Talk:Stirrings/@comment-8248793-20160130223811

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I really liked this episode! The last one was certainly calming and I can see why your last episode was named "Danger" as its certain foreshadowing for what is yet to come. You've certain brought up so many interesting points and secrets in this episode and it really fires up the show. This was a great place to put this episode and it certainly shows how good of a writer you are <3

Lazuli continues to intrigue me. I want to know so much more about her and you're doing a very good job in hiding her secrets and revealing just the minimum amount of information about her and the whole Trust/Stirrings to get us to read more.

Wintergreen has a soft voice and I don't really see her much in the text. I feel like you've placed her in as Lazuli's shadow, which takes the attention off your main character. (Don't worry, I do that too much, but it depends on the story to see if that's bad or not). Since I've only read five episodes, I don't know if Wintergreen is meant to be more of the silent voice until we figure out more or not.

But I loved this episode! I'm definitely reading more :)

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