Talk:Thunder Rising/@comment-8248793-20151031224053

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Michief is so cute<333

Also I like the new view on ShadowClan. Though I feel as though you've made the bad cats a little too kind bc they're not really showing their dark side or doing what I felt they would have done regardless if Rusty was in ThunderClan or not c:

Blackfoot<3

I really like Boulder though, and I'm glad we get to see more of him. There was no real development for that cat so I like that you've given him something.

You've made Mischief really cute and I like how even though she's naive, she's not completely stupid or like insolent. (OR NOT LIKE BOUNCInG EVERYWHERE) She's controlled and intelligent even for her age.

sorry this is short :c but I really do love this story <3

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