Talk:The lost kit/@comment-27704197-20160306113604

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It's Interesting so far but I can't  tell who's POV it's in. Also when a new person talks indent, it makes it look professional (it's also correct ) like ex:

"I want a cookie!" Flowerpaw meowed rudely..

"No cookie for you!" Darktail meowed.

But it's really interesting. I know it's a beginning so that's all I am going go say. I can't wait for more!

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