Talk:FireClan's Most Wanted/@comment-4751506-20130708043455

Eeee, this is really good for being written at like, what is it, midnight your time?

There were little to no errors in this, no major or minor grammar / spelling / mechanics stuff, so that's always an added bonus. No inconsistencies that I could tell either, so you're one step ahead of the Erins.

Otherwise, I really liked this episode. There's something comforting about Brookfall's Point of View that I really just...I just like it. It's familiar. I like her sense of sarcasm in the narrative portion too. I also love Lionwing <3 She's coming along great as a character and she's a pretty sassy fighter. She's got spark. And I'm sad that we didn't have more Snow x Storm drama (aren't you glad Rainy and I insisted Storm fall in love? :D), because I think they're really cute together. Except they're both chilly elements. Their ship name would be Snowstorm. Because they're both -flight, so... Anyways. Your descriptions are spot-on and lovely as always, and you've done really well creating the entire War universe.

I love it and I love you <3