Talk:Shards And Fragments/@comment-26432133-20171104163434

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Hey this is looking good so far! I like your interpretation of "The Fallen Rose", it's really interesting. My only critique would be that I can't quite follow what's going on? Maybe I'm just not reading it closely enough WHOOPS but I like this! I really wanna see where the story goes, and the characters show a lotta potential. Sorry this comment is so short I haven't gotten back into the swing of things yet ^^" But I'll be following this story for sure! Good job so far, Fox! Keep it up!