Talk:Flames/@comment-24143898-20151227075905

I DID NOT KNOW RAINY MADE ANOTHER STORY :O

anyway

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I.

That was intenseeeeee.

You got me second-guessing about how Dove would die, because I thought that originally she was going to drown in the brook while Phoenix was trying to save her. Nope, I got it all wrong xD

I feel a somewhat dystopian feel coming along here, with the Blood Brigade. Question: Is the Fire Fighters a current thing, or is that in the past? If it's current, I have a feeling that they're going to be central to the plot here C:.

Fire Wood. Much a fitting name, very

Dove's death was very sad btw, it was also very unexpected (well, in terms of the death no, but what the death actually was was the unexpected bit). I would've liked to see Dove as a character, I think she's probably my favourite so far. As for Phoenix... I'm safely assuming she's a she-cat, yes? I thought she was a tom at first (probably bc the name threw me off) but oh well.

That was a great start, Rainy, and I couldn't see anything to fix. I'd like to see more! C:

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