Talk:Stormwillow's Suffering/@comment-7060975-20150215001112

Wow! This is a great start! I'm hooked :D

One thing though, the POV is kind of confusing with each character. Besides that, I'm hoping for more! Nice job!

Stormwillow sounds really cute, and I felt bad when she was left alone, all confused. I want to hug her .3.