Talk:The New Warrior/@comment-26432133-20170920002224

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This is running along nicely! First, I've gotta say that the characters are pretty cool! I also pity you so much for going through the pains of writing out the allegiances. Unlike a loooooot of my old stories, this has some solid characters who snap once in a while! There's also a pretty nice balance in the writing; there's breaks in the dialogue that help set up what's going on. Good job!

I'm so sorry I don't have more to say, I'm really burned out right now ahaha. Also SUPER sorry this was so late rip. But keep up the great work!