Talk:It's in Me/@comment-1829516-20140409033902

I glanced at the trees around me, my eyes starting to mist. "The trees remind me of Dewheart and what I lossed in the battle against the rogues." I think you need to change lossed to lost hehe.

But I'm kinda surprised about the whole Dewheart and Storm stuff. It was a bit random to put in though, I liked how they had a past together, but since it was just mentioned now it was a bit out of order.

I really hope Storm doesn't rekindle any feelings for him, or I will cut off her headddd. I also love how you extended the mental unstability of Shade ahhh