Talk:The terrible truth - Part one/@comment-7662967-20140726222859

I really like your descriptions! Silvery light on ghost-like grass. Very good!

Poor Snowy! I do not like Scratch, and I wonder what he's up to XD I hope Snowy does not get caught!

I like your development of Lilypaw so far, although I'm a little confused about a couple things.

Firstly, I thought Millie was Graystripe's mate.

Secondly, although I like the name Lionsong I thought his name was Lionblaze XP

and Thirdly, the name Faepaw is a little strange, did you mean Facepaw or Freepaw? I mean, it's totally fine if Faepaw is what you meant, I just wondered if it was a typo.

So anyway, overall I like it a lot, it just needs a little refining. Keep going! I will be following! :3