Talk:Prior Trials/@comment-8248793-20150818145236

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Holy okay. That was an insanely good episode!! You really set the pace by showing us a short little insight of who might be against the Clans, but I'm not sure who exactly that was. You also showed us a normal scene where you could just introduce Sandpaw rather than through her into the action. Sometimes a bit of both is good but in this case, since the pace was set slow, you did great :)

I really like Sandpaw actually. Normally I don't like my own main character, but it seems that everyone has the knack of making me like their main character xD Though you only developed Sandpaw in this episode. I know she's the main character but you didn't show enough of anyone else, so I'm hoping for more of that in the next episode!

But as Sea said below, the ending was fairly rushed, despite the slow pacing from the beginning. I thought that it was a great way to end an episode since none of them know exactly what has happened (or at least we don't) but you could have slowed it down by maybe hinting something about "making a stand" because we had no idea what half the system/who their enemies/what they are supposed to do.

But great first episode Fallen! I'm excited to see more of this :) <3

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