User blog comment:Zaffie/CONTEST RESULTS!!!!!!!!!/@comment-1997389-20101208233124

broken moonbeam:

Plot: 8/10 a few lose ends, but it had a nice ending.

Character Development: 8/10 some of the cats where very same. i think rubypaw and amberpaw could have had more different personalities. the best character was hornet here.

Spelling/Grammar: 7/10 i foud some mistakes but they wern't catastrophic.

Comment: it was a great story and i enjoyed judging it. i got confuzled a few times, but in the end it mostly made sense.

the cliff:

Plot: 6/10 the plot looks great, it flows and links. but i've never read hunger games...

Character Development: 8/10 in the amout of story you had written, the characters where developing well. they where different, but i dident see much of rubypaw and amberpaw.

Spelling/Grammar: 7/10 i saw a couple of mistakes, but it was ok

Comment: i loved how there was a sort of clan of cats just surviving there. it would have been awesome if you had finished.

outcasts:

Plot: 9/10 it was awesome! i liked how they where all there because they almost died.

Character Development: 8/10 i dont think jelliphant was as mean as she could have benn, but they where all good.

Spelling/Grammar: 9/10 i found a mistake once or twice, but i only found them the second time i read it

Comment: it was a well written story, in all. i loved your plot, and i enjoyed reading it.

Pawsteps: Plot: 9/10 it was a bit slow at the start, but it got interesting quickly

Character Development: 9/10 they had diferent personalitys, especialy rubypaw and amberpaw. i liked how they only controlled their side of their body.

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10 i couldent find any!! i looked and i looked and i put it in word, and google search (that dident work. i got no results) but nothing!!!

Comment: it was a great story and it fitted together. it was very interesting and detailed.

sorry it took so long to get these up!