Talk:Into The Storm/@comment-26285531-20150926235911

This is great, Hope!

The plot has started subtle, but I can tell something is going to come out of the blue, and kind of make the story turn around, like a plot twister. Now I can't wait!

Also, when you were describing items or characters you did it so vividly, I could see them in my mind's eye. So, Kudos to you for that.

There is a minority of grammatical errors but I'm sure those will be fixed in no time. Really great job!