Talk:Snow Heart/@comment-5488450-20140109024909

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b-b-BUT I SHIPPED DEWSTORM

I SHIPPED DEWSTROM WITH ALL OF MY HEART FIREY YOU JUST DONT UNDERSTAND YOU BROKE MY HEART YOU COULDNT JUST KILL HIM LIKE THAT, THEY WERE IN LOVE THEY WERE ADORABLE THEY-

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Okay, deep breath.

Crow is still cute but idk Dewstorm seems to be a little sweeter and he is much better with words like he was making me melt I swear.

Now if I must be honest this episode felt the most rushed of all, especially dewstrom's death. I get that you didn't want to elongate it but it did feel a little sudden and almost a bit hard to keep track of; I'd recommend extending his death to at least twice the length it was; just so faster readers can keep track!

Also, his introduction was a little brief and their romance was a little too sudden, I thought(I STILL SHIP THEM THOUGH)

Also I personally think that despite the rushed pace at parts, it was also one of your best episodes. It had a really smooth flow and I was just really impressed!