Talk:Wish You Were Here/@comment-8248793-20130711211832

SPoLER ALERT!!!

NU, the apprentices! But like why would they want the apprentices?

I like the writing, the descriptions are nice, and the way Sorrowpelt describes things are perfect. Though the moment seemed fast, like she got hurt instantly. Though you could slow down the battle, and yeah...

Other than that, I like this story, and hope you continue it.