Talk:Bad Blood(Songfic)/@comment-5342796-20160706140229



'CAUSE BABY NOW WE GOT BAD BLOOD *head slams to the beat*

I love this song and I love 1989 and I love Taylor Swift! I love (wowie I'm full of love today lol) your idea of making this song about Tigerstar and everyone he's wronged; that was not the take I expected, and I really like it, rather than inventing some petty feud to make it about. I also like the approach of switching a line of song with a line of story; usually I don't mind the paragraphs too much, but I feel like the short, staccato bursts of story work well in punctuating the fierceness of each line of the song.

My only tip is the ending was a  little bit abrupt, maybe slide in a little more story in between all those lyrics? But that might just be my preference; that might have been totally intentional.

Great job! I liked it a lot!

>SPOILERS<