Talk:Violet Dusks/@comment-26432133-20170116165730

Um, I'm not really sure Rabbitpaw's popularity is exactly....real. While it does do well to enforce the impact of her failures, unless those apprentices were kit-aged, they would not be fighting over her like that. As this is also the first chapter, it gives the reader a bad taste in their mouth, since she has some Sue traits. These are eventually balanced out, but again, it's at the beginning of the story, so my first impressions of Rabbitpaw are that she's unrealistic and a tad annoying.

That the entire Clan doesn't believe Twigpaw is also slightly unrealistic. One cat or two would make sense. I do like the ending to Chapter 2, though. It sounds like she might become the villain? And Rabbitpaw, you idiot.

That's my thoughts for now, and I guess I'll sign the fanlist :D