Talk:The Discovery/@comment-5197876-20130915170042

Am I allowed to cry?

SPOILERS

That was so beautiful.

Okay, the prison scenes were amazing. The Isle was described so well, I could actually get a clear picture in my mind. I honestly thought Frostflower had died at the end of Chapter 1, ad I was thinking, "Well. That was short."

At first I thought that her escape was real fast, but i found it worked in real well. Coalfur is an interesting character, and I hope he and Frost end up together.

I cried during this. The end was so beautiful. Every sentence left me wanting more.

I hope you continue this series, beacuse it's an amzing idea.

One question. Is this SkyClan the same canon SkyClan? Or is it just called that?