Talk:On the Side/@comment-24155647-20141213044933

This is nice so far :) It seems to have come off with an interesting start, and the flashbacks were pretty sweet C:

I agree with Blazey down below, maybe you could've explained a little more - but that's okay.

And I noticed this: Being a eight year old she-cat - the word 'eight' starts with a vowel, so the 'a' before that should be an 'an', just because it makes more sense. Sorry if I'm fussing a little too much, I'm a grammar police :P

Anyway, this is fantastic so far! Can't wait to read more :3