Talk:Glowing Clouds/@comment-24645319-20131112075213/@comment-6040175-20131113070142

What about barkstripe or barkpaw. If it is an apprentice or... Yeah. but this is the most amazing story I have ever seen I love how worm has to prove himself by crossing the rail track. And how that she cat seems so nice to him but he doesn't think that! It is amazing and considering that this Is your first fanfic. YOU ARE AN AMAZING STORY WRITER!!!!,