Talk:Breezepelt's Fury/@comment-24645319-20131113092205

I love the prologue. Except what I find weird is how "Crowfeather growled in amusement." Amusement means that something is 'funny', and I reckon if your own son was gonna be killed by another cat would definitely not be funny.

Anyway, this sounds really good and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Bluejay12 (talk) 09:22, November 13, 2013 (UTC)