Talk:Rising Blood/@comment-17759525-20130909012802

I love this idea! Scourge always was one of my favorite cats, and this fanfiction brings him back to life. I love the major twist off of the way the original story in Warriors was written, what with (SPOILER) Firestar's death and all.

It's well written- good job, both of you! There are some good descriptions and a great plot going here.

One little thing you may want to consider changing: Ravenpaw tells Scourge that, as a black cat, he has the power of bad luck on his side. Scourge is a black cat too, so wouldn't that apply to both of them? Just something to consider. Also, in chapter four, Scourge's name is repeatedly spelled Scrouge.

Overall though, I love this. I can't wait to see more :)