Talk:Rising Hope/@comment-8248793-20131228004538

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Woah, tense chapters already! That prologue was a bit short :3, though I liked how it just related to the title and how it just gave me suspense about what's going to happen.

I think you changed tenses in the chapter, like you used past tense, then you switched to present.

I really love the way everyone seems to be afriad of Irispaw, and how the prologue seemed so... scary compared to chapter one. I hope to see more soon~ And good luck, fellow contestant ;)

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