Talk:The Ocean/@comment-8248793-20160617173648

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I think I'm pretty much commenting on the ending, I wasn't sure where I left off...

Oh my gosh that was so sad, especially when Hollytail realized she loved Wave and then Wave told her that she killed foxfang I just like died inside. I remember how distressed Hollytail had been after Foxfang's death but now that it's Wave, I felt as though I was going to die inside because I knew Wave would die.

In the rescue, you mentioned Tallstar and then Longstar. I think the leader is Tallstar right? You changed it when Hollytail was trying to save Wave.

The death scene was perfect, as you didn't give them enough time to say everything that they wanted to say yet you fit in enough that it was perfectly timed and it was shown that they truly loved each other.

D: Ahhhhhh this was such a great story <333

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