Talk:First Steps/@comment-5488450-20130804184017

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This is really cool, Ginger, you should definetly continue with it! It was cute so far, and the writing is very well done<3 You can't help 'aww'ing at the kits and their innocence has been so well charachterized, proving us with a lot of room to observe charrie development!

A few things I might recommend were making the beginning a little smoother-it seemed almost a little subtle, as did the transition to the scene with the snow. And the only other thing I can think of is WORKING ON IT :) The names for your cats were also very good and realistic!

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