Talk:The Camp by the River/@comment-5488450-20130216152018

Arti, this is like, the closest I have ever seen to perfection in a fanfic because it is just so marvelous and heart-warming.

So for my constructiveness:

The effect that being captured had on Gorsefur was completely mind rattling. While Shadowsong is a very strong-willed cat, I had thought the same could be said for Gorsefur and that appeared to be the case...

Until now. It made me so sad to see my favorite cat from the series at a state which was worse than death. But you pulled that change off so marvelously and made it so heart-wrenching that it was so easy to slip into Brookfall's shoes. And we all know how much I hate her.

OMG, Aquatail was completely amazing, and so perfectly imperfect! You made me so proud to have her as my fursona. AND GORRSEFUR LIKED MEEEEEE :DDD

I think her death scene was the best one so far in this series, and we have seen quite a few. While you gave her time to say some final words it wasn't all

"PANTPANTPANT...ICANTMAKEITSAYGOODBYETOTHEKITSFORME"

Those deaths are really irksome. Instead, this one had a deeper meaning to it and gave a nice conclusion to Aquasplash's life and an ever better beginning to Gorsefurs new one. I'm so happy Aqusplash made Gorsefur feel better =D

I love this series so much <3