Talk:Despondency/@comment-26432133-20170713033528

OH I didn't comment on this? What the heck, me?

wfwa judge's comment-

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Okay this is really really good! I love how you built up Ravenstar praying that she would find Goldenwing. Ahaha I ship them so much it's unbelievable. Plus, Ravenstar's sorrow really bore down on me, great job with that! I like how there's a note of hope with Ravenstar asking if Goldenwing will wait for her. Ravenstar herself is strong, choosing to spend her lives for her Clan if she can't use them on Goldenwing.

This was nominated for Best Short Story, and I have to say that I love how much emotion you brought into this. And you managed to paint Ravenstar and Goldenwing's relationship beautifully in a single sentence. Great job, and good luck in WFWA!