Talk:The Beasts Beyond Our Border/@comment-25630395-20170514232424/@comment-27838201-20170515135832

I made Torrentclan to be different to any other clans, such as the reason for making it. As well as the laws to it, one of these laws are that kits become apprentices at five moons, and they must learn how to be proper warriors by at least twelve moons, if not fourteen. In the alliances, it's listed that Brokenpaths mate is Gummie, and she is the mother of Dawnkit and Moonkit. The main story takes place moons later. therefor, they would be apprentices by now. Chapter one doesn't have much detail due to it being seen through the eyes of a blind cat. forgive if it's confusing that way. I also made it to where medicine cats don't have the option to have kits, they must  have kits, therefor, all the medicine cats down the Torrentclan line are related. Becaus eof this, blind cats can be warriors. I willingly make my prologues confusing, so it can clear up later on in the story. I'll be sure to work on my comment whenever I can, thank you for cristism.