Talk:Eyes in the Dark/@comment-28057208-20170218094711

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nO BREEZELEAF MY BABY

AAAa this was really good honestly! And very intense. I actually found myself feeling terribly sorry for poor Breezeleaf.

The only criticism I have is the story escalated slightly too quick. We didn't get much on Poppycharm's character apart from: ''rude, resentful, evil. ''What I'm saying is, all we know about her is she was angry about her step-dad and mum and was pretty damn evil.

I don't mean to be rude I'm just pointing out.

But yeah, apart from that, it was really well-written! I love your descriptions :)

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