Talk:The Revenge/@comment-25653434-20150110100013

Wow! that is really good I would of never thought my clan was that bad XD

Now for some constructive coments

I like the whole idea but I think maybe you should mentioin Thunder and River more, its like they dont exist at all except for this part

Also sometimes I find it a little bit hard to follow, like is Rainpaw training to be a warrior? If so why is she going out to collact herbs? I just find it confusing.