Talk:The Rogue Clan/@comment-1956227-20161114021445

This is an interesting idea so far! I like the names and the idea behind it (from what I'm picking up), although that's as much as there is.

For constructive criticisim, some of the words don't need to be capitalised, and comma's are pretty great for seperating things (all along making things easier to read.) we've all made these mistakes before, so no worries, they're usually pretty easy to catch with help xD

I know this is a short comment, I'll be sure to update as this story goes on, it looks like a really interesting idea Flamey!