Talk:Dark Secret/@comment-1829516-20121208042142

Wow Bird, really impressed. There were a few mispells here and there, but otherwise it was fantastic! I like how Moonpaw was apprentice to Sunpelt, since their names compliment eachother. I also enjoyed the prologue, it seemed as if a rebellion had begun to brew within the Clan, and Rosekit's sister, Yellowpaw, seems to be apart of it.

However the only thing I'm confused about is the age differences between Rosekit's siblings. One of them is a moon older and one a day older..?