Talk:Light of the Heart/@comment-25531638-20131228185559

Nice start, Holly :)

First off, I really loved the opening thingy to your story, it made me really curious about where the story was going. And especially about this thing that Birdwing did. I also like how you gave Frostheart a name to match her personality.

Sorry that the comment is so short, I can't come up with much more with the amount you've written.