Talk:The Tui's Last Song/@comment-28076378-20170617000612

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well that was depressing

Barkstar's reaction to returning to camp was shown well, where he was worried about Tuifall. i can kinda picture someone like that in real life if someone they loved were dying, afriad of the answer yet desperate for them. it was sad and touching seeing them say good-bye.

i don't have much to say since it's not very long, but this was written great, the emotions were preceived well, i can't believe this hasn't had any comments yet... lol

i didn't spot any mistakes with spelling or grammar. i like tuifall's name too *shrugs* i've never seen tui used as a prefix before

great job!

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