Talk:Cats and Wolves/@comment-24980329-20140608055854/@comment-24519368-20140628143628

Okay, little writing tip:

Character descriptions have to be added in with the story as it progresses, like as a new character is introduced, write a description. Like this example which I just made up now:

Suddenly a large wolf-like shape emerged from the fog. Brown, ragged fur stuck out at all sides of his body. Glowing amber eyes pinned the young hare to the ground, large muscles bunched as the wolf prepeared to pounce, and when he landed, rock-like paws crushed the hare, as unusually long claws delivered the killing blow.

There. See what I mean? Now have a go, and your writing will be much better.

(And you haven't added onto this in ages! Please continue!)

Buzzy out~