Talk:Fire It Up/@comment-25531638-20140103200223

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Wow. This is really amazing.

I love the whole storytelling perspective thing you have going on. It gives the story much more depth, and the way that you gave us the hint of Violetflame doing something bad, that was enough to pull us into the story.

I also love the way that the cats are named after people on WFW :3

The story has a good flow as well. The plot moves at just the right place :)

Although, occasionally you make some typos, like towards the end you spelled "quite" as "wuite". Just those little errors that can be easily fixed.

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