Talk:Tinyleaf's Forbiden Love/@comment-76.23.254.199-20130422221715

i also hope you realized that dinosaurs were long extinct before cats, dogs, tigers, lions, monkeys, ect., were around.

and you have ships. /ships/ as characters. think about that for a little while, then decide what to do with this. think about it. just. just think.

anyway, this hurt my eyes to read the allegiences.

good luck with the story.