Talk:Scarce Grief/@comment-5488450-20140131040528

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oh

my

god

CUTEST SCENE EVER PLEASE

seriously, though, I really love how the introduction/departure of Dewheart led to her realizing how she felt about Crow; that's a very unique way to open her eyes to love, and the way she kind of let's Dewheart go saying 'we weren't meant to be' was brilliant, in all honesty.

I was also really pleased with the builup in this episode. It wasn't rushed at all and I was incredibly pleased with how steady you kept the pace; I can really see the improvement from the first few episodes!

There were a couple of grammar/spelling/convention mistakes and sometimes the sentences didn't flow so I would recommend reading over it one more time; maybe even having a friend read over it and point out the mistakes for you, just to catch those little things! Other than that it was brilliant!

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