Talk:If Cloudtail Left Brightheart For Daisy/@comment-24495864-20130709154100

I hate Daisy soooooo much. >:D  Anyway, back to the story.

It could use a bit more paragraphs, for when another cat is speaking. But I like how Daisy's a jerkface like I always imagined, and I like how Brightheart was made deputy! Characters are. . . Like characters, I suppose.

I can't think of anything else. When my brain is working, I'll probably post another comment.