Talk:Squirrelflight and Ashfur/@comment-39524212-20191222044601

I don’t want to be mean......so I’m just going to say that I really liked the first part, and it was very enjoyable! I think if you continue to write more and more, you will get better at writing, and there will be less grammar issues in your work. I didn’t mean any of that in a mean way; I’m just giving you some tips :)