Talk:Brightshade's Secret/@comment-25531638-20130617015144

This is an awesome story! I can't wait for you to finish it! You cut it off at just the perfect time!

There is never a dull moment, even with the normal apprentice/kit days, because they all contain subplots that aren't too important to the whole story, but are the perfect accent. And like everyone else said, it was funny how Brightpaw wants to stay mad at Jaguarpaw. It's also really cool how they first met against each other, then sort of became friends.