Talk:Rogue/@comment-17759525-20170718130223

Daaaang, this is intense.

I love the way you set everything up - overviewing Breezefeather's early life before moving into the main story. All of the characters are really strongly developed, with different personalities and stories.

I also like the parallels between Breeze and Rowan. I fully thought he was Sundusk at first, and my heart sank a little when he said he wasn't, ahah.

I've only noticed a couple of typos ("barn cas", "crazy mothers"). Other than that, the writing is really, really good.

Like the other people who've commented, I'll definitely be watching for more :)