Talk:Goodbye/Keep Your Heart Young/@comment-5488450-20130804225926

oh wow. This was fantastic. Not as heartwrenching as the previous one BUT THATS GOOD THE FIRST ONE WAS A LITTLE TOO MUCH.

I really love the way you molded this into a Clan. Goldie and her nickname for Lily was really cute. You've already shown a bit of development but I can't wait to see how little cutey Bramble is going to turn into our favorite kick-ass Bramblestar :D

The introdcution to Forestpaw was really sweet though and I can already see how much Bramble admires him and wow just the parts with the two of them together had a magic. It's hard to imagine how it must feel writing this for you and you make that clear. Your experiences, your life, your just... you can feel that.

The way you write makes it clear no one else could do this unless they lived it. Unless they really really lived this.

And it's just perfect.

Wow<3

AND IM GOING TO MISS YOU<33333 I don't want you to go but if any user has the right to leave without being judged for it it's you, because you've just done so much for this place but I will really, really, really miss you a lot and a lot and a lot and just... ;-;