Talk:Far In The Horizon/@comment-5197876-20140701204345

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Okay, I'm here to judge for the contest, due to my own dropping out.

First off, the idea of this story is very interestng. The prologue draws you in right away, with the unique second person view. I've never actually seen that in a story, and it mde me really like it.

Rainstreak is a very diverse character, and I always felt that he was very real. His emotions were in tact, and I think he was my favourite character.

Your love was realistic, and I felt myself growing the love the couple, despite the fact I'm not much of a fan of Moonsong.

There's a couple tense/grammar errors, but it doesn't take away from the story at all.

This has a very interesting dynamic, and I can say that I loved this.

Your score is 19/20

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