Talk:Wrath/@comment-26943414-20160109150133



I love the poem, I've always hated poems but something about this one makes me want to keep reading it over and over and over...

I think it's cool that a cat who was barley mentioned in the books has the main POV, and I so far love him. This is just making me hate Brokenstar even  more... I feel bad for Tansypaw, even though she was only seen alive in one chapter, i feel really bad for her

And for Volepaw, he didn't want to kill her but Brokenstar forced him to... I have a feeling that Volepaw wasn't all/wasn't the reason Tansypaw died, and I'm interested in finding out what really happened. (If i'm even right)

And now to where you left off when Volepaw attacked this cat, I'm excited to find out who it is. Great job on this!

and sorry if the comment wasn't helpful

