Talk:Half and Half: The Story of Halfstripe/@comment-7235369-20140607152446

This is a really good story, with an interesting character who I already love.

Halfpaw seems so weak and helpless, but she is also strong and brave. She's a creative character with a personality as sharp as the butter knife I cut myself with.

Also, It's really hard not to curse, but since this is a Warriors site, ThunderClan are all half-witted, mouse-brained, pieces of fox dung! Pardon my French.

I can't wait to see more of this!