Talk:Wrath/@comment-26943414-20160109150133/@comment-24766822-20160110051038

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I'm glad you like the poem! (I can't seem to keep them off my fanfictions. XD)

You caught that! Not everybody realises that Volepaw was, in fact, an actual character in the book. As you said, Volepaw was hardly even mentioned. I felt that his life and death were surrounded by a great deal of mystery, so I wanted to shed a little more light on his character.

And yep, that's what this story is supposed to do! I despise Brokenstar myself, and I find it odd that he is often underrated. Brokenstar was a horrible, hateful monster, a true villain beyond doubt. However, let me tell you, he is the most fun character to write. ;)

You're not the only one who has questioned Tansypaw's demise, by the way! It's actually very complicated; I might reveal more about what happened later in the story. I'm not sure. But I can tell you this: Tansypaw's death wasn't her fault nor Volepaw's.

Actually, the cat Volepaw attacked is one you should know. She's played a big part in the series.

All comments are helpful! I appreciate any feedback you guys send me. :)

Thanks so much, Ash! I'm glad you like it so far.

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