Talk:Inside The Mind/@comment-8754209-20130909074850

Spoilers

I love the innonce of Ferretkit and Sparrowkit, and the idea of 'going inside the mind' is perfect. I am not a fan of Doctor Who or any mind thingy, but I like this. But detail is needed, and I got confused. Here are some of my questions, suggestions and corrections.

Suggestions:

I have no absoloute idea what Sparrowflight, Ferretpelt, Hailstar and Maplefern look like. I suggest describing them. I have a idea by Sparrowflight's name that she is a brown tabby, or looks like a sparrow.

What about the setting? In class at school, setting is important. Is it a jungle mess of trees and leaves, moorlike and bare, or is it the river type of land? Does it have a sense like battle starts at any moment, or are the cats relaxed and cool?