Talk:Warrior/@comment-24143898-20151102075508

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Part Two:

At first, I was a little surprised to see Ravenflight being called the 'leader' of the fly warriors, but I think after what she proved to the group during the practise rounds, I felt that I now believed she would fit the role better than what my first impression was of her. I reckon General Blackthorn made the right decision there c:

So like, these 'fly warriors' are just an experiment? Interesting - another great idea, I never come up with things like these, Firey, I praise you on these great ideas that you always come up with. c: Why are they an experiment, or is this going to be revealed later on?

Oooh, I wasn't expecting General Blackthorn to spring that up on them... that was clever, clever indeed, I liked that.

AMG CLIFFHANGER UGUGUGUGUGUG. I LOVE THEM YET I HATE THEM. They're so amazing yet so annoying hehe, and this one is brilliant. Why is that Raider staring at Ravenflight...? Guessing that will be revealed in the third part, hmmm?

Great work, Firey, and no mistakes as far as I could see. C:

Part Three:

Holy moly, that Raider - Artic - is somehow really really creepy. How does he know about Ravenflight and the fly warrior project...? Did Artic have something to do with it all, somehow? That's the only way that I can think of at this current point, but I can tell at this point in time that Artic is obviously going to be a pivotal character in this novel.

I just want to say that that bit in caps when that Raider she-cat hollers at Artic (the bit in the caps) reminds me a lot of Rainy C:.

Poor Whiteflame D:. I really feel for the fly warriors now, they're already one cat down, even if they're getting that new cat from another cat. I have a feeling that Artic is going to be involved with this, yet again...

Oooh, poor little Ravenflight, getting separated from her mother like that. D: AT least she was better off than Aspenpelt, he was worse, I feel kinda sorry for them for that. At least I'm happy that they got over it, but it's still sad.

once again, a nice cliffhanger, and it's making me excited for more! :D Once again, I could see no mistakes. Good job, Firey!

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