Talk:Two Birds/@comment-25630395-20170628204908

pt 2

SPOILERS

CHAPTER 5

I'm surprised Creekpaw got off so lightly... but I admire his strength despite the Clan's treatement of him. I also really like Wisppaw, but I was frustrated- her word should have been enough!

I don't know how I feel about Stonepaw... she's just kind of there. But I'm glad Creekpaw finally figured out that Talonpaw lied to him.

The encounter at the end was sooo good. I love how manipulative Talonflight is. She blames everything on Creekpaw, and he seems to accept this. Her threats were also ominous, I wonder how far she'll go with them? o.o

CHAPTER 6

I know it's not done yet but I love this look into Talonpaw's mind. She's changed so much and I'm so afraid for Creekpaw. Please don't hurt him </3

THIS IS SO GOOD. i'll definitely check back when you write more :)