Talk:Depreciation/@comment-5342796-20150905124625

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OH MY GOD BRAMS THIS WAS AMAZING

It was so heartbreaking. Thank you for writing about a lost best friendship; it's a refreshing change from romance. I loved this story so much.

There is something really innocent about Bramblefire that makes me love her even more--at the end of the story, I love how you twisted that by conducting a time-jump and showing that although she will never forget Lichenheart, she has grown up. It's a truthful testament to the heart's ability to heal.

I think the fact that you wrote this based on experience added a certain inexplicable something to the writing. I legitimately felt myself tearing up at Lichenheart's fate in the battle because I knew what was coming--and I rarely cry at stories on WFW. Bramblepaw's apprentice ceremony was so heartwarming... and how she and Lichenheart became best friends. The mentor-apprentice relationship can be so underrated, but you highlighted it beautifully.

I loved this story a lot c: It was short but sweet and painfully sad. Well done.

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