Talk:One Purr at a Time/@comment-11493954-20140111043405

Wow, this was really well wirtten!

Just one thing, I think you switched tense at the end. Personally, I like first-person best, you can really see the torture from Freddy's angle.

I love how you said "It was like their hearts were beating as one" It was incredibly sweet, and it made a great connection of how deeply the twoleg and cat coul connect.

It is cool how this is a true story. Poor cat. :(

Ney-bors was also a nice way to show that this is in the perspective of the poor cat.

Great job, and keep going!