Talk:Legacy of TrappedClan/@comment-5019333-20140730194710

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Wow.

This is excellent! I love the idea of all four Clans being brought under control of Darkstar! I thought your poems in the beginning of each chapter was a really good way of telling us what would happen in the chapter.

The ways of these cats - gee, for one they don't care about anyone but themselves and their loyalty to Darkstar, but Brutal? He chose power over love? (reminds me of the title of your other fanfic xD). Huh. Sounds like a typical brainwashed Darkstar follower.

I really like how it's in Squirrelflight's perspective. It's so sad; she watched her mate die in front of her eyes! Cherrypelt's cheeriness is an interesting part, because all the Clan cats seem depressed (she's a Clan cat, right?).

My favorite part so far would probably have to be the kits! Oh, fat Splash :3 Wonder if he'll get the fattest cat award, hm? Lifeblood seems a bit more sympathetic, but Black! I love her attitude, even though Squirrelflight hates her with a passion.

Keep up the excellent work! I can't wait to read more!

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