Talk:Forever Flames/@comment-11651046-20140630063750

I rate this story a 17 out of 20.

If there were any spelling mistakes, I must have missed them, as I saw nothing that was misspelled. The story was a bit fast and abrupt at times, but was still pretty good. I must admit, I had shipped PheonixXShatter (And still do) but that doesn't effect the score at all XD. There was a lot of detail, and a lot of touching moments, which I personally loved.

The points deducted were from the fastness and abruptness.