Talk:Time/@comment-25110166-20170710025140

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ayy I called it!

It made sense that Maplesplash would die, considering Amber's conflicted thoughts throughout the story. He finally evolves, and he's ready to be a father... and his mate dies. Yikes. But for real, great development. That's definitely a great way to handle a character: you mold them, bring them into something better than they used to be, and you still find a way to completely break them. I could see this when he finally realized time it too short. Wonderfully done.

Sapkit was the perfect name, after his mom. I wish that had been more than an author's note, but ah well. There's not much I can critisize. Great story Clev :D