Talk:It’s Time (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-7410018-20141025155715

Spoilers~

Wow, I thought the ending was perfect. I feel really bad for Flamegaze, even though she's a killer. I just thought that it was a bit fast that Mosspaw made his decision to tell everyone about Flamegaze, especially after Flamegaze was so kind to him. Her kindness was sweet and it made me ship them even more, but it seemed a little out of place.

And like Firey said in the previous comment, where did all the new cats for MeadowClan come from? MeadowClan seemed awfully easy to build back up. A little more elaboration would be good.

I thought the beginning of the songfic was good though. It sort of got you excited to rebuild MeadowClan, although the actual rebuilding was kind of rushed.

Over all though, it was good