Talk:SeaClan Series/@comment-7270915-20130319050154

Hey, I'm a new user, but I have been reading fan factions on this site for a long time. This is one of my favorites! You are really good at writing! I have a few questions, comments, criticisms, etc.: 1. Why is SeaClan called SeaClan - did they live by another sea in their old territory? 2. Sharkpaw and Turtlepaw have disappeared from the story lately - what's going on with them? And what was Sharkpaw's reaction to his mother's return? You described Pinefeather's "death" as being a traumatic event in his life, but you don't revisit that part of the subplot. I really want to know what happened. 3. The ending of The First Drop was EPIC. 4. Can we have a Shark X Turtle pwease? I think that would be such a cute couple! (You don't have to, of course, this is just a suggestion.) Thanks for reading my comment! I am Gingerer! And I have misspelled my username!