Talk:Permanent/@comment-25531638-20130915190633

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Just for Written In Stone: Omehgerd, I love this so much. Everything is just so well thought-out, so it just doesn't seem like each chapter has some sort of random thing you came up with at the last second. And I love how the chapters are divided into sections, leaving out some of the boring transition bits that sort of lose readers (I need to remember this method).

From the beginning of the story, you just build up this wonderful tension, that keeps readers hooked all throughout the whole thing. It sort of... has something ominous and dark about it too.

As for the characters, I think you did a great job with them. They seem to be developing all throughout the story :) And I love how you portray Redpaw's pain too.

Oh, and the whole love thing with the apprentices? Genius.

Now this part doesn't relate to Written in Stone directly, and it's a bit weird but: The titles for each book in this series. I love how they all start with "Written in" and the order in which they are put out I really like. Idk, it just really makes me want to read them all :D

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