Talk:FirexSpotted- What could of happened/@comment-16166566-20130316171835/@comment-24.57.204.29-20130316173229

Your welcome! That's good. I'm thinking about it. Thanks. Also, I forgot to mention this in my Comment but. ..

"Rusty stared at Bluestar with worry, Lionheart blinked at Longtail and whispered to Rusty"

There doesn't have to be a period after worry. You could replace the comma or period with and. It could be added as a continuation to the sentence, it doesn't have to be related to the sentence somehow to be added as a continuation as the sentence. After all, this continuation of a sentence isn't related to the sentence of all.

"James blinked, looking at the green forest around him and suddenly a bird ate him."

LOL I JUST LOVE TOTURTING MY CHARACTERS DON'T I POOR JAMES

Look at this Sentence. "Rusty started at Bluestar with worry and Lionheart blinked at Longtail and whispered to Rusty."

Makes sense, doesn't it?

The only problem is that and is repeated twice in the sentence and it unusually sounds a bit (not that much) awkward, unlike most sentences that have and in it twice. This is odd and I don't know why.