Talk:The Lynx/@comment-33798947-20180302171836

I like this story, it's unique and very...spirited! I love how it changes from Crumpledstar's POV (point of view) to Sun Fire's to display their thoughts, and the fact that even though his Clan is halfway turned against him that Crumpledstar still pursues what he believes. The story's imargery is vivid and I can actually see it happening along with the characters. Unlike most fanfics I read, I feel as though I am actually inside your story. I've also read Cedarpaw's Journey: A Dark Secret. In my opinion, you are the best fanfiction writer, and no one else is able to make me see things otherwise. I'm really impressed. Great job!