Talk:Winter/@comment-1703139-20130605173645

AWWWW.

This was so good. Your mastery of writing is amazing and the story is just bittersweet enough to make it sad. The only thing I would say to work on is the ending is a little abrupt, but other then that, everything's awesome.

I especially love the words you throw in there, the more comnplex ones that the reader might stumble over. Those give the story an authoratative tone and make it seem so real. You're a fantastic writer buddy. :)