Talk:Pumpkintail's Guide How Not to Make Mary-Sues/@comment-29491342-20160516223101

Great guide! This will definitely help me, as I'm considering making a show. Two things-

I like the name Vixenkit. Like Darky said, I don't feel that it's stupid, just the female version of a fox, but it's your opinion. Maybe add in Heavystep? I don't think any sane parents should name their kit that.

And secondly, in my show I'm considering naming the two main characters Mistlepool and Cinderecho. I don't think Mistlepool sounds Mary-sue, but does Cinderecho? I think his name might.

Overall, great guide! I hope you make more.