Talk:Broken Souls/@comment-5342796-20160712145459



THAT LAST LINE THOUGH. AN ARROW THROUGH MY HEART

Bryce is so dang relatable! I too alternate between wanting to do everything and just wanting to mope around wishing the world around me would hurry up and fix itself. THREE CHEERS FOR NIGHTSHADOW AND FEATHERSHINE! They're like the mom and dad friends, the ones who have their life together that you always look up to but at the same time you're like, if you were a mess like me you'd be a lot more relatable.

I liked how you had Bryce follow her sisters' examples in branching out in her new home, making new friends and at least learning more about what the Coalition cats around her think of her and of their cause. It's cool that they view her journey as a sign of hope, not intrusion. Their support is commendable, though I still do worry about what'll happen after the war is over.

Applepaw :( I don't want her to grow up; I know ambition and tenacity are traits that make her so lovable, but I feel like she can also be reckless and a bit too determined, which could put her in danger as the war takes over more and more cats' lives.

YAY KARINA AND BRYCE BONDING TIME. I love those two. I hope they become one of those sister-girlfriend pairs that are like sisters from another mister. I like how Karina, the most honest and blunt and awesome sis ever, acknowledges Terran's faults because she realizes that Bryce, like her, loves Terran in spite of and beyond any of his shortcomings, and regards those faults as just part of a tom she could never let go of.

CRIES. IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL

<3

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