Talk:Your Heart Is A Muscle/@comment-5488450-20130326155435/@comment-5342796-20130326160308

Thanks Robo! I do know I kept switching the tenses; I hate writing in present first person, but it seemed like the best way to convey this story. And I know about the chorus thing too; that's always the hardest part of writing a songfic for me(Ha, I almost wrote snogfic, teehee) I just tried to phrase it differently under different circumstances. Danke for your feedback! <3