Talk:The Promise/@comment-8248793-20150412211815

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Interesting concept, Blazey.

I liked how you introduced Snowfeather, though I'm not too sure if Snowfeather is a she-cat or a tom (I can't remember from the blurbs...?) You definitely gave Snowfeather a good build, and she has an unique personality.

This episode was a good length, but I felt as though you jumped into the plot too quickly. Instead of letting the readers understand how much the tension between ShadowClan and WindClan had extended, you sprouted a problem that sent Snowfeather out. I'm not sure why Frozenwhisker wants Snowfeather to join ShadowClan, because like usually you'd use a prisoner has a hostage or something idk

But I definitely think this idea was great, and it seems pretty cool to be a show! (though I can kinda see why you say you dunno if there'll be more than one season).

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