Talk:Eternal Light/@comment-5197876-20151010020729

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alright! i like this so far. spiritpaw is a very interesting character, and i feel kinda bad for her. swamppaw and woodpaw seem to be antagonists so far, but i don't think they'll be the main ones? idk

i'm having a bit of trouble following the story, to be honest. i'm doing my best but there's a few confusing spots here and there.

otherwise, this is a very good fic! i'll continue to read

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