Talk:One Change (Book One of Mountains Series)/@comment-1839575-20111024035511

The tenses keep changing from third person to first person. Aside from that, it's epic! I'm a bit confused about the whole Tigerstar/Firestar thing at the start, and I HATE FirexSpotted (euch) but I love the idea of flying monsters (yay for hovervehicles!). It makes it really feel like it's generations after the books. Also Smokestar's the bestest leader for telling a story to the kits. LOL.