Talk:Sheet of Ice/@comment-1703139-20141226021641

I will say I like that this is realistic. Like, you can't just go out on a quest and have everything go right. You go out on a quest and almost as soon as you start, one cat vanishes and you get stuck in a storm for days.

I like the new Dawn and Storm friendship, but I wish there was a little more about it. Since there's only one POV, it's hard to get other thoughts besides Storm's, but Dawn giving some indication that Storm has proven herself/whatever might be helpful.

I LOVE Snow though. Like, what a boss. It's hard to talk a lot about her, because there's not a ton to go on, but seriously, she's so tough.

I felt bad for Dawn though. I think it's nice that everyone's on Storm's side, but I feel like some of them might at least subconciously blame her for losing Reed? I dunno. xD

Anyways, can't wait to go get th next onr!