Talk:After The Death: Cometpaw Speaks/@comment-11804774-20131012231909

Just letting you know, there are some errors...

The first word, you spelt Flamestream wrong...

In the first line, Whitefeather should be capitalized..

Second line you spelt Highledge wrong.

Second line Flamestreams should be Flamestream's.

In the first line of the second paragraph it should be Since not sice...

And yeah... Sorry if I sound bossy I'm trying to help... But Its reallyyy good!!

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Wow, Cometpaw gets banished! He's only an apprentice!!

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Keep it up!