Talk:Hawky's Guide to a Perfect Fanfic/@comment-17305039-20130908204228

This is a really good guide! Some of the stuff mentioned in here bothers me too, like how people don't make new paragraphs when a character is speaking, how they have names like Sparkleymoon and Starstar, and how sometimes the plots are a bit plain. I mean, I'm not perfect with my stories, but a cat named Purpleheart who is a rainbow colored cat that is so beautiful and perfect that everyone loves her and she can fly nand she ends up destroying a whole group of rogues? Just. No. Thank you for making this guide, I hope more people see it and come up with good stories!