Talk:Enemy/@comment-24143898-20150405055141

(Competition Post)

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Okay, this is an interesting concept, first off. This Secret cat... he's very scary. Does he have something to do with the plot later on?

I have a feeling that Frostleaf isn't dead, but she's gone to another - like, place. Am I right? If so, that's clever!

In Chapter Three, are Northstar, Southstar, Weststar. and Eaststar have to do with MountainClan, and their four subdivisions? :o

If there was one thing I would improve, it would be to make the chapters a little bit longer. Chapter One was fine, but I thought that the others were a bit short. If you want them to be short, I'm cool with that, but still.

Anyway, this is a good start, and I'll be watching for more! :D

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