Talk:Fall/@comment-24740423-20140816195059

you made me feel guilty omsc

why you do dis

>spoilers

YOUR WRITING STYLE IS PERFECT OKAY. ESPECIALLY IN FIRST-PERSON. i feel so sorry for aspenpaw, and i don't want her to dieeee. (and she sounds like an adorable character x3)

you misspelled Underlife though. you spelled it Underlfe. but beside that, i can't find any other mistakes.

so yeah, this is really good :D