Talk:Rising Prophecy/@comment-24156522-20130827035428

I can see that it's going to be an interesting story, but the grammar is quite distracting. A quick spell check might fix it enough to read without difficulty. Also, I myself have terrible difficulty writing prophecies, so I know they can be hard to think of, but what you wrote was less of a prophecy and more of an exact description of what is to come. "One cat will rise against the power and maybe be killed", for instance, gives out too much of what will happen.

Other than that, I think this may be an exciting read~!