Talk:Snowstorm/@comment-5488450-20140105234744

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Wow I liked this episode even more than the previous one! You're doing a really good job with the plot build up, I think, just gradually adding the tenseness (is that a word?) and excitement to the story line so it's not too overwhelming but yet we do get to feel a good deal of emotion as well

I love Storm's character so far-she's got a lot of detail to her and she's well rounded it but to no extend is she a marry-sue

It's also interesting to see how desperate the clans must be to be taking help from loners-it's almost unheard of and it adds a really unique twist

Finally, the ending was fantastic; so kudos to you for that!