Talk:Flames of Love/@comment-5197876-20131229024713

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Dis was good Firey! I didn't see too many mistakes, but there's a few consistancy errors

In Brackenheart's flash-back, this happened: and the other Clans, especially ShadowClan are jealous of us.\

Aren't they in ShadowClan?

And also, when Snwobreeze gets mad at Brackenheart, she reveals she's expecting to him, but he doesn't figure it out till later, even though she said it to his face before.

Maybe I'm just dense. idk

Anyway, it's a wonderful story :D