Talk:Recount A Thousand Sins/@comment-8248793-20151023011903

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Okay Shypaw is my fav rn. Wildpaw is really close behind because he's really just adorable and I really do love that little guy. Shypaw's really rad cause she's so outgoing and energetic, despite her name. Skypaw and Fallenpaw are kind of just there in my mind rn because I feel as though Shypaw actually has had most of the action (cause she's in multiple chapters starring as one of the main charries of that chapter).

Your plot is interesting. I'm trying to figure out what might possibly happen to the four of them, but I definitely like the weirdness that seems to peek out under the normal currents of a story. You have just the right amount of suspicion and of course the strange cats/names to make it normal, yet I can tell this is unique enough that it has stranger things in it.

The cat in their dreams is so freaky. Except Wildpaw's of course. Do they come from FlanClan? I hope not O: FlanClan is also creepy lol.

I actually think you should develop your characters a little more. It's been four chapters and although they switch, you kind of keep the same sort of emotion around them. They don't really like change, it's like they're echoing themselves? Except Fallenpaw cause of her mother but like I'm hoping you could give them more voice in the next few chapters :)

Other than that, I think this is absolutely rad and I'm always running to read an update when you do post!!

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