Talk:Despondency/@comment-25630395-20170518001019/@comment-8248793-20170518023513

Yup lol that's a typo XD i just reread that sentence and it doesn't make sense LOL

Thank you for the comment though! I appreciate your thoughts and corrections on this, as this might be one of my first works on here where i actually tried to put more thought into the story than dialogue (i royally suck at description so woo)

I'm glad you found that the "golden pelts" was powerful, as I wanted to emphasize the terror Ravenstar felt at searching for her mate. This scene was definitely a reflection of the feelings I felt while reading the beginning scene of ACOWAR, where not really spoilers but you have a character who is searching for his own friends on a battlefield and even though you know they're not dead, it's suspenseful and it gave me a panic attack for no reason

so I'm glad you felt the same! thanks again for reading :) <3