Talk:Life is a Battle/@comment-25531638-20131022023518

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Wow. Okay, I'll start with the characters and go to the plot.

I really love Brokensoul. I think you really gave her good character development all throughout the songfic, and it really leaves me wondering about her past. I also love Loudclaw's undying determination all throughout the songfic, even though he isn't exactly successful in the end.

Well, the story didn't exactly have a plot, but I think it worked out rather well. Since there was so much detail in the scene of the fight, it worked out. And I really loved the cliffhanger end, which left me wondering whether Loudclaw survived our not.

And I also really like your song choice :)

The only other thing that I would say is that I don't think that the section at the end is really necessary.

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