Talk:Two Birds/@comment-25110166-20170710063638

(Spoilers lol)

Patch!!! how am I just now finding this? God, I haven't like sat down and just read a whole story of yours in like two years. That changed today. You have improved SO much with your writing. Something about the style, dialogue mostly, I can tell are still you but you've improved so much with details and structural tweaks. Also the grammar and wording is very fluent. :p I like Talonpaw more than Creekpaw. As a character. Is that weird? I mean obviously she's crazy but that makes her all the more interesting I think. I read the prologue at the top after I read the rest of the story and honestly, I was kind of hoping Creekpaw would kill her. (Also the trivia thing you wrote about why Talonfang is messed up.. I actually had a good laugh out loud at that.) The only thing that caught me off guard was the insane amount of kits but I understand they're from a role play, so you're off the hook. Can't help but notice the cover art as well, beautiful job. Reminds me of the gorgeous cover of Lost you did a whole back (still not cover that) I can't wait to read the rest of this! Good seeing your work again Patch!