Talk:Tails of a Clan/@comment-33471856-20151004120518/@comment-25090026-20151005200413

Me! Man, very dramatic so far! I quite enjoyed how you brought a sense of fear into the part YOU just wrote, but I think you can improve by making the story "flow" a bit more. I don't know if it's just me but it was a bit rushed :) apart from that, keep going! It's great! XD