Talk:Becoming Shadows/@comment-24495864-20131023215608

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Prologue: Well-written, as always. The idea of Dark Warriors sounds cool, but are they Dark Forest Warriors, or what? Anyway, Nightseeker is an epic name. I love how he seems to regret about being with the others, and I wonder who the great spirits are. The idea of maming the wittle third kit is so evil! But then again, adds storyline to it...

Chapter 1: Mistykit and Flamingkit are so innocent. >3< I want to huggles them. Clawkit's 'maming' seems to be happening, with his blank stares and such. WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT? x3

This will really clear up why Mistyrain and Flamingsun suddenly rebel against wittle Echopaw and Whathisname-paw. And about the title... how do you come up with such good titles!? TEACH ME YOUR SECRET!

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