Talk:Fireberry's Destiny (Series)/@comment-25531638-20130716004819

Nice start! I haven't read Rainstars prophecy, but I will make sure to now.


 * SPOILERS*

I liked the whole concept of Firepaw getting another chance, I thought that it was cool. But I thought that maybe you should've described the first battle with ShadowClan and Riverclan a bit more. Also, Stormkit doesn't really seem to grieve for his mother much.