Talk:The True Enemy/@comment-24519368-20140317160203

This is amazing! Such a good story. I saw two mistakes, one was when you called Frogpaw by his medicine cat name, Frogpool, and the other was when you missed out a letter in the sentence: "I should kill you now, put you out of your misery..."

The page is here, and you can write as many stories as you want! I already have an idea for my second one! Wolfstar claws can't bring me down.  16:02, March 17, 2014 (UTC)