Talk:Mousefur's Secret/@comment-36565815-20180813213004

I’m super sorry. I understand you want to write fanfic. I don’t know if you did it on purpose, but this is pretty much copying Bluestar’s Prophecy. Don’t get me wrong, it’s an interesting story. I would love to read this... but is already made. Please don’t be offended. My favorite book in warriors is Bluestar’s Prophecy, and this is pretty much it only Mousefur and Longtail dies. Anyway, Longtail is to young to have kits with Mousefur, who is pretty old.

Have a nice day,

~xFlyingsquirrelx