Talk:Despair/@comment-25531638-20130920025328

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Well, I know I'm stating the obvious here, but: This is a really sad story. It makes me think of all the people that are leaving and my dead kitty *sniff*

The deaths are all creatively written, even though, once again, it's sad.

Oh, and the triangle thing... it gave me the shivers. And if you know me, it takes a lot to do that, since I love horror stuff. But I don't think that you should overuse it.

But I assume that it's all building up into something.

You probably shouldn't just have death after death though. Maybe build more of a plot around it with hints of what's going to happen.

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