Talk:Blood Ties/@comment-43907793-20200115005240

Blood Ties is amazing so far, Wolfy! I see a lot of emotions put into this, I can tell you worked VERY hard on this. What is so coincidential is that I have many dreams and I write them down, too! A few are so detailed and decent that I can write a story about it. I don't think I have I anything to say that is wrong about this story...

Although, maybe you could put a little more of a background on Tala. Some of the questions that popped into my mind when I read the beggining were things like: How did Iced Blood being alone with Tala effect how much he knew about his heritige? And with Tala and Black Hawk, what kind of a relationship is it? I mean, I can pretty much guess, but how really did it effect the other cats? How was it so much of a problem?

Of course, I don't know everything that is going to happen, so some of these questions might be answered later. This is just right off the top of my head Wolfy, just so you know. I'm not saying at all that your story is bad. It is just the opposite! VERY good work and can't wait to see more!

(Hope that helps... ^^)