Talk:The Fall/@comment-28076378-20161126011924

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This was a great first chapter; it was well written as well. I like this story, I'm totally going to read more. My favorite character is Ravenwing, he is amazing.

Silvershade is really chill, and I like that about her, she's probably my second favorite. I wonder if her and Ravenwing will become... something...

Snowfire's a good character too, I like how she doesn't want to be leader; most young warriors would probably have died of happiness if they were told they would be leading their Clan

I don't really know what to think of Ashpaw yet, but I'm looking forward to seeing more of him.

The story is cool too, all the Clans are at war... I wonder what started it...

This is a great story so far, and I am looking forward to reading more!

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