User blog comment:Ivystorm/Why doesn't anyone comment?/@comment-1333071-20110530223633

I also can't help but notice that you made this blog about 20 minutes after writing your story... and there was only a description. What do you expect? A flood about how great it's gonna be? Readers comment when:
 * There's a cliffhanger
 * The story is seriously really good
 * They have a question

So calm down and wait. People here will comment. It takes a while.