Talk:The Black Star/@comment-24495864-20130711021811

THIS IS EPIC.

No constructive enough. Okay. I shall make it constructive!

I like the plot. It keeps my attention through the whole story.

The characters are interesting. They have good backstories.

In chapter one, you called Ravenflight 'Raveflight.'

Yeah. Very constructive. *is not good at constructive comments*