Talk:Bonne Nuit/@comment-8248793-20160211023502

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Wow okay that was certainly a great way to start a show! I love the little poems at the beginning and the end of the episode!

Rookpaw (wing?) intrigues me. I certainly like how you started out, with a dream that seemed all so real to the readers and of course the main character. Then the mysterious beast who I'm guessing is also real, though I thought that was his Voice. Guess I was wrong o:

The Voice is such an interesting idea! yes, other stories have had the same idea but not in this way. Not in the way that the Voice seems to take over Rookpaw's life yet still lets him keep his own body and the way he acts (perhaps for now)

Despite the shortness of this episode, I certainly found the show hooking! I'll be looking forward to reading your episodes when I have the time :)

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