Talk:The Story of Their Life/@comment-15560748-20150826163903

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Haha Snow I told you I would comment <3

This story isn't as bad as you said it was. I actually kinda liked it.

Everything seemed pretty interesting, but you should probably make the chapters a bit more detailed.

Because I don't really have any idea what each cat/kits look like except that warrior who is probably Splashfur's real mate.

This was good, and I think you shoudl finish it! :)

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