User blog:Shigura/Cats Amongst the Forest

Okay, so I finally decided to do a 'What if' Fanfiction...

What if Whitestorm had never died and the Twolegs didn't destroy the forest? What do you think? Would it be good? I'm on Chapter Three already, and I want to know what you guys think. ^_^

Whitestorm sat by the entrance to the Medicine Cat's den, sorrow in his eyes. Graystripe, Brightheart, Cloudtail and Brackenfur were immediately sitting by the Highrock, Cloudtail motioning for Brambleclaw to join them.  Brambleclaw padded over to the cats, watching the others approaching the Highrock. Firestar sighed, and looked over at Stripe.  "As you all know," Firestar meowed, "Leopardstar has abandoned one of her kits, Stripe. Stripe has been welcomed to ThunderClan, and will be known as... Streakpaw."  Streakpaw shuddered at her new name. Brambleclaw barred his teeth, knowing that this cat was clearly not of Clan origin. Firestar looked at the cats who had been watching him, and nodded.  "Brambleclaw, you will be mentor to this apprentice. You are a true and trusted warrior, and I hope you will pass your knowledge to your new apprentice."  Brambleclaw shuddered. Now he was supposed to mentor the little liar. He couldn't believe it; was StarClan trying to punish ThunderClan?  He padded onto the Highrock, and touched noses with his apprentice. Streakpaw beamed with pride as Brambleclaw stepped off the Highrock, and Firestar ended the Clan meeting. The cats went back to what they had been doing before; Sootfur and Rainwhisker getting patrols ready under Whitestorm's supervision, Brightheart tending to the elders and apprentices...  "Brambleclaw," Streakpaw meowed, "Can we do some training now?"  "No." Brambleclaw snarled, before stalking towards the nursery to visit Goldenflower.   -Cats Amongst the Forest, Chapter Two

 Lovestar "Even ThunderClan loves Me." 16:34, January 30, 2010 (UTC)