Talk:Capture/@comment-4783947-20140216025911

I like the beginning for the fact that it makes me very curious as to whom the Overlives and Underlives are. I also really like some of the names, especially Kayn and Skell, though I'm not exactly sure how Oburi, and Aaryi are suppose to be pronounced. I did get confused in one or two spots, as to what was happening, but the rest of it is easy to understand. I'm pretty sure it is just me though. I'm looking forward to the next update.