User blog comment:Hiddensun/AA Updates/@comment-1437987-20100626154445

anyone has more ideas on what to put on teh play?

here it is so far:

Long ago, many cats lived in this valley. Some were rogues, other loners, and some run-away kittypets. Some of them even lived in small groups that were enemies with other groups. A bit like clans, but way smaller. The forest was filled with blood and traitors were everywhere. Peace was very hard to find. But as cats gained more power and control, they made their groups larger. Giving them names like Fangs and Claws.

The Fangs' leader was called Talon. He was fairly young, because the previous leader had just died. But he was very fierce and nothing could stand in his way except Claws' leader, Jag. One day, during a battle between these two very strong groups, Talon attacked Jag and both of them fell down a rocky path. Jag's sister, obviously worried followed them. Her name was Luna.

She loved her brother very much, but he was the kind of tom that wouldn't show his feelings. He loved her, but was very focused on his enemies, and she didn't like that very much, but he didn't seem to know. She went to look for him but found Talon. He captured her and took her as his prisoner for when he reached his group. But an unexpected thing happened, they fell in love. Before he could send her back to her group because he loved her, his group took her as a prisoner.

When Jag found his group again and found out his sister was gone, he planned a fight to get her back. His best friend, also liked her and was ready to do anything to save her from Talon, his name was Stone. But there was also another she-cat that liked Stone named Lynx - who always hated Luna. But while Luna was kept there, she made a few friends, Fly and Peach - a young queen. Unfortunately, a fight broke off and this time Luna had to choose a side. It was a big fight and she tried to stop her brother. Unfortunately, hate had filled his heart and he fell down to the Rocky Path by being accidentally pushed by Talon who wasn't trying to hurt him too much because of Luna. The fight broke off and Luna went to find her brother. The last minutes of his life he spend it telling her how much he cared about her and that he was sorry. Stone, unfortunately attacked Talon, and a huge fight started. Lynx tried to help him, but Luna stopped her and she was chased away. Talon beat Stone and the fight ended. Stone was badly injured and every cat was frozen. Talon's group, the Fangs, won and the Claws joined them. That same night, SpiritClan visited them and the first leader and clan came to be; ValleyClan and Valleystar.

If you have more ideas for more main characters in play to give more apprentices parts, just write them here:)