Talk:The Rebellion's Souls: Echoing Promises/@comment-39524212-20200122221513

Ahhhh I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!

Okay so I’ve been reading some random fanfics, and I’ve realized that the comments on a lot of are pretty long and give constructive criticism and stuff. So here we go.


 * Spoilers I guess

Okay. First of all, I feel so bad for Echocry! It seems like she’s lost so many family members, not to mention Frostfang. Also, it was interesting that when she received each life, she felt a lot of pain or discomfort. And ughhhh Darktail I hate Darktail! I also want to know who the bloody corpse was under Echostar’s paws. Was it Frostfang????

I am totally not trying to be mean or anything but I think Moonpool wasn’t capitalized once or twice.

Overall, it’s ANAZING so far, and great start! I can’t wait for more!