User blog comment:BeautifulSnowfur/How To Finish A Story/@comment-17759525-20160106134036/@comment-25250489-20160106180259

Haha rlly? Yus I was right! xD I thought this might relate to you

'Cause when I write like, this, sometimes I have the certain scene that I'm writing completely memorized in my head, and I'm really trying to write it as I've imagined it. So as I write, I try to explain everything exactly right, and for example, a simple sentence could be like, rich with explanationssss.... -_- well that's how I think of it(-"rich with explanation").

Like maybe a person could be reading a part of the story that I wrote and so they finish reading it. But then they scroll back up and re-read something and they're like, "Oh, this character did this? I don't remember reading that." Because that part is like, full of little words that explain something and ughh why am I so horrible with words you probably don't know what I'm saying xD

Well anyways, that's what I noticed once when I read Capture. I re-read it and I was like, hmmm, I didn't notice that. So since I knew that I write like that, I thought maybe you did the same thing I do!