Talk:Morning Blue/@comment-5488450-20130726175040


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Ohkay, so finished this quite a while ago, cos you put it on my reading list, but forgot to comment and whoops, and I must simply state that I loved it(but you have no idea how terrified I was when I realized you weren't done yet D:). This story it just so beautiful though. You took a very simple idea-kittypet without their owner and you added so many dimensions to it. It's magical, sweet, crazy and just really well-thought out, even for an idea we've seen being used to many times before it just feels original.

The characters are all great. Stubborn sweet little Blue, funny adorable little Rambo and just cute Sparrow. Jackson makes the story so much more rich and Olivas death was perfectly done.

Jackson, however, is I think the best among your characters. Because he's just so odd. I'm pretty sure he's got a mental disorder and actually isn't evil because I mean that's not evil it's just stupid and uh... Weird. But he was cool and all of the development is astounding. Normally I don't like all these mainstream ships in fan fictions but here it's undeniable. ramboXblue is just not... If someone doesn't shop that they need to get their mentality checked. Okay. You have to officially get them together<3

And aww, I really liked Queenie too, I thought you did a good job bringing her in and out and then taking Sparrow as well(if she does) ;-;

Just the overall development of the story was great-I really love the settings too, particular The Pit. The one thing I may recommend is running down on the detail a little. Usually it was ideal but sometimes it seemed to drag the story out a little bit, making it longer than It needed to be in some action scenes.

But this was really, really marvelous

Grade:A(and I'm forcing myself to be really harsh here ;-;)

Please, I beg you to finish this!