Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-1956227-20170210031933

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Okay.

I don't actaully know what to say, I like the way this is written

I'm assuming the kit in the beginning was meant to have a weird speech, explaining the misspelled things (Which in that case that's adorable and how dare Smolder smack a kit around)

This is really good! I can't wait for more, Torch seems like an interesting character! All these powers including Kindlings and Sand, I also like how there's a bit of LGBTQ going on with the cats.

Idunno my brain is processing this weirdly right now, but this is super good! No super constructive criticism from me for now!

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