Talk:The Newcomer/@comment-8248793-20130731210415

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Ivypaw seems suspicious. She seems do awkward with the others, but that only makes them kinder. Though the apprentices seemed a little rushed to please her. I do suspect that FireClan told Ivypaw something, that might make her a danger to WaterClan...

There was this one part, right about when Ivypaw was about to get captured, you wrote Snowpaw instead of Ivypaw. Also, when aquapaw's face turned red, you wrote. "I nodded, my face turning read."

It was a good episode, and I better hurry to read the next!

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