Talk:Silver's Poetic Side/@comment-8248793-20140805193231

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I have to say, the first poem was very nice, and the rhyming really helped it be more poetic. The flow of the poem was very smooth, and I didn't feel as though the poem was choppy of anything :)

I really liked how you ended the poem with Fallen Leaves's name, and I really liked how you based the poem off of him because he's always a unique character to write about.

Adding onto that, I thought it was cool that you added in Hollyleaf, and you even put that she was a murderer (though he didn't know it at that time)

But yeah, I do love this, I'll try to follow along! <3

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