Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-24519368-20170422103845

At the beginning there is a semantic field of fire. And I LOVE semantic fields!

The concept of 'kindling' was really confusing at first because the text wasn't clear enough, but it was probably intended to be that way to create an element of mystery. It got clearer as the story went on.

Rock's stupidity is funny. Humour is a good structural device! (Awkwardly gives a thumbs up.)

So is Smolder a kindling because kindling have fire-y names? Couldn't he just sniff Torch out because of that? Leaders are smarter than that! And if he hates Kindling, it's a bit hypocritical if he is one himself.

Correction: so now in Ch. 3 'Matches' have been introduced. Smolder and Torch are most likely Matches instead of Kindling.

Later on we learn Sand is gay and Torch is bi. Yay for progressiveness! And Sand can control water. I'll call her kind "Waterfalls".

And now there's a sort-of-cliffhanger with a kidnaping/hostage plot or something. I'm going to sit around for an update as to where this will take the story. It's okay to discontinue it, there's enough good content of it for it to pass as a decent incomplete story that can still be enjoyed without an ending!