Talk:Lose You

Did you like this? This is the longest of my current four short stories about Hiddensun and Summitstorm and I may make another one entitled Rememberance. (PS: Don't take the title if you read this and you can probably guess what it will be about.) Please review! Any constructive criticism is welcome (Remember, CONSTRUCTIVE)--AutumnSky 21:27, October 17, 2009 (UTC)