Talk:Fathers and Sons/@comment-5342796-20130620140022

RIVERKITTT! OMG HE WAS SO PERFECT IN THIS EPISODE. And the scene at the end like, broke my heart. When he was saying good bye... but I like how you showed that both of Gorsefur's parents were already smitten with him, and that he would have a good life there. Though I felt really bad for Brookfall.

Like Red said, the part with Stormflight dreaming was kinda confusing, but Snowflight and him were excellent. The betrayal was played out realistically, with her being a FireClan cat, but not without regret & sadness. Stormflight's battle with himself was also a good addition into the plot.

The whole Badgerstrike-Streamsong-Thundercloud thing threw us an extra curveball of suspense, and I'm really excited to see what happens there. Overall, AWESOME JOB! :D <3 (like usual ;) )