Talk:Rising Tension/@comment-8248793-20150821181220

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Oh dear my character seems so evil lol But Shadowstrike is pretty cool and I'm hoping to see more of him :3 I think you're portraying him fine though~

You did a good job in actually building the tension though I have to agree with Sea that it might have been too abrupt about Rippleheart's death. Though I do believe that it was a great plot twist to have Rippleheart die because of his apprentice.

I'm guessing the war will be between TideClan and GorseClan? It'll be interesting to figure out how the title comes into the show :) I really like your setting and overall plot, but I'm not very attacked to your characters. Fawnstep isn't really the sort of character I'd like, but I'll have to admit she's a great protagonist for this sort of a story.

Ooh and mysterious cat about death and whatnot! I'm almost certain that might contribute to the "this war of mine" title and all, so I can't wait for that to be revealed. It also really helps with the "rising tension" sort of deal so woo

Also Dappleface...Should I be worried that Brightstar might have done something to her. Or is this sort of an internal war sort of deal O: Again, this also added up to the whole tension deal which is great cause you followed your title haah

I think you're doing a great job with the show so far and your titles make a lot of sense :3 <3

I'm sorry for not commenting for so long ;c I'll try to catch up and stay updated~

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