Talk:Masquerade (Songfic)/@comment-11493954-20140118203037

You probably meant 'beauty.'

Spelling aside, I'll now go to what I loved!

That was quite interesting, and I loved the little drama between Darkfur and Frostflower. It's  great idea!

I'm glad they got back together in the end. :3

Maybe you should describe the party a little more, it seems really intriging.

I didn't wuite get this paragraph. A few words are missing, I believe.

Darkfur showed up. And the two met. Again. Under the veil of disguise, was Frostflower's love. But who's? All she had to do was dance with the one she loved.

Overall, great job!