Talk:Night Ripples/@comment-29491342-20160518111242

Nice story.

Spoilers Nightclaw seems reluctant to talk about her mate. I'm thinking that she's lying, (crazy conspiracy theory time) and that her mate's in another Clan.

Shadowraven's full of sass, but whatever happened to Streamkit?

And, why didn't Ripplestorm's ever ask other clanmates about Stormriver? Or I might have just missed that part.

End of Spoilers

The only thing that bothers me is that you two howevers so close to each other, but it's not that big of a deal.

Overall, I think you need to write more.