Talk:Equinox/@comment-27838201-20170615154546

OMG OK THIS IS PAST DUE I'M SORRY-LWAIJBFLIRBGAHWBKRBLIABK

Alright, i'm not good at this so bare with me here.

I like the plot of the story where kits slowly grow the realize new things: but, the story often got me confused for some odd reason, I love the detail you put into this, blazey. It was almost like Luna knew she was going to get sick.

The clan cats themselves, kinda made me a little mad. Just, taking them from their mother, mentor, and the only one the could trust on their small fragile lives. Yep! Because that's perfectly fine! Alrthough, i do understand their heart is in the right place. But, I don't think cats are supposed to know what a human house is: as they are normally referred to as two-leg dens.

This story has alot of thought put into it, i'd like to see what happens next if you have intentions of making a sequel!