Talk:Legacy of TrappedClan/@comment-17759525-20140704185147/@comment-24766822-20140704201832

Thanks for the feedback! First of all, there is an explanation for Brambleclaw's name. That was the night he was going to go to the Moonpool, and planned to go after the gathering. But the rogue cats attacked, and he didn't have the chance. He was technically leader, he just did not have his name yet. Otherwise: Yes, you're right. This need serious editing. XD