Talk:Ruined/@comment-26432133-20171012233444

what if i rewrote ruined from leafpelt's perspective and expanded more on his obsession with ashheart and ruining ruinpaw's life, while introducing a character who genuinely loves leafpelt and works sort of as a voice of reason trying to pull him away from his evil obsession but he ignores her and becomes the monster he is, with her eventually being forced to join ruinpaw and kill leafpelt.

hm.

maybe i'll do that.