Talk:The Valley/@comment-24766822-20160102031800

(Be aware that this comment won't be nearly as intelligent as some of my other ones. I'm very tired and can't think. :P)

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Hmm, interesting. Very fast-paced, especially for a pilot episode, but I don't mind. c:

I like all the characters so far, especially Fire. I can't wait to see their characters develop as the plot progresses, and I'm interested to see what happens to Rainbow and Blizzard's relationship.

I think the most relatable character in this story so far is- you guessed it- Rainbow. I can relate to her because sometimes I just get tired with everything too, and it's not a nice feeling. And I've been placed in leadership positions before, and I always get uncertain about my choices, or if I even deserve to be a leader. I'd like to have someone like Blizzard looking out for me and keeping me going, though! <3

The interactions with the characters are very believable so far. It adds that nice touch of realism that you want, especially in the dialogue.

I did find the dog scene a little bit sudden, but in all honesty, I don't think it really was a problem. Fast or slow, it's all still enjoyable to read.

I love the plot so far, Sea, and I'm so excited to see the characters and their world grow as the story is written. I can't wait for the next episode, please don't keep us waiting too long!

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