Talk:Flicker/@comment-15560748-20150907031523

competition post

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Six:

Ahhh Ricky/Lux. It's honestly such a cool ship.

He's so damn sweet <3

Seven:

Okay, so Lina sucks and Lux is cool and yeahhh. But I think this chapter was a bit rushed, but it might have been because of my fast reading, though maybe you should check it, I dunno.

It was nice to have Lux's plans working until "the pain" comes. But still, cool chapter :)

Eight:

Is this a dream or a vision? I'm kinda confused. Because I know her parents are dead, and why are they there right now?

You should probably italisize the parts that are her dream and visons to kinda make things a bit less confusing.

Great job, and I can't wait for more ! :)

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