Talk:Drizzle/@comment-28057208-20160909080038

Helloooo again

First of all, I love this story so far. It's a very interesting idea. And grrr do I hate Oakclaw.

I'm very intrigued to see where this goes, honestly. Also, just one nitpicky thing, there is one heading that says 'Chapter Three' however there is no writing underneath it, and then there's the actual Chapter Three.

But that's just picky, fussy me. I love the concept of the story and I love where it's going!