Talk:Too much Love/@comment-8248793-20140923035123

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To be honest, the switch between Poppy and Scratch is cool, but confusing. Also, I don't think Poppy would be mature enough to judge other cats like that, unless she's been living for like more than eight moons and such. Even then she wouldn't be so cruel.

Ravenpaw and Barley is slightly werd to me. They've never been evil or mean, and I don't htink Ravenpaw would reject Scratch because Poppy disappeared.

Now the PoppyXStormfur love is interesting, and I can't want to see how that turns out :) Hopefully, this isn't a heartbreak, because I love how Poppy is instantly attached to Stormfur, kinda of how he ikes Squirrelpaw.

I'm sorry if I'm being very critique, but I don't see how barn cats would know about the relationships right off the bat, in the day they came to rest in the barn. True, you've read about Midnight, but I don't think the barn cats would know, personally.

Other than that, it's really good, and I can't wait for more!

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