Talk:Heartbeats/@comment-5342796-20130725204727

OKAY. NOW I CAN COMMENT. Which is actually good, because before I would've been too speechless to anyway. Still, I hate wiki. Stupid editor.

Spoiler Warning

I'm officially changing this to my favorite episode. Especially because of this sentence: "There's a moment of silence and I can hear all of us breathing, practically our heartbeats. Some beating in love, some beating in shame, some beating because they have to." That sentence wins. Okay? It wins.

OAKCLAW. SHADOWSONG. NO. WHY? WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY

And now for me to point out the little things I found wonderful. The beginning, where Lionwing was comparing Snowflight and Shadowsong... that was just so amazing. It was both descriptive and figurative and I just loved it. :D

Everything in this was excellent. The plot development, the characters, I just <3ed it all. I do see Robo's point about Snowstorm though - I really loved the scene cuz I'm such a sucker, but it did seem a tiny bit out of character.

Amazing job. :D <33333