Talk:Long Live (Songfic)/@comment-25630395-20150426020256

SPOYLERS (that was mispelled on purpose. Idk why)

This was SO intense! The emotions... the flashbacks... sob. I feel really bad for Bluefang, and how much he is suffering.

At first, when you left us on the cliffhanger 'and then everything goes wrong', I was sure Hawkpelt was going to walk in and be like ' Wut was that?'. But the Owlstep thingy was unexcpected, and I loved the twist it added to the story!

Those love triangles, tho. And that fight between Hawk and Blue. I honestly have no idea how I can express the epicness and my love for this songfic in words.

If you want something to improve on ( I'm cherrypicking now xD), I'd suggest shortening some of the story parts between lyrics. Some flashbacks were really long.

AMAZING job, Rainy!

END OF SPOYLERS.