Talk:Cracked/@comment-5342796-20150909014625

competition post



Dang.

These episodes keep getting more intense, I can't even handle it.

This one was probably my favorite so far. So much happened. You do a great job with descriptive writing. Like a lot of what happens in this show is unheard of, it's fantasy, which means you have to work three times as hard to convey everything clearly to the reader--but you do it so excellently! I can visualize everything in my mind's eye, I can see it come to life, and you add emotion in the background as well: wonder, fear, curiosity... the reader feels all this vicariously as Wintergreen experiences it.

I want to know know more about what Wintergreen saw--that cat city or whatever. I want to know what all of this means.

Is Lazuli really dead? D: I take back what I said about not trusting her! She was a good friend... I REALLY HOPE SHE ISN'T DEAD LIKE THAT'D BE SO FREAKING SAD. I DON'T WANT WINTERGREEN TO HAVE TO CONTINUE HER JOURNEY ALONE.

GREAT JOB MIST!!! KEEP IT UP, THIS SHOW IS GETTING SO GOOD

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