Talk:Last Chance/@comment-4751506-20130504194948

Okay, I was on my comment when I made that incoherent comment forty-one seconds ago, so here we go.

Arti, that was one of the best episodes ever.

But it was also one of the worst. I'm going to start with the worst things first.

Everyone makes mistakes, obviously, and I know you were probably writing this really quickly in order to please your rabid fans, but there were more mistakes than usual. Nothing a couple of edits won't fix though! Aside from hurrying through writing, you also seemed to rush a couple of the scenes - when Silverflower died, it was just, BAM, she fell, she was dead. I know adrenaline seems to slow down / speed up time, but that bit was a little unclear. And finally, my last qualm was that YOU KILLED SILVERFLOWER. YOU YOU KILLED HER. WHY DID YOU KILL HER. YOU JUST. YOU KILLED HER.

But this was seriously definitely one of the most action-packed, heartwrenching episodes evar. :3