Talk:A Shadow of Revenge/@comment-5342796-20151224035901



Okay the thing with Shadowfang's past was so cool. You shed light on his motives and personality and history, and I'm eager to see how this affects his future actions.

Scarlet is intriguing as well; of course I have obvious suspicions about her and I'm eager to see if her relationship with the group of apprentices changes as they learn more about each other c; Very good job setting up the mystery surrounding her. Also, what's with her and Laura?

LION AND SNOW LION AND SNOW LION AND SNOW

GOSH I LOVE THOSE TWO. THEY'RE SO FUNNY AND PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER. Their back-and-forth was like my favorite thing ever, THEY JUST MAKE SO HAPPY BECAUSE THEY MAKE EACH OTHER SO HAPPY.

And that part with AmberXBrown... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER, I KNOW THAT DOESN'T FIT WITH COLD BUT I JUST LOVE THEM TOGETHER WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO MY HEART

I like how you made them go on their first mission but still made it sure that there was a lot of tension to be resolved before they're acceptable members of the rebellion in everyone's eyes. This was a really good episode and the title just adds to the suspense surrounding Shadowfang. Very eager to read more

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