Talk:The Elite Circle/@comment-15560748-20160131142700

>spoilers<

I got excited as sson as it said "Inspired from Legend" because I read it, and I'll actually know what's going on for once.

So I can tell that Mya is (obviously) June, and that Byrk is a bit like Thomas, I should think; though her mother doesn't remind me too much of Metias.

THE ASSESSOR IS COMMANDER JAMESON, I THINK

But the details were good, and I like how you start to set a solid personality for Mya; I can tell that she's a bit stubborn and prideful; she wouldn't sacrifice her pride by telling her mother or Byrk or the assessor that it might be too much.

Anyway, I thought it was fantastic <3

(Riot, is Day, right? Is there going to be a Tess as well?)

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