Talk:Power of Love/@comment-7662967-20140726215834

I love how you end the prologue with; "Alas that part was lost in time .." That is so amazing XD

Tigerpaw is a little judgmental of Frogpaw isn't he XP

It's great the way you make the reader feel sympathy for Tigerpaw, and then for the cats he's mad at, that's very hard to do, it shows talent!

How does Tigerpaw know Cherryleg isn't a good mentor? Just cause she has three legs doesn't mean she can't teach him (Makes me think a little of Jaypaw and Brightheart XD)

So yea, great job Dark! I will be following! XD