Talk:The Quest Begins/@comment-5342796-20150909013354

competition post



Hmmmm, do we trust Lazuli? I'm not sure if I do; I've got a bad feeling about the way they're just working together now. Ulterior motives, anyone? I'm curious to see where it'll get them though; I don't truly know what to expect and I'm sure that you, the writer, have a lot more planned.

I love this story and I'm glad you turned it into show format. The coding is very elegant (not overdone) and fits the title perfectly, and your writing style is so pretty and eloquent.

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