Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-8248793-20151029022028

SPOILERS part one

Okay wow. I'll comment on every part since I did that with Let It Burn too. But wow okay. That was seriously dark and pretty morbid yeah. But equally exciting and I'm actually really into these sort of stories! Dystopian fantasy is my thing after all :)

The counting thing is interesting. I can see why Mika says that Greer controls them through the counting. Lucifer seems completely reliant on the numbers and I'm interested to know how the counting helped developed a blank sort of mindset for the cats in the Snow Guard. I definitely feel like this will be a huge part of the story so i'm really intriguied!!

Lucifer really draws me in. He (?) isn't my fav charrie and I can't say who is rn since it's only one chapter, but i feel as though he's the perfect unreliable narrator but a charrie you won't be completely attached to. But it fits the story since he seems to detached from the rest of the world, it only feels right to be detached from the story as you read it. (I dunno if that made sense lol)

But seriously!! Now you have like four stories you need to update because this is super super rad and I'm just craving for more<3

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