Talk:Pine Frost/@comment-25531638-20131015021136

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Wow, just that prologue was great! Someone definitely is going to do well in this contest.

The way you set it up with the hissing was slightly creepy, and I think that that was really good. It really just... it set up the story to be absolutely amazing. I can't wait for more.

Sorry the comment was so short, I couldn't think of much with just the prologue.

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