Talk:Crystal Heart/@comment-26432133-20170522050136



I'm really interested in Morningpaw's reaction to his/her mother's death. It's unique and rare, but totally plausible. And let me just take a moment to appreciate your artwork, Patch- dang that's good!

Also is Morningpaw a girl or a boy? I can't tell XD

I love Winterkit, she's so observant, intelligent, and cute! And ahahah, I know they're young, but the way you see a kit's age translated to human years is obviously different, so I kinda ship them. But I would recommend that you change their ages, because at the very, very most Winterkit is 10 in human years and that's uh...not a dateable age.

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There were a few grammar and spelling errors, but this story has a lot of potential and I'd love to see where it goes! Sorry for not much of a comment, I'll try to remember to comment more when you update ^^