Talk:Marathon (For Robo)/@comment-5488450-20130907212935

Alright, if I’m going to be completely honest the thing that I got the most out of this story is HOW MUCH YOU HAVE IMPROVED HOWLY HEYL! I mean this is great and all but comparing it to your newer stuff makes this really seen like n00b material tbh.

But this was still great! A few things I might point out were that there was a lot of repetition. You kept mentioning how this would all be worth it and it’s the biggest challenge and idk how many times they all came up, but eventually we start wishing you’d talk about something else. I get how this might be difficult considering you have to write about a character that’s not even yours, but just thought I should point it out.

I love the graveness of this though! The ending was well done and greatly placed. The mentioning of both Tidalpelt and Firehowl was really cute I thought. (Ah I’m failing to remember how TMQ went, I would go back and read it but I like reading good stuff and I don’t have the time anymore :C)

It also really sounded like Roboflight which is impressive considering you weren’t even the one who created her character. It’s hard to make up your own cats but it’s even harder to take the place of one and kudos to you for succeeding with that!

I loved this before, I love it now, and I shall love it forever and after ;D