Talk:Shard of Ice/@comment-25531638-20130920022200

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I've read this, just not commented :)

I love the beginning. It's so dramatic, and it just pulls you into the story immediately. The events of the whole episode are in perfect order.

I like the names too, how they're different from normal Clan names. And the whole idea of the show is just original, especially with the spy army and such.

The only thing I would suggest is more detail, and maybe slowing things down a bit.

Otherwise, great :)

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