Goldenflower's Pain

Goldenflower's Pain
This is a poem that's kinda in response to the poem His loss Which by the way I LOVE!!! So anyways here it is.

The tom loved power More then his mate And more then his life they say And he forgot about the she-cat that he pledged his heart to.

The she-cat loved him But felt so betrayed And her heart was broken When he went away

And their kits were scorned Though it wasn't their fault So one ran away to try to live in peace And one prove his loyalty

And if you can understand that the tom Would ditch his mate for power Then you have just begun To feel the pain of Goldenflower.

Not very good I know but anyways, tell me what you think.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:28, February 20, 2010 (UTC)