Talk:I Will Conquer/@comment-25506752-20141013072025

Hey Brambs, I'm enjoying your story Fighting For Worth Series.

Some things I have noticed is spelling and them being mainly accidental mistakes. One that made me laugh a little was in the sentence. "Mudpaw limped into the nursery, a wad of moss in his mouse," what a strange place to put moss.

Might be an idea to go through and read your chapters when you have completed them, to make sure everything is making sense and small errors like that don't slip through.

Good work though!