Talk:Leafpool Meets Jayfeather/@comment-98.156.109.148-20120614160738

Awww! Jayfeather is cute! He's always been my favorite, but he could definitely use some more emotion. He sounds like bella in twighlight- never has feelings. Try to be a little more deep when you write these stories. Show how the character really feels about something. You can't rush these stories, you have to write them from your heart!:)