Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-26285531-20151130025037



II.

That was literally the best introduction I've seen. You introduced the story remotely, by remarking how cold it was, and it went with the flow of the rest of the story, but you didn't leap into the story right away, which gave it a nice feel. Kudos for that! <3

Awe, I feel really bad for Everly. You put enough description so that I could really feel how Everly was mad at herself, even if she has nothing to be mad about, seeing as what she's been through. Tbh, if I was in that situation, I would do the same thing, plus probably never come out from the tree again. D:

Lucifer was so unfair to her!! She definitely did save his sorry fur, and he has nothing to repay her with other than rudeness. I'm not growing on Lucifur because he seems so far away and isn't nice to anyone. (It suits him great for the story, but in my eyes Everly seems more like the cat I could imagine more about, because she gives more details about her background!)

The ending made me speechless. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

(I seriously love your writing...)

