Talk:The Tree/@comment-8248793-20131214163416

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I love it so far! Sun makes me feel like we're watching a little kitten stumble his way across the world. I mean he's only five moons old and we're watching him trek across.

Prologue: This part was really sad because the tree seemed like it was a great home, and then the Twolegs/humans chopped them down ;c

Chapter One: Dixie and Beanie looked so nice, but they should have understood Sun more. I could see why Sun felt trapped there, with no real attention, and no forest/wilderness to go to. The kittens sound adorable, but from Sun's POV, they sound horrid.

Chapter Two: I like the way you showed Sun's excitement for real prey, and how even tuna isn't appatizing to Sun. I also love the dream vision of Sun fighitng alongside OakClan. It really showed you Sun was.

Chapter Three: You really describes the dog well, and it made me want to shove Sun away from the dog to save him. The 'beast' as you described seem to so savage.

Chapter Four: So now there's two Socks xD One Socks from Dixie, and another one where Sun finds the forest. I like how the two cats get on so well, yet they are so different because of where they live.

Chapter Five: I'm already liking this Socks, but now he has to go. You really put an innocent personality in this kittypet, and it makes the scene so nice.

This was a great story so far, and I hope you continue!

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