Talk:Falling Shadows/@comment-3134119-20110930184558

Mousewhisker/tail... you said Mousetail and I am presuming you meant Mousewhisker, also, you have put Sandstorm and Cloudtail into the story when they are nearly the two oldest warriors, what happened to the younger one, the ones more likely to be alive at that point like: Lionblaze, Hollyleaf (I know she left but the Erins said she would return), Dovewing, Ivypool, Whitewing, Birchfall, Bumblestripe, Blossomfall, Briarlight (or not because her legs were crushed and she broke her backbone when the tree fell and killed Longtail), Millie, Leafpool, Cinderheart (yeah, okay, you used her in the story but what ever), Poppyfrost, Molekit, Cherrykit, Berrynose, Hazeltail and so on. Sandstorm, Greystripe, Dustpelt, Brackenfur and Thornclaw should be elders and, last but not least may I request that Mousefur is still alive? She is the last cat alive to have ever been in Bluestar's Prophecy in ThunderClan and I like old things. Another point I have to make is the name Bearpaw. Lots of users use Bear as the first part of a characters name but - get real! Bears, cats have never even heard of them and - there has never ever been an actual warrior cat called Bearkit/paw. So, in short - look at the characters you use age wise and the Bearpaw thing and........ PLEASE CAN YOU KEEP MOUSEFUR ALIVE IN THIS STORY?!?!?!?!?!?!