Talk:Even So/@comment-8248793-20151031190335

SPOILERS start of set 2 - part 32

Shadow is definitely one of the more interesting charries of this story though I miss Lash :C Just curious but how long has it been since Lash "disappeared"? I'm also hoping Shadow might reveal later on what happened to Lash.

Shadow/Blue BLUDOW FTW XD Lambers was okay but Bludow is so cute<3 I just don't like Shadow as much since he's on Hazard's side :c But I remember when I first read this section, I was pretty surprised how much power the messengers had. It was also nice that they got a better job bc most stories have messengers be lower positions. Interesting perspective to have for this set.

Also Lily is super adorable. Just had a speculation. What if Hazard turned Lash into Lily and made her more..."obedient"? That would be a terribly rad idea but I'd be so sad that he would do that to Lash. But Lily is so...intriguing. I constantly question what she knows and of course what secrets she'll uncover. Especially now after Exploration, she could easily be unearthing something tragic (ABOUT LASH MAYBE????)

I don't think you need character development for most of these characters, just the main one. The minor ones should have clear, flat personalities. So I think you're doing perfectly fine with that. Your characters are very well done and I'm definitely in love with the ones we see often.

Also Fire is bae<3

Please do write more :)

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