Talk:Sayna's Poetry/@comment-8248793-20140808150938/@comment-7662967-20140818164243

Dawww thanks Firey! I'm glad you like them!

(I love long comments XP)

As for choppiness, and grammar errors, some of these poems were written a while ago. Like, I think 'The Legend of Cinders' was written in early 2013. Also, a lot of these were spur of the moment things, so I didn't put excessive work into them. They're kind of unpolished.

'The Fire of ThunderClan' has chanting because it is written to music, but I can see, without having the tune in your head, how it might be choppy.

'Out of Rushing Water' Yea it's painfully short. I meant to write more, but meh. It didn't happen.

As for the gradients, some of them aren't supposed to be gradients. 'The Warrior Clans' and 'Shade of the Maple' aren't.

Anyway, this reply is long too, so yea. Thanks so much Firey <3 >':'<