Talk:The Pain of Loneliness/@comment-1266530-20111012172215

This is amazing! I really like Holly (mostly because we share the same name...) and your writing is... wow! I can really sympathise with her! Glad she's part of ThunderClan now! The only thing you could possibly do to make it better would be to use a new line every time a cat speaks - it just makes it easier to make sense of who's saying what! Anyway; I think you deserve a round of applause! :)