Talk:Starlight, Heartlight/@comment-7270915-20130711150219

SPOILER ALERT

Well, I could have sworn that I left a comment on this earlier, but obviously I haven't. So I am going to do so now.

It's a very interesting idea for a story, and you've done a good job with it. I loved the Coalsticks and the little tail-wrapping around ritual. And the story went at a relatively decent pace - not too fast, and not too slow.

I'm kind of mad at Eagleshadow - he didn't even seem like the greatest friend, let alone mate. But that's what you were trying to do with his character, and you did it brilliantly.

Though I wonder what Tigerfrost and Adderscar have to say on this ... we never got to see what they thought.