Talk:Linked(Series)/@comment-5342796-20130801194035

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EEP I LOVE THIS :D I shall comment on the first two er... sections? separately xD

DANGEROUS GAMES:

I really do like Poppy. At first I wasn't sure if I'd like her, at the beginning when she was mad at her mother. But even as the story progressed a little, I began liking her a lot more- she was dynamic, energetic, and though she made mistakes, she realized when she had to suck it up and take the consequences. I was really scared you were gonna kill her mother though, but you didn't, so yay! :D

DANGEROUS ESCAPE:

Well, if I was Rainstar I would just ditch PebbleClan. Just saying. x3

Lol nah. You did a really good job of setting the scene up for what the Clan was now. You showed Rainstar's frustration, and her heart being torn between the obvious disrepair PebbleClan had fallen into and her love for what was once her true home.

I'm really eager to see if and how this all ties together- judging by the story title, I think it shall, and that's going to be quite interesting. :O



Loved it! Keep up the good work! :D