Talk:Night of Beginnings/@comment-24143898-20150403042958

(Competition Post)

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Okay, first of all. Roseleaf and Bircthtalon. Why? D:

Silverleaf was an interesting character - I really liked her.

I didn't like Blackheart - I wanted her to die. As for her killing Dimfeather - unexpected, but I really liked that scene.

The ending was perfect, as well. It really did wind up the story well. <3

Apart from the odd spelling mistake and other issues, this was really good! I'll read the rest of the series. <3

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