Talk:Just Our Selves/@comment-24320714-20131223175413

Really good job. I feel so sorry for amberkit. I love the words you use! My favourite sentance is: Letting out an excited squeak, Amberkit ran over to to the pile, scrambling up towards the squirrel. I love the word scramble

One thing though, you accidently called Amberkit, amberpaw in:

Willowkit walked up to Amberpaw, "You shouldn't be picking fights like that. I know that cats in this clan treat us differently, but that doesn't mean that we can hurt them. We will finger all this out sooner or later. Everyone will be nice to us eventually."

"I know," Amberpaw pouted.