Talk:Nightmare (Series)/@comment-8248793-20141028010538

I'm gonna comment on the main page c:

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Welcome to the Family

I don't know, but I felt as though the lyrics didn't always go with the story. Like it put an effect on the story, but it wasn't very matching.

I really loved the story so far. Cinderkit really shown to me as a kit who could deal with his life, not hte type to crumble to the depression of having a bad family. Though I kind of wished you gave more of a backstory other than that Cinderkit had pushed away the sister he could have had. Also, I didn't know Cinderkit's gender until I saw your comment to Brighty. Perhaps you could have made that more clear?

This was very well developed, and I felt as though you really put your heart into this. It's not exactly the typical Clan life a kit would have, which made the idea even more unique.

I'm begging to know what happens next, but I believe the other songfics are in next week's readings, so I'll hold on till next week :3

I like how you developed the characters, and how each of them had their own way of dealing with things. None of them had a duplicate personality.

This was really good, Stormy! <3

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