Talk:Tiptoe (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-7410018-20141025152510

Spoilers:

Well, ignore the part in my previous comment that asked about why Flamegaze was a killer. I was kind of impatient, as it was a good songfic, and I didn't wait until this one haha.

The whole "possessed by a demon" thing is a really cool idea. I haven't seen that idea really used here, and it's really unique.

I'm loving Flamegaze even more. I am schizophrenic, so I can really relate to her and her troubles with things getting into her mind and under her skin, causing her to do bad things. Hey, I don't know if it's normal to sympathize with killers, but I'm doing it right now.

I was a bit confused though, because I thought Mosspaw was in MeadowClan, but hey apparently not.

Your description of Layla was really cool; I was able to picture her in my head perfectly. The only thing I would suggest though is to describe the settings a little bit more.

Over all, this was just as good as the first one. I look forward to reading more!