Talk:The Runaways/@comment-5488450-20130726202651


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This looks cool, so far, and I'm excited to see where you're going to go with it, as I can see you've just started. The conversations seem interesting so far and I can tell this is going to be an exciting gathering :D

Something i might suggest is more details. I don't exactly get their actions or their the setting as much as I would like to.

The prologue was really cool-you're good with poetry!-and I can't wait to see where you go with this :D


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