Talk:Shards of Secrets/@comment-8248793-20140830232224

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This is rather short for an episode, but it's fine c:

You started it well, with just a normal ceremony, the feelings of being an apprentice, but then with your twist: feeling different.

I'd still suggest making them longer, not so short, but that's in my opinion. This episode was nice and well done, but just... it ended fairly quickly.

I really liked how you shaped Moonsplash, and Flamepaw. they seemed diverse, and I suspect Moonsplash is a Cursed cat too c:

Good one tho! <3

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