Talk:Goodbye/Disaster/@comment-5488450-20130805121758

Oh wow this was fantastic... I'm speachless, I was right on that verge of tears for a while here and 'Disaster' was the perfect name for this because that's exactly what it was. That scene between Starkit and Redkit and then when Bramblepaw cried herself to sleep was just tears and tears and just ;-;

But then that battle against the rogues where Sparrowsong doesn't even put up a fight-and I'm guessing the rogues are the unadressed drama?-after Miststar is struck down was so powerful.

But yet, my favorite part was where Bramblepaw felt as though she had just lost Forestheart, and then she had lost herself too. That was just *clutches chest*. And that 'cheers.' at the end was perfect.

Why are you so unfairly good at this?