Talk:The Black Bay/@comment-28076378-20170122175108

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Ah, a sister rivlary over a tom. I did a plot like that once in rp... but it didn't end as badly as Stream and Ginger's...

Was Owl Stream's mate, or was he Ginger's and now Stream wants him? in the first part it said he was Streams, but then later it said Stream was trying to steal Owl. I wonder what'll happen to the little black kitten... she hasn't got a mother or father to look after her, unless her dad finds her

But good story so far. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes (but i'm not obbsesed with good grammar) I'll read more when it's updated!

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