Talk:Unlucky/@comment-8248793-20131110012557

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Even with just this prologue, I felt that this story was going to be interesting.

The way you portrayed Cloverleaf, the way she talks about what she's done, and what she's going to do, builds suspense. I can't wait to find out what she did to get her to the Dark Forest.

I really want to know what happens, and what she plans to do, so I hope you finish this :)

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