Talk:Ginger Dawn/@comment-5342796-20130624140213

This is a really good story. I mean, I like the charries and everything, and the fact that it's NightClan-based always helps. But I do feel compelled to agree with Darky; the whole love-at-first sight thing always makes me think the tom fell for the she-cat because of her looks. And at the end, the whole fight and the thing with May was rather fast-paced and confusing... but both Dawnpaw and Gingerstripe seem like interesting charries you could do a lot with. :)