Talk:I Won't Let You Go (Songfic)/@comment-26432133-20170802035512

WFWA JUDGING

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confession- I started cracking up when Tigerpaw was caught checking out Hawkpaw and was very lucky to be in an empty room otherwise I would've gotten weird looks. I love the plot and the events, it's really hooking. My only nitpick is what cat in their sane mind would go off to the enemy Clan and leave behind the one with so many more memories? I understand family blood yada yada but meh, I just don't understand Tigerpaw. However, I really love this! Tigerpaw's tongue is sharp as ever, and witty characters always have my heart. I do feel like Bluepaw's a little empty? The best friends thing is presented, but I don't really feel it mcuh.

Also, Tiger/Hawk has stolen the spotlight, I was liking Blue/Tiger when I read Long Live but SCREW THAT I feel like Tiger/Hawk fits better. Their back and forth works really well and I love them. Who knows, though, my opinions could change when I read Last Kiss. Tigerpaw is really fleshed out and I love her more than Bluepaw/fang.

Now, I Won't Let You Go was nominated for Best Fits Song, and it fits it really well! The lyrics match so well, coupled with the story, and it does beautifully. Though it does seem slightly odd that the song, title, and, of course, some of the lyrics say "I won't let you go" but Tigerpaw says she and Bluepaw need to stop meeting? But besides that, I have to say- most times a songfic will adhere so closely to the song that the characters don't have much room to be diverse and enjoyable, but this does a great job! I really feel these characters and I love them all.

Best of luck in WFWA, Rainy! C: