Talk:Lost Ones/@comment-17759525-20160328231805

Anhhhh...

I clicked on this out of pure curiosity for what kind of story this friendly-sounding new user would come up with... and was greeted with a huge wall of text.

I hate huge paragraphs more than most people, but seriously, consider breaking it up. Like, a lot. Like, whenever someone new talks, or when the topic changes, and such... and then maybe I'll be able to read it without losing my place 10,000x in one sentence.