Talk:Moon and Sun/@comment-5197876-20130922133713

Sorry if this comment is a fail. It's super early, and I'm not on my computer, so please excuse my spelling mistakes.

SPOILERS i liked this one. I didn't know it was a collab, actually. My fav character was definatly Shadow. MoonxShadow was so adorable. (Squeals) Sun was interesting too, and I feel bad that she lost Smoke forever. What happened to him? It's never really explained.

Also, Chapter Eleven's tilte was spelled Elven. But that's a minor detail.

Sun and Moon blended together perfectly, and where one stuck out, the other filled in,  if that makes any sense whatsoever.

I thought them making their own Clan was a cool idea, but it felt a little rushed to me. Same with the Epilougue. But hey, I'm guilty of the sane thibg so don't feel bad.

All in all, great atory!

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