Talk:Thunder Rising/@comment-5197876-20151009235811

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ok so this is a very good opening. i really like how mischief is characterized even though we don't know lots about her.

i think it's interesting how brokenstar didn't try to kill her/kick her out etc. also boulder's compassion is really nice, considering he was in a similiar situation

also runningnose! i love runningnose

really excited to read the rest!

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