Talk:Firepelt's Eternity/Pilot/@comment-29071457-20160709135153

Woah. This took me by surprise. It wasn't that bloody. I like it more than I thought I would. The "Preface" part was really good. I like how you made the bg contrast between Amber's father and Amber. She was forced to go to the Dark Arts, yeah, but she had a crush on Cardinal. Eh, this is so far a really decent show that I'll recommend others to read!