Talk:One Hundred Conversations Between Souls/@comment-8248793-20150621011058

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I really liked your opening! It was very interesting and pulled me right in! I'm interested to know more about that cat but I feel as though she's the one talking to Moondust. Moondust and her mother is probably the rivalry?

You have a very developed plot. I mean there's not much going on so far but I can feel it :P I feel as though you're going to have a smooth and wonderful plotline. You already have a great start and I think it's going to turn out to be a great story.

I'll have to admit I don't like Moondust a lot. She seems like a typical character that has a hard build and her only goal in mind is to ruin her mother's life or something. Like I get that she's gone through a lot but I don't quite understand her and it's bothering me. Same goes for her mother but I believe I'll learn more later on.

I actually like Tigerkit. He's very loyal and you've shaped him to be the young, naive kit who believes her mother.

Great start, can't wait for more! <3

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