Talk:Fancies/@comment-8248793-20131028031809

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This is great so far! I love the idea of a trading hub and how this is like real life.

The flowers and how she lives is very realistic, compared to the amount of poor people in the world right now. Even with so little written, I already like it, and love how you've written it so far.

I like Featherpaw's personality, and the little action that has happened so far. Hope you continue! <3

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