Talk:Why?/@comment-24766822-20160107192933

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Holy cow! That was incredible! I applaud you, my friend, that was brilliant!

Ahem, sorry, I got a little overexcited there... but honestly, for a good reason. This short story was written with impeccable taste; the writing, on the shell, is quite simple, yet beautiful. But underneath the simplicity, there is an unspoken complexity that I picked up on in the tangled emotions of Cinderpelt. She's the perfect cat for this story; seemingly simple, but underneath so unbearably compound. I see very few of these types of stories, so this was a pleasure to read!

Poor Cinderpelt. She was always so selfless in the series, being strong despite her injury... I never really thought about how she really felt about what was happening around her. The feels, as it were, were beginning to kick in big time. You found a healthy balance between her grief and the happiness at the end. You had descriptions that the Erins would have been proud of.

I have to make this comment brief, 'cause I have somewhere to go. But I love this, and I'll be watching out for more of your writing! <3

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