Talk:A Bright Star/@comment-24344317-20131227064041

I like this a lot!!! Great job! Except I'm unsure about the name Rumblestar... P.S Brookit is Brookkit unless the name without 'kit' is Broo??? Constructive Criticism is what I'm aiming for here... I liked the prologue but i bit more to it to explain a bit more would be nice, but otherwise i love it :)