Talk:Life is a Battle/@comment-8248793-20140107045123

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Woah, you can't just end there D:

I really liked the way you set up the battle, the way its about two cats from NightClan, one evil, one good. (I remember this one :D the evil RP right?)

The song realyl matched the story, and I found that unique. For such an evil and bloody story, this song fit it VERY well.

I loved the way you showed each move, the thoughts Loudclaw had when he tried to fight back. I wish you wrote more, because that ending was a cliffhanger that needs to be filled in! There is a next part of this story right? :3

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