Talk:It's a World of Wonders/@comment-25630395-20141230034412

Flameheart and Dawnfur... wow that was unexpected :) But I liked Flame x Storm! And now Storm needs to forget about Crow and Dew to go back to the epic she-cat she used to be.

I think you described the fox scene pretty well, and I loved the moment where Storm and Crowheart fought together. Then he went back to being a jerk. ''She saved your life, mouse-brained Crowheart! ''

You had a nice ominous ending. I must read more!