Talk:A Bloodthirsty Leader/@comment-32946794-20160819071957/@comment-25221217-20160819142754

I was wondering that too :/

Like i said in my own comment, make sure you don't rush this. it started of really good and not thinking things through before you write them could ruin this. all the best fanfics on this site are written by authors who want to make their story the best it can be, and by that i mean they take their time. saying you "might re write that part" means you're not entirely (or at all) happy with it. don't post something if you aren't happy with it.

don't think i'm being rude, i'm just trying to help you make this fanfic the best it can be :).and you are fairly new so it's okay for you to make mistakes. you don't want to know how many i made when i first joined this site.

also, try to refrain commenting little notes in the comment section. if there's something you really want people to know about a certain chapter, perhaps put an authors note above it.

sorry if this whole thing sounded a little criticising