Talk:If Spottedleaf had lived/@comment-67.207.246.64-20130529221832

Great story! In the prologue, medicine is spelled 'medicien.' And why would Ashfur change Squrrielstar's mind to be mates with him and not Brambleclaw? I just didn't get that. But still, great job. :)  - Eeveestar (User:Eeveestar)