Talk:The Shining Star/@comment-32946794-20160725162156/@comment-5993821-20160726221624

Thanks! I'm going to be editing the first chapter.

As for Chapters 2 and 3, LakeClan. LakeClan would do that. I'd say they're about as bad a ShadowClan was with Brokenstar. Its not really the clan, its just that Sandstar and Applefur are really terrible cats. The rest of the cats do it just because there's not a lot of prey in their territory, and they're just really hungry. As with ShadowClan(Brokenstar), the cats would probably like to overthrow their leader and deputy, but they don't in fear of being killed.