Talk:Dead and Gone/@comment-8248793-20131107234756

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Oh, this is a great start! So gruesome in so many ways, and so mysterious in others. There isn't much written, but so much suspense has been built.

I love how the prologue was written, the fighting, the anger, and how mysterious this Tribe, and Clans were.

one question. Why did they take Blackkit away? Perhaps I will learn more, but I just wanted to ask it, since it was the one part that confused me.

And also at the end of the prologue, you wrote "Now following her guard, she bowed her downwards." Er... She bowed her downwards doesn't quite make sense. Perhaps you made a mistake?

This is great, and I love how much suspense has been put in so far.

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