Talk:Danger Cries/@comment-27725192-20170627204413

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Amazing! I love the twists and the unique concept. I am still confused on what made Rainpaw distant with Shadowpaw and I almost cried when she died ;-; Snowflake and Slash not caring about Shadowpaw at all with Autumn being his sister being the second, was the biggest twist in the series. I visualized them fighting the Clans to get their son back was their main goal, and that they'd have a heartwarming reunion. But I got the opposite of what I thought, which is amazing and what I'd like to see in every author - something thrilling that the reader would not expect. Great job overall!