Talk:Honeyfern's Rise/@comment-1703139-20121221223229

Excellent story (you were right to rate it worse)! I've never envisioned Honeyfern as this kind of a cat, but I definitely can identify with what you're going for. It would be hard to be a secondary character in ThunderClan, wouldn't it? And the killings make sense as well. I noticed a few gramatical errors, but other then that your writing was good and the story is interesting. Write mooooar! :D