Talk:This Is the End/@comment-24495864-20130925012230

Er mah gerd.

Er mah StarClan, Blade.

Can I just say

That I want to hug this story?

~Spoilers~

Prolouge: The dream in the this part was... Oh StarClan, it was awesome. The mysterious character (that I couldn't figure out at first) has so much emotion. A reader can feel what the character is feeling (does that make sense?) and the last line...

'' So this is the end. ''

That is an awesome line. Yes, it's just the title with 'So' in front of it, but still... It adds a touch of suspense to the story.

The beginning of Chapter 1 is a summary of a normal day, with Echopaw and Bramblepaw training. Mistyrain shows up, all that stuff. The dream a bit later, though. It adds depth to the chapter, and the character's feeling is deeply expressed through thoughts. And then when the character mentions that she died adds mystery to the plot.

Throughout this, more and more of Echopaw's traits are revealed. Her dreams add so much depth in every word, and I loved the suspense. How other Echopaw sacrificed herself to save Bramblepaw and Echopaw was just... just... *cries*

When other Echopaw died, laying down, fading, I nearly cried at that part. Echopaw's emotion was well drawn out, and how she had Bramblepaw by her side every step of the way was true loyalty, and it was touching, too, Echopaw having such a close friend beside her.

Blade, I love this. So much. And yaaaay I'm in the acknowlegements! :D

Aaaaaaaaaaand Clawderp. X3 I laughed at that. I like how you added such a funny line to lighten a serious story.

Wow, I think this is the longest comment I've ever made. XD

~Spoilers~