Talk:Pickings/@comment-8248793-20151124014143

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Hm okay maybe I'm wrong that they're not killing them?? Cause it seems that Blizzardpaw is dead now...

ALSO THE ENDING!! I actually liked Falconpaw! Ugh I need to find out what happened to her D::::::

I just wanted to point out that you might want to continue to give development to your characters. It just seems that suddenly you stopped showing how they were like. Of course you still have a long way to go (if this show goes on for a lot of seasons) but it's always good to develop them in the first season!

GOING BACK TO THE ENDING I need to know what happens to Falconpaw and what's behind the Birds and what exactly Talon is hiding. Of course, I'm glad we're getting to know more about how this works but ahhh I need to read the next one

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