Two Warriors in ShadowClan

Okay, before I start, I just want to say this is my first story, so please don't judge.

Chapter 1
Life in ShadowClan is good.

Going on patrols, chasing off intruders (I'm talking to you, ThunderClan!), grossing out other clans with frogs, basically everything.

My name is Smokepelt, by the way. I'm a ShadowClan warrior, a tom, to be exact.

I became a warrior last moon, and it's been non-stop fun.

Greytail, a warrior older than me, couldn't boss me around anymore, and I could boss the teeny apprentices, who hadn't done their warrior's assessment yet.

Here's a secret about me.

I really, really, like Snowwhisker.

I've liked her since I started being a warrior. She was always nice to me, and always offered to share prey or go on a hunt together... I couldn't help to start liking her.

I know I'm not the only tom who sees her the way I do. I've seen ShadowClan cats, including Greytail, look at Snowwhisker in interest, as if they were looking to find a mate.

Snowwhisker hasn't paid much attention to them. She mostly hangs out with Lilyclaw, also a pretty she-cat but with a major attitude.

It's kind of obvious that all the toms like Snowwhisker, but I try to hide it. I know she sees me as only a friend, and she'd feel betrayed if I showed my feelings to her. She just tries to stay away from those lovesick toms.

I guess I'll just try to be as much of her friend as possible.

Chapter 2
'''Okay, so I've decided to make ever chapter flip from Smokepelt to Snowwhisker. Enjoy!'''

These toms are driving me crazy.

They're all trying to go on patrols with me, and share prey, but it just gets me annoyed when they come near.

There's only the toms who don't care about me, the deputy, whose name is Snakefang, the leader, whose name is Toadstar, and Smokepelt.

Lilyclaw, my best friend, just tells me to tell them how I feel about them nagging me to go on a patrol with them, but I think that will either upset them, which I am a nice warrior and don't want feelings hurt, or that will make them annoy me more.

Well, Lilyclaw is a nice friend, but I won't follow her advice.

Speaking of friends, the only normal tom I've decided to trust is Smokepelt.

I know he loves me, I can see it every time he looks at me.

I feel the same way about him. He doesn't know, of course.

Surprised?

Smokepelt knows how to care about some cat without hovering over them every second. I want to confess to him my feelings, but I don't think it's the right time yet. He was made a warrior only a moon ago, so he and I aren't ready yet. I want to get to know him better.

Maybe someday I'll get the courage to tell him

More Coming Soon

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