Talk:The Birds/@comment-8248793-20151124011714

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I have to say I'm impressed that you've created such a unique sort of universe (not sayin you're not capable, I just would never have thought of such an idea) I do like how you've created a place where the birds are the predators instead of the prey (in a way).

You've certainly captured the slight despair that Aspenpaw feels when she's chosen from the Pickings. I'm already hooked in such a short amount of time. I like how you introduced Aspenpaw though! Seriously this is such an interesting concept and I just wish you had this longer so we could maybe see more insight on the Pickings and the Birds (it would also give us more of a sense of suspense rather than jumping right in)

But I can't wait to read the next one! :)

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