Talk:Me and My Guardian/@comment-24459516-20130506193319

Okay. Okayokayokay. I really, really, REALLY need feedback from you guys.

Was chapter five clear enough? Did it confuse any of you? Are there any questions about the Guardians and Shadows that you have that I can answer? I tried to be as clear on the two systems as I could, and yet I feel like to the readers it would be seriously confusing. So tell me what you thought of it, s'il vous plait. D: