Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-26432133-20170801222341

ew dogwood why did you make torch sound so much like an obvious kindling what's the difference between a kindling and a match anyways why is yellow the only good thing here and why are the backstories so mixed up and reveal so much you'll never touch upon. this is just a plain oppressed people rise up ew, also sand has a really boring "voice" you were aware of this while you were writing why didn't you just redo her character or at least fix her before forging ahead with something so odd. sand and torch seem like a good enough ship but they don't have much chemistry here. narration is meh. the only things i like in this story are yellow bc she's an awesome mom and the whole thing about her daughter is great (though you executed it not as well as desired) and the whole frost-smolder thing.

dogfood, it's depressing that this is one of the best stories you have on the wiki. //huffs