Talk:Smokeshadows Prophecy/@comment-26285531-20150719185413

I liked it so far, but I think you could have been a bit more revealing as to what was going on. :)

Also, every cat seems so angry at each other, always snapping and snarling! If that was your intention, I think it was a great show of the emotions of the cats in the Clan. Love it and you <3