Talk:Heart of Friendship/@comment-15560748-20160103000302

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THIS IS GETTING SUPER INTERESTING

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS <3

I'm starting to get to feel Bryce's character, and I'm starting to love her too. She seems intruiging in a way, even though this is her point of view. It's nice to be able to guess things about her (theories) and then see if you're right. The whole plot sounds pretty amazing, which just makes me want to read the rest of the story :D

So, Nightshadow. It's nice to see that he actually has another she-cat, which is good for Bryce. I honestly don't think she's the type of cat to get mixed into a relationship with any tom, even if he's as nice as Nightshadow. And I think that you introduced Feathershine at the right time; you let it sink in that Nightshadow and Feathershine love each other and that they're happy together (Translation: Night|x|Bryce is a dead ship)

Feathershine seems overly nice to me, even though we can probably all relate to her position. I just find something quite off about her. She's like Princess Camille from The Heir by Kiera Cass. [Camille/Feathershine] is just overly nice to [Eadlyn/Bryce], but there just seems to be something off about her. But I think that's what makes her so interesting. It just makes everything more interesting than it was before :)

Applepaw was sweet. I'm hoping to a bit more insight to Applepaw, so we can get to know and love her more. I think she might play a bigger part in the story, and she might be something more to Bryce than just an apprentice.

SOMETHING MIGHT HAPPEN TO RUBY AND THEN APPLEPW WILL BE THERE FOR BRYCE

^Okay, I definitely don't want that to happen, haha.

But great job (again)! I can't wait for more Rise, and I'm curious to see how everything plays out in the end :)

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