Talk:Falling Feathers/@comment-8248793-20160810221225

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I really like Hawkpaw so far! He's so funny and nonchalant about everything, whereas Jaypaw is all serious and all that. No wonder Jaypaw became leader first while Hawkpaw was deputy lol

The prologue was really intriguing because it really leads to the question on whether or not Yewstar's decision led to the war that would ultimately destroy ThunderClan and the other Clans as well.

Like I said before, I really like Hawkpaw's narration, as well as his friendship with Leafkit. I don't remember if he had a mate but if he did I suspect it would be with Leafkit. He just seems so kind and encouraging with her :) I also suspect Leafkit is stronger than she's portrayed, though I don't really get what she was recovering from, maybe put that? (Unless I missed it because I read too fast)

I'm really interested in the whole rogue deal because I want to know if the attack on the patrol was just rogues, or if the rogues influenced ShadowClan to attack ThunderClan which would then later on lead to Jaypaw becoming Jaystar and the war breaking out.

I really like this so far, the plot is really good, just like the show :) Great job so far, Bird! I'll be reading as you update!

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