Talk:Two Birds/@comment-25630395-20170628201759/@comment-28076378-20170628231602

thanks for pointing out spelling/grammar mistakes!

Creekkit's like... a little paranoid, but nothing compared to Talonkit. Creekkit isn't as weak and unhealthy as Talonkit thinks, he just always appears that way to her eyes, since that's how he was when they were kits (well, he was weak, but not unhealthy) I'm thinking Creekkit 's actually growing tall very fast, so his weight just needed to catch up, then he'd be all good, but Talonkit doesn't know that. Like when she is shocked when she realizes how tall he is when they're speaking to Stonepaw... man that came out way longer than i intended... xP

oooh, yeah, i was inspired by Crookedstar's Promise. I had just finished rereading it when i was writing that chapter. Frostshine honestly reminds me a lot of Rainflower, she favors Talonkit cause she has the showings of a future warrior, but she doesn't give Creek a chance.

lol thanks. the snake thing still makes me laugh, and those terrfingly flopping ears...

I believe Talonpaw does know what she's doing is wrong, but she's trying to tell herself she did it for the best reasons, she doesn't want to believe she did it all for nothing.

i like writing crazy twists *sighs lovingly*