Talk:Equinox/@comment-24143898-20170127200616

as requested on my reading list~ (I've read this already but I'm reading it again/commenting:)

SPOILERS

(for what's here so far - prelude and part one)

Like Dog has said in her comment, the sibling bond between Ayla and Solis is quite real. I can tell that at this point in time, they are quite close (though I'm assuming their relationship will deteriorate, judging by the prelude), and you can see it from that first scene in part one (kits and their theories about stuff xD). (they remind me of tornadostorm and brightwhisker from fcrp, if I say so myself.)

The way Ayla tells her story, though... it's just different to what I have seen in other fanfictions, and I like it. It feels as though she's actually kind of... telling the story? idk how to explain it.

'The best part of snow, we realized, was that it was particularly fun to chuck at faces.' I swear, this is the best line so far xDD, it made me laugh.

Is Luna dead, or??? It's slightly confusing at the end, and although the Clan cats said she was dead, I questioned that at the end.

I feel as though the Clans are going to impact Ayla and Solis' relationship in a bad way... o.o

As for the characters themselves, I like both Ayla and Solis, but I like Ayla more than I do her brother. Idrk why, I just do.

This is really good so far, Blazey, and I will read more when you get around to doing some more of this c:

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