Talk:The Traitor/@comment-8248793-20150808181902

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I really like Hollypool so far, and her brother seems pretty chill too. It's a very good introduction and I don't feel like it's been rushed or anything so that's also good. I hope to see a POV in Dustfire's point of view cause I want to see if him and Hollypool are actually cute together :P

I'm excited to figure out who is the traitor, except I also feel like we'll find out soon because I'm almost certain one of Hollypool's friends is the traitor, which makes it really easy to guess haha.

I actually really like Samoa too. Do the prisoners just stand there all day and wait out their lives? Or do the rogues actually make them do things? That just went off in my head when I read Flightleaf's chapter.

You have good character development, and the pace is pretty well done. I'm excited to read more, Misty! :)

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