Talk:Capture/@comment-25250489-20160101082155

FInally I have time to comment

AAah it's so horrible how she has to kill a cat every day

I almost can't read it, it's so sad.

Wow seriously your characters are so realistic how do you do it :O

Like Firey said, I love the new Aaryi! She's so... aah I don't know but basically every time in the book that she cries, I feel like crying. And that's very rare for me, and I love when I can easily feel exactly what the character is feeling. You write so weeellllll <3

AAAh noo please Kayn don't kill that cute little cat no no... Oh good she won't die... No! Ugh leave her alone poor thing she's so cute

Ah no *buries face in hands and cries*

oh no I can't finish this commentt... I'm so sorry, I promise I'll try to finish it soon... I hate to do this

But seriously this version of Undefeated is amazing, I love it! <3