Talk:One Golden Star/@comment-15560748-20150821025705

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The beginning was really funny. Dawnfur reminds me of my best friend, she would do something like that xD

"... muttering about fish-brains and mouse tails." XD NICE GOING FIREY

The pace kinda set the epsiode well; it was spot on <3

And you make me wanna read more because I wanna know what happens to Dawnfur.

Awesomesauce job!! <3

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