Talk:The Hidden Elements/@comment-8248793-20141213051652

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I'm only going to be able to comment about the first chapter I'm afraid, I'll try to read the rest and comment soon :)

I love Lilackit already, and the plotline is really unique! Though I felt like Lightningkit took control too fast, and I felt as though Lilackit was behind.

This was pretty good, your descriptions were matched up with the scene, and I'm expecting the rest of this to be good too! :D Sorry this is short :c

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