Talk:Ghost Baby/@comment-8248793-20130925044128

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Great story so far Tangle :D

I really love the start of this story, especially the prologue.

He made me feel alive.

'''He made me forget all my troubles. '''

'''He was my friend. '''

But he was soon to be my mate, only he didn't know that yet.

'''His name was Grassclaw. '''

I really like that part because it made my heart beat slowly. Like who was this? Grassclaw. BAM! Suspense!

The rest of the story went well, and all the emotions were written within your words, I hope you do more soon!

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