Talk:Time/@comment-29762264-20170705155133

great story so far

In the days one, i can see amberpaw does have some skill fighting, and his reaction to his mentor when his mentor says he had to be faster with his attacks.

and in hours, i can really picture the scenes you describe (i'm nowhere near your skill level heh)

i stalk this page btw

it's a great story, and i can't wait for the next part!

now if you excuse me, i must float away very strangely on a pineapple-copter