Talk:The Last Winged Warrior- Laststar's Story Myth/@comment-7270915-20130620145411

The paragrpaph-per-comment rule seems kind of - oh, how should I put it - selfish? arrogant? Something like that. You really shouldn't do that. People will put comments when they want to put comments. Putting that little rule up might discourage some people from reading the story because they might think you are bratty and immature.

So far, the story is pretty good, but you shouldn't put descriptions in parentheses, or list things, because it disrupts the flow of the story.