Talk:Shadows of the Dark/@comment-5197876-20150321182027

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Alright, that prologue set the stage. Very intense, and I like that. It's a great lead in to your story. Also those poor kits <3

The battle went by quickly, but that's okay for now. Hopefully future chapters will touch on it again. Why did Nightleap kill Applewhisker? That's what I want to know.

The prologue's a little confusing, and I hope it gets cleared up later. Couple grammar mistakes, but they don't take away from the whole of the thing.

The kits are super cute, by the way. I love kits. Whatever they're doing by the border, I hope they'll be okay <3.

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