Talk:Flames of Love/@comment-1956227-20140101221931

Spoilers

This is awesome Fire! I really love the relationship Snowbreeze and Brackenfur have, and you should certainly continue this!

Now for some criticisim

I didn't have any about the plot or story itself (That was awesome)

I did see some minor spelling mistakes (We all make those hehe) But other than that, it was great <3

(I'm really bad at this lol)