Talk:Thunder Rising/@comment-5197876-20151011040409/@comment-25926899-20151011041143

tysm my wonderful daughter/beta reader i am forever in grateful.

the fight almost killed me to write i'm so bad at fight scenes so ty ty ty it was (obviously) a really important moment in the story so i'm glad you can describe it as "intense".

the dialogue was even harder w graypaw telling his lil story lmao so "pretty cool" is def a compliment like i didn't even expect to reach "mediocre".