Talk:Fire It Up/@comment-1956227-20140103032820

Spoilsss

Wow, Fire, this is really really good so far, the plot is tense and very interesting sofar (Even though I'm still left in the dark, I'm not quite sure what's going to happen next, that's a good thing :D)

I love the prologue, you set Violetflame's character almost immediately, and she sounds epic so far, I'm definately rooting for her (I'm curious as to what she did :o)

Now for some criticism.

I didn't really have any, except you spelt sounds like wounds (When Wetstream was talking about her warrior name), those sneaky spelling errors, but other than that, it's great!