Talk:After The Battle By Blossomfire/@comment-10700348-20131109015758

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This is really good so far, but there is a few mistakes that (in my opinion) should be fixed.

For Shadowpaw, he/she wasn't very well described, and why does he/she need to kill Blackstar? But I will give you this...I love black tabby cats <3

As far as the prologue goes, it had just enough description to keep interest.

You're only on chapter 1, I'm sure that everything will unfold soon, like why Shadowpaw wants to kill Blackstar.

Otherwise, good job on this so far:)

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