Talk:Destiny or Freedom/@comment-7235369-20140302163330

Spoiler Alert~!

FIREY UR A GODDESS FOR GIVING ME THIS STORY.

I like how thoroughly you explained Sunpaw's grief, and Moonpaw's remorse, thinking it was her fault. I also liked Dawnpaw coming in to get her thorn taken out, a simple but charming touch.

Graypaw sounds so innocent, helpful and everything, kinda like Graystripe. The rogue wanting the Marked ones was really eerie also, making for a great story!

Love this series, and can't wait for more~!

Ah, now we see Glarepaw....

End of spoilers~