Talk:If Bluestar Hadn't Given Up Her Kits/@comment-5197876-20160710035559

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I like this a lot! You do a good job with characterization. Is this really your first fic? It's very nice! I can see a definite improvement between the first two chapters and the more recent ones, but that's actually a very good thing.

The section after the gathering with the original leaders was nicely done, and the prophecy is very mysterious. I'm not quite sure what it means, which is very nice, because prophecies that are easy to decipher (cough)OmenOfTheStars(cough) aren't very fun to dwell on.

I'll stick around to see this fic continue, it's always been a concept that I've thought about!

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