Was I good, Yellowfang?

This is a songfic based off of Air Traffic Controller's Blame, which is a Cinderpelt MAP.

Prologue
''There goes my luck There goes my pride There goes everything that I've been working for all of my life''

Cinderpaw smiled as she thought to herself. ''I'll show Fireheart! I'm going to be a Warrior! I can do anything I like!'' She thought. ''Fireheart will be so impressed! He'll make me a warrior right away, and take me as a mate! Well... maybe not THAT quick, but you get the idea!'' Cinderpaw thought, smiling to herself. She looked to her mentor. "I'm going to the dirtplace!" she called. Fireheart nodded. "Okay! But stay in camp!" he called back. Cinderpaw nodded. She hated lying to her mentor, but it was for a good cause.

"La da da~!" Sung Cinderpaw as she neared the Thunderpath. She yawned and smiled as she looked at it. She stepped back as she saw a racing monster near, remembering what Fireheart told her. "Monsters kill cats." he had explained weeks ago. "Stay away from them. Stay at least one fox-length away from the Thunderpath at all times." Cinderpaw had understood completely. She sat a fox-length exactly away from the Thunderpath. She waited.

Cinderpaw's tail twitched in annoyance as she waited for the message Tigerclaw was going to send. She stood up, ready to leave. She pricked her ears as she heard movement. She was about to turn around when she was shoved onto the Thunderpath. Her eyes widened and she seemed to shrink in her pelt as a monster, a large one, neared. She shrieked for half a second before darkness clouded her vision.

Cinderpaw groaned and weakly lifted her bloody head. Her vision was blurry. With a jolt of both pain and realization, she wailed out in pain and thrashed around hysterically. She sobbed and wailed, screeching. Her ears rung, she wailed and wailed to the stars. They may not be visible, but they were there. She knew it. She panted, the last of her energy having been wasted on screeching and thrashing around, terrified. She moaned as she heard a blurry voice. "I-I... I told her to stay in camp."

Fireheart.

She wanted to shriek, wail, screech to let him know she was alive, but she couldn't. She was knocked out.

Chapter One
''There goes that dream And so it seems There goes the days and nights awakened fighting thoughts of losing''

Coming Soon!