Talk:If Spottedleaf Had Lived.../@comment-89.100.216.75-20120527144332

Pretty good. I like the way Sandpaw gives her little private speech. <3 But it makes me sad to think Firepaw/heart would run away from his Clan. Its really good. I hate Clawface, Brockenstar, and all the evil cats like that, and I was shocked at the part Into The Wild when Spottedleaf was murdered. I would have liked Erin to put this in the books instead, and have that Spottedleaf and Fireheart return to ThunderClan in time to save Bluestar and chase Tigerclaw away. <3 I hope you make more of these story's, please! You are an amazeing Warrior Cats writer!