Talk:Hawkfire's Story/@comment-5137480-20130623224046/@comment-9729114-20131128050201

I'm so very sorry for rushing this relationship, I was only 11.5 writing this, and now 13.5, I realize how absolutely rushed this is. I will try to slow this down, A LOT. Tigerclaw is so bloodthirsty because I had just finished the part when he tried to kill Bluestar and blah blah blah bleh. AND HAVEN'T YOU HEARD OF LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT?! lol