Talk:Two Birds/@comment-8248793-20170628193406/@comment-28076378-20170628201346

I'm glad you like it so far!

I remember when i was writing the scene where Talonpaw killed the two apprentices, thinking i might be rushing it, but i was kinda on a writers block and just had that brainstorm *shrugs* i didn't want it to be boring with me holding off a big part in the plot. Talonpaw's on an emotional rollarcoster atm; one sec she's crying, next she don't care, then it's all of the above...

I love Creekpaw and Wisps relationship, she hates him first, than she becomes supportive and loyal. There's a future part in this story that i adore that really shows how much they care about each other.

Thank you so much! <3