Talk:Dark Sun

I will be adding polls every week. Also some polls will be guessing questions about what do you think or guess is going to happen in the story....

How would you rate this story out of 10?? 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Is this story any good?? Yeah I love it!! Yeah totally keep writing!! It's...good! It's ok Really bad Stop writing!!!

Whos' your favourite character so far?? Sunny Bubbles

What do you think is going to happen next?? Sunny will join a clan.... Bubbles will die saving Sunny.... Sunny will meet new cats... A dangerous animal will appear...

Which clan name do you like best?? SecretClan MysteryClan PuzzleClan ...

It is doing great so far. But I saw a bunch of mistakes (not Sunny's talking). You didn't say people could edit for mistakes in grammer or spelling so I didn't edit. Maybe you should reread it. ;) I like Sunny so far.--CorynKing 18:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)CorynKing

Coinsedently...
Um, well... you said that we should tell you if there was a spelling or grammatical error, and there's one where you said so. LOL, isn't that weird? 4  the   4est!  21:53, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

And you somehow change from third person to first person... I don't understand... 4   the   4est!  22:07, December 21, 2009 (UTC)