Fatal Revenge

Warning!: This story may change the way you think about a beloved medicine cat, yellowfang, and maybe the way you think about warriors all together. Read at your own rsk! (lol)-- Misty sun♦  sunclan  4  life Mistysun=)warriors rock! 18:29, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

(its about yellowfang's two other kits that died at birth)

 Fatal Revenge 

Characters:

Lostkit: Yellowfang's kit that was born dead. Starclan gave her her name.

Petalkit: yellowfang's kit that died shortly after birth. Sytarclan gave her her name.

Yelowfang: shadow clan's (later thunderclan's) medicine cat

Brokenkit/tail/star: yellowfang's evil kit.

Chapter One: Welocme to starclan

Lostkit: I was born dead. I never got to open my eyes, or see the sun dancing across dead leaves. When i entered starclan, they gave me my name, Lostkit, because i was lost to the starsd so early. Shortly after entering starclan, i learnt that star caln was planning to punish yellowfang for having kits. I emediatly got an idea, that me and petalkit were sure to be allowed to do. We never knew how terrible the conciquences would be.

Petalkit:I was born in a tree stump. The first thing i saw was the dead body of lostkit. I shared the same fate as lostkit, for i died shortly after birth. I blamed it on my mother, lostkit did too. When i cam eto starclan, they gave me my name, petalkit, for the fragileness of my body. One day lostkit said he had a plan. He said since starclan was planning to punish yellowfang by makeing raggedstar no longer care about here, lostkit said we should punish her too, for our own reasons. He said the other starclan cats had alreay aggreed. So we made the lan to punsih yellowfang by making brokenkit's heart half-cold, evil, and bloodthirsty. We never knew that his other half of his heart was already that, and we never ould have guessed the consiquensis of our actions.

chapter 2:The punishment begins

Lostkit: Petalkit had liked my punishing idea, i knew she would, and we already had the permission of starclan to do it, so we started the punishment right away. Everyday we would stare down, watching our cruel brother prove more and more that the punishment was working. we could see it in yellowfang's eyes; for they were pools of despair.

Petalkit: the punishment was working good. in a way i regretted "poisoning" ouronly living sibling, but the regret never lasted long. As far as I knew, we had done nothing wrong.

Chapter 3: Could we have been mistaken?

Lostkit: It all went fine until Brokenpaw got his warrior name. Then everything went wrong.We had createda killer. It chilled me when i came to a strange conclusion: The punishment that had benn meant for our mother may acctually and up punishing the whole clans. even then, i never thought how worse it would be.

Petalkit: He becae brokentail. A sutable name. But when lostkit told me her suspision, i filled me with dread. Slowly, me and lostkit would see the disaster we had caused. When brokentail murdered raggedstar. when he drove out windclan. when he starved his own clan and forced them to do things they didn't want to. Oh, poor windclan! finally i came to a chilling desicion. One that shook my bones, but i knew was a correct one. We must leave starclan. Me and lostkit did not deserve living in starclan, for we were the ones who had cause so much pain and suffering. Our spirits deserved to be saddened and lost forever.

Chapter 4: the dark side

Lostkit: when petalkit told me what she had decided, i knew it was true. We didn't deserve a nice life in starclan. We were meant to be in the place all bad cats, all killers, all feinds. So we left. And our fate became haunted, but i knew eventually wherever i went, i would go back and apolohgize to my poor mother, for it wasn't her fault. It was ours.

Petlakit: i wept when i said goodbye to starclan. i didn't turn around when we walked away, it was too sad. I was a killer in heart. I didn't want to face the truth.

"all cats must face the truth, think carefully. the concequences are vast, dangerous, and evil. beware."

 The end