Talk:Young Love/@comment-5488450-20130226190909

I l-o-v-e-d this one (see what I did there? ANYONE?) just like you predicted ;)

Well there were lots of things I loved about this episode. The first one, is sort of the break from action. You've worn out our gotta-punch-them-FireClan-jerks nerves WAY too much in the past weeks, and this was a nice, but dramatic, break from theat, as you began to work our ADMIT-YOU-LOVE-THEM-ALREADY (we are excluding BrookXGorse here xD) nerve, which has not been twisted in quite a while :P

Oh my, the drama and love in the air... I personally ship ShadowXOak, simply because I don't like Shadowsong and I would love for her to be tortured by having to raise kits. Oak could be a good father though :3 AdderXSIlver IS REALLY cute... but BadgerXSilver is so much cuter <333 YOU KNOW IT IS xD I love the POV switching between the guys and the girls, and the names are so cute :3 If they really do have kits, they should name one Unicornkit and the other one Queenkit (In honor of me, of course ;)) And Waterstar is such a boohead, although I suppose we can thank him for the girl/guy talk.

Although I wasn't sure what Oak meant at the beginning when he said, "I didn't mean it like that." Do I want to know? xD

The ending was one of the best I have ever seen in this series, Arti. I know I'm dead, but that doesn't mean Gorsefur can't join me in StarClan some day. Since he's over Brookfall and all. They were actually quote cute at first, but I like how you've begun to cut them off from each other, because I'll admit, their love was starting to get a little dull and dramaless. This was the perfect touch!

There was like one spelling mistake I think; don't remember where I read this a while ago (forgot to comment again) but overrall you had great spelling and grammar!

Can't wait for the next episode :D