Talk:Over the Mountaintops/@comment-15560748-20150820160933

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Okay, this was a very intense and deep episode.

Intensity This random cat named Shimmershard is a maybe murderer, and she runs int the mountains. They have no idea what happened to her, or why she did everything, and they can't find her.

And when they do, she jumps over a ciff.

Deepness Dawnfur is partially admitting that something happened to her. She's kinda admitting something to Storm which gives us a bit to think about.

Like Snow said, Shimmershard is a very pretty name.

And you gave a big cliffhanger at the end xDD

I watched in shock as Shimmershard whipped around and...

...Plunged over the top of the cliff.

And I'm just like "wth happened??"

But it was a good episode, and I liked the pace and all.

Though you should give a bit more inside to Brownhare's past (What? Like 'Brownhare's hair is so brown they decided named it after him'?" [Perfect <33] )

Awesome job!!!!

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P.S. You shuda switched the POV so you could annoy us all (Bahahaha let's switch to the leaders so everyone has to wait >:D[Still one of my fav quotes])



