Talk:Hurricane(Songfic)/@comment-5331607-20130915180924


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Rainy, my writing absolutely sucks compared to yours. I do NOT know how you do it.

This is so awesome Rainy, that I can't put it into words.

For one, I loved how stubborn you made Graystar, how she had a secret past, and how it all came out in the end: that she was endangering the whole Clan, just to kill Rockheart and Streamfall.

I also like the emotion that Streamfall shows when she's being ignored, even though Rockheart is only trying to protect her. You perfectly revealed everything at the right time, and you started the story just.... perfectly lol

Also, Rockhear and Streamfall are perfect for each other. And Aquasplash... LOL She's hilarious.

RockheartXStreamfall forever!


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