Talk:The Elite Circle/@comment-5019333-20160602003442

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This fanfiction is amazing! Your characters' personalities are developed well and there's an overall amazing amount of detail put into this. I like the plot, especially, though Mya's sudden death was a bit of a shock. After reading that it was "loosely inspired by Legend" I can definitely see some connections.

I absolutely love Riot and the contrasting views that Mya has on him. In addition, I like Mya's personality and I think you addressed her conflicting feelings about Riot well.

Overall, great read, good amount of detail and intriguing plot!

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