Talk:Shaken Battle/@comment-5488450-20130908162837

Quoting Rainy from below 'Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa. Mind=blown.'

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It was a little short, let's start with that. It felt around the length of a chapter to a story, maybe even a little shorter, and the point of an episode is to make it more like a short story with an open ending so it can quickly connect to the next episode. Idk, maybe I'm suggesting converting this into one big story instead of a show, but I haven't seen the other episodes yet so maybe not :3

The charachterizaion is cute, the death of her sister was so sad, I was kind of sobbing my eyes out from the inside[I never really sob in rl. Unless my hair is cut too short. Then I sob].

And the ending was perfectly done, I'm not even kidding. I was just sitting there staring and it was impressive. Among all the parts in this story that last line was the most moving, even more so than the death of her sister.

A lot of open ended questions here and I can't wait to see how you approach them!

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