Talk:Murder!/@comment-26432133-20170328183401

Okie dokie!

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I'd say my only gripe is that the song and Rookclaw are versions of a very stereotypical, cliche, and romanticized insanity. This story does do well at spinning this cliche, but I personally dislike this representation of insanity.

I like Rookclaw, his thought process is very interesting. The voice in his head is a nice touch. I also like how Rookclaw's somewhat responsible for his actions rather than it all being the voice's fault- as in, choosing to kill cats. I really love how Rookclaw is good at killing, but terrible at fighting, which tones down his violent aspect to a somewhat understandable level. Your writing style is beautiful and really pretty, btw ^^

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Overall, I'd say the only problem with this story is just the insanity and kill-everything aspect. Other than that, everything is beautifully written and a nice story. Great job, Darky!