Talk:A New Dawn: Blood River/@comment-17759525-20131121234414/@comment-17759525-20131122000828

Darn it, I had the second part all written out, but it didn't copy over when it lagged. Pretty much all it said though was pointing out more things that I liked, like all of the descriptions, and how Crowfeather's descendants are all so evil. You've done a really good job with this, HIMG :3 I'll be looking for more of this.

You called Breezepelt "Breezepaw" once, and you have some other grammar and spelling errors. You might want to run it through a spellcheck.

But yeah. Well done, and keep it up :3