Talk:Beautiful Lies/@comment-8248793-20160116004327

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Oh man. That was certainly intense but I'm so glad you've published this for my bday <3 It means so much that you'd go out of your way just to give me this! Even though you took away some moments of Breeze/Ryan cause she can't forgive him D:

Man I shipped Gorse/Bright D: They were really cute apprentices and I can't believe Gorsepaw is a spy. I'm so worried about their relationship and I hope Gorse realizes he's making a mistake and joins SpringClan for real instead.

Ryan/Breeze pls. I don't want to cry while reading s6 omg. I really just want the two of them to be happy. I really miss them like you can't keep doing this to me xD

Brightpaw has really changed! I'm glad you're adding so much to her character, from a love life, to hardening and protecting her mentor. She really symbolizes our great friend Brighty and I'm super glad you've been incorporating her part of the show.

And Grayclaw!! I'm interested to see how Breezeflight will try to hide this and perhaps what Seabreeze will tell her. Though I'm wondering why it was so important that she asked to see Breezeflight for her brother. I'm pretty sure there's more to it and we saw that from Brightpaw spying on the three.

Certainly a wondrous episode and I can't wait until after finals that you give more! <3

ily this is a wonderful bday gift :)

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