Talk:Abandoned For Nothing/@comment-8248793-20130913021046

SPOILER ALERT

Still very short, but full of suspense.

First: The new cat. She has an aura of evil around her, but dun tell me if I'm right or wrong :P She seems desperate for the Clans, but only for her own good. I can't wait to see how you shape her.

This title, explains everything of the episode xD. It's a good way to get your readers attention, and an even better way to summarize, and leave someone hanging.

No mistakes it seem, though I dunno what's with the weird font. Though its kinda cool xD. I have to say, I'm hooked, and I will read the rest of Left To Be later. :D <3

I love all your descriptions of the characters and the settig and all. They're vivid and I can imagine them all in my head. It's a perfect, crystal-clear image in my mind.

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