Talk:The Shadow Saga by Pinipy/@comment-5137480-20150708143849

Hi, the writing on this prologue is really good, and I plan on reading the rest after posting this. But this wiki is for posting your stories, not advertising them. And unless you plan on actually posting this and making it your series page, I would advise that you take it down, and put this on your userpage, or in a blog, instead.

Outside of those, this is a really creative idea. I like how you made it so the StarClan cats actually seem to be alive, unlike the real books in which they just act as messengers(disregarding tlh), and finally, someone uses Cheetah- as one of the first Clans.

I'm not the best reviewer in the world, but I hope this helps.