Talk:Never Meant To Be/@comment-28076378-20161122011559

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Okay, I really liked this story a lot, I got pulled in pretty quick

I checked for grammar/spelling errors and found one

In part one, mrrow is missing an 'r' c:

I didn't notice any grammar mistakes

The story was cool; I've never seen this one before, and it was pretty exciting to me. Some parts seem a little rushed though

Instead of using caps when it shows his thought, try using itaclic text instead. It makes it look a little less bold. I loved the part where hundreds of cats came down one of the hills, it reminds me of my house, lol

But overall, this was a pretty good story! Sorry if the comment wasn't too good, I'm still getting the hang of them

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