Talk:Fate/@comment-8754209-20130912231652

Oh, Firey Firey Firey. Also adding onto Fate pic, Photoshop<3 And today I'm lazy, so this might be short.

Spoilers

Fiery, I love it. It was a bit confusing at times, and here is meh.

Constructive Crictisim

Yeah, Sunkit and Moonkit are too mature, like Roobear said. Seriously, why does Sunkit and Moonkit understand LOOVVEEE, like true love? Idk, but change that please. They are like kit-warriors right now. Sudden renemberance of Brokenstar...

I didn't know what was going on a lot. Why did Moonkit get a cold?And no reason was given for why she almost died.