Talk:First Steps/@comment-25531638-20130417230751/@comment-25531638-20130804181440

Oh God. One of my first comments. Anyways.

Ginger, you need to come and edit this! It's so excellent. While you introduce an innocent kit, and don't start out action-packed, this was capturing. I love the way that you made the older cats fret, hinting at the reader, yet leaving Snowkit completely oblivious to everything happening.