Talk:The Night Prophecy/@comment-5342796-20160419111643



chapters 1-7

Whoa! This is already really good. Apart from a few small grammar things, I see little to point out, other than sometimes the writing is really fast-paced so the reader might lose track of what's happening (like the part where Lotusbloom died). Other than that, AMAZING! I love it so far and I'll definitely keep reading; I just wanted to drop in and comment on what I've read so far so you know you have my support <3

I love Ravenkit and Streamkit, and I love what you've shown of their personalities so far. I love how even though Ravenkit is supposedly the frail one, you chose to gave him the fire power. I also like their contrasting personalities; Streamkit seems more laid back while Ravenkit has a more fiery (heh) personality, probably because his constant sickness has left him more guarded. I wonder if there's an explanation for him always getting sick or...?

Excited to see where the brothers' paths take them! It's not easy to start writing a really good story with kits as the main characters, but you guys are doing an excellent job! Great work c:

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