Talk:Fiends/@comment-8248793-20160808143807

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Oh man. When you told me about this, I thought it was a calmer story (until you named it Fiends lol). But this is definitely more than I thought and I love it. Seriously, teach me how to write amazing stories like this :)

I really like the sisters, especially Violet. Her POV shows us just how she thinks and how vulnerable she is. Of course, you weave so many secrets that I really want to know now but I want to get on to her sisters first.

Willow and Aurora are so adorable that I hope this "him" doesn't come after them because they ran. I'm also curious to know why Violet would return, unless it's because Blackpaw is in danger (she seems to like him).

Blackpaw and Riverpaw are cuties, though I definitely like Blackpaw more. He's more of a leader and definitely a better fit for Violet it seems. Though Riverpaw could be reassuring, you also mention his greatest strength is his greatest weakness, which makes me note that it'll hurt Violet or Blackpaw some day.

Great start though! I'm so excited to see how the rest of the story goes :)

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