Talk:Starlight, Heartlight/@comment-16166566-20130726152527

This story is so amazing! I fell in love with it!

Its very descriptive and very enjoyable but I have a few questions:

Why did Eaglekit not want to be around Fawnkit when she was sick, and why did Blackkit want too?

I thought that maybe, if you slowed it downa bit more, this story would be perfect. You also could of described they love triangle between the three.

It made me so sad when Eagleshadow died and when Blackfoot died!

But like I said, its an overall amazing story but it did have a few grammer mistakes. I look forward to reading more from you!

8/10