Talk:The Blossoming Birch tree - Part 2/@comment-7270915-20130604165739

Well, you've done really well with the story and the character development. My problem is the fact Smokepaw and Kestrel both fall in love the moment they meet, they've only known each other for a couple days, and they're already willing to leave their Clan or Tribe for each other. Frankly, I don't believe in love at first sight. I believe in infatuation at first sight, but not love. But that's just my opinion.

Plus, the Clans and the Tribe accept SkyClan's existance and these cats with virtually no complaint or quarrel. If I was a part of them, I would think these lost cats were liars, but agian, that's just my opinion. You can do whatever you want with the story -it's your story, after all.