Talk:Viva La Vida/@comment-5848758-20131219124921

SPOILERS

Even though there are only two paragraphs in this, I already love the storyline (I'm assuming Ivystar is Ivypool, Ivy was far more beast than Dove). Your sentences flow really nicely.

And I love this song so much Coldplay are AMAZING

You did use 'soon' a bit too frequently in the first paragraph and there were a few typos, but a great start. :)