Talk:Rookies/@comment-8248793-20130617025913

The way you described the characters is amazing! Their personalities are so clear, everything they do fits them perfectly. You even show their feelings when they were young!

Also, you didn't put in every character in the troop in War that was with Badgerstrike. (without Brookfall of course). This makes the reader think about what will happen to the originals and the squad.

Nice writing! Arti, DO MORE!!! <3