Talk:The Beauty System/@comment-15560748-20150728014614

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Whoa. That's amazing. It actually reminds me a little bit of Divergent, the choosing and the initiation and stuff. But Amberpaw reminds me a bit of Katniss from The Hunger Games trilogy.

It's a really good idea for a future Clan world, and your writing is amazing. This first episode kind of ends on a cliff hanger, and I can't wait until I can read the next episodes.

Sorry my comment isn't so long. :p

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