Talk:The Story of Icewrath, Featherswirl, and Craneheart/@comment-7270915-20130321040312

I have looked at your story, as you requested. It's okay, but I feel that there is something lacking. Then again, I dislike romance novels - not to say that romances are bad, but I like adventures - and your story simply seems to be focusing on the love pentagon between Feather, Ice, Crane, Electric, and Marble, which might be why I don't connect with it. Sorry.