Talk:The Last Time/@comment-8248793-20140830151551

I'll be the late girl and read this a year later c:

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oh my god, RedXStorm was adorable, right up until the last time. I wanna kill Storm now xD I hope this isn't happening to you in rl :O

Anyways, I really liked how you showed the display of emotions, having Storm like Sun, having them as a couple, and then making Storm seem like he loves Red, and then says "NOPE"

It was really perfect, I liked how you showed Redpoppy, a simple she-cat with her own unique styles, but not enough to catch Stormfall's eyes.

But I know you're not simple in rl C: At least I don't see you that way.

Anyways, I'm going to keep reading on, but wanted to comment on this :D <3333

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