Talk:Pine Frost/@comment-4783947-20140216032205

The story was very well written and I like how you introduced the plot of the story. There are a few spelling mistakes, like in chapter ten when you spell rid "rif", but nothing that really prevents me from understanding the story. One thing I really liked is how Shadowfire became evil like her father instead of trying to join her mother. She is definitely my favourite character in this story.