Talk:Trial and Error/@comment-25630395-20150209081232

IDK why I haven't commented on this before. Bad Blazey!

I have never seen anything like this, and I love this concept! The mysterious air around the council members is really great too, and I feel so bad for Icekit D:

Guess what? I now have my own red-lava-devil-horny-place. Icekit's parents can be my first guests >:DDDDD

I felt like some of Spottedleaf's thoughts should have been, well, thoughts. For example:

'''The wall next to me collapses, and I see a hole of bright light before me. This must be the way to StarClan. '''I feel like ' This must be the way to StarClan' should be in itallic thoughts, but that's just me :P

You should totally keep doing this! It would be interesting to see the Council send a cat to the Dark Forest. Great work!