Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-25926899-20151104224457/@comment-5342796-20151105021133

AW A COMMENT FROM MY BFF

The blindness jokes were very cute I was laughing uproariously and had to be rushed to the hospital to catch my breath. I appreciate the tip but I dunno if I'll change it just yet; I think I'll just go with the explanation that by "blinded" Everly just meant that their eyes were covered/blocked and leave it there, y'know? But that was a really insightful comment and just shows how good a writer you are :O Like seriously, you have no idea how much I appreciate the detailed constructive criticism, you're the best.

The Farah and Calder thing was good, I didn't even notice that! I'll go back and reread that part and see if I can rephrase that. And as for error #3 I shall definitely go back and fix that because Greer's done makes no sense, only Greer's dun would've made sense, but as I doubt Greer has a horse... Yeah.

I definitely thought it'd feel most natural to introduce the concept of emotions to Lucifer with negative ones, because those are the ones that sort of tie into his life anyway--but you're right, wonder what he'll be like when he feels true joy!

Jett is a character that definitely crops up again, because he is kinda supposed to be a foil for the other characters, someone who accepts life as it is, remains cheerful and optimistic, and seems worry-less compared to them. I must admit pairing him with Everly has crossed my mind, but even if I don't go there, I'll definitely develop their relationship, whether platonic or romantic. I feel like Jett could be good for her.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING ILYSM