Talk:Black Lies/@comment-7662967-20140715215832

Oh Wow. This is .... EPIC! I love the way you don't really know where the cats come from, or their past, all you know is that they are wandering in this lonely world. The atmosphere you have made is haunting, fascinating and in a strange way, completely beautiful. Belle's emotions are so vivid, it's like, you're there, really there, listening to her, not just reading a story. This is almost like a song that doesn't rhyme; it has it's own rhythm that draws you in and captivates you. This story leaves room for the reader to imagine and fill in the blanks. It lets them have their own interpretation of what might be going on, and that is really, really cool. It is very easy to get lost in this world, and feel like you really are there, sharing Belle's feelings. I love it!