Talk:We Can't Stay/@comment-8248793-20141023012831

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This was definitely great, Brighty!

I'm so glad you did SmokeXStorm, they are so perfect together okay?

There's not much to this comment because there's only an epilogue left to comment on, but I utterly love how you first shaped Gorse in the beginning of the story, and then show us the other side of him.

The epilogue was really sweet, and I loved how you wrote it! Storm's conflict is very well set up, and I love the way you showed that she'll never really get over Gorse, or the way the whole story ended up.

I DEMAND A SEQUEL ON SMOKE AND STORM <3

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