Talk:The Four Tempests/@comment-7662967-20140907215109

This is awesome so far! I really like Breezepaw's personality already, and I hope you keep developing him throughout the story, because he's a really cool character!

The plot is amazing so far, and I'm really no confused about anything yet, so this is shaping up nicely :D

The only thing I will advise you to do is to make a new paragraph every time someone speaks. It just makes the story easier to read, because you don't have the huge paragraphs.

Other then that, great job, and I hope you'll continue this :D >':'<