Talk:Mapleshade Speaks: Thrown Out/@comment-40173582-20190919180524

I honestly love Mapleshade, but (I really don't mean this to be rude, I respect you, your work, and your opinions.) I really don't like this story much. First of all I know this story MUST be made after Mapleshade's Vengance, but here's what happened: Mapleshade had already met with Appledusk, a Riverclan Warrior. Then, she told him she were expecting, and he was happy. Nobody knew about their secret until Ravenwing told everyone. Then, she was cast out with her three kits, Patchkit, Larchkit, and Petalkit. Then, she tried to join Riverclan but the kits drowned in the river. Her kits are taken and buried and she was exiled. Then she killed Frecklewish, Ravenwing, and Appledusk for revenge. She also manipulated their decendants for her kits.