Talk:One of a Wild Heart/@comment-29762264-20170324231759

This is amazing Flame! While there were a few spelling mistakes here and there, it was great.

So i'm leader of 3 clans. WindClan, WingClan, and BranchClan.

Can't wait for more, and to find out what in the name of StarClan happened to Ruinedpaw. I think Mudstar injured Ruinedpaw.

And the way the cats have full reactions, like Wildpaw attacking Pretzal, it gives a more real feeling to the story.

I like how it pulls people to dislike Lionpride, but I don't like Mudstar, giving me the concealed villian feel. *sends intense glares to Mudstar*.

I love it! So keep going Flame! Stay determined!