Talk:Warrior/@comment-24143898-20151031220442

I'M GETTING THERE

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Part One:

This reminds me a little of the Beauty for some reason, due to a few aspects in this story. It's cool. :P

Anyway, back to this story... so Ravenflight and these other cats are part of IceClan, right? It's a little bit unclear in this first part as to where their loyalties seem to lie.

Now, that beginning was cruel. I mean, at first it seems that's she just training... but fighting to kill? Woah, that's brutal, and it's a good backdrop to the story, defining this 'IceClan', especially as they have a different structure to a normal Clan, yes?

What are the other ranks apart from these 'fly warriors' (plus 'river warriors' and 'ground warriors', even though those were barely touched upon), and what do they do? Is this going to be revealed later on? I'm curious. c:

Are Ashshadow and Sootflight like mates or something?

These Raiders seem intimidating, and I want to know who they are - I'm guessing that will be revealed as the story progresses, yes? Either way, they're very interesting, and I liked the way you portrayed them c:.

Is Blackthorn liked a high-ranked cat, thus the 'General' part added to his name? (I'm asking a lot of questions oh well xD)

I feel as if Ravenflight is going to develop a lot over the story, as I feel that she's kinda naïve at this point in time, and I also think that over the course of the story, she's gonna find out what it really means to be a warrior c:.

This was a great start, Firey! I can see nothing to improve so far C:.

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