Talk:Clouds from Beyond/@comment-5197876-20131023135150

Hey Ginger? Your chapter is great, but one thing, the deputy of SunClan is a tom named Streamstrike. Sorry to be a bother.

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Okay, Rushingpaw's apprentice lazyness thing is hilarious. I do that in the morning when I realize I'm late and I freak ut cause nobody warned me. Also, it's awesome to see that's he's against the torturing of the prisoners. Also this battle coming up (there will be one XD) is going to be epic. (grabs popcorn) Just a question, is your chapter finished or not?