Talk:Reaching Me/@comment-27725192-20170629210014

COMMENTING CONTEST

Nice start! UM....what do you mean by Azulepaw? Is it Azul or Azure? I'm not sure. I wonder what she did to get banished so that's something I'll be looking out for in the story.

I would also recommend adding a new paragraph because it kind of looks bunched up now. Plus, there are different dialogues and they need new paragraphs. It looks really good so far!