Talk:Winxclaw's Choice/@comment-8248793-20131124154829

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This is great Winx! :) But you move very quickly from one part to another, and I do suggest making the chapters longer, and just adding more details. Maybe add more action in each chapter, since Winxkit wasn't a kit for so long, then Winxpaw wasn't a 'paw for so long.

I see that the editors' team will edit this, because you do have a few mistakes to be fixed. But overall, this story was a great start, and I do hope you take the advice to add more, and just keep writing!

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