Talk:Crowfeather Speaks: Unwanted Kits/@comment-8248793-20140107000018

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This was very well written, and I got the sadness that you repeated over and over. It really was an emotional fanfic.

I liked how Crowfeather described his love life, and how Breezepelt kind of seems like the unwanted kit. This makes me hate Nightcloud and Breezepelt, since I already hated them :P

I liked the way you described every moment, how Crowfeather felt through every part of his life. The way you created new scenes to show his difficulties in WindClan. This was truly amazing.

I really loved this, and I plan on reading the other stories too! <333

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