User blog comment:Wetstream/Featured Stories/@comment-30357310-20170910204734

Can I submitInto the wild ? I always wanted to be on the featured, so I added this:

'He came close to Bramblekit, putting his claws on his head. Bramblekit hyperventilated, until the claws went into his flesh.

"AHHHHH!", he screamed, crying. "No! Bramblekit!", Brownpaw cried out.

Brokenstar's claw slowy came out, and Bramblekit's tears started to come-or was it his own blood? he tasted it, and unstead of tasting the salty tears, he tasted blood. He closed his eyes as Brokenstar slashed his eye.

His friend's aren't handing it good, as well. Runningpaw had his paw touch his back, and Brownpaw couldn't tear her eyes away from the sight.

"10 minutes!", Brownpaw cries. Bramblekit hasn't seen her cry before.

Brokenstar sneered. "Look at you, your kinda pale(from blood loss.). Let me help!". He grabbed thorns and rapped them around his eyebrows, and makes them touch his cheeks. He puts more on his ears. Blood was every were. ''I can't give up! I must keep my promise to mamma! I must become a warrior, for mamma!'', Bramblekit yelled at himself.

"5 more!", Brownpaw yowled.

Finally, he started slashing at Bramblekit, his paws, his legs, his chest, and his stomach were being slashed at. Most of them healed up, except for his chest, witch hurts more then his other parts. He tried taking a breath, but the pain came up. This couldn't be good for him.'

Something dark, like warriors, as a whole.