Talk:Sunburns/@comment-5342796-20150604112724



Aw omg, I loved the scene at the beginning with Brownshade. Especially when Storm walked in on them, because that is such a funny, classic sister moment: the annoying little sister walking in on the older one and her boyfriend. xD

Willowfur's past was really eye-opening. I felt so horrible for her, having to live with the guilt, the dark memories, the knowledge of her and her mother's relationship being dashed to pieces. It wasn't her fault, but she must've felt like it was, especially since her mother died and she never got closure. :( You did a really good job creating a backstory for her. It doesn't excuse rudeness, but it gives a reason for it.

And the ending! Oh my gosh! Storm can't get hurt D:

I really hate Sunny already, wow. Like we haven't seen a ton of her plan but NO ONE TOUCHES STORM LIKE THAT.

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