Talk:Equinox/@comment-28057208-20161119001640

Beautiful so far! I love the imagery, and I can really imagine the story actually happening.

I love this story-telling idea, and this story has a lot of great potential. I look forward to reading more!

The characters are great so far, and like I stated before: the description is beautiful.

I'll write a better review later on, but so far, this story is coming out amazing!