Talk:Rise of the Vipers/@comment-28076378-20170722043847

-commenting contest-

I remember reading half of this episode last year and have for some reason never read it since. i have no idea why because this is really good.

i feel bad for the poor kits - I hope Emerald will be okay! Jewel is pretty cool, her relationship with Bryce is cute, Ruby and Emerald are cute too x3

the vipers are jerks. do they just patrol the border of the forest all day picking fights and take terrority? you know, they sound like my cats...

I was surprised to see two leaders, but that was explained. I think that idea is cool, I've never seen it used before. Amberstar seems like the more level-headed one.

Nightshadow seems cool (i use that word a lot) I kinda felt like he and this group were hiding something for a little while, but i doubt they are

There are a couple of mistakes. Near the beginning, Bryce is leaving to hunt, and she says "I don't any of you disappearing" "need" should be in there.

There's a "where" that should be "were".

I like this a lot so far!

also this has nothing to do with the story, but whenever i read the title for this episode i imagine a bunch of vipers flying majesticlly in a sunset with white feathery wings.