Talk:Wisp/@comment-7410018-20150904065753

~Spoilers~

Well first off I already like Wisp. Honestly, I do feel like he needs more character development beyond being asocial, but this is only the first episode so I don't really think I can speak on that. But so far it's going well- I relate to Wisp, as I'm a person who is generally quiet and has trouble making friends or sometimes just doesn't want to communicate.

I think that the start was good, because it throws you into the story right away, leaving you wondering what's going on, so you want to keep reading. To be honest, I'm wondering if I'm going to see more of the group of rogue cats that didn't like Wisp in the future, I suspect that they might play a role? I'm also curious to see if Wisp somehow ends up joining the Clans, and I guess I'll see.

I like the backstory with his mother- that's kind of sad. But I'm curious about what exactly was happening, and why she was being attacked and killed.

The suspense for the Clan cats coming and while they are there is good, and it sets the stage for the storyline very well.

Only one criticism comes to mind, and I don't think it's a fair one since it's only the first episode, it just seems like the other rogues don't have a personality yet and Wisp's is still developing too. So yeah, I can't really say that the cats don't have enough personality, it's too early for that.

But anyways, good job.

~end spoilers~