Talk:Don't Stop/@comment-24143898-20150415041406

Competition Post yolo :3

SPOILERS, I guess?

After this, I have decided that I really like Blackshadow. I don't like Applebreeze as much - I don't really like the fact that she wandered off with Ashflight - she's betraying Blackshadow, and Appleshadow shall live forever, obviously <3

WillowxFox is cute as well. I reckon they should have kits at some point. <3

The structure was good, there was the right mix of dialogue along with what was going on with the rest of the story. There was the occasional spelling mistake (which often happens), but there were no other faults as far as I could see.

I'll comment on the next one soon <3

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