Talk:Days Until Heartbreak/@comment-27153792-20160723203030

Well... This was an amazing fanfic.

No, I'm not kidding when I say that this was probably the best fanfic that I have every read. (even though I only read up to Part Twenty.)

>SPOILERS<

PART ONE-FIVE: An anti-tom group is something that I've never seen before, and it truly amazed me how creative it is. Sari seems kind of sweet yet sour at the same time.

I feel that Ice was kind of dumped onto us suddently as a kickstarter for the story, but even though that was a bit rushed, the way you rushed it actually made it good.

From Part One, I pretty much guessed that there would be a SarixIce, and that actually grew on me throughout the entire story.

PART SIX-TEN: I did tell you something about SarixIce, didn't I?

After reading these chapters, I also have the prediction that, since Sari is the leader of an Anti-Tom Group, this is not going to end well for her. I'm just going to have to wait and see.

I like how you had the Clans be ememys of Sari's Group, and how you had them kill Sweetie. (Not that I have anything against Sweetie)

PART ELEVEN-TWENTY: There's good deal of stuff stuff to say here, so I'll jump right in with the simple fact that I now want everything to go Sari's way, as you have somehow managed to create sympthy for Sari, and a bunch of other stuff that I can't really explain.

For example, I understand why Sari wants to kill Shineblossom.

But, I am surpised that Ivystar didn't ask mopre questions or something before letting Sari join the Clan. I'm also suprised that no one in the Clan reconised Sari.

So far, SarixIce has been growing on me, so I was sad to see it destroyed.

Also, my prediction about Sari's Group not liking her because of Ice came true! ^-^

>END SPOILERS<

I only read up to part twenty, but in the future, I might read the rest, and if I do, I'll update this comment to show the new stuff.

However, even though I havn't read up to the end yet, I looked at 'Mist' and saw that it was incomplete.

I think that you should continue this fanfic, because it's great!

-- ☀ --   Cheeseus   Rice   -- ☀  20:30, July 23, 2016 (UTC)