Talk:Deadly Fate: The Beginning/@comment-25531638-20130616220524

That was quite an interesting story. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too serious. And the beginning seemed a bit similiar to book 1 of the New Prophecy's prologue. But I like how you portrayed Spottedpaw as kind of fiery and spunky, even when she has her paw splayed, half blind, and a runt.