Talk:Locked Secretes/@comment-24143898-20150824084325

Competition post

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Oh okay, I've found out who that Thorn and Shalo were at the beginning of the first episode. >:D Personally, I wasn't expecting that, but yeah I still wanna know more okay hehe

I've decided that Glade is a real shifty character. At times he's really nice, and at others, he's like 'uhh I need to tell you this'. I don't know if I like him that much, but okay.

Woah woah woah, that was unexpected though. Glade is like, a know it all xD. I wonder why Glade didn't stay with them? Is the killing going to be part of the plot someohow?? oooh this has arisen many questions I ask you c:

I felt that at times, however, there was a little too much dialogue, and that there could've been a little bit more to what the cats were actually doing.

Once again, as with the first episode, there were a few minor spelling/grammar mistakes (mainly with Sandpaw being called Sand, or even worse, Sandpit XDDD), but this was also really good! I'm looking forward to number three! <33

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