Talk:Flames of Love/@comment-25531638-20131227235829

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I like the aura of perfection that you started building up with the story. It makes me wonder what's going to happen with Brackenheart and his determination to help the Clan.

And the end of Chapter 1 was just so sweet <3. I've never been one for romance, but idk, I like the scenerio of friends falling in love.

At the end of Chapter One though, you called Brackenpaw "Bracknpaw". It's a very minor typo, I just thought I'd point it out.

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