Talk:The Fall of the Wind/@comment-1703139-20140218013706

SPOILERS

There we go. I am sated from the cliffhanger.

Okay, there were a few grammar mistakes...(wrong 'threw- should have been through). I loved the back and forth thing, where you got to see both characters respond to the same dialogue. But be careful with that- sometimes you paraphrased and used slightly different sentences. At first I thought you accidentally C&Ped the same thing in twice.

ONWARD