Talk:Hollystar's Clan/@comment-5488450-20121210021543

Wow Ninja. Just a prologue but so far this is really good. I love the twist you put into the story, making Hollyleaf becoming clan leader instead of Bramblestar. I always thought that Hollyleaf should have been made a leader, as when they were kits Bramblestar even called Hollykit the leader of the three.

The lives were good, and I liked the cats that you picked to give the lives, but I sort of disagreed with the order. I didn't think Firestar should be of less importance than Longtail and Bramleclaw less important than Mousefur.

I loved the detail you included in the story. It was easy to visualize and your transitions from the different settings were great.

Good job Ninja!