Talk:Rain Falls/@comment-5342796-20130710140415

YAY! This is awesomely awesome, even though it's just the prologue. It's intriguing, interesting, and well-written. I only noticed one error- the first sentence is written in third-person, and the rest is in one-person. No big deal at all, just thought I'd point that out.

I can't wait for more! :)