Talk:The Runaways/@comment-8248793-20140216170602

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Great so far Dawn :D

I love how Mudtail and Leafwhisper like each other, and I hope they're the runaways. I can't wait to see what will happen next though.

I love Fishpaw's personality, though I think it's strange that ShadowClan would have an apprentice called Fishpaw, when it's usually RiverClan with the fishy names.

Like Robo below, more details would be nicer, though I see you've been adding more details in th third chapter :) I also agree with Robo that your poetry is real good, and the prologue was great :)

I can't wait to see what will happen next, and I ship Mud X Leaf all the way <333

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