User blog comment:Starhaven/Starhaven's Echo/@comment-1839575-20101106014918

I reckon it could be better with a more original storyline... the beginning was almost exactly the same as Firestar's Quest, just with different names and the Clan was actually given territory. I also reckon it's unlikely that any Clan cats would kill their leader. Aside from that, I reckon it has a lot of promise!