Talk:Heart of the Beast/@comment-27725192-20170409224659/@comment-8248793-20170409231249

thank you! <3

to answer your questions, ashlyn was brought to ray bc he had to capture anyone who crossed averitha's paths in the dark woods so he had no choice but to first bring her to him, but he lowkey fell in love with her so he didn't really want to let her go (selfish in a way yes, i had to make him flawed! c; ) does that kinda make sense? i didn't make it very clear in the story woops

but LOL that's a good point ravyn was lowkey hitting on her kinda xP flirtatious much

you do have a point o: ash and ray kinda blended together in terms of scenes and plotlines, but it's my bad point with romance :P

you were hoping for a death? that's a first XD i'll be honest no one was supposed to die in my original plan! i was writing the scene and realized jas had to die to make it good (good in my terms woops) and to make it tragic enough that they would have even more of a reason to finally kill averitha (but i do love jas/everett D: they were cute)

thanks! averitha wasn't the main villain of the story, the contest villain was def focused more on ray (tho he wasn't really a villain?) i lowkey forgot that averitha technically counted as a villain topic hehe

thank you tho! i'm glad you liked it !!! <3