Talk:Capture/@comment-24143898-20150403225323

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This story has a very... dystopian feel to it. You can definitely feel the cats' emotions - not knowing where they're from must be scary for them.

That first bit... just amazing. You know that something 's going to happen, it builds up suspense, which is really good <3

Does that second scene have to do with anything later on??? :o

I seriously can't find anything to improve, it's been that good. I'm make sure I'll read some more later on. <3 Another stunning piece of work, Blade!

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