Talk:Singularity/@comment-24519368-20170422084633

That blurb certainly is hooking! Wow! And the prologue is one of the most beautiful things I've read, you could put books like War and Peace to shame!

And the introduction of Sagekit and Dawnkit was really well executed. And Dawnkit... CHILL! (I've just scrolled upwards to see the end of chapter three and I can tell Dawnpaw is going to be a pivotal character.) I adore Dawnpaw, how she stands out from the rest of the cats with her personality and attitude... Is she the unnamed she-cat in the prologue? :O

Furthermore on Dawnpaw, she probably has a hurbris and will have a downfall as leader when she becomes Dawnstar. Then, she gets too overwhelmed with the philosophy of having nine lives and destrys herself from within.