Talk:Thistleleaf's Mistake/@comment-26053883-20170808025421

It's an almost sane time back home so I'll count that

I like it so far! The way we're introduced to Thistleleaf is really interesting and mysterious, and it hints at what happens while still leaving open questions.

If Yellowpaw and Acornshell are littermates, that means Thistlepaw's mentor is three moons older than her, but that's just my nitpicking. I've read the original story, so I know three basic plot, but I'm really curious as to what changes you're making. It's already a little different and it's changed for the better, it's much more interesting so far than the original. You called Willowstripe Willowleaf at some point, but yet again nitpicks. Anyway, that's all I really have to say and sorry for the lateness!