Talk:Snow White/@comment-8248793-20150710015226

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I'm excited for this! I help with the plot and didn't really help with the plot and such but that makes it ten times more exciting :)

I'm already interested in your new plot idea (I'm not sure how much you changed from your first draft lol) and this first part really gave us an insight on how the character is and perhaps some of her relationships within the Clan.

Like Stormver said, I'm intrigued to know how this main character die. But of course I kinda know I'm not supposed to know lol. I do like how you didn't really show any injuries on her body (not that you didn't say there weren't) to indicate that you're going to try to reveal what happened to us slowly.

Overall, I loved your idea and I was certainly excited to see this started C: <3

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