Talk:Despair/@comment-5488450-20140106002214

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wow this is such a sad, emotionally draining story and it really does make you feel sadder and sadder, more and more dreadful as you read on and the fact that this is more or less based off of (online)real life

I generally don't like it when the same thing happens over and over again in a story but you did a good job pulling it off here; making it the theme of the story where the chapters always ended on a similar note

It's very well done; perhaps I could recommend a bit more detail and some plot to the story besides death after death but other than that it's great!