Talk:Last Fall/@comment-24400334-20140412220133

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ERMAHGAWD YAYZ HERES TIGERSTRIPE

Anyway, beautiful story! I loved the way you blended this with the entrance of the rouges. Oh, and there was a few mistakes, but here's the biggest one: when Storm was talking to Brownhare, he said, "It's hard to love someone you love," instead of lose.

Anyway, KITKAT! She seems...sly. I luffles the name though! Great job on this, and great job on the series overall! I'm hooked!