Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-24143898-20151030234351

wait up wait up i'm hereeee

and bc the rest of them are commenting in parts I will too C:

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Part One:

Am I right in saying that Greer somewhat 'controls' Lucifer? If I am right in saying that, I think that's an interesting way of mind control, and not something that I would've come up with. c:

I find Lucifer an interesting character, although at this stage I can't really tell what he's like fully. He seems reliant on numbers a lot - which I find unusual - but it also seems to really define his character. The counting's interesting, and another unique idea. Lucifer's a bit weird hmmm. xD

The Snow Guard seems interesting, and I want to know more about them, apart from the fact that they can't have relationships, like you mentioned with Tessa and Turner there... oh dear.

Oh, and that cliffhanger at the end was really cool, I liked it. I want to find out who this new cat is :D

This was a really good start, and I'll comment on the next parts when I have the time. :D

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