Talk:Gorse Thorn Pains/@comment-5342796-20150816164715

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OOOOH PLOT TWIST

Okay lemme start at the beginning of the episode. I really liked this one; I think it's one of my favorite. I love how you took some time away from the action to have a quieter storyline more centric to the group; they are, after all, everyone's loves. The Clans are okay but I feel more at home when the story focuses on Storm and her friends c:

Poor BrownXShade :c I don't even understand, they're both being so STUBBORN. They should just listen to me and become mates officially already *nods*

But Gorse's arrival certainly complicates things a lot doesn't it? What is it with cats constantly turning out to be alive when thought dead on this show? I really liked that plot twist; instead of just having a reason for Shade and Brownhare to get back together immediately after their argument, you threw a further wrench between them.

Even though that makes me mad and sad since I ship them to death. Sob

I like your idea of having a peaceful, more calm finale! It was a very nice wrap-up to end with just the group talking and showing us again the bonds of their friendship. Excellent season!

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