Longtail's Sorrow

My sister Leopardkit makes really good stories about sorrow with cats when stuff happened, so i though i could try one about when Swiftpaw died. Here it is! -- ♥Shine star♥  01:30, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

The world had ended. All feelings hazardous. Longtail slowly padded up to his dead apprentice's body. Cats tried to comfort him, but that only made him madder. How dare they think that just saying they were sorry was going to make him forget about Swiftpaw? This was Fireheart's fault! He sent Swiftpaw back as a useless messenger during battle in which he could have proven his rightful warrior skills. Why not his precious former apprentice? Longtail pressed his nose into Swiftpaw's fur. Swiftpaw, who would have been rightfully Swiftfoot, a warrior name he chose, was dead.