Talk:The Adventure/@comment-8248793-20130731210008

Now for the comment that I didn't make a long time ago.

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I thought the adventure was creative, and it shows their love for adventure, and how good of friends they are. Rainpaw and Aquapaw really describe you and Rainy, so you described their attitudes really well.

I didn't find anymistakes that I know of, but this writing had a flow of peace in it, which disguised the upcoming danger. FireClan.

I really like this episode, and I hurry off for the next.

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