Talk:Nightingale's Sorrow/@comment-26285531-20150719190752

It's great!

But in the beginning I think there could have been more of a pause or "leading-into" before Mapleshade announced she was "leaving". That's just my perspective, though. But I'm hoping you'll type up some more, because I feel like I don't know enough about the story yet. I want to know more. ;)