Talk:Capture/@comment-26432133-20170704171009

COMMENTING CONTEST



First off I think I remember seeing this story pop up in the wiki activity when I first joined- gosh, I can't believe I didn't read it, this is great!

Oh, I also thought Aaryi was a guy, I must've been dead while reading this. I love how reality raps her on the nose as soon as Aiga dies. Kayn's a really interesting character, already my favorite in this story. I love how you looked beyond the usual "blunt gruff doesn't care killer" and gave her a moment where she comforts Aaryi. Skell's really interesting, I feel like he's going to play a big role in this series. I love how the champions are going to fight each other, you did a great job at raising the stakes! The "End of Capture" stops the story at a wonderful cliffhanger.

You set up this whole world in an amazing way. I can see how the Clans are involved somehow- maybe they're the ones being taken to this place? Dang, Blade, get back on the wiki and continue writing, because your stories are so hooking I need to read more.