Talk:Fading Until You Can't Tell Anymore/@comment-8248793-20140319035806/@comment-11493954-20140319044127

SPOILERS

Thanks!

The lines of the chapters...well, I was trying in two and three to keep it short on purpose, to give each line more impact, and I thought it reflected the mood of the shadows and what not. Might have went a little overboard, sorry about that. I think I'll fix it when the whole story is done.

Yeah, the places the torture comes from is the next chapter, I didn't want to say any more about that until I reallllyyyy drew out the effects on Seawater. The revelation of what the torture exactly is is a major plot point, if not the most important bit, and it kind of ties in the 'two problems' and the first chapter to the others. If you didn't get that sentence, I can't give anymore away. XD So after I post Chapter 5 tomorrow, tell me if leaving the torture purposely vague in the end of Chapter 4 was irritating and cinfusing or if it helped. But yikes probably want to wait for the next chapter before answering. :)

Thanks for the comment! And now I finally have an editing schedule so chapters are up every other day (tomorrow is Chapter 5). :)

END SPOILERS