Talk:Capture/@comment-11651046-20140205025631

THIS IS TRULY AMAZING. (Spoilers I guess?)

I love how the beginning is, drawing you into the story perfectly, making you want to read more! The different characters have very unique seeming personalities, making them each very fun to think about and imagine!

I don't think I even have anything to say that would criticize this at the moment, I didn't see any spelling errors I can currently recall, and the tenses were very nice...

Anyway, this was awesome, and I can't wait for you to write more!