Talk:Withered Rose/@comment-16166566-20130725152911

This is amazing, but why did Nightwhisker leave Roseheart in the first place, and it seemed like you just jumped into Roseheart and Hickorytail's relationship. But other then a few grammer mistakes, this was very enjoyable! I found Rosehearts pain reflecting off the story, until the end, when She and Screefall have a good life together. We'll see who wins ^.^