Talk:Withered Rose/@comment-25531638-20130702234455

I really enjoyed this! The writing is very capturing, and I like how you turned a seemingly simple plotline into something very detailed and... shoot, I forgot the word I was going to use xD

The first scene was especially capturing, which made me want more of the story. And the rest of it was good as well :D

I just noticed that once you spelled "trying" as "tryiny".