Talk:Ivypool's Serenade/@comment-5019333-20141015211018

Follows all guidelines.

Grammar, Spelling: 3/3 (12%)

There were no grammar or spelling errors.

Uniqueness: 5/5 (20%)

I personally haven't seen too ''many poems like this. Also, I feel like the way your wrote this really went in depth with Ivypool's feelings.''

Creativity: 9/10 (36%)

''Your poem was interesting to read. You showed what Ivypool felt like with a lot of voice. My favorite lines were, "Little Miss Perfect, Is about to get outshined". ''

''I did see that you used lots of detail and description in the beginning of the poem, but as it got towards the end, there weren't as many adjectives. I feel if you are going to use adjectives, balance them out.''

Flow: 2.5/3 (10%)

In a section of your poem, (Descisions are hard, But when you know the right thing, You know you have to, Do the right thing) I feel like it was unnescessary to use the words, know, right, and thing twice.

Idea: 3/4 (12%)

''Great, and well written. I have taken a point off because I was confused. Why is this called "Ivypool's Serenade"? In my point of view, I see a serenade as a piece of romantic music of some sort.''

I got confused, because I feel parts of your poem should've affected other parts of your poem.

Total: 22.5 (90%)

Your poem was very interesting to read. The words you used helped draw me into the poem. Good job, Clever!