Talk:Keep Your Hopes Up High and Your Head Down Low: Prologue/@comment-5488450-20130730204525



Wow, really impressive. The way you reflect upon Badgerkit's 'why me' is really strong and you've done a really good job of getting us to hate his mother. I'd like to suggest maybe adding a bit more detail, and rolling out the series some more, but other than that not much I can think to suggest Please keep it up :) Also, you should probably change the title of the article so that it doesn't include that ':prologue' part. Instead of making a different page for every chapter it would be much better to just make one page for the whole story-elsewise it clutters the wiki quite a bit. To rename an artice, click the small arrow by the 'edit' button, and then click rename. From there it should be easy! Please continue writing :)

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