Talk:Bloody Shadows/@comment-5137480-20150816114013

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This is really good so far, but I'm slightly confused by a few things. How did Shadow kill Gorse if it was a dream? I thought the Clans killed Gorse and that's why she wants revenge.

Otherwise, Shadow's story is so unique. You almost always see the POV of a Clan cat getting picked off by a murderer, but not the actual murderer. Shadow's very well developed- and she has a history that you can actually get into and wonder about. I think the chapters should be a little longer, though.

I think Shadow's downfall will be when she starts to get over Gorse. I'll be looking for this in recent activity!

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