Talk:Willowflare's past/@comment-6399195-20131120034116

SPOILERS I must say, I'm very impressed. This story has a good amount of detail and has few grammar/spelling issues. The character have their own personalities and have characteristics that make them different. While yes, the plot is somewhat predictable, but it still holds up well. If I were to score it then I would give it an 8/10, good job. I can't wait to see more.