Talk:Equinox/@comment-26432133-20170103002955

STAHP KILLING ME FREDGIRL! (and now I must try to be constructive)

"With this secure in our futures, we were free to continue on with our childhood." O_o What a childhood. I like the sibling relationship- it's pretty real. And then it goes off the walls crazy because of the circumstances.

And WHOA this is a breath of fresh air compared to other stories. I can't really pin it down exactly- I know it's in Ayla and Solis's interactions. And finally, a character-based story that isn't set in the current real world. Not just that it's about cats- it's the complete oddity of everything. Their relationship, their, uh, deal to fight to the death, Luna making me want to cry, Hawkface being a buttface- everything.

Uh, any more constructive-criticismness from me? I'm dry, but I am most definitely going to read the rest of this story the next time you update!