Talk:Descend/@comment-8248793-20151124012651

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Ooh I hope what Falconpaw said isn't true because Talon seems like the nicer of the Birds and I want to see if I'm right about her being an ally of Aspenpaw's. I do like your description of the eagle and of the other cats, although you seemed to have stopped giving them a good description after a few of them.

Hm...Sunset/Aspen is a bit rushed. I'll be honest I'm not really seeing them. You should definitely give it some time and allow them to develop and talk more before throwing in ideas of love :) (huh I'm literally contradicting with Flame below me...)

I do agree you could have had a bit more dialogue to engage the apprentices more but that's fine :) The description is good enough<3

You've got me entangled in all these secrets that make me want to read more in order to find out what's really going on!

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