Talk:Captivate/@comment-25250489-20150526192219

Wow, this story is interesting! You are a good writer- the story has good grammer, believable situations and interesting writing.

I loved how the story started out with an adult cat named Fernpelt who already had a mate and kits due soon, and then it traveled back in time to when she was a kit. Creative idea to start out a story, luv it!

The only thing that I'm confused about was, why did Sandstorm show a mischevious kit a tunnel that she could escape through, and then simply tell her not to go through it? How could she have not have expected that Fernkit would escape anyway?

This story is really cool, and I want to read more!

I'm sorry that you practically had no comments before I posted this one. I should have posted the comment way before now, but wikia was giving me a vERy annoying problem D:<

I wrote out the whOle comment, then tried to post it, but it was like it was deleted! So I kept writing that comment over and over again, but it got deleted each time. So then life got very busy, and I kept remembering that I wanted to post this comment for you but never could get around to it. So nOw, as you can see it finally worked.

TRIUMPH :DDDDDD