Talk:The Beauty System/@comment-24740423-20150816215914

i read this before and meant to comment earlier but *shrugs* { competition post / spoilers }

This is a really creative idea! It's kinda like a twist on dystopias?? idk how else to say it but it's super cool

I feel really sorry for the Beauty cats - they aren't allowed to love others, but she-cats are still forced to have kits for the Beauty anyway; you have to pass initiation to be a part of it, or you're poor if you fail. Also it seems unfair(??) how she-cats are only allowed to hunt and have kits but then the toms can only fight. like what if there's a tom that doesn't like fighting?? is he instantly poor or what,, ALSO where do non-binary cats fit in are they deemed poor from the time they say that they're nb orrrr

Also I hate Amberpaw's mom like lol can u not

I also feel sorry for Brownpaw, having to leave his parents to enroll into the Beauty System. He probably doesn't know anyone but Amberpaw (and possibly Redstar psh). also nice threat Redstar

I saw an error during their ceremony - Redstar purrs, “This moon in no different.” There're also some other grammar mistakes, but they're not major.

let's see if i can keep up with this show lol

{ x spoilers x }