Talk:I'll be your eyes, and I'll be your legs. (Jayfeather/Briarlight)/@comment-38453403-20200123185813

WOW. I absolutely LOVE your story. It's fantastic.

You are really good in pointing out the charakter of a cat. The fanfiction is very detailed and well thought out. The story is very exciting and I like that it isn't that focused on the ship right from the beginning. That makes it much more realistic. I really like Jay x Briar.

The story with Alderheart is also great. The part is included very well and I like that Alderheart makes the (in my opinion) right decition in the end. Very well done, Nightmare That Cloaks All Reason.

This fanfiction is great. I hope you will continue it soon.