Talk:Closing Out Pain/@comment-27824661-20170427140210/@comment-24143898-20170427195402

Thanks, Swan. Is there anything that you liked/that you think I need to improve on? Also, if you haven't already (and if you have the time, it's very long xD), I think you should read the prequel to this - you don't have to though, it's not necessary to understand this story :P