Talk:Falling Book One : The Time Has Come/@comment-11651046-20130721153118/@comment-25531638-20130721163101

You're only bad at writing if you believe that you are. Don't be so critical of yourself (I'm not the one to talk though, lol).

As for the story, you seem to have an interesting idea, which will make for a good mystery. I would just suggest elongating the chapters a little bit.