Talk:Into/@comment-8248793-20160828000111

SPOILERS (I promised a recomment :))

Okay so this idea is still amazing. I didn't quite remember it before but now that I've read the first episode, I'm starting to remember a few parts of the episodes I did read. I love the idea though, it's very well thought out and your writing works perfectly with it.

I'll start with Elm. Just out of curiosity, why did you spend a long time to reveal her mother? Like you kept not saying who the cat was. Was there a particular reason? Because I was certain it was her mother (from memory) but it seemed weird to me that she was being described as just a cat.

Moving on to Elm though. I really like her. I like her better than Prime tbh. Elm seems like the super innocent type because I get the feeling HALO is bad haha. Like Elm just radiates good while Prime kinda radiates stupid (not in a bad way, she's just blind-sided. i couldn't find a better word gah)

Prime is not really my favorite but she seems okay. I actually thought she was going to be a ruthless character but apparently I have it wrong lol. It'll be interesting to see the different views of HALO, with Prime already being a Recruit and Elm joining later on but still being the same age.

Again, this is such a cool idea and I'm glad I'm reading it again :) I just wish you'd write more haha <3

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