Talk:Light and Night/@comment-24318681-20131222051351

May I start off with how amazing this looks? It looks awesome, I'll get into the deeper stuff in a moment.

~Spoilers~ The flow of the story is good, keeping at a flowing, but steady pace. It doesn't feel rushed; and the lack of grammar/spelling errors is good. Also, the length of the chapters is very good, giving enough detail in one chapter before moving on. I find this inspirational, and I hope that you continue to write this. ~End of Spoilers~