Talk:Everything Was Blue/@comment-25110166-20170731182707

i like the start of this so far! bluepaw is a really interesting charcater, i think i like him and finchpaw best at this point.

the moment where quailpaw starts to feel bad for him changes the story's entire atmosphere. and we can even see bluepaw kind of slowly start getting warmed up to quailpaw too... i really like the dynamics of what could be a relationship there.

and the nine lives / never have i ever? oh my gosh that's really genuis. Especially how it ties into the crush thing... idk the game was just adorable. and it fits with so many apprentices!

sorry for the lame comment i'll add more when the story progresses!