Talk:Split-Up/@comment-5488450-20121209193718

Wow Arti! Okay, I'm forcing myself to make a useful comment for like the first time... Ever. But War is worth it ;)

I really liked the way you made Gorsefur sort of fight back with Badgerclaw. It shows character development and the effect that Brookfall might have on him. Although I personally don't support BrookxGorse. Why? BECAUSE GORSEFUR IS GOING TO BE MAH MATE!

I also, as always, love the characters. When I saw you had finally wrote this I was excited to see that plot but even more excited to hear from the cats we all love and I was not disappointed.

And the Badgerstrike view really pleased me :) I'm not sure of you did it after my recommendation but you did a really good job writing from his perspective, in that short period of time.

And now, I am forcing myself to find something to use constructive crtisisim on, and it was so good I could only come up with the lamest thing. There wasn't too much of a plot to the story. Or there was, but not too much happened and it felt more like the chapter to a story than an episode.

Still you did amazing and I am extremely impressed. Whoooo! Now write the next one :D