Talk:Aura of Light/@comment-26936355-20170518084247

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Honestly, I quite enjoy the way you write- short sentences make the readers want to continue reading and they also create a dramatic effect. I would say the idea is slightly unoriginal but once you add some plot twists and stuff I'm sure that it'll turn out fine :)

Pine sounds like a certain someone who is hot-headed and has a sailor's mouth.

I also love Eilona's name. It sounds... oddly calming???

Also, as I would say to every single one of my friends, P​​LEASE MIND YOUR PROPER PUNCTUATION AND SPACING.

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''btw it's fine about the coding. ask me whenever u need help lol​​''