Talk:Secrets to be Revealed/@comment-5342796-20160614223528



AHHHHHHHHH I LOVE THESE CHARACTERS SO MUCH!

Love the opening battle, it was intense but not dragged out. And Terran and Bryce have gotten to the point where they have each other's back like it's second nature in battles <3

Okay, now for the plot. SO GOOD. The mystery around the poisons and the wolves... I'm really confused, what's going on? I get that there's clues in all of their backstories but the readers are still missing something... KARINA, TERRAN, TELL BRYCE WHAT'S GOING ON! And what does Shadeflower... I have so many questions, arghhhh. Though I do love Karina and Terran's sibling dynamic. After all they've been through, I hope that they finally get some closure, though the same goes for Bryce and her sisters :/

I loved the last section. Nightshadow and Feathershine are absolutely freaking perfect, and they really make a little family around everyone. And Applepaw is as hilarious and sassy as ever. I like how Bryce didn't really know what she was doing, because of course it makes sense that these cats are used to very different fighting styles required -- especially since Bryce used to live alone and wouldn't really stand much of a chance in a large battle before. The training scene was very realistic. It made me smile, because gosh darn it, I love these characters and their friendship circle so much!

Amazing job, Firey, per usual <3

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