The Hidden Storm

Welcome, and thank you for deciding to read my story, The Hidden Storm, if you have any suggestion, ratings, questions, or tips please feel free to comment them^^

This is a backstory for my favorite character to roleplay as, Brokenfeather.

This story is based off of Erin Hunter's Series any credits for the original Warrior series goes to them, i have also added my own 'rules and twists' to Clans and how they work,

all of the characters in this book are either my roleplaying oc's or my friends characters (They gave me permission to use them.)

Before you begin reading, you may want to be aware of some of the content in this tale:

Warning contains: Violence, kit-abuse, and a small amount of gore

'if any of these things listed above seem uncomfortable to you then please dont read this story! This is also a very dark themed backstory, please keep that in mind.'

enjoy^^

~Chapter One~
“Pin her Sunsetpaw!” “Come on Lightpaw, throw her off!” voices cheered delightfully in the background. It was a cool Greenleaf day in the forest. Rays of sun glittered like diamonds through the dainty green leaves of the oak trees. The colorful birds were singing a delightful harmony. Encircled by their fellow apprentices, and under the carefully watchful eyes of the mentors and the warriors, the two young apprentices were grappling on the ground with a considerable amount of skill for their age.

The one presently on the bottom with her back pressed hard against the ground was Lightpaw, the daughter of Skystar. Her companion on the top, struggling to find a way to pin her to end the match was Sunsetpaw, one of Lightpaw’s closest friends.

Today was the apprentice’s sparring day, once a week all the apprentices in LeafClan meet together and battle each other.Lightpaw and Sunsetpaw knew each others moves too well for this to be a quick match.Since they shared a mentor, they often sparred with each other and were equally matched for strength, so theirs was a contest of skill and ingenuity; the kind they both liked best.

Lightpaw feinted that she was going to pull right and attempt a roll, a trick they both knew she often used when in danger of being pinned.

Sunsetpaw accustomed quickly, throwing her weight to that side and grabbing her friend’s shoulder firmly. Suddenly, Lightpaw reversed tactics she reached upward and grabbed onto Sunsetpaw’s left front leg and breached upward, using Sunsetpaw’s own weight and momentum against her. Flipping them both over, the she-kit quickly reversed positions so that Sunsetpaw was now on the bottom.

Sunsetpaw was surprised by the sudden turn of events for just the fraction of a second that Lightpaw needed to get inside her guard. Lightpaw rapidly pinned her friend. It was a match-ending move and they both knew it; still Sunsetpaw struggled, testing her opponent’s strength.

“Yield?” Lightpaw questioned softly, seeking the words that would end this match. Sunsetpaw relaxed, accepting her defeat. “I yield.” She sighed, disappointed but not seriously upset. Lightpaw quickly removed herself from her friend. “Good match, Lightpaw purred and lapped her friends ear in a friendly approach. “I will remember that little trick of yours from now on.” Lightpaw’s blue eyes lit up. “Then I will have to try to come up with a new one” The apprentices looked up at their mentor, Falcontail who’s eyes shone with pride at his apprentices. “Good work you two.” He purred happily and looked up at the sun. “I think you both have done enough training for today you are permitted to go back to camp.” The two apprentices dipped their heads in respect and padded towards camp.

(This chapter is incomplete and under construction)