Talk:My extremely weird but very touching version of how Ashfur died :D Wow that's long/@comment--20150822022252

This is an o.k. story. So, I think it makes sense if you change some things in the plot line of the original series. The only REAL contradictory, (obviously) is that it is not canon and she did kill him. So, it had a good plot line and a good reading length.