Talk:Breezepelt's Return/@comment-17305039-20130909235357

WARNING: SPOILERS

This is really a well-written story! A lot of this fits Breezepelt's personality perfectly. However, I feel the need to point out something important.

Antpelt isn't in the Dark Forest anymore.

The reason why is because he died top so times, once by Brokenstar, and another time by Ivypool. His spirit is not there anymore since it was killed, he's basically nowhere now. Just felt the need to point out this mistake.

Other than that, the story is great!

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