Talk:Peace Before the Storm/@comment-5342796-20150715184152



This was a really well done opening episode. A Gathering was the perfect way to introduce all the Clans and their leaders, and your writing hits the perfect balance of description. I agree with Firey that it lacked action, but I'm guessing that's exactly why you gave it the title it has. And you definitely foreshadowed a coming storm at the end; it was very well done, because you gave us no clue what could be coming, but just enough hints to keep us on our toes and excited to find out more. The stuff about the foxes, the medicine cats' behavior... I'm very curious now.

Also, that's a really strange way of picking leaders. Is that so the Clans are always bound together, since their leaders are kin? I feel like it would suck to be Brightstar or Diverstar, growing up in a different Clan where everyone knew you were going to be leader. Imagine how mean the other apprentices would be to you, out of annoyance because you weren't born in their Clan, and out of jealousy.

I'm excited to read more of this show!

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