Talk:Black Pelt, White Lie/@comment-26285531-20151231215700

Hmm, I think it's a great start! Your writing has good grammar/punctuation, descriptive details, and you outline on Ashkit's past very well. And O: that ending was a really intense cliffhanger! :) <3

I noticed your fanfic page has two categories which are pretty much the same. I would advise not to this this because it clutters up the wikia and you're basically adding your fanfics to two of the (practically) same pages. Just my opinion though. :)