Talk:Shard of Ice/@comment-5488450-20130731231507

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Wow, this episode was really fantastic, and I often end up just reading the pilot to a series and leaving it at that but I know that such doesn't look possible for this one-you've got hooked :)

I really loved the charachterization, the smooth flow of the plot, the betrayal, and how it suddenly just swaps from Ash to Snarl within the span of a paragraph. I thought that opposed to rush how sudden you made it was actually cool Just the kind of thing that makes us jump back and go 'whoah-that escalated quickly!' You've got a few unsuggested mysteries going on here and I can't wait to figure them out :3

What I might suggest is perahps slowling down a little. Both with the writing and with the pace of the plot(but not as much with the plot pace.) Also perhaps, a little more detail about the surrondings and all of that would be really appreciated!

But I'm glad this ended up on my reading list, informing me of this wonderful show I'll be sure to continue reading! I hope you finish this :)

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