Talk:I'll Be Good/@comment-8248793-20160303210449

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Wow you finished this fast xD But I'm glad :) This is certainly an intriguing idea and I'm excited to see how it'll turn out! Obviously Blaze did something though I have a feeling he didn't kill Sky in the last scene though Flameheart must have killed Blaze.

Okay I really like the contrast between how you position your flashbacks and the actual scenes of what is happening. Like each flashback reveals a bit more than what reality has tried to tell us. this is why I love songfics, because you can easily switch back and forth to accomadate (?) your needs.

Blaze is really interesting! I didn't get to see much of him other than he's in love with Sky and he is seemingly vicious, but I get that I'm going to see a lot more of him in the next two songfics before we switch to Sky.

I do like how you haven't revealed anything serious in the first episode. You're showing us what Blaze has done and perhaps how he can change. It certainly leaves us with a lot of questions, but hey, it's a series! :)

Can't wait for the next one!!!

<3

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