Talk:Showdown(Part 2)/@comment-4751506-20130609175032

...really, Earthstar? Really? I appreciate your sense of loyalty, but--

Right. Well. Onto the comment. There were a couple of grammatical errors in this chapter, but nothing major - forgetting to put a comma after a quotation or something, and no misspelled words that I could detect. There was a bit of confusion at the beginning, but I caught on fairly quickly. Those were Badgerstrike and Firestar, if I'm not mistaken and unbelievably stupid.

Okeedoke, now onto my self-acclaimed favorite portions of the episode. This. Was. What. I. Call. A. Finale. If this were a real television show, life on television, I would find the producers and murder them. I'm happy this comes out every week / every day / every few days because it's summer, because I would find where you live [in da ghetto], and I would murder you. The suspense is killing me, and I hope you start writing the first epi of Season Four as soon as possible, 'cause there are some cats I want to see killed. Pronto. Other than that, I loved the characters - Shadowsong and Brookfall's breakdowns seemed really essential, and I really liked how they had their key moments. Oakclaw's care for Shadowsong is seriously cute, and there was definitely a Brook x Gorse in there [though you know I'm Adderfall for life. c;].

I love you Arti<3