Talk:Songpaw's Secret/@comment-1703139-20121206012911

Alright, another long-winded comment from me.

I like the prologue- short, sweet, and very much intriguing. I like Fireflower's character development between the two books, that was well thought out. Although I feel like some more secondary characters have a lack of characteristics- Hawkswoop and Bushpaw for instance. Hawkswoop plays the only brother of two sisters, so I feel like he should get more personality then just the lines he says in certain parts. You know? And Bushpaw in the first book was portrayed as kind of arrogant but with a tinge of sadness. I'd like to see that come back, it gives him a distinction between himself and easy-going Troutpaw.

Can't wait to read the next one. :)