Talk:A Bloody Secret/@comment-25531638-20130923161341

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I really like this :) The first chapter was a perfect way to pull you into the story. And things have always moved at the perfect pace.

I like how Redshadow feels about Blazeflow. It makes it much more interesting, although this story is already amazing.

And the revenge thing is great. I think that it's the perfect idea. Although sometimes I feel that Redshadow dwells too much on it, instead of just going through with it, if you know what I mean.

Blazeflow being a connection to the Clan helps things greatly, I think. It gives the story more than one side. But why did she choose to help Redshadow?

Can't wait for you to write the next chapter, Robo.

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