Talk:Fireblooded/@comment-8248793-20140630155048

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Okay in all honesty, this was great :)

I love the way you added in the story sections of the poem, it made it more realistic, like somebody had witnessed Firestar's fight against Scourge (though lots of cats did but you get what I mean xD)

In just six verses, you really squeezed in a lot about the battle, and I find that great. The battle was worth like a whole book, and you just fit it in a poem with six verses xD

I really liked how you described Firestar, like as the "Fire" and Scourge as the "Blood" and the font really tensed me up, as in like it was a battle font.

So yeah, you're good at everything xD <3 you and this poem thing (okay maybe not a "thing")

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