Talk:Incompetent/@comment-25531638-20130814175722

This seems amazing. I started reading simply because of the warning (of course), and found out that I was instantly pulled in. It's such an original idea, the way all of the Clans are set up.

Ooh, and gore. Should enhance things nicely :3

Oh, and the last sentence of what you've written so far. Great. I can't wait!