Talk:Intoxicating Touch/@comment-8248793-20140821025202

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amg well that was creepy, amazing, and utterly shocking.

So I guess MelodyXburnt is dead now in two chapters D: I be sad nu. I still think you should have dragged her death longer, that way we could get into her, know her, and utterly adore her before you killed her. (more heartbreaking)

Wow the ending really surprised me, I nearly freaked out when you described these Smoke thingies xD

I think you should describe what happened about the war and such, you told us that they all disappeared, and now Spiderstar is haunting Winterleaf... I think you need to change that a bit.

Other than that, this is amazing!

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