Talk:Wings/@comment-5342796-20150629022738



How did I not start reading this sooner? This is INCREDIBLE. I have no words for how amazingly this is written.

I can't believe how good you are at characterization. Dreampaw is such a great main character. It's heartbreaking to see how she struggles through life. She's punished with unneccesary vehemence for the slightest mistakes. Sure, she does mess up, just like any young cat, but she certainly doesn't deserve any of the scorn she gets from her family and Clans, and it makes me so sad.

The questions you present about life in this 'fic are very well formed. I loved the conversation she had with the StarClan cats, where she was shocked and outraged to find out that the wings were a "gift" to help her protect the Clan that had been so cruel to her all her life.

Skyheart is absolutely abhorrent, but I love Gorsepelt and Rainwhisker.

Dreampaw learning to use her wings is very well thought-out and explained. It could be confusing, but it's not, thanks to your great writing skills. I can't wait to see her improve and grow into her wings.

I'd like to say that that will happen quickly and Dreampaw will find acceptance, but after reading the prologue, I doubt that'll happen. All I can say is that Dreampaw is a strong cat, and hopefully she'll grow stronger--strong enough to face whatever challenges life throws at her next.

I'm absolutely in love with this story. It's incredible. Great job c:

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