Talk:If only things had been different... Cinderpelt's story./@comment-89.241.152.93-20120220165006

Hi, this is my first attempt at fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it but you probably won't. Anyway, please comment because I really want some feedback. Well, duh. Who doesnt? Anyway, even if it's just "don't give up on your day job", I'd really like some comments... so... yeah! Have a nice life!