Talk:Pumpkintail's Guide How Not to Make Mary-Sues/@comment-27838201-20160515121023/@comment-32946794-20160516190904

okay, but dont forget, 5 kits is rare for a wild cat - if you wnat your cat to have more kits, split it into different litters! also, if breezecloud is a main character, it will give a bit of mar-sue sence, but if breezecloud is not, i guess its fine. also, the only cat that had five kits in one litter in the whole series is Princess, if my memory doesnt fail me, and she was kittypet, but if course, its up to you.