Talk:To Love a Killer/@comment-5342796-20130708192455

Okay, this seems like a very interesting first chapter so far. The whole murder thing is always something that adds suspense. I will say that it was a bit fast-paced, like I don't know where the whole Troutpaw thing came from... but fast-pacing can be a good thing too, when used the right way. It's a good skill to have for murder mysteries too, so I don't think it's too big of a deal. Keep it up! :)