Talk:Whispering Breeze/@comment-8248793-20150823214906

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'*quietly sobs about her otp ship of vale and how this was perfection*

Man okay that was a great way to show how Ryan felt and I don't think I would have thought of that! I actually thought you were going to kill Ryan with the foxes so I had a mini heart attack there :P

These emotions! Like Rainy said, the flashbacks really painted a great image of Ryan's thoughts because you added in his emotions throught he flashbacks. Although you really did make him love her too fast haha. But I loved those flashbacks only because I remember when those happened and how I loved the interactions between Ryan and Breeze <3

I was a little confused when Fire went with them xD Cause I was like "wait what Fire didn't go O:::::" But that's irrelevant to the story.

You did a great job with this story and I'm glad you wrote it :) <3

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