Talk:Mapleshade and Birchface/@comment-39013859-20190415045857/@comment-24143898-20190415194000

Hey, instead of just saying ‘awful grammar’, can you expand on that next time? For example, you could say exactly what needs to be improved, and how they can do it. ‘Awful’ as a response can be quite blunt and harmful.

I do agree that the grammar can be improved, though - for example, make sure cats’ names start with a capital letter! Also, when a new cat speaks, remember to start a new line. :)