Talk:Little Pawprints/@comment-15560748-20150819165657

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Poor Storm. And Dawnfur blaming her for everything.

Okay, so I like how you portray Storm in this episode, I can tell how she's feeling, even though I've never really experienced it myself.

You make it so realisitc, it's nice to have something to think about.

CROWSTORM xD

I have a feeling this won't go well, and Snowbreeze will be happy.

Okay, so tell Snowbreeze that everything will be fine, and if Crowheart doesn't love her, then she'll find a tom/she-cat worth her time and love.

Great job!

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