Talk:Just a Promise/@comment-8248793-20140901021347

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Holy fudge I'm crying.

I had a problem with how Silversong reacted. How does she know that Rainstorm made a problem to Mistfall?

Anyways, that was a heartbreaking one-shot, and I utterly loved the way you shaped it. My only problem with the formatting was how you switched the POVs using first person. I would have suggested using third person, because it would be less jarring and confusing.

I loved Rainstorm more than I loved Mistfall, though I wanted to ship RussetXMist lol

Rainstorm had a diverse personality, and in a short time, you shaped her perfectly and it made the promise harder to keep.

Mistfall was more of the cat that I wouldn't want to have as a sister, but she worked perfectly as a medicine cat.

Another thing I didn't understand was why Rainstorm didn't attack ASAP when she saw Mistfall dying... I dunno, maybe I read it wrong?

It's good tho :) <3

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