Talk:Steps to Freedom/@comment-26285531-20160214194243



Okay, I won't then lol (from your previous comment)

The ending opened alright, though a bit too quick for me (a lot of fanfics go quick so idk if I just read fast or). Hm, we trusted Terran so far but I'm not that sure about him and Karina now after they're uncomfortable when Bryce asks where Ruby is (I hope she's okay though, at this point I love her personality so much <3)

Apart from that I felt as though Karina's character changes a lot from when the reader first meets her, because she was a bit more protective over Terran at first, but she's thankfully opened up a bit and guards the kits when Bryce has to leave them.

Now after the ordeal when Bryce is captured by the Vipers we learn more about the Vipers and that not all of them are what the Coalition cats think they are (however a lot of them still may be, because only two Viper characters have been introduced). But I still think it's doubtful that the Coalition will believe Bryce, because of their prejudice and misconceptions about them already and the fact that Nightshadow doesn't know it's due to Terran that he got Shadeflower back. But either way I don't think it'll end well if Bryce tries to convince them...

This episode didn't have a lot of character development but there were a lot of events that helped learn more about the Vipers and Terran and Karina, so yeah :P Great job!

