Talk:Opening Locked Doors/@comment-8248793-20150628014113

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Wow okay I'm impressed by your progress. I'm not too bothered about you taking your time to get Inuwa into a Clan, cause after all it's 100 parts long. I also think you introduced characters too abruptly however, like Chrome. You kinda brought him up just to fit that one part and then explained his personality quickly cause we didn't know the character. I would have thought Inuwa would have been chosen.

Also, I kinda knew Chrome would die only because in your edit summaries, you once wrote "RIP Chrome" and I was like "what??" So yeah, maybe don't spoil those/?

I also think Inuwa is Renee's brother so I don't ship them. Plus Inuwa's character reminds me of that tom from Solitary (forgot his name) and I didn't like him :P I'm not really in love with Inuwa haha

But your plot line is wonderful and I'm excited to figure out how Inuwa will get excepted and I love the Clan idea!!

<3

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