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Oh Robo, the words I want to say can not explain my absolute love for this incredible story! I will now fill this comment with victorious comments made by Dawn. *Takes a deep breathe* This story is.... Fantabulous, amazing, speechless, awesome, cool, joyful, enjoyable, breathe taking, beautiful, fantastic, and just fabulous.

First off, I loved the conversation between Poppy and her mother, which I don't know if it revealed her name yet. I love how Poppy's mother thinks that keeping her kit inside her den all day is the most victorious thing to do! But I also love of Poppy is thinking the exact opposite. I love the tension between them and you made it seem so real! I love the way you express Poppy's thoughts with her mother and Amber.

The part that confused me was when Amber said she wasn't her friend. I was so surprised, because I thought Poppy be-friended her but I thought wrong. I love the sharpness from Amber, and just the way you placed the setting to tie in with Ambers living conditions was aweomse! Like I said, this story it amazing and keep it up!