Talk:Singularity/@comment-26936355-20170411014734

SPOILERS

Wow. Just... wow. This story is just amazing aaa i can't put it into words

Anyways, Dawnpaw is actually very​ relatable. I haven't had a character that I could relate to so well but she's pretty and i'm so disgusting and the Prologue? Once I've started the first sentence I knew that this would be one of my all-time favorites. I really don't mind the use of adjectives and metaphors, they're so beautiful even this derp face can't compare :|

​Chapter 1

My first impression of Dawnpaw? 'Wow, that's a really intriguing character that I can relate to!' She's probably a very smart kit (I would say a genius) but also really dark (which I love bc dark characters are beautiful). As Dogfood said I feel bad for you bc we all tormented you about Blazestar's Fire Dawnkit as no cat answered her life questions- which will probably make her find out herself. With her inflicting self-harm? This cat is unusual. Very, very unusual and unique.

​Chapter 2

​They finally became apprentices! Woohoo! I think Brackenstar assigned Tigerfang to be Dawnpaw's mentor because he's experienced and knows more? Not sure about that though. Foxsong's really, really uplifting and cheery personality reminds me of caramel (which I don't like but it's really sweet). Then with Dawnpaw figuring out the complexity of nature, which I throughoutly enjoy reading and doing so (but I'd rather stay at home and be a couch potato). And then Dawnpaw was right about RiverClan claiming Sunningrocks! I really want to congratulate her for successfully unraveling the cat layer. That's amazing.

​Chapter 3

​I understand Dawnpaw's excitement, but I think the Clan's gonna fear her more than they're gonna respect her.

Overall Thoughts

I am lost for words. I really need to read your stories more often they're so good owerfhouwerh and also you must ​​continue it or else I shall murder EvErYtHiNg