Talk:Black Lies/@comment-24766822-20140711003750

Like an ominous and beautiful riddle, this poem story really sucked me in, and the descriptions were faint enough that I could imagine some things for myself, which is something I enjoy doing.

So many emotions wrapped up into one story! Sorrow, hate, sympathy, memory... truly fascinating. It is also very confusing, and I had to work my brain hard on this one! There were some points were I got lost in this world. And I am also a lover of poetry that does not rhyme... and the words are put together in some sort of a rhythm, almost like a song. And Belle, with her mysterious past, truly makes this story an enjoyable read for me. And the line, "And soon, you will be dead, too" made me shiver. And the spirit scenes were well done.

Congratulations, Blade! You have impressed me very much. I can't wait to see how it ends!