Talk:The Ocean/@comment-25630395-20150723092938

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This story was recommended to me and it is absoluetly fabulous! I can't wait for you finish this, it's so great.

The pace of the story suits it perfectly, it's not that fast, but it's reasonably slow. The relationship between Wave and Hollytail is built up really well, it makes sense why she cares for Wave initially (as she reminds Hollytail of Finchflight). That makes it more believable because it's not like Hollytail's suddenly goes I LUV YOU WAVE LETS BE FRIENDS FOREVER. *coughs* anyways, their friendship is so sweet and I can see Hollytail will eventually realize she cares for Wave not just as a source of information.

I really, really love Hollytail so much :D she's so realistic and relatable, and her developement makes sense. Like how the Clan is skeptical of her now her plan resulted in the death of Foxfang. The way she doubts herself is not annoying... and she doesn't seem like the typical outcast and negative character. Ahh I just love her so much.

The chemistry between Finch, Fox, and Holly is adorable. I feel like Finch and Fox are perfect <3 I dunno about FinchflightXHollytail... the latter just seems to serious for the former.

The emotions, descriptions, and relationships are so vivid and just plain perfect. I'm absolutely in love with this story... amazing job, Wetty!! :)

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