Talk:Inhabited/@comment-25630395-20141230015214

( the reason I haven't commented was becauase I had this weird idea that only the first episode had come out)

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This was a really great episode! I think you portrayed Wisp's feelings really well. I would feel that way if a bunch of cats invaded my territory (not that I have one lol). I ship Wisp x White she-cat for some weird reason. He must join the Clans!

The dream part was a bit interesting. How did he get it? I think that afterwards, he knew what had happened a bit too quickly. It's a little strange that he knew what StarClan was and all that (unless I missed something in episode one). The plotline seems really strong, but I think Wisp could have adjusted more to life with TreeClan before ForestClan came in. That way, you could magnify his feelings a little more. It did seem a bit sudden

But overall, I am really hooked in to this show! Can't wait to read next week (that's out already isn't it?)

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