Talk:Just Believe Me/@comment-28076378-20161121003329

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I think this story is really good so far. I liked Rippleshine's character since chapter one; I at first thought she was going to be snotty and mean (i always picture characters with the shine suffix as being that way for some reason), but she's not at all. I also like Gullfeather and Brightwhisker :3

So she's going to live with the Snaketounges now? and see others thoughts and stuff? That'll be really interesting to see... I wonder if she'll realize it's like a curse or something and go crazy...

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more (make more please; i might die) There are so many questions to be answered! I also payed attention to looking for any spelling or grammar mistakes and I didn't see any, awesome job!