User blog comment:WarriorcatZ1324/Removed, Re-thought, Rewound, Rewritten.../@comment-1160327-20111015012817

Okay, I'll continue to the end. But I still want to do the remake. It's darker, shorter (That's a good thing), streamlined and all around better. After the Picture Stop is over, I'll post a pic of my brainstorm paper. All major spoilers removed, of course. ;P