Talk:Echo in the Darkness/@comment-24143898-20200206030645/@comment-24143898-20200208034947

No problem! :) send me a message on my talk when you want another one!

Yeah character development takes time, so don’t worry, I’m sure I’ll get more of a feel for later on!

I do agree that that chapter finished at a good point, yes.

That makes sense, now that you mention it - you could make that clearer if you wanted (that Echopaw ran off before more was said), but it’s probably fine as is.