Talk:Hold Your Breath/@comment-5197876-20140930010804

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Ack, you really have the feels out for this book. FireXEagle is so realistic, and I love the dynamic of their relationship.

The story makes me so sad, just knowing what's going to happen to Firsong, as I legitly like her, and ship FirexEagle.

Your descriptions are very powerful, and really draw a reader in.

The cliffhangers are getting to me. All the feels <3

One thing I noticed, is that your chapters should be a bit longer. That's all.

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