Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-25926899-20151029041507

part one (spoilers)

o me o my.

okay so for starters you're really good with this detached personality so far; it's not something i've seen successful many times tbh, like usually it just makes me think of my immortal lmao. but anyway, yeah, this one is really good!!! he's an interesting point of view to see things from too bec it's so different from what we normally see and how (i hope) most of us see things. like sasha sounds precious but he's like haha no.

and yeah like firey says, the counting thing. i really see what you're getting at with that it's a really clever idea for your story. the setting is really cool like wow i love. what's with you and super original settings i'd never think of in a million years but wish i had??? the snow guard is such a rad idea and i am honestly really excited to see what other personalities are on it bec it seems like something lucifer is totally fit for, but i wanna see how others take it. & the thing abt tessa ono :cc that was sad.

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so ye man this is super great so far i'm so excited about it!! i still have some let it burn to read tho oop. ur writing is like the most fabulous i've ever seen and i hate it wtf. like share some of that talent miss, pls.