Sunny Days and Horrible Ways

Here's my story, for HIMG's contest.

The Story
I woke up on a sunny day, I felt the breeze through my pelt, and heard the bird's songs. I had no idea what would be behind this horrible day that I would find out.

"Wake up, Oceanpaw!" yelled Sandpelt, my mentor.

I opened my eyes, I saw Sandpelt standing in front of me. Her golden fur shined in the sunlight, and her blue eyes looked like the sky at night with little sparks of light in her eyes as stars. Her tail then hit the ground. It made a sound that echoed through the den. I my paws felt a vibration; I then got up.

"Well, it good to know that you're not dead." said Sandpelt.

"I'm glad too." said I.

"Now, let's get out of this apprentice den." said Sandpelt.

As I padded out of then den I smelled flowers. These weren't the kind of flowers that would just smell nice, these were then flowers that would heal greencough.

I went over to sniff the flowers, but just as I did, I ran into Emeraldpaw, my nemesis. She stared at me and then growled.

"What are you looking at?" said Emeraldpaw.

"I was ju-" said I interuppted.

"You were just staring at something much better then you, Oceanpaw." said Emeraldpaw.

I then chose what to reply. ''What should I say? ''I asked myself. I then just said what was on my mind.

"You want to bet?" asked I.

Emeraldpaw then had a sneer look on her face.

"Sure." she replied.

Emeraldpaw's tom friends came up to her and winked at her. They were up to something, I just knew it.

"The fight starts...NOW!" Ashpaw yelled.

Emeraldpaw then pounced on me, she pinned me down. She reached for my neck. I pushed her off, a piece of my ear went with her. My other ear was shreaded. I then scratched her face.

"Ow!" she yelled.