Talk:Wounds Beyond Measure/@comment-27838201-20170702142707

Ok! I'm not good at this so bare with me!

First off, Mintkit seems pretty depressed, it can anger the reader that her own siblings would treat her that way, but, only good stories can make the readers feel such emotion. Mintpaw is an interesting as an apprentice, and i love how her mentor isnt as bad as she seems. I just hope she gets better soon enough, I was honestly happy when another apprentice (Lionpaw was it?) finally decided to start spending time with her *coughit'snotlikeIshipitnoworanythingno!Your-yourtheoneshippingit!COugh* I truly hope Mintpaw starts to get better in the furutre, and I cant wait to see what her warrior name will be!