Talk:A Thousand Stars/@comment-26432133-20170511142944

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Oh gosh, poor Rhett, his client's dead. That's a problem. And gah, MarshClan sucks, yet I can see it from their eyes too; there's cats coming and taking their food, and that's bad. Though I don't see why they have to be tried and executed, so I'm stamping MarshClan Tyrant. And huh, it seems the two main characters are Rhett and Sereya; I'm sensing a possible ship, because let's face it, two main characters of the opposite sex are often the main couple. Fact. But who knows what you'll do with them.

This third person is really interesting, it offers a view into the characters that first person usually does but still feels really nice in third person.

The amber stone's really cool; maybe someone wants it too so they killed Rhett's client? (tbh I think of him as Rhett's employer lol) I feel like this store will play a major role in the story.

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Real cool story, Firey, can't wait to see how it unfolds!