Talk:The Cursed Clans: The Choice/@comment-28076378-20170306141223

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Your description was really good! At the moment I don't know how to feel about any of the characters; I'm assuming Rainkit doesn't like Blazekit that much because he acts like he's higher than everyone because he's Oakstar's son. Just a guess though. I bet they're going to have a rivalry.

Try making your chapters longer, they're really short. And make more paragraphs instead of a few big ones, it looks cluttered and can be hard to read.

Oh, a prophecy "... the rain may qeunch the fire..." I have a feeling that refers to Rainkit and Blazekit. Rainkit is clearly the rain, and Blazekit could be the fire. This makes me believe Blazekit may become evil one day.

There was one spelling error in the prologue. '...Thank you, Bramlestar. Where...'

Anyway, you did a great job!

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