The Leaf and the Moth (Mothpool fanfic)

Hello!! This is my second fanfic ever, so please tell meh if I did anything wrong!!

The clan allegences are the same as the 5th omen of the stars book.

Chapter one (POV: Leafpool)

Leafpool sighed as she glanced down at the moonpool. Why didn't Crowfeather ove her anymore after she revealed her kits? It wasn't her fault! "Leafpool?" a confused mew caused Leafpool to gasp. She looked around and saw a elegant golden she-cat. "Oh...Mothwing..what are you doing here?" "Same as you...but this time I wanted to see someone. Mistystar just declared I was no longer a medince cat..." Leafpool gasped. "What? She can't do that, can she?" Mothwing looked at her paws. "Apparently she can. Anyways, What about you?" "Huh?" "Why are you here?" Mothwing questioned again. "Oh, I-I wanted some alone time...after Crowfeather. We-we were mates for a while after Hollyleaf spilled our secret. I know it was wrong! I know I promised! But I loved him...We snuck out and one night..he said he didn't love me. And now...I'm bearing his kits...again.." Leafpool sobbed. Mothwing gasped. "Oh no! Oh no, oh no...And...Squirrelflight wouldn't do that again, would she? It'd be risking everything again and...and..." Leafpool started to cry again and buried her face in Mothwing's neck fluff. "Oh..poor Leafy..It's okay, shh...shh.." Motheing soothed as she patted her friend's back. Leafpool sobbed again, her entire face now wet with tears. "I-I should go...maybe if I tell the clan before hand this time, they'll give me a better punishment." Leafpool sighed as she walked away. "Thank you." she added in a whisper.

Chapter two (POV: Squirrelflight)