Talk:Sheet of Ice/@comment-25653434-20150412030457

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Yet agan amazing job Firey, even if you are revising this to make it better *claps loudly

I like how you used this episode as a turning point for Dawnfur and Storm to become closer. Thats clever. I like how Dawnfur was about to be whisked away in the same way that Reedtail was but his time Storm managed to save her showing to Dawnfur that she really did try to save Reedtail.