Talk:Goodbye/Keep Your Heart Young/@comment-25531638-20130804214905

Absolutely touching, absolutely amazing. I nearly cried. We're going to miss you, Arti. I'm sad that you're going before I ever got to know you.

The song fits the story perfectly, and you did a good job of introducing the characters. Each of them seemed to be... distinctly standing out, not all "Oh, I need a filler character here. What about this cat.". If you know what I mean.

I just noticed this sentence needs a period:

"What spooked him?" Bramblekit asked/