Talk:Even So/@comment-8248793-20150712221818

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Lash is a really good main character for a dark story like this. I've always kind of assumed the overseer didn't have any powers but I guess I'm wrong lol. It's definitely interesting how Gingersnap turned out, and I'm pretty excited to see how Lash figures this out.

I also think that the fact that they're all so young is part of the story. Right? Though all of them act like they're 17 moons old and it kind of bugs me because it doesn't really fit the age and stuff. But you could easily argue that they've been through so much that they've matured faster I suppose.

I really like how you make it seem simple and practically the same as any other fanfic but then you give it a little twist by showing the change in Gingersnap. Everything seems normal and then bam, you show us the dark side.

I think you have a very detailed main character but all the others are like not that interesting/developed yet. I'm hoping you develop them more as you write the story but I guess it's hard to give 4000 characters detailed personalities lol.

<3

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