Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-27725192-20170111005940

Spoilers

Prologue

Niiiiice I like how you described the battle (is it a battle)? It's very descriptive! I wonder who the narrator is. And LightClan sure doesn't sound like a good Clan if they're screaming "Kill!" And who are they killing?

Sorry for short comment, will get to the other chapters once I bother to read them. :D