Talk:Otherwise/@comment-5197876-20140703222735

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Okay, so this story, was interesting. I will say, it had a very... different plot line. While it's very creative and mysterious, I didn't really think it followed the prompt very well.

The love issue didn't show up till pretty much the last chapter. I spent forever trying to figure out what was going on.

Hazard... sorry, is he in love with his sister? What? Who is he even?

I don't even know who these cats are.

I'm sorry, but this story, I couldn't wrap my head around it.

Your score is 13/20

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