Talk:Heart of the Beast/@comment-26432133-20170212040647

o great firey i found a grammar error

"The cats had been happy, and there hadn't been anyone to worry about. Then there had been a Great War and cats--or demons the story said--came out of the Dark Woods and took StormClan apart peace piece by peace piece."

otherwise this seems pretty good and im withholding further constructive criticism till its done