Talk:Second Chances/@comment-8248793-20140316144014

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Okay I've read this now, and I certainly love your ideas Whitey! What I recommend is to not use the same words over and over (like you kept saying "yowling in fury at ___" over and over)

But there was a lot of things I loved about this story. I loved this original idea, and how Scourge seems so cunning. (well I think he's going to turn bad) I think they're all going to turn bad :3

There doesn't seem to be any errors, and I think you should continue this story :)

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