Talk:The Daylight Cave/@comment-5197876-20170718232042

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I like the start of this! I know there's not a lot written so far, but what is here is well written. Acornheart and Ella interest me quite a bit, and so does Brooksong, even though we haven't met the last of these three quite yet, aha.

The opening description of the cave is really nice. I actually felt for a moment that I was there.

Good work! I know I'll be back to keep reading this.