Talk:Shattered Barriers/@comment-26285531-20160116231033



AMG CRIES AURA DUH <33 (IS SHE THE SAME AURA?? O:)

Aw, Terran was there for Bryce when she had nightmares... <3 That is so sweet really, and it's really terrible that Terran loves her but isn't allowed to be with her. :c

I like how you incorporated flashbacks to give us as much information as possible! So we don't get all the information in like one episode but we get just enough to want to read more. Love it <3 You also put a lot of detail into writing the flashbacks, and I could almost feel Bryc'e pain as she witnessed both her mother and father die and still forced herself to go on.

It's absolutely heartbreaking how Bryce has only her little sisters as remnants of her family and the Vipers take even that away, replacing that space with more pain and misery. I feel like Bryce's life went from okay to worse; after those flashbacks it seemed like she wasn't really happy after her parents died, but she could control the pain she felt. Now, after her sisters were in jeopardy and Cloud and Sara her almost-adoptive parents after her actual parents died were dead as well, I'm guessing it won't be long until she can't take it anymore and finds a way out of this situation. (Even if it means going through more in the process, Bryce strikes me as the kind of cat willing to take bullets for the sake of her loved ones c:

Awesome episode, loved it so far! :D <3

