Talk:Hollyleaf and Fallen Leaves: The Un-Told Story/@comment-24143898-20150205032136

This looks good, although if I had to suggest anything, you should start a new line when a different cat speaks. :D

Instead of this...: Hollyleaf sat up. "Fallen Leaves, I'm tired," she moaned and lied back down. "Well I'm bored," whined Fallen Leaves.

You should do this...: Hollyleaf sat up. "Fallen Leaves, I'm tired," she moaned and lied back down.

"Well I'm bored," whined Fallen Leaves.

If you're confused, ask me :D