Talk:When he died/@comment-4971289-20120526161628

Starkit, don't get me wrong. You're extremely good at plots and I think you're a very good writer. It's just that punctuation, spelling and grammar are actually very important to making the story make sense. I'm not an angel when it comes to any of those three things. But if you used them - or at least tried to - I can see how good your writing could be. Could you maybe ask for some help from other users? Or I don't mind improving your stories by adding punctuation as you write. Of course, it's up to you. I genuinely don't want to be mean, but your stories won't be appreciated if they don't make sense. Tell me here if you want me to edit them positively.