Talk:Two Birds/@comment-27838201-20170507183533

Ohhh i like hwere this is going!

Anyways SPOILERSSSSSSSSSS

IM NOT GOOD AT THIS SO BEAR WITH ME!

First of all I love how they start out as rogue kit, but, why did their names end with -kit as rogue? Huh.... I honestly thought it was pretyt funny whenever talonkit started smacking everyone XD Anyways, I sometimes got confused on who was a girl and who was a boy. maybe clear that up a bit? I cant exactly picture the camp either, so maybe start adding detail of their surroundings.

Overall, this is a good story. I wonder if they'll prove themselves to the clan? CONTINUE IT!