Talk:Fallen Snow/@comment-28076378-20170304004439

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I think this was my favorite episode so far <3 Snowfire seems to be gaining confidence, all of those cats are respecting her, and even after I read this chaper, I have gained a lot of respect for her too. I know she's going to be a great leader, even if she doesn't see it yet.

I'm starting to think Ashpaw's my second favorite character. I love his energy. It was great to see Silvershade, Ravenwing, Ashpaw, and Snowfire all together too. I'm happy to see the Clans' seem to be making an effort to bring peace back.

I noticed a couple spelling mistakes, I can point them out. In Ashpaw's POV... '...as if birght raindrops were raining on StarClan...' and in Snowfire's 2nd POV... '...the paranoid tom was flicking his tail dangerously, eying Darkstar...'

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Great job!