Talk:Red Skies at Night/@comment-27725192-20170507164722

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Oooh okay I see this is an intro to the soon to be heroes. Alright, Ibis looks like the rebellious type and I wonder what's the name of the rogue group she's in and how it functions. Ibis seems to be skilled at lying and at first I thought she was selfish enough to actually kill the children but she seems the opposite of that for not doing it. I wonder what's wrong with her besides the lying.

Ugh, Nolan! I do wonder why he's so disgusted at seeing a happy family but seriously - those parents are quite careless for leaving their cats. But maybe that's just the way the rogues are there in that setting - quite selfish which goes to show that you've painted a perfect picture of how the rogue community functions.

I love Frostwing because she seems so realistic. In the books, every warrior has undying, unquestionable loyalty to their Clan and I always wished more cats would question Clan life. That's what Frostwing does but it is wrong for her to not see the true value of her Clan. A lot of these cats are selfish and I wonder who Frostwing's meeting.

Helios is the first to have a purpose. He wants his sister back so bad that he'll torture as many others as he can to get her back. True villains have a purpose and I'm most excited to see this one become a hero.

The first time I read it through, I clenched my fists, ready to punch the screen where the word "Amanda" was. Second time, calmer. Third time, I'm stable enough to write this comment. Amanda is the most selfish and heartless. She's bored so she inflicts pain on KITS and doesn't even care. I hope she suffers the most. And I have a feeling that squirrel is in big trouble with Amanda.

Good episode so far! You set up the setting, mood and characters so well and I can't wait to read the next one.

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