Talk:Streaks Of Fire/@comment-1703139-20131231215453

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Okay, first off,  I love Wavestar. She's just like 'omfg you idiots shut up gawd'. It's great.

I like the plot so far. I feel like the Gingershock-Dewpaw drama got overshadowed a bit by the Gathering (which is understandable, but if you want it to be BIG make it big I guess). It went a lot faster as well. I think to justify Stormstar's decision though she needs to expand her reasons a little. Like, either because this has happened before or she's just disgusted that Dewpaw would attack a warrior in her Clan when war is so close. Whatever.

Other than that, it was a really interesting start to what looks to be an awesome series. I really like that Dewpaw has some obvious flaws, but she's still feisty enough that we love her nonetheless. And Gingershock is just real enough to be hilariously ridiculous without being totally unbelievable. :D  Can't wait for the next one!