Talk:Wings/@comment-25250489-20150311211407

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This is an excellent story! Really, I would have commented using just the same words if this wasn't for the contest! But only, if it wasn't for the contest I wouldn't have known that this fanfic existed.

Okay, why is it that wikia never shows the name of the author at the top of the fanfic? I don't know who the author is, but Ebony Huo, you are the author right? Bramblefire called you Ebony so I guess it's you.

Love how you use all those colorful, descriptive adjectives! This is a really good story and that just makes it better :)

Spoilers:

I like the name Dreamkit, it's the perfect name for a winged cat. And for some reason I find it so cute that her wings flutter whenever she wishes. She must be so adorable.

At first I thought, why on earth would everybody make fun of her just because she has wings? I mean, everybody wants that! Right? But isn't it because they're all jealous?

There's one thing I am confused about in your story (lol): The golden brown she cat mentioned something about Rosestar, but then in the nursery she mentioned Acornstar. Doesn't the Clan have one leader?

As I said, this is a really good story, love the color and description, and the story itself! Lol

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