Talk:Loyalties/@comment-25630395-20150817135453

Competition post

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Breeze/Ryan no Breeze/Speckle >:D That confession literally made my eyes bug out and I was like "unghh what the.." Daisypaw and her drama queen-ness is funny, if not kind of annoying. It's not Breezepaw's fault Specklepoo likes her!

Your characters are as fabulous as ever, and the plot is getting really intense! I think the part where Breezepaw spotted the army was a little bit sudden, so maybe a smoother transition? But the cliffy is killing me... -must-read-next-episode- :D

Cat's can't blush, I think... :P

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