Talk:Fading Until You Can't Tell Anymore/@comment-24400334-20140307035518/@comment-11493954-20140318024022

Oh, the girl/boy part I'm saving for later. Sorry about that, I prefer not to give great descriptions of my character's looks, because I'd rather the reader come up with most of it. I'm saving the gender bit, it's helpful in the plot later, and will be confirmed soon. So, do you think I should do more character descriptions, physically, and character wise? I'd like to know if you know what Sewater's personality is so far from her comments, or if I need more on it. Also, is not including much clarifictation on the looks leaving it mysterious, or is it just lame? Thanks, this is my first fan fic and the first thing I've written out of school, so I'm not too sure how good I am with character development/description. :)