Talk:Fire, Fire/@comment-25630395-20150810004125

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Ahhh I love a good canon characters fanfic once in a while.

You haven't written much so far but I am going to pester you into finishing XD. I like how it the Ashfur- Squirrelflight dialogue isn't exactly copied from the books.. but you are doing something else, aren't you lol. It seems really weird how Ashfur is all like: maybe if I kill your kits you will love me! Makes sense right.

Okay so this wasn't constructive at all but I just love fanfictions with twists on that scene and I will be watching for moreee.

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