Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-27725192-20170710195055

JUDGING FOR WFWA

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Oh man, I love Everly's character! She's so frustrated that she can't do anything for the dying she-cat. Oh wow...this is a time traveling vision thingy aaaahhh I think seeing that was a turning point for Lucifer but he still won't be swayed by it, he refuses to! And how did Greer know Lucifer had questions? Wow, she's quite the creepy villain.

Ooh Borealis Lux. What???!!! Noooooooo Lucifer can't love? Naaahhhh he's probably going to love Everly anyways cause why not. I think he will learn how to love and feel again once he's under the influence of Everly rather than Greer. Although if Greer finds out, Everly will be in huge trouble/danger. Also, think I spotted a little typo "soldiarity" "solidarity"

Oh is Lucifer like Greer's successor or something? The son she never had? And I like that ending, dark stars referencing to the song. By the way, those song lyrics are coolio.

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Yay, a close friend bond. I feel like Jett is kind of like their older brother and Farrah and Calder might get together later on as rebels and they leave the Snow Guard. Wow, Greer has a daughter? I'm really hoping to get to know her later on, she sounds really interesting. Why hasn't she been seen interacting with Greer or vice versa?

Aaaahhh Lucifly <3 Everly's always leaving him speechless. But she's so kind too which just shows how interested she is in him and doesn't know whether to believe her own instincts or what other cats think of him (But please Everly, choose the former). And Lucifer isn't used to his peers taking an interest in him so his reaction was priceless! :P

Oh Everly you always get your tail stuck in trouble don't you? What to do about her? I am glad Lucifer is around to stop her before she gets on Greer's nerves or something but that is quite shocking for her to see. It also seems like Everly is truly scared of Lucifer but also intrigued by him. Wow, will they travel in that Borealis Lux thingy again? This time on Everly's past?

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Oh burn Everly called him a monster. I can see why she's freaked out about those things as I would be too. It's just too much to take, what with Greer's cruelty, Lucifer's creepiness, and magic time travel liquid thingamajiggy. But she still made Lucifer made. I am glad to see more of Cecily now and we get to see more of who she is.

Wow, that time travel was amazing. More Cecily and the more Lucifer uncovers his past. What were those leaves? Drugs? Herbs? Definitely something that's very Greer-like evil.

Still, gonna continue in another comment.