Talk:Believe/@comment-1829516-20150704214732

Spoilers ayo.

This had a very Romeo and Juliet type vibe? Like the whole falling in love very quickly and dying at the end thing haha. I'm also hella angry that Smokeflame betrayed his brother like that, like why was he still angry over Sunspirit gettin the ladies? He had Minnowtail :P

The Fernsong thing was kinda weird. I at least thought it was a lil weird (Sunspirit gettin too many she-cats hAHA). But I felt like her still loving Smokeflame still could've worked, cause the Sunspirit thing... Felt sorta rushed? Idk.

Still crying that they died in the end though. Quite the tragic ending </3

I think I few things is that I wished you would've given us some more reasoning to why these two seemingly friendly Clans suddenly wanted war. I know there were altercations, but what were these and why did they happen? Was it sudden or did it build up?

(Also it switched from being called FireClan to FlameClan somewhere in the middle haAH)