Talk:Hurricane(Songfic)/@comment-25531638-20130712180049

This is wonderful, Rainy! Your plot was a complete twist from what I was expecting from the beginning, and I especially love how you gave Graystar some interesting history that also ties into the plot! In the beginning, to be honest, I thought it was just going to be a love story and yeah. But it seems like so much more, and I can't wait for the rest. I would just recommend making it clearer that Graystar is a she-cat in the beginning.