Talk:Streaks Of Fire/@comment-11493954-20131231011654

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This plot is excellent! The title really works. Gingershocked, as in appaled at Gingershock's behaviour, and as in you just got her signture meaness thrown in your face. Stormstar is extremely biased. Flarestar is a cool character, given the bloodlust and war. The ending was interesing- I really like how you give it personality by saying "I'm locked in a dirt hole". And the details of the gasps and laughing are extremely telling.

Here is what I am slightly confused on. Didn't Snowbreeze point out she was a witness? Or not, since that is so biased.

Great job! I am really starting to like Dewpaw, and look forward to seeing more of her, and her escape from the hole.