Talk:The Lost/@comment-27725192-20170212142636

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Prologue

After reading chapter one, I can tell the abandoned kit is Lavender and the tom that found her is Robin. It's a good story starter, but I was wondering if it could be longer?

Chapter 1

I like the twolegplace scenery, one of the things I love in fanfictions is when instead of the usual canon cliché for how Clans operate and how the Twolegplace is like, you changed the cliché and made it more interesting. The trade thing seems interesting and realistic.

I'll be commenting more soon

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