Talk:Fire It Up/@comment-5277627-20140109003643

CHAPTER ONE COMMENT

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This is a good chapter, although I bloody hate massive timeskips... I think the names you gave them are lovely, and I love Jaypaw. Like, OMG. Please feature him more/again! I really like how you've developed the personalities of the characters. Tangle gets a feeling that Violetpaw will be evil. Anywho....

YOU MADE ME MATES WITH ARTI, WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

I'M IN YOUR STORY, WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

I ACTUALLY READ A STORY WITHOUT DYING OF BOREDOM, WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

On with chapter two!

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