Talk:The Last Sunset/@comment-8248793-20140118184612

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Omg Ashwhisker's death really surprised me, and I can't wait for more!

I can see this is pretty much family problems, because there isn't much love left in this story, because Nightfall already died :/

I really like the suspense you built in this story, and I think you're guarenteed a place in Ginger's contest! Night X Sunset was adorable, and I still ship them. I really like Tawnypaw right now, but I don't think you should suddenly make it in her perspective, since the whole story was in Nightfall's perspective. Just  a tip!

I can't wait for more, Brighty <333

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