Talk:Captivate/@comment-25250489-20150831032353

Mist. This was AMAZING.You're welcome! (in response to the message from you up there) Though actually, this fanfic is not long, it's super short xD. I wish it was longer.

uuugghhhhh I am horriblee at constructive comments. You should see the one I made on Even So, lol.

Anyway, that was an interesting idea, the one of Crookedstar living in Fernpaw. That must be weird.

Wow. Fernpaw died. That's horrible! I'm glad she was brought back to life. And the ending was really good!

It's so cool how you finished this fanfic. Like, so many people on here haven't finished their stories, so in my opinion, it's a big accomplishment whensomebody finishes a story of their's. (like I have never ever finish any story that I started writing)

Also, I think you're a good writer! Much better than me, anyway xD

(I'm sorry that this comment was so horrible, the small part when I was trying to be constructive for your story.)