User blog comment:Rainsplash987/I'm so ORIGINAL!!!!/@comment-5488450-20130323221622

Peach Colored Moon:

Characterization-2/2 Feather did a marvelous job creating the charrie exactly how Rainy requested. I found nothing to I prove in this category.

Descriptions and Style-1/2 I felt as though Feather could have made it a little more detailed and visual in this field

Plot Development-2/3 The plot was very good and gripping, my only qualm is that the pace of it kept changing and it could be hard to adjust to that

General Guidlines-3/3 She has em all, folks.

Total: 8/10

I really liked this story overall; I believe it is one of Feathers very best stories and certainly something to be proud of; especially considering the short period of time she did it in! Good job, Feater :)

The Sea Lark

Characterization-0/0 I didnt have enough story to understand any of their characters.

Descriptions-.5/2 this is a field as I judge I like to be very picky in and as stated before there wasn't a lot of writing to include any description.

Plot Development-0/3 Well...there were only a few paragraphs xD

General Guidlines-0/0 None were met.

Overall Score-.5/10 Well,this is actually marvelous so far. Which is why it sucks that you didn't finish it :C

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