Talk:Capture/@comment-28076378-20170630022953

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this was a great start for a a series!

Kayn is cool, I'm wondering if she really does like killing or if she hates it; she said she's "going with the flow" so i assume that means she doesn't care. The part where she was 'comforting' Aaryi felt werid, I was never expecting someone like her to do that. She seems pretty easy-going when she isn't fighting.

idk why but I thought Aaryi was a tom xD i was tired when i first started reading so i probably missed that... But the way you portray her is cool. She hates killing but does it anyway, and it's slowly making her want to get out of there more and more each day. hope she and the others will find a way out of this mess and go back to living their lives.

aahh no! i didn't even know Leina that long, but i liked her and was willing her to somehow get out of the fight. I feel so bad for her, she was so scared. I have a feeling she was probably a sweet cat when someone wasn't trying to kill her. oh well.

Now Aiga's dead! All the characters I start to like in a short amount of time die! why are you doing this to me. She seemed pretty friendly and i suppose nice *shrug*

that dude Skell who killed her is creepy, the way he was acting... I honestly wasn't expecting him to win, and the way he did it seemed cruel to me... well, everything that's going on seems cruel to me.

uh-oh. it's champs VS champ now. things are gettn real. I wonder if Aaryi is going to fight Kayn... Kayn promised Aaryi she wouldn't die, I wonder if that will be true... (i mean probably but still. i wonder who'll end up dying)

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