Talk:Fire It Up/@comment-7410018-20141106161459

Spoilers~

This was a really good story. I think you did a good job of fleshing it out, and making it so it contained a lot of detail and moved at a good pace. I really liked Violetflame; despite her betrayal, I think she was a really relatable character. Everyone at some point feels like they don't fit in and they have to do something to either prove it or rebel.

I liked how you started the story with kits asking for a story from Violetflame. It really draws you in, and makes you curious as to why Violetflame is a prisoner. And poor Firestorm :(

It was cool how you used people from the wiki as characters haha. where am I though? (just kidding)

I just thought that WindClan didn't waste any time in thinking that Wetstream was undoubtedly a traitor. Sure, I guess that was the point, but even that was a little bit rushed. I thought it would've been better if you waited until they met Cleverstar and Stargaze at the border, and they told them Wetstream was a traitor.

Other than that, this story was really amazing, it kept me interested the whole way through.