Talk:You Know Nothing/@comment-8248793-20131011181252

This is nice!

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I like how this frames Crowfeather, it makes him more real, more of a cat than he was in the series. I like the first part, where Squirrelflight tells him that it was their kits. And I was like wha? Then I realize you're writing this like uncovering a secret that the Erins did not reveal. :3

But quotation marks are " but you do ' though it doesn't make a difference to me, just wanted to point it out.

Other words, I love this, and the way you express your feelings is good, and I think you're not done, so I hope you finish!

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