Talk:Clueless/@comment-25531638-20130806174220

@Blaze:

"It's time for a grammar lesson," Stormy said.

Notice how I put the comma inside of the quotes, when it states who was speaking after the quotes? That's how you do it properly. When you have a question mark or exclamation point, it's like this:

"It's time for a grammar lesson!" Stormy said.

You don't put a comma after the quotes there, either. The only time it's outside is when it states who is talking before:

Stormy said, "It's time for a grammar lesson."

But when it's an action, that doesn't involve any sort of speaking, do it like this:

Stormy walked over. "It's time for a grammar lesson."

You get it now? Oh, and with the ellipses (these: ......). You should probably not put as many dots, or else it gets obnoxious. Try it... like in this sentence. And put a space after them.

As for your chapter, I think the fight was pretty good, and the suspense when Scorchstar came to talk to Yellowkit was just perfect.

Okay, I should end this before it gets any longer xD