Talk:Second Chances/@comment-24810042-20140430210728

I saw you changed Ivypool's mate to Mousewhisker, I have no problem with this, only the two aren't confirmed mates. I would just change the parents to Dovewing and Bumblestripe, seeing as they are official mates. They also haven't had any other kits, leaving you able to do this without changing the story. Now, this is your story and I don't want to force you to make a change, i'm simply leaving a suggestion.