Talk:Rise of the Vipers/@comment-15560748-20160102034911

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I THOUGHT COLD WAS GOOD

I THOUGHT BEAUTY WAS EVEN BETTER

BUT RISE IS PROBABLY ONE OF YOUR BEST WORKS YET

Bryce is pretty unique character, which makes her interesting to me as a reader. Even though I can't relate to her situation, I feel as if I can empathize with her. She's not one of your usual characters, but I can tell that you're really comfortable in that environment. It adds a nice touch to the pilot in that way.

I like the thought of The Vipers (omg The Hidden*Viperstar) and the Coalition. The Vipers seem pretty intruiging to me. Like what exactly do they want? Why are they doing this? Who are they? With just one small scene you added a pretty big cliffhanger: What is Bryce going to do? And Coalition seems really nice. Amberstar and Hawkstar.

I can literally imagine Amberstar being Amberfrost from beauty and running away from FireClan and coming and forming her own group of cats called the Coalition. And the Hawkstar would be her Brownhare, and then everyone would be happy xD (It'll probably be only me because I'm probably the only Brownfrost shipper x3). But I'd like to get to know them as characters as the story proceeds.

And Nightshadow. We can't help but ship with your stories because we know that there's always going to be a ship and that it's going to be perfect no matter what. I'm serious. But Nightshadow seems pretty sweet, but I think he may be up to something. I feel like he's hiding something from Bryce that she might need to know in the future. *plot twist*

I have a feeling that Bryce was based of Breezeflight, in a way. They're both pretty stong -willed, and they both would sacrifice their lives for the cats they love. It's actually really cool.

This episode was so good. I can't wait for the next one.

Keep up the good work, cousin ;)

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