Talk:The Birds/@comment-25653434-20150801142310

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This is really cool so far Stormver! I like the ideas of the birds comming to get the cats from their clan and they choose Aspenpaw out of all the cats in the clan.

I think in this episode you could develop the plot a litle bit more. Like telll us why these birds come or say something like the birds have been comming for as long as any cat could rember.

Other than that this is a really cool idea! Can't wait to read more!

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