Talk:Withered/@comment-26285531-20151230232309/@comment-15560748-20151231000615

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No I'm not done. I haven't written the epilogue yet xD

I'm actually in the process of re-writing, hence the super long preface and the inconsistent Chapter One. I started to kind of hate the format (Though I use it for Legendary x3) so I've decided to try something new. Autumnbreeze is pretty fickle as it is - she tends to take things for granted, and to jump to conclusions without much thought. Owlmoon tends to be loud, and does unrational things without thinking.

I'm wondering what you would say if I told you these characters were based off real people. I'm technically Autumnbreeze, and my four other best friends are actually (in real life) Owlmoon, Sweetfeather/Skymist (name change!), Roseblossom, and Applefrost/Swanheart (again xD). This story was "my life", and I tend to do stupid things like Autumnbreeze, such as shutting my friends out and just being a plain idiot pretty much overall. Though this story is more of an over exageration, because Owlmoon isn't really that horrible in real life. She's actually super amazing and really sweet.

I think that Owlmoon is more worried about Autumnbreeze in the end, and she doesn't actually hate her; like i said, she does things without thinking. I'm changing the story a bit, so there's more of a reason that Owlmoon acts this way, than just BOOM! she's a bad friend.

And also, Autumnbreeze is kinda just like "I don't want to talk to her because I'm afraid that a bomb will explode and something will go wrong, and I'll lose her friendship". She's really sensitive inside, though to others, she seems like a stronger type of person. This is a kind of inside to her.

Yes Piper from Heroes of Olympus! She's actually based off of Owlmoon's real sister (Snake's my brother :p). I was originally going to make her name Storm, but it didn't sound right, and I'm just like you know what? Let's name her Piper/Pipes because she love HoO.

Thank you. I wanted to leave you in a state like "Whoa. I want to know what happens next."

But thanks though :D

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