Talk:Scarred Trust/@comment-24143898-20150531225131

OKAY FIREY

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Oh, dear. Seriously, though, I know this is amazing. <3

Leafstripe is so well developed - the way that I wanted her to be (<3) - and I love her. <3 Alderleaf is also great, and I feel that he's a great character too - and Twigfall. <3

Oh, Leafstripe just got attacked.... :o I seriously wonder what's going to happen next... and I feel sorry for Alderleaf, the poor thing could do nothing for his sister... omsc the heartstrings seriously hooks you in it's lovely <3

Chapter Three is my favourite chapter so far - it's so detailed (as what goes for the whole story), and you can really feel Leafstripe's emotions and yeah, I love Leafstripe obviously poor kitty <3

Seriously, I'm in awe - this is really good okay I can't see anything to improve it's that good

(I seriously hope this is constructive enough whoops, but I said what I liked so it counts riiight???)

I seriously want you to right more <3

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