Talk:Reconcilation/@comment-5342796-20150719232920



Ooooh awesome! A Mapleshade story! Those are the bomb dot com.

The beginning was really well done. You're an incredible writer; the maturity of the language and sentence construction you use is really impressive. I love the tone you take with Mapleshade's 1st person narrative; it's got this distinctly flat tone, even when speaking about tragedy, that gives you teh sense that this cat has definitely seen her share of destruction in the world. Which is, of course, true. So nice job with that!

I'm super excited to see how you set up this story as you narrate this path to supposed reconciliation. Awaiting more eagerly! <3 Great job!

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