Talk:Dark Cries/@comment-5342796-20140614232200

Just a little tip, it helps to start a new paragraph whenever a different character starts speaking. That way the words are more broken up and it's easier to read, instead of having those monster paragraphs. I know sometimes when you copy-paste the spacing on wiki can get weird so you have to edit it, but just a friendly suggestion :) I like the title of this! Very intriguing.