Talk:Quest of Loyalty/@comment-5342796-20121208010831

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DON'T KILL PETAL! OR I KILL YOU!

I know I'm supposed to make constructive comments nowadays, but I have nothing to say about this plot besides the fact that it is amazing. Still, I'll try.

- The plot was very throughouh, and we knew what was happening through the entire story.

- There was lots of suspense and good build up on each major event.(TOO MUCH SUSPENSE)

- You're writing is amazing!

Things to be improved on:

- Speed of writing :D I WANT MORE