Talk:The Birds/@comment-26285531-20160128011211



I really liked this: you started out by introducing the plot to us, which I liked because you didn't put loads of boring detail into the episode before the action even starts! (I tend to do that way too much :c)

Anyways, you added so much awesome details to your writing that I could literally see everything that was happening, from the bloody paws to the descriptions of the Birds. You've also indented on how these cats seem nearly casual when the Birds come, in a frightened way, as if they were expecting it to come inevitably - which they were. It puts a great twist in the story and I'm excited to see more!

(I'm shocked I haven't made a comment on this show yet!! O: <3)

