Talk:Mapleshade's Heart/@comment-2143393-20130624001115/@comment-9729114-20131128055158

No offense, but lay off a bit. She may not be the best typist in the world, I know her in real life. This is just a fanfiction! I understand you're trying to help, but it seems like you are trying to pick out every single mistake she has! I put POV in my fanfictions so we know who's eyes it's coming from, it doesn't necessarily need to be first person when we are just writing it for fun.