Talk:Dreams of You/@comment-1829516-20140412234540

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I'm glad you finally made her give birth. I was waiting for so long to see when her kits would come! But she should really stay back on the journey now, I don't think she should try fighting rogues when she has kits to protect.

I think you should expand on the fact the rogues want to destroy the Clans. You should give them some reasons for destroying the Clans and some cool backstories for the rogues. It'd be cool to see the history of them, so we can emphasize on their side of wiping out the Clans.

The end was hilarious. People thinking Storm is the father heh

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