Talk:Swiftpaw's death/@comment-4383750-20130711002548

You seem like a very promising author- just here are some tips:

go to source mode and check your spelling.

Make the story longer- that gives people something to look forward to.

Write about something people don't know about. Everyone knows how Swiftpaw died, but they don't know, for example, the secret life of your medicine cat OC.