Talk:The Starry Cat/@comment-5342796-20130726164822

Spoiler alert :3

Okay, this is a really good start to the story :) I like the way the plot is going, and the characters are interesting. I do have a few suggestions, if you don't mind xD

As I said, the plot is really good in this, but I think you could try "fleshing it out" a little bit. Add a little more description to it; it seems slightly disjointed at parts. I like the way you included Moonpaw's thoughts, and now I'd like to know a little more about her character. I think this is a good start to the series, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. :)