Talk:Even So/@comment-5342796-20150708154608



Whoa, okay, I love Lash. She's incredible and intriguing and unique.

And the story you're setting up is really good too. It's such an interesting way to guarantee loyalty, for the overseer to have rescued his followers from certain death. Since they're all such young cats, it definitely makes it so much harder for them to break trust/their loyalty to the overseer, even though he treats them really badly now.

I'm super excited to see more! I have a feeling this story has so much more incredible and exciting stuff planned. You've already created a great note of suspense and I'm sure you'll deliver on it. Excellent writing! And somehow, even with just what's already written, you've already started to characterize Lash as a complex and strong character with a very strange outlook on life, given her circumstances. I'm excited to learn even more about her.

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