Talk:Wings/@comment-2143393-20150421005652

Hi! So, first off your story is absolutley lovely. The characters are fun to read about and the plot moves along at a quick pace that keeps people interested. You did really well in keeping me captivated, and I've enjoyed this story a lot. :) If anything I'd say more defined personalities could add to it, but that was more of an issue at the beginning and you've added depth to the characters as the story moves on. And nice job with the grammar, I only spotted a few minor spelling mistakes. All in all, this is a great story and I'll be watching out for updates.