Talk:Responsibility/@comment-5488450-20140101183417

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That last line seriously had me lmao it was seriously like perfect(not that the entirety of war is perfect or anything pshhh)

I'm personally really really excited for Brookfall to have kits. She has come so so far and her character has developed so well throughout this series to the point where I wasn't sure if you would be able to roll anything else out of her. I feel as though, however, this twist will be the perfect thing to help Brookfall continue developing.

The Riverkit ordeal is very exciting too! I like how it’s almost like a bit of foreshadowing into Brookfall’s role as a mother. Riverkit is still the most adorable thing and I like Riverclaw a low too; I think the next Waterstar might actually be a lot better(also I refuse to feel bad for being delighted a Waterstar’s death)

And finally ‘would you rather’ was SUCH A COOL GAME FOR THEM TO PLAY YOU SHOULD HAVE THEM PLAY TEENAGER GAMES MORE PLS. And when Shadowsong said she would never raise kits, I was seriously praying you would give her kits because I would seriously love to see that. I really loved this however, like I love all of war and your number oneist fan is back and in on the action!