Talk:Round Off/@comment-24766822-20150817022623

Competition Post...

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This system is so depraved and corrupt it should be brutally destroyed! I desperately want that revolution to come soon!

Fiery, you have an excellent knack for making me hate Flarepaw even more. :) Congratulations.

So, let me see. Flarepaw pays a cat to poison her and try to eliminate Amberpaw with more heinous lies (this isn't bullying anymore. This has gone beyond that at this point). Too bad her little plans were thwarted... which I normally would be jumping for joy about, if it hadn't been in the most sad way possible. Poor Violetpaw... if she stuck around a little longer, she probably would have made a great character. But alas, she is a victim of yet another cruel act of Flarepaw. Will you eventually kill her? Because you would have my undying support all the way, my friend! >:D

But it definitely takes guts to turn yourself in, knowing full well that you will die (at least her death seemed painless). Will we ever see Violetpaw in StarClan?

“Go getch one of them, any of them.”

Did you mean get? Or was this meant to give Blossomflecks a bit of an accent?

I didn't spot really any errors beside the one above, and episodes like this one prove time and time again how bad the Beauty is. It needs to die.

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Another great chapter in this saga, Fiery! I won't stop till I've read them all!