Talk:Incompetent/@comment-1007040-20130821152038

what the heckie this is really interesting i have a few little nitpicky comments to make though because i'm a terrible person

Typo here -> "Honestly, I have to explain their rolls so often it gets boring. " A few of the phrases in the introduction are worded a little... strangely? Like "Picture dozens of incompetent Apprentices decided independent thinking was key to living life to the fullest"... I think 'deciding' would be a better tense to use here. Also, you shouldn't capitalize words after an ellipsis.

yeah the wording might be a little rough at times but this is pretty cool, it really caught my attention which is a pretty incredible thing to do these days so props to you for that!