Talk:We Can't Stay/@comment-1956227-20150101015834

~Spoilers (Maybe)~

Holy flubber Bright this legit had me on the edge of my seat (And also while eating popcorn it was intense) Stormshine is a flawed character and I like flawed characters (Who doesn't?)

Gorsethorn also had a weird mentality as well (Probably why I was on the edge of my seat)

Now for the constructive criticism, this was an extremely good story Bright! I did see one or two spelling errors, but honestly those are minor details that definately don't take away the element of the story!