Talk:Inside The Mind/@comment-25531638-20130913041401

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To be honest, until now I haven't read anything of yours except for BBTC. So it was unexpected how good this fanfic is :D

I love the "going inside the mind" thing, it was really original. And the beginning was great, it just pulled me in. I think Maplefern is cool too :)

It was sort of confusing at parts though, and sometimes I would suggest more detail.

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