Talk:A Warrior's Heart/@comment-24866170-20140330221841

this is really cool so far, Lightning

~spoilers~

Prologue: I wonder who the parents of the kit are. It's, like, much suspicion wow. anyway, Ambereye's offer is rather sudden, just 'would you like to join StormClan?' out of the blue. I like how one parent wants one kit taken to the Clan. but what about the other kits? :o

Chapter One: Lightningkit is so cute x3 so anyway, I like how she is wanting to be the best warrior evar. Her emotion toward Whisperkit becoming meddie cat apprentice is probably what every warrior apprentice thinks about it.

Chapter Two: This made me hate the sand-colored cat AND Wolfclaw. Sand-colored tom because he called poor Shadepaw weak, and Wolfclaw because he's a jerk D:< poor Robinbeak ;-;

overall, this is awesome! I saw a few places where ' s should've been, but other than that, it's grammitically correct~

can't wait to read more~!

~spoilers over~