Talk:Keep Your Hopes Up High and Your Head Down Low: Part 1/@comment-8248793-20130809043123

I like Badgerkit's development. Like from taking Frostwing's beatings, to living apart from the others. This makes him stronger than others.

I like the story line, though Frostwing was a little harsh. Though I thought the story about Snowkit was sad, though you did well to show Badgerkit's confusion and his innosence. Though i doubt a kit might feed another something. It is your story though.

I really like this, and I hope I have time to read Part Two soon. :D