Talk:Stormwillow's Suffering/@comment-8248793-20150215010602

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Stormwillow is a strange name for a kitten :3 But I think it's a cute name for her though.

I feel sorry for the young kitten, and I was hoping the toms would take her in. I hope she finds someone who will care for her! You definitely showed her pain and despair well, you made me feel as though I wanted to take Stormwillow in.

This is a great start, and you have a good amount of description and dialogue so that it blends together well. Stormwillow is a very adorable character, and you did well to describe her emotions to the reader.

Good start, please do continue :) <3

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