Talk:Morning Blue/@comment-1703139-20130606001428

Wow.

Okay, first of all, if Rambo and Blue don't get together, I'm moving to the moon. That's just too perfect.

Secondly, you have such a distinctive, awesome, bitterly hilarious tone going on with Blue there are parts where my heart just kind of siezed up while reading it. She's so naive, but so fiery at the same time it's bittersweet. She's a character a reader can and will fall in love with.

The story moves qickly but not too quickly and there's never a boring moment. The mechanics are good and honestly I don't see much to be improved upon.

A lot of stories I tend to find myself getting disenchanted with or I just forget to read them, but that will most definitely not be the case with this one.