Talk:Pilot/@comment-24176360-20131104045116

I feel like a douche reading Season 1 as Season 6 comes out.

This is a great first episode, Arti. You've done what any drama show writer should: create suspense to make the reader want to read the next episode. You open brilliantly, too.

The only criticism I have to make is nothing to do with the episode:

You missed a few commas, and placed full stops where commas should have been.

I look forward to the next episode!