Talk:Divided Hearts/@comment-28661234-20160422213415

Whoa. This is so suspenseful.

I really like Ravenpaw. He seems like an outcast and doesn't really care. It was infuriating how Orangedusk slashed him for nothing.

That's a great place to stop as it leaves me wanting more. I wonder who will win. Overall, I think this is a good story. I'll be checking in to read more.