Talk:Struck Like Lightning/@comment-24495864-20130816225545

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Wow, Stonekit's a jerk. xD

Anyway, I like the idea of a kit that's half-Clan half-kittypet in WindClan. It's like a mystery who the father and mother of Lightningkit are.

And at some points, when another character starts to talk, like this scene -

"I Lightnngkit," "I Lightningkit" Lightningkit repeated,

Should be -

"I, Lightnngkit."

"I, Lightningkit." Lightningkit repeated.

So, anyway, this story's great so far! :D Keep it up!

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