Talk:Shaken Battle/@comment-5342796-20130706221255

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa. Mind=blown.

That was an excellent starting episode, Brighty. Way to hook your audience from the first parrie. I wish it had been a little longer/more detailed, but that's not a huge problem. You did a really good job of setting a thrilling pace, and leaving the reader wanting more. There are so many questions I'm asking myself right now, like seriously.

Cant wait for the next episode :)