Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-8248793-20151103014158

SPOILERS part six

BRAMS CANNOT BE THE #1 FAN. UNACCEPTABLE >.>

I had this weird feeling in my chest when Everly became friends with the Snow Guard. I feel as though they have really no loyalty for anyone, and that Greer still keeps some sort of hold on them. Everly isn't safe here.

Also Calder/Farah seems to be a budding ship in this fic, although I don't think we'll see them too often. Carah? That's a cute ship name tho xD

Hm, Everly's thinking on the Snow Guard makes me wonder too. Like why can't the Clans protect themselves? I mean you answer this with the Collection but I'm curious to see how Greer convinced the Clans that they're weak and useless and need the Snow Guard, which means they get to have their warriors killed often.

Also the Collection is really creepy. I kind of already assumed what it was, but I also read the next part which explained it :P

Great part!! You really drew out the suspicion that something is wrong and you show Everly's intelligence and perhaps how much of a danger she is.

I'll comment on the next one soon, though I don't think I'll ever catch up at this rate XD

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