Talk:Power of Love/@comment-5019333-20140728194657

Great job; keep up the good work! I really like it!

It'll be interesting how Tigerpaw will continue to interact with his mentor. This little thought in my mind is nagging me and saying, "Will Tigerpaw turn to the darkness out of humiliation?"

I thought you did an excellent job in portraying Tigerpaw's every moment of thought - his hatred of Frogpaw, bewilderment and annoyance that he got Cherryleg as as a mentor, etc. Like Geopaw and Sayna have said, Tigerpaw's reaction to his mentor reminds me so much of Jaypaw when he got Brightheart as a mentor ;)

Can't wait to see more!