Talk:Luna's Moon/@comment-26432133-20170130161911

Adding on to what Pumpkin said, I honestly don't think you know what a scar is, as no scar can be black, and no one can be born with one. Sorry if you do, this is just the thought I get from reading this.

This is pretty good! I'm okay with the name "Lunamoth" because I think she's just Luna right now, correct? And she'll become a warrior and get "moth" added to her name? But if this is the case, then I would suggest changing your description of Lunamoth to a description of Luna because it's at the beginning of the story and really confuses the reader.

I like this idea; it has a lot of potential. Keep going, Turkey!