Talk:More Than One Flame/@comment-5197876-20161223031118

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Interesting start. I like the idea of alternate universes playing into this fic, and the characters so far seem neat. My favourite character is Blazing Flame, absolutely.

My only gripe with this so far is that it has a lot of spelling and grammar errors, which made it a little difficult to read. Besides that though, this is really good!

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