Talk:Ripples/@comment-4751506-20130714163315

Stareh, that was awesome. :D Even though we didn't know Marshberry really well, it was still startling when she died - even though you told me and I rather expected it. The abrupt ending to the chapter was really nice and it suited it better than if you sort of eased it out. It realy exhibited his emotion and I loved it. And now it's my turn! :D