Talk:A Bloodthirsty Leader/@comment-32946794-20160818145124

 This is trully awesome. I love it, and Im pretty sure there is a user who will enjoy this even more *cough dogwood cough*

Pluses:

Anyways, just as Atalia said, only thing I can call Sol is complete utter b***h. Really really good. Now dont take this the wrong way but I love the new users crazy stuff in their fanfics, how farfetched they are. Weapons sucking lives. 100 lives. Immortality. Chápter nine was totally insane.

Minuses:

Well first of all, I dont think you should say that a full-grown warriors squeaked. I mean they are adult. Next up, you should fine other name for silverthorns. The reason is, silverthorn is normal plant. Search it up. I was like "why would silverthorn cause a cat serious bleeding?".

Questions:

I got only one, did you take inspiration from A Cruel Leader to Skyclan by Flameheart2004?

Overall:

Plot is unique, crazy, and includes a lot of torturing cats (lmao) so I say thumbs up! Keep up the good work!

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