Talk:Falling Through The Stars/@comment-7662967-20140715200916

~Spoilers~

This is really good! The prologue was intense and exciting, and it really drew me in. It was a little confusing, but I bet it will explain itself in time, just like mine do XP

I like the way Lilykit feels so tiny in her tribe, such a realistic feeling.

Rainkit is so cute! I like the way you develop the two sisters, and how they are different, not copies of each other.

The kit love thing can be cute, but it never did make much sense to me (I mean since when do 3-6 year olds talk about things like that?

Anyway, all in all I think this is off to a great start! I like it!