395-20150816191012

SPOILERS AND COMPETITION POST

OH MY GOD. This is literally one of the best things I've ever read. You should totally do this with like, real people. That would be utterly amazing.

So firstly, this world is so beautifully dystopian (that's a bit of an oxymoron). I can just imagine how awful life is for Phoenix and her family. The setting, the disasters, gah. Why is it so good? It reminds me a little of the world I tried created in HALO... but like a million times awesomer and deadlier.

As always, your characters are so complex and wonderful. Phoenix is such a great character... tough and responsible, but someone who has an emotional side and breaks down sometimes. Gale and Ray are adorable, and I for some reason find Elliot a jerk >:D