Talk:Deep Dark Secrets/@comment-7662967-20140728045648

Awesome! I love the plot, and the characters! Poor Aquapaw! and why does Archtail call her a half blood anyway? What a father! Blazestar is so awful! (XD Rootpaw and Weedpaw sound like some people I know)

The only mistake I saw was 'Ebonyflight had gotten more gentler' it should be 'more gentle' or just 'Ebonyflight had gotten gentler'

So yea, that was the only mistake I found (you might not want to use the word 'sucky' because cussing's not allowed in fanfics, just so you know)

Other then that, I like it a lot!

PS: I love your cover :3