Talk:Moonlight and Sunlight/@comment-24519368-20170426151744

Alright, I should go full-on analytical about this but I'm lazy.

About the prologue: Although short, it introduces twocharacters, the protagonist, Tama, and her friend, Pinecone (is this a warrior name or a non-clan cat name?)

I like the story's focus on daylight medicine cats, you rarely see that in fanfiction.

What kind of name is Tamaflare? Skyclan was always bad with its names.

As always, your grammar and spelling needs work.

The part in italics in chapter one uses a lot of language and structural techniques to create a sense of mystery and to build tension.

This is all I can say so far, you have my full support to continue!