Talk:Song on the Breeze/@comment-24155647-20141206115007

First, great job! This story has a lot of potential and has good promise, it sounds like it'll turn into a great series! :)

What I like about it is the description, you all described things well and so were the characters and the scenes that were going on.

However, I thought the "apprentice killing a badger" thing was a bit odd, because a young apprentice can't really bite on a badger's leg then suddenly get the strength to flip it over and hit its head.

There were also minor errors in Chapter 5. Don't get me wrong, that chapter was so awesome, but the c of 'Clan' should be capitalised. Like this: RiverClan.

Anyway, apart from those two points, I think this story is brilliant! ^.^