Talk:Two Brothers and a Patricide/@comment-8248793-20141215041628

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I'll comment on each shard and see what I can piece together :P

Follower

I definitely liked how you started these Shards, and I'm aware you don't quite know how you're going to piece this all together, but I think this might revolve around Moonpaw?

Dark Rivers

I connected "Holly" with "Hollyberry", but I don't think that's it. There's  not much I can get from here, but I think Moonpaw might be involved with this one too.

Shot Me Down

I'm pretty sure Moonpaw's the only one with first person POV, and I think she must be part of this one too. I'm PRETTY sure Moonpaw's the main charrie, and this revolves around her.

My Fault

This was just so cute, I couldn't bear Bramble's cruelness D: There's nothing to guess here for me, I need more clues to figure out what happened.

Chased Away

I have no idea what Swirlpaw and Oakpaw are to this story, so I'll leave this here. They don't really belong yet I guess.

Deeper Than It Seems

Suddenly I'm not so sure this is Moonpaw, but I'm going to go with my theory. I think perhaps this was when Moonpaw left Bramblepaw?

Admit It

Honestly I'm hating Bramblepaw in these short shard pieces you've given me. I really want to know what Moonpaw means, and I'm starting to think that Moonpaw and Icepaw may be the first person POV ones.

Overrated, Underrated

Instead of thinking this is Moonpaw, I actually think this might be Icepaw. Maybe that's why she became the way she is? idk

OVERAL GUESS OF SECRET: Something to do with Moonpaw and Icepaw for sure, that's all I got.

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