Talk:Shards And Fragments/@comment-8248793-20171105001739

SPOILERS the fallen rose

Wow okay that was definitely a unique way to interpret the prompt! I was actually waiting the entire time to see where it would come in, with perhaps a death or something, but this is just as intriguing. I'm guessing this will be a continuous plotline because you can't leave me hanging from here!

Like Dogwood below, I'll admit I couldn't really follow along. From what I can see, Astra is in a cadre (squeal from me bc tog HAHA) and they're in like this group? (something Guild?) and they're trying to...train to be the top. i think.

But regardless of my confusion, I have to admit this has a lot of potential and I'm excited to see how you develop not only the plotline but the setting and characters as well. The whole design is already intricate and really gives way to clever plot twists and just a lot of detail in general! Your description is beautiful, and I am again jealous of your ability to weave just words to describe a complex landscape (i again can only do dialogue, sadly)

Good start! I'm definitely going to like to read more and I'll do my best to keep up :)

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