Talk:My Home/@comment-26432133-20170706011131

COMMENTING CONTEST

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This is a very interesting concept! First, let me nitpick a bit- as a pilot, I think this episode should set up the conflict of the show/season, and all we really get is a look into Jaliverynn. As Blazey mentioned below, the episode is really fast-paced and it would be great if you could slow it down between events. Besides that, I'm interested in this; what is the state of the Clans in this setting? Will they play a role in this? Are they fighting Jaliverynn? I feel like they are going to, but it appears that Jaliverynn is already fighting The League?

I'd say that the only big flaw here is that I don't exactly know where the story is going off of this pilot, just that there's a war with The League. Other than that, this is great! I really want to see where it goes, and I want to see more of Cairna, who's growing on me. Good job, Fox, and keep going!