Talk:Falconshadow's Story :Thunder and Lightining/@comment-1703139-20110918183924

I love the names, they're good. Did you think of them yourself? :)

Also, just a tip, when you're writing a story, you should start new paragraphs when someone new starts to talk or when the paragraph you're writing gets superlong. It makes it easier to read, and I guarantee more people will read it if it's easier to read. :)