Talk:As the Rogues Rise/@comment-28076378-20170124232615

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I've read only chapters 1,2, and 3...

this is you're first try? this is an awesome one! my first fanfiction was terrible...

The title gives me the idea that rogues are going to take over the Clans? This should be interesting... The plot seems to be moving fast, which I like. But a few parts could be slowed down. I haven't seen any grammar or spelling errors, good job!

My favorite character so far has to be Hollowflight. I love characters who are 'hollow'. didyougetit. I thought the part where Breezepaw was like "but does she ever have fun?" and then Hollow just stared at her was kinda funny

I'm not sure what to think of Tawnypaw and Breezepaw yet, but I like Pinepaw. He's just cute to me.

I'll get to the next chapters soon, this is a great story so far.

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