Talk:If Squirrelflight Chose Ashfur/@comment-207.144.99.24-20130221221932

Hope you all don't mind if I added some things to Chapter 5

I put: Graykit gasped before falling to the ground looking up into the amber eyes of his killer before death took him. Brambleclaw stood in the pool of blood of Graykit smirking as his father Tigerstar appears beside him for only a moment with his cold dark amber eyes shining with pride of his son. Graykits lifeless body lays at the blood stained paws of his murderer reflecting the same way of how Tigerstar had killed Redtail.

If its bad I'll take it back down, just let me know if you want it off :o