Talk:Flicker/@comment-15560748-20150906132301

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Six

I hate Leo. He has a some-what shifty personality in a way; but now we know that everything was basically a fake for him. I like Lux a lot, and I can kinda understand what position she's in.

RICKY/LUX <3

Don't kill them with your shipping curse, please. Lux probably won't die; your story probably won't have 6 chapters, but still. Don't. Kill. Ricky. D:

I liked this chapter a lot, because everything became sort of revealed to me here; like stuff about Leo and more inside to his actions.

The description was good, and I could actually imagine Leo and Lux in the dark, and then Lux all aone.

Leo reminds me of Eric in the chapter.

Lux is Divergent. (jk)

Great job Firey!!!! <33

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