Talk:Capture/@comment-11587616-20140203023355

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Okai Blade this is amazing

I like how the chapter heading is a part of the chapter itself. It's a genius idea. :D

The thing with the Overlives and Underlives is interesting, and maybe a bit creepy. How the Underlives feel about the Overlives is just like a "I HATE YOU KTHXBAI" kind of thing (YES THAT'S GOOD XD). The first-person view in the prologue (I feel like it's a prologue dun judge me) with the "you" and such makes it like the narrator-cat is begging for the reader's help, but yet the reader can't help.

I like the names (Blade you are the lord of Warriors names XD). The chapters are kind of short, but still have a lot of detail. I wonder what's happening in the first chapter though? I think it's the Underlives threatening her to take them to the apprentices, but what do I know? XD

Can't wait for more! :D

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