Polarnight

Exiles
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Meet the clans! Some of the names are a little weird, only because I named them after the seasons!
Bareclan

Leader:

Articmoon

Deputy:

Glacierstep

'''Medicine cat:'''

Draftbare

Apprentice

Cloudpaw

Warriors

Crunchfoot

Frozenhawk

Icewater

Leafbrook

Mistyfern

Patchtuft

Whitepond

Powderslip

Sliptail

Sparklethorn

Windwhisper

Thawfang

Shiverstream

Pondfrost

'''Queens + Kits'''

Bird + Smoke- Iciclekit, Streamkit, Gustkit

Crystal and tooth

Apprentices:

Skatepaw

Polarpaw (Night)

Elders

Forestheart

Treeclaw

Bareclan is the main clan. Named after Leaf-bare, they thrive during this tough season. They scavenge for nuts and seeds over the year and once it is leaf-bare they place nuts in numerous different spots over their territory, which attracts prey, little did the squirrels know that there are warriors waiting for their arrival!

Fallclan

Leader:

Redmoon

Deputy:

Breezeclaw

'''Medicine Cat:'''

Amberfall

Apprentice:

Briskpaw

Warriors

Browntwig

Chillheart

Earthpool

Firepelt

Fogpelt

Grayeye

Woodhowl

Crunchfoot

Rainpuddle

Nutwhisker

Snaptooth

'''Queens + Kits'''

Longear and Burntsky-Cricketkit, Coldkit, Acornkit.

Frosttail and Swirlwind-

Apprentices

Applepaw

Firpaw

Elders

Berrynose

Splitbark

Yellowswallow

Newclan

Leader:

Bluemoon

Deputy:

Brightleaf

'''Medicine Cat:'''

Newcloud

Warriors:

Blossomcreek

Chirpwhisker

Freewing

Grasspelt

Lightheart

Meltingsnow

Sunstorm

Pureflight

Skyflash

Deerfall

Fawndusk

Puddleripple

Robinsong

Thawmoss

Shinebrook

Queens+Kits

Bllom and Tulip

Greenclan

Leader:

Blazemoon

Deputy:

Clearocean

'''Medicine cat:'''

Shadedgreen

Warriors:

Redwind

Starwatcher

Burntbreeze

Sweetthorn

Tropiccloud

Raybird

Coalfang

Beachheather

Waterleap

Jumpstripe

Snakewind

Sharkstorm

Nightwater

'''Queens + Kits'''

Wither and Weed- Sandkit, Stripekit, Creekkit

Apprentices

Turtlepaw

Daisypaw

Yarrowpaw

Pinepaw

Sappaw

Elders

Glazepelt

I wake up to a kick to my side.

“Open your damn eyes Polarkit! You’re the last one to open them and I don’t want the clan to think I raised a reject!”

I obey her command, for Pondfrost is not a queen to argue with. The morning light filters through the bracken in the small den and I stretch yawning quietly. This was not the first time I have opened my eyes, I have seen the world, or at least the camp, many times before. I opened my eyes when I was two sunrises old, far before any of my litter mates, but I didn’t want to face Pondfrost as a ‘special’ kit. So I explored the camp at night, I have memorized the night patrols and the whole camp and my eyesight is far keener than those of my siblings.

“Go play with your siblings now, so I can have a break from your stench!”

“Of course, Pondfrost.” I reply respectfully.

The ungrateful queen puffed out her chest, “Huh!”

I stepped out of the den and stretched in the morning sun. The dew was just lifting off the moss around the dried canyon we called home.

The first cat that realized my presence was Glacierpelt, the deputy. He padded towards me, I sat down and respectfully dipped my head.

“Hello my little night stalker.” The deputy smiled, “You couldn’t have expected no one to notice you?”

I stared at my feet, shame filling my chest “Sorry,” I mumbled.

“Don’t be” the deputy mewed, “You stayed in the camp and broke no rules, it impressed me that no one noticed you over the ten sunrises you were around.”

Wow! The deputy has complimented me and I’m not even half a moon yet!

The deputy nodded and padded away.

I didn’t know what to do know, I had explored the camp many days before and knew where everything was. Over in the cavern to my left was the medicine den, vines hung over the entrance to protect the den from enemies, as well as drafts.

That moment the medicine cat, Draftbare, padded out with Dripkit in his mouth and Shadekit unhappily trudging behind. Draftbare dropped the kit, “Now stay out of the medicine den!” he yelled.

Pondfrost leaped out of the nursery, “There was no need to yell at them like that!” She meowed, shuffling her kits back into the nursery.

“Take a look! They’ve messed up my entire den!”

Pondfrost peeked around the entrance, “Huh!” She exclaimed, “That’s barely anything!”

The angry queen turned her back and walked her kits back into the den glaring at the medicine cat before disappearing behind the entrance.

Draftbare sighed. I padded up towards the medicine, “Would you like some help Draftbare?” I offered.

Draftbare looked down, “No, you’ll just mess up like your litter mates.”

“No, I promise I won’t!” I started, “you need help, Cloudpaw has gone on his routine herb look and there is a huge mess behind you! The poppy seeds are tangled with the yarrow, and the catmint is getting wet in the little pool, you also probably don’t want to leave those daffodils in with the Chervil root, it’s too strong and will weaken the strength of the chevil root to fight infections!”

Draftbare stared down at me, his face shocked. “How did you know all that?”

“I can hear you training Cloudpaw through the nursery wall and I thought it would be a good skill to have when I’m a warrior!”

“But how did you remember all that information?”

I shrugged, “I just remembered.”

Draftbare stared at me for a moment before turning back into the medicine den, “Come on then!”