Talk:Mutiny/@comment-5488450-20140101195715

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its taking a lot of self-control not to cuss out that crowcall because dammit he's SUCH A SICK HYPOCRATICAL BASTARD

I really like how at first you made these cats seem like a good lot, who just wanted peace and all, but then you sort of shifted the perspective later so we could see that they were just as violent and blood thirsty(underlining the nature of all the cats) and exteremly cold-blooded.

I still can't believe they did that to Adderscar though, I seriously winced reading those lines that's so so sick, and why would they pick on Adderscar? It opens up some questions the reader is excited to see answered.

And I love how the innocence has faded from Brookfall that's really nice, I mean, if I were in her position I think I would feel the same because after going through all of that being told there was no purpose would be really really harsh