Talk:Down, Not Out/@comment-11493954-20140102021559

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I'm going to start commenting now. Brilliant, as always.

I love how you flip POV's. It really works to make suspense. You know, people go come on, do this, do this, and then it flips and said person is, waaah D:<, and then oooh, what's in this part now. Well, ignoring the previous sentence, it really works, and gives such a good prespective on everything going on. :)

It's also amazing how you put in the thought process on what the entire squad is thinking to do with the prisoners. It is super sweet, let's you bond with the squad, gives great character devolopment oppertunities, and a great scope on what is going on.

Frankly, I can't come up with words to say how, well, just SUPERB this show is! Each character is so balanced, and yet so unique...you can see each character's postition and be in thier shoes so perfectly, and know exactly what they are thinking, and why they are thinking that.

Brookfall is boss for sneaking out after the squad, haha Gorsefur, you shouldn't leave her behind!


 * ) Thanks for writing this!