Talk:Falling Petals/@comment-1829516-20140103050809

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Ugh. I really don't like Crowheart and Storm. She's a rogue Crowheart, did you forget everything about the warrior code when you went on this journey? :P

I found that the cats just standing there while chatting would be unlikely. I don't think there'd be any time to chat for a few moments during a battle. If you're fighting, you're probably gonna keep fighting until someone flees or like dies I guess?

I'm pretty glad you put in some backstory with Minnowfur and Reedtail! Again, I really want more backstory with Dewheart and Storm to find out what went down between them when he joined the quest. Background information really helps with understanding cats' intentions and stuff. :3

I hope after this they get back to the real quest! They really need to find prey for the four Clans. Do they not understand they're wasting precious time? xD

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