Talk:Into An Unfortunate Destination/@comment-8248793-20131015021117

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Nice start :D

I like the way it starts, a brisk intro telling the story. Then all the action, and the suspense. Though you spelled patient wrong write near the end of Chapter Two. I do wish you would finish this, because I really love the start :D

It's a nice way to write a story, and I like the words used. keep going!<3

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