Talk:Red Vengeance/@comment-5488450-20130810113356

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This episode was rather confusing, but good still. Many parts I didn't get and the introduction of Rush confused me. I'm a fast reader and sometimes I skim over a few words and that seemed to backfire a lot while reading this, something i would have rathered hadn't happened.

The characnterization is going well. I like the want for venegance, but I wish you would go more into it instead of dwelling around the forest. Also, I was just curious, was Stargaze after liek Stareh of just something that randomly popped up in your mind or something?

Again, I'd appreciate it if you slowed down. I know you get excited when writing this but the first episode was so much easier to understand, which was obviously less thrilling to write because it was the beginning and such.

Off to read Stroming Through :3

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