Talk:The Fall/@comment-24143898-20170111041159

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The song lyrics are a very creative idea for a show, never would've thought of doing that.

Now, as for the episode~

So far, Snowfire is the character that seems the most developed in my mind, and she's going to turn out to be a good one too c; She's got these obvious flaws that you can see from the very beginning (not wanting to lead ThunderClan after the deaths of Jaystar and Hawkfeather), and I really like that. The setting in that first part really draws you in, in the aftermath of this massive war - I wonder if later on we'll figure out a little more about it. It's an interesting plac to start, and not one that's commonly used either, so I like the idea.

Idk what to think of Ashpaw yet, but I get this feeling that Fogheart's gonna be an interesting character? He seems kinda mysterious. Ravenwing - also unsure what to think of him as well. I'm sure my opinions on them will develop more as the show goes on, but yeah we'll see c;

Silvershade seems interesting, though. I haven't formed a solid opinion on her either, but she seems like a likeable cat so far! Also, from reading Ravenwing's part, I feel as though the two are going to bump into each other again.

Something to possibly think about - I felt as though some of the sentences (less so in Ravenwing's part than the others) were becoming a little bit run-on??? They were just a little bit long, and that kind of annoyed me? It's not anything major, and you don't need to change it, but that's just what I thought about it. There were also a few minor grammar mistakes, but these too were minor.

Overall, this was a great pilot, and I will be reading/commenting more and signing the fans section C:

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