Talk:Just the Toms/@comment-8248793-20130927032116

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I really love this Arti! I'm glad you wrote some today! <3

I really like the grl squad because not only the fact that they were medicine cats, but the fact that the toms just went nuts. They had no idea what to do. I wanted to see them fight, cause like the girls would totally beat them ;)

I like the drugging idea, how Gorsetail just freaked out like crazy, and how they met the squad was very creative. But this excitement makes me feel the suspense creep up my back. What will happen next?

Arti, you're writing just flows so perfectly, and every sentence fits perfectly with the next. I really hope you continue on with War, and that you have a happy life writing!

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