Talk:Echoing Hazel/@comment-5488450-20121220153801

Good story Misty. Bravo, I say, Bravo :D I liked the characters and the nonstop conflict A LOT. It felt like there was always something messed up in the world of these apprentices due to jealous, evil and just bad cats. I love the way you force the reader to continue so that they can get a feeling of conclusion. I also like the characters and their development. You did a great job with all of them brining out their light and darkness and forcing you to choose whether or not you liked them. And finally all of the romance was great. You made so many different pairings and shippings which all have unpredictable endings. I must say, I am glad it ended the way it did :D My critique would be going a little more in debt. You have a great plot line and characters, you just need to expand on that by rolling out the details, giving a bit more explanation and helping the reader visualize. Great job Misty! I think this is definitely one of your bests :D