Talk:Dewdrop's Revenge/@comment-31569230-20170202052909

Honeymist?

This fanfic looks like to me it'll be the start of a good one. Continue?

Also, Coco's right. Maybe Fallenstar's words would be better written if they were echoing through Dew's mind.

Just saying. You don't have ta, I'm just helpin u make ur story the best it can be.

If you need help with writing, lemme tell ya, it's mah JAM!

Feel free to leaave a message on my talk page. :D