Talk:The Fall/@comment-26432133-20161220054403

Is this: "He drived off my patrol, then I killed him, but I had to retreat, my warriors were gone, there was no way I was going to reach the camp." foreshadowing or a grammar mistake? The lack of periods makes no pause in the reading, therefore making what Fogheart said sound rushed, as if to hide something. It adds to the story if this is gonna play out, but if not, then you should probably fix that lol.

I like the idea of the Clans being at war. The tension afterwards is much more realistic than the aftermath of the TigerClan vs. LionClan thing. I guess because we had Firestu as our main character for that. BLAME EVERYTHING BAD ON FIRESTU

Anyways, another AWESOME story, Birdy! TIME TO BINGE-READ UNSTABLE TIMES, HOORAY!