Talk:Even So/@comment-25250489-20150710163233

So as I read this fanfic, I'll be writing this comment so that it'll be as constructive as can be; 'cause I'm really bad at commenting.

Anyway this fanfic is great! Really interesting!

The first thing I can think of saying is, Omg the kits are so cute! I agree with Lash, it's so sad how they're so happy about that horrible way of life. Poor kittens! And then they have to find out that life is actually not as exciting as they thought it was.

It's so hard to believe that Lash is only seven moons. She's only a kitten! But she's as serious as a warrior.

Woah, woah, the overseer has a serious overreacting problem! O.O

Wow, a hundred cats? That is a lot of cats :O

'' 'Unfortunately, the overseer’s accepted age for new hunters is about three moons old. I hate it.' '' Yes. I do too. D:<

Oh no are Millie and Buzz dead...?

Wow, I love this fanfic! I'm so glad that I finally can eagerly comment on one of your stories :D and I'm waiting for you to make another edit! I'll definitely read more of this whenever you write more; this is really good. <3