Talk:Snowstorm/@comment-11804774-20141204013111

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Nuuuu. I don't know why because I dont know much about him.. But i really like Reedtail!! Im so sad he got caught, I hope he's still alive. I hate Dawnfur though XD She seems so rude.. I like how Storm actually tried though to save him, I hope she doesn't feel guilty ><

However, to be honest.. I don't really like how the Clans accept them so quickly.. Probably because they're already used to Shade coming though..

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2 Other Things:

1) I love how you describe everything throughout the writing, it's perfect.

2) "Hurry! The longer we stay out here, the more dnager (You mispelled danger) we are in!"

The there (I believe that's suppose to three) cats moved cautiously, trying not to let the wind blow them away. I inched closer, and reached for Reedtail.

Overall:

I really love how this is turning out :D Keep up the great work! <3