Talk:Torn Down/@comment-15560748-20160103181426

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THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD

I NEED TO LEARN TO WRITE AS GOOD AS YOU

I NEED THE NEXT EPISODE

I only have one episode of Fire Rainbow out, and you already got three episode of Rise. But you can't compare anything to this (lol my writing sucks) and it's just utter perfection. This is just crazy good. I don't even know where you come up with these ideas.

So anyway, Nightshadow. Throughout the last three episodes, you can pretty much see that he's kind, helpful, and that he cares a lot about Bryce in general. I would like to have a friend like that; one who will watch out for you no matter what. Because I usually end up getting myself into sticky situations due to my utter stupidity.

NO THEY GOT CAUGHT

But overall, I think that's what makes it more interesting. Instead of escaping to the Coalition, they end up getting captured, and Sara and Cloud die. Poor Jewel, Ruby, Emerald, and Bryce. (I just realized that Bryce was the only one not named after a jewel :p Why is that?)

I think I know what Bryce's ship will be. It'll be Bryce|x|Terran maybe. Their relationship reminds me a bit of Ricky|x|Lux from Flicker. Lux/Bryce is the prisoner, and then Ricky/Terran kinda likes them and BOOM... your romance stories are so good ;)

But anyway, I liked this episode a lot. The pace was nice, and so were the details. I could actually feel like I was Bryce, and I was able to paint a picture of everything happening in my mind. It was pretty scary tho :c

Great job!! <3

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