Talk:What To Do?/@comment-5488450-20130725195749

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Aw aw aw aw MINKPAWWWW. I love her so much, okay, you just have no idea and her poor parents and arghhhh Minkkppaawwww<3 Rainy you have a brilliant character here-one with a really complex description and a lot of just juice to them. Minkpaw is someone to proud of coming up with :)

And wee ooo wee ooo, this was intense. I personally didn't even think it would be wise to tell Duskwatcher or Lilywhatever(I personally think either really could have been guilty). And the scene with Hawkeyes was a little cute I think!

And the development I can already feel. Breezepaw, Minkpaw, Daisypaw, Specklepaw and even just the development of the Clan as a whole is really rich. I can't wait to see where you go from here!

Finally, the things I might point out are the shippings. You know I don't like DaisyXSpeckle but I think they are cute. However, I personally don't like the idea of BleeXBreeze not because I like BreezeXSpeckle because its just too... predictable? Mary-sue like even for an obviously imperfect character? It just isn't right-I like him better as a fangirling character as apposed to one to ship Breezepaw with, that seems like the kind of character he should be.

Off to read the next episode thank you so so much for writing these quickly :D

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