Songfic Series/Warriors Idol/1/Archive 2

Archive for the the second part of season 1 of Warriors Idol.

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9

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It was a REALLY good songfic, but I have to agree with Arti, it was confusing between the two 'hims'.

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9.5

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No mistakes, good length, and a very good story. I took half a point off because sometimes it was hard for me to figure out if 'him' was Thorn or Sun. Other then that, great job!

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9 Comments:

Well it was good except you mispelled replied, sorry. :(

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9

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1 word was mispelled and there was a place where you didn't differentiate between the song and the story (there wasn't itaqlics or bold or underlined or anything) but other then that it was a well written songfic.

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10

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I have to agree with Arti, it was clean and I think it was wonderful.

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10

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This song really fit the story! There were no mistakes and it was excellently written. Great job!

Foresty Edit
Final Score: 18.5/20

Verdict: You're moving on! Congrats!

Sunny Edit
Final Score: 18/20

Verdict: You've been eliminated. :( Sorry, better luck next time!

Snickers Edit
Final Score: 20/20

Verdict: You're going on! And with the top score too!