Talk:The Snowy Moon/@comment-31569230-20170224035353

Wow, Nighty! This is amazing!

I like it! But maybe try fix the spelling/punctuation, not tryna say alot of it was bad heheh

And maybe fix the speech parts. Coz some experts decided it was cool to let characters/people have seperate lines when talking, what i mean is that a new paragraph when a new character speaks, like Pumpkin sed.

Apart from that, good job! Keep it up!