Talk:Pumpkintail's Guide: How Not to Make Mary-Sues/@comment-24766822-20160516201148

Nice guide! ^^ I only have two complaints: Perhaps you could change the title of your guide to "Pumpkintail's Guide: How not to make Mary-Sues", or, "Pumpkintail's Guide to creating Non-Mary-Sues" or something along those lines. Proper grammar in a title is key. :) I'm not trying to be nitpicky, but it is a valid suggestion, I believe.

Also, I don't feel that Vixenkit is a stupid name. It's basically naming your kit Foxkit- except female. But I have to agree with you on your second choice- Havenpelt is indeed a strange name. I think you should add Flashnose to that list as well, though! I feel that Flashnose is probably the dumbest name in Warriors.

I like how you have snippets of stories for examples- very nice, and it even makes your points clearer. Excellent work!

Good job, Pumpkintail, if you make any more guides, I'll keep an eye out.