Talk:The Shimmer of the Ash/@comment-8248793-20130605034159/@comment-25531638-20130606231027

Hey, I was thinking the exact same thing when Shimmerpaw flung the moss! Nice work Rainy. You too, Firey. I really like the personalities of the cats, especially Shimmerpaw, Redbirch, and Dewpaw. The prologue was pretty good. And I know how hard it is to write prologues. <3 Silverpool's name.

The story is fast paced, but just quick enough that it keeps my attention. So far, awesome story all around. I will look forward to the rest of this, Firey and Rainy!