Talk:Into An Unfortunate Destination/@comment-9650953-20131030044023

Nice opening, like Rainy said. The ending was a great twist too. I do certainly hope you'll update more soon, cos I have never ever seen something formal and I want to learn how to.

You're my friend,  but at the same time my enemy,  Thrushclaw. 04:40, October 30, 2013 (UTC)