Talk:Mean (Fanfic)/@comment-5197876-20160723220325

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I like this so far! Mira and Starfall are very interesting characters, and I think it's curious that they're near opposites. It's interesting that the concepts of Mary-Sue's and human languages exist in this universe, it makes this story very unique!

I wonder what Alastair's up to, I'm rather suspicious of him. I get that he called her 'pretty' not 'fish' but that doesn't mean he's off my radar. Certainly keeping an eye on him.

All in all, I think this is a good story so far, and I'm excited to see where you'll take it from here c:

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