Talk:Never Look Back/@comment-25531638-20130607011318

Derp. Why haven't I commented on this yet?

So yeah. It was great, and this whole series is a good idea! It wasn't very fast paced, and it left me a bit bored in a couple parts, but over all it was amazing! If you made it more fast paced it would seem a bit weird :P. So pretty much perfect. I love Jingo's personality, Hussar's too, all though I'm not a big fan of JingoXHussar.

The storyline got a bit repetitive, and I thought a different sort of twist would liven it up a bit :) But yeah, it was still brilliant.

Hope you didn't mind a bit of constructive criticism from a noob xD