Talk:Feathertail's Kits

Tell me what you think, how I can improve, and any downright critsisms of my story and today's bad spelling (I really should be in bed). I know I'm not that good a writer, and i will not feel insulted if you have anything seriously wrong with it. However, if anyone has ideas for a new warrior name for Crowfeather, i would be delighted to here it as he only got the 'feather' in memory of Feathertail, as she had died. -- Dawnfeather 12:40, 9 June 2009 (UTC)