Talk:Amsterdam (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-8248793-20141017012110

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This was better than the others, but a LOT more confusing. The beginning had no connection to the last songfic's ending, so I was utterly confused by how he ended up in the Twoleg's house. Sure, you told us parts of it, but it was too rushed.

This whole episode was rushed, like the parts where Alice died, and how Mosspaw bounced around from one place to another.

But I thought MossXMartha was really cute! I ship them more than I ship FlameXMoss, I really like how Martha acts, I think she's perfect for Moss.

Um, why would a human stab a cat with presumably a sword? That part REALLY disturbed me, and I felt as though it shouldn't have been included, and Abby should have just been chased off or saved.

I still hope you continue tho! :)

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