Talk:The Chance/@comment-8248793-20130817201449

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I noticed one thing about your writing. Or Home at least. You write "gently" a lot.

But, I love your descriptions, the flow of your words, and of course, your character deelopment. In every episode, you can always improve, or change Aquapw's actions and how she thinks. I think its a great way to write a story.

I really love the action here, though Scar seems a bit shady. Almost like Star, though I like her better.

<3 this Robo, I shall keep reading.

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