Talk:The Main Camp/@comment-5342796-20150522111641



I ship BrownXShade more to be perfectly honest, but Tigerstripe dying... D: And poor Shade! Losing him must've been awful.

This was a really good episode: action-packed and riveting. You do a really good job of bringing up all your characters and presenting their personalities & attitudes about different things, even as you're writing such a fast-paced action story. I liked the tense but tolerant dynamic of the rogue-Clan alliance, and the way Storm reacted when she realized they were working together. AND THEY SAVED STORM! HOORAY!

The battle was especially well-written. Well done, Firey! <3

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