Talk:Meet The Clan/@comment-8248793-20131028034757

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Good start. Is this finished?

But I do love the content inside. It isn't that rushed, though very short for an episode. (unless you aren't done) But I do that too.

Lightkit seems very alert, a good trait for the main character. And maybe, if you aren't done, explain some of the character's personalities. Like why did Moondapple act like that? What is she like?

This is great so far, and I hope you write more if it isn't finished!

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