Talk:Moments/@comment-5488450-20130727143839


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Aww, this is so sad! I really love the idea behind the whole Clan split, and their anger towards their leaders is so cute<3 Wolfpad and Frostfur make for an adorable couple and I think you did a fantastic job with their split. Instead of making an over-emotional "DONT LEAVE MEEEE" kind it was more silent and sentimental, sparing us readers the unnecessary dramatic cries :3

You add the perfect touch of humor, bitter sweetness, and I love how you also spend quite a bit of time focusing on the split and the treaties themselves, I think they do a good job tying into the story :3


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