Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-27725192-20170710204604

JUDGING FOR WFWA

XI

Such an interesting twist! I knew Greer was planning something and I'm interested in this Asara. Poor Everly, when she learns what Lucifer did. I cannot imagine how bad Lucifer must feel after this, and Riverfrost seems very mysterious. Is he Lucifer's father? ::::::O Urgh, is there Asara in that mouse? Is Greer drugging him again?

XII

Oh Lucifer why are you hiding it from her? Still, this chapter is full of calm relaxation with a hint of darkness within. Aaaahhh Lucifer and Everly going sledding together! I love how you incorporated human activity into this to make the ship sweeter. Oh Lucifer, I do hope Everly doesn't...overreact once she finds Riverfrost and Dawnlight gone. And hopefully she can forgive Lucifer.

XIII

Okay, now we find out how Greer found out about Lucifer's destiny. Thunderclaw's grandson is the angel of the mountain and he will destroy all and meet a wolf with a name? Now I see the significance of the wolves! Oh how does Greer know everything? Aaaahhh Everly is so awesome! But now...oh no...it's the time where she finds out, isn't it?