Talk:Dead and Gone/@comment-5197876-20141105163318

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sob

This story was really powerful. The dystopia is very realistic, and I found almost no mistakes. I kind of read this in Math, so I spent most of it trying not to cry all over my computer.

The POV changes were a bit jarring, but I got used to it as the story went on. I kept mixing up Meadow and Mallow's POVs.

BlackxMallow <3 I felt Meadow kinda showed up randomly, and I don't see how she progressed the story tbh.

I'm going to follow this series.

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