Talk:Night of Beginnings/@comment-5197876-20150316211619

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Okay, the suspense at the beginning was really well put together. I was actually really worried at parts.

Poor Blackheart. She has such a tragic tale, and the way you wrote it, it sounds believable, if that makes sense. I mean it's about talking cats but you know what I mean.

Whitetail and Silverleaf are ultra cute together, by the way.

Poor, poor Dimfeather. I really liked him, and was sad to see him go. I felt really emotional at his death, but nothing compares to Shard's death. *sob*

All in all, beautiful!

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