Talk:If Spottedleaf Lived/@comment-4751506-20131228161431

Hi Forestfang! It looks like you've got a really nice start here - but didn't Bluestar have more lives during this battle? Or did all of her lives drain away because of the wound she had suffered (sort of like Tigerclaw)? Regardless, I think you have a ton of potential as a writer and this seems like it's going to be an awesome fan fiction that I should definitely keep my eye on! :)

I've noticed your formatting seems to be a little messed up - as a member of the WFW Editing Team, I could definitely fix it for you, if you like.