Talk:Try (Songfic)/@comment-5342796-20160304014451



I LOVE THIS ALREADY

HOLY COW IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL. I LOVE THIS SONG AND YOUR WRITING IS PERFECT

I really want to know what Aleya did :O I was a little confused to the thing where she talked about wanting a tom who'd love her no matter what; I feel like if she did something huge enough to destroy her life, she wouldn't be thinking about that? But I dunno, maybe that's just me.

Oooh new guy :O He seems nice so far, which makes me very suspicious :3 Trust no one.

I'm just kidding; I'm very curious to see what goes down and if Dawnstar is kind-hearted towards Aleya. Just in what you have so far, you've managed to make us fully invested in both Aleya's past and her future, and we're rooting for her--even without knowing what exactly it is that she did that was so horrible.

OH, and her sister. I want to know more about her sister :O What happened?

Sorry this comment is so short but I'll be sure to add on a new one when you update C: AWESOME START, I'M REALLY PSYCHED FOR THIS SERIES.

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