Talk:Sayna's Poetry/@comment-5019333-20140806233109

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The gradient is so pretty :3

The Legend of Cinders

I really liked how you wrote this poem in Cinderpelt's and Cinderheart's perspective. It was well done. The rhyming was smooth, and I really liked some of the rhyme pairs!

The Cats of Shining Silverpelt

StarClan - well, you just have to write about it, or they will get angry and smash you to pieces in a heartbeat. Just kidding.

I enjoyed this one especially because of all the detail and unique words. I can picture myself watching the "cats of shining Silverpelt" play this out while the poem is being read. :)

Leafpool's Song

Love some of the word choices in here! You did an excellent job in portraying Leafpool's feelings. There's a couple of grammar errors, but I don't care much about that :P I thought the last stanza was a great way to close the poem.

Great job over all! Keep up the amazing work and the gradients !

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