Talk:Sun Rising/@comment-26285531-20160214200257

Great start! To ease it up on the reader's eyes I thought you could space out each paragraph a bit more -- per say, to start each dialogue of a different character on a new line, so it's clear that a different character is speaking. Another thing would be to apply meaning to a word without bold, which is used more in spoofs and stuff. Use of italics is better as in most books that's how it's used.

Also, now that you're beginning to write fanfictions (yay!) you can add a category to the category bar at the bottom: just call it Foxsteps' Fanfictions or something of the sort so we know who t's by. :)