Talk:Daughter of Scourge/@comment-24740423-20140913230213

~spoilers

this is a unique story; I haven't read anything like it! the concept of Scourge having kits has been used often, but this is different from those. instead of all the kits living and being evil and such, one lives and isn't out to kill everyone.

I really liked Ravenflight. it was a shame she had to die ;u; I understand it was to progress the story, but still, why Firestar whyyyyy.

(MISTKIT AND NIGHTKIT ARE STILL REMEMBERED. I'M SO HAPPY.)

I found a few errors (in chap. 3 you wrote gaze as gave, in chap. 4 you wrote "Wiat!", which should be wait, etc.), but not major ones, just little misspellings.

so anyway, great job~ :D can't wait to read more~

~spoilers over