Talk:The Frost Prophecy/@comment-8248793-20160724035900

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This shows great potential! :) I really like how easily you guys transition from kits to paws, because most stories take awhile or rush the part too fast but you really give these kits a perspective and sort of participation in the story's plot instead of dragging it out.

I'm noticing the plotline is really similar to The Night Prophecy. The way Rainkit is teased and Waterkit is perfect mirrors Ravenflight's teasing and Streampelt's perfection. Like it's predictable that Rainkit will follow the same path.

Nevertheless, I like the way Ravenflight is all chill and you can't tell if he's still evil or not. Idk what he's planning but it can't be good because Ravenflight tried to destroy RiverClan last time...

I wonder why he sent Rainkit O: You did a great job of weaving a mystery here and I'm excited to know why this had happened.

Of course the conflict is great and fast-paced, though again, it mirrors The Night Prophecy. I thinkI know the main plot of the story because of how similar your two collabs are but hopefully it'll be different!

Good job :)

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