Talk:Streaks Of Fire/@comment-8248793-20131231003821

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Woah, I thought Gingershock was the main character ;o

The first part shocked me the most, and I loved how you used the War Clan's names ;) And how we have more war :D (I love battles :3)

I really like how you shaped Gingershock, a snidy she-cat who doesn't do anything but tease apprentices. Though I think Stormstar's punishment was fairly harsh, as she was he peaceful leader who didn't want to fight.

I like the fact you chose to have AirClan as the antagonist. Though I'm a little worried about who's the main character now with Dewpaw stuck in the little hole :P

I liked how this all started, and I hope the next one comes out soon!

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