Talk:It's a World of Wonders/@comment-25250489-20150409040139

Hiya! I sorry that I didn't comment on the first episode, I just really didn't know how to write anything about ze storie. (And just so you know, mu un-constructiveness isn't getting any better for this comment. I think.)

Using a constructiveness tip from you on my talk page,

I like the way you developed your characters! Well, I actually do! I know that's kinda weird to say right now, on the second episode of the second season, but I'm talking about the new characters like Flameheart and the other new ones.

I hope Crowheart will get back together with Storm. I just do.

I like the names Petalflutter and Waterbreeze :)

One mistake that I noticed (well, at least it's a mistake in my opinion): Flameheart said that he 'engaged not so long ago'. Cats don't get engaged. But I'm sure you knew that already, I was just saying that... because... I think it's a mistake.... Yeah.

(So is this constructive? :D)