Talk:Believe/@comment-24207294-20150424013910

I HATE SMOKEFLAME

AGHBAJUDGABABA

I HOPE HE GETS THROWN DOWN A GORGE

Okay, to be honest, I saw Smokeflame as the spy early on, but Sparrowpaw (for some reason) was also on my list.

Okay, let me attempt to improve my commenting skills.

Very nice writing (as always XD) Firey :) Hardly any grammar or spelling mistakes that I oculd see, and this is tied togeher very nicely. Of course, this is a fairly common theme/topic, but the way you put up the suspense and plot was very nice. It still had your sappy love moments, of course, but the suspiscion that rose up in the later chapter was very cool.

I has a guess (even though guesses probably aren't in this book)!

Smokeflame is in a "relationship" with Minnowtail.

If he is, I hope they both die D: There is nothing worse than hypocrites in my opinions.

And why does thou Smokeflame be so rude to his sister?

i cry ;.;

Keep up the good work!

Is this gonna be one of those "ten-chapter" stories? :)