Talk:Dark Secret/@comment-11493954-20140108023213

Spoilers.

Hi, you don't know me, but I stalked here for 10 months, and then ILW wiki for close to as long. Your stories are awesome, by the way! (FlynnxHolly in Wolf Heart is my favorite.)

Ajax is reaaaaalllly cool, and I love how he kind of shows up out of nowhere. That teaching Rosepaw thing got him my approval.

Yellowpaw is really wise. It would likely be a good iea for Rosepaw to become good friends with her. She is certainly going to be a help in turbulent times.

Thorn is awesome too. I love the revelation of Ajax and Thorn being brothers. That adds so much depth. I have a feeling Thorn is a traitor.

And Rosepaw, last but certainly not least. Her strong, I-can-challenge-you personality is very interseting to see in a main character. Sucks to be an apprentice at 5 moons, of course. That smelling speciality is certainly unique, and to put it in the words of Jaystar, "an interesting development."