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I just realized I haven't read this in like a million light years. Sowwy. Now,

SPOILER ALERT

Dangerous Games:

Poppy is a beast, and I hope I get to see more of her later. Her adventures are interestng, and it caused the destruction of two Clans. Which is why she's beast. xD I love the personality you gave her, because it showed her arrogance, yet the softness in her.

Dangerous Escape:

I like how PebbleClan was already falling apart when the Twolegs came. And Rainstar was right to leave them, cause they're the ones who wouldn't listen. Though I was wondering, was PebbleClan a really big Clan? And where will the Twolegs come next? And why would Twolegs shoot cats?

Failed Escape:

Now what happened with StoneClan? Was it the Twolegs again? Hailstar is a great leader, because I can see you put caution and passion in her. I like how you made the Clan panic and pretty much die out. They're kinda like PebbleClan, though they died cause they were fighting.

Failed Security:

Thunder's gone! I really love the feelings in the mother, like how she didn't seem to really care about Thunder, but she cared for Fern more. And, I also like how you changed the kits names, and the way you told us about it. Fern said, "Where is Thunderk- Thunder." That was a great way to tell us that she changed their names.

Lost Security:

I do like this new life Tuhnder's is getting. I mean, I'm guessing he's like the assasin, cause that would be cool. :D

END OF SPOILER ALERT

(And this is why I can't adopt this story. Cause I have finished none of my series yet. xD)