Talk:Tanglefrost and His Many Mates: A Spoof of Love, Hatred, and Stalkers/@comment-5848758-20131203172209

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This might be *dare I say it?* FUNNIER than BBTC.

I ain't kidding.

This bit was hilarious:

Tanglefrost's ears pricked, and he stopped to stare at Mousewhisker. "You do?"

"Yes!" Mousewhisker cried. "I was going to bring her out here and run her over with a tractor."

"Interesting," Tanglefrost mewed. Suddenly, a wicked plan came to mind. "Hey, Mousewhisker, where is said tractor?"

Mousewhisker lifted his head up and angled his ears towards a shady spot in ThunderClan territory. "Over there," he mewed.

"Oh, cool!" Tanglefrost ran off to retrieve the tractror.

After spending ages figuring out how to work the tractor, Tanglefrost returned, driving it towards the helpless feline commonly referred to as Mousewhisker.

When Mousewhisker saw that Tanglefrost was driving towards him, he looked up, his eyes wide and scared, and mewed, "Hey! What are you doing?"

"You've just given me the perfect way to kill you! I'm going to run you over with a tractor!" Tanglefrost laughed, increasing the speed.

"But... you can't run me over with my own tractor!" Mousewhisker protested.

I like the idea of you shipping yourself with all your mates, it is a very original idea. I also love the FORMAT. You serious writing style just makes it more humorous.

Please continue!

Sidenote that isn't really relevant: Are you ever going to continue FQS as that is superb. <3