Talk:Revealings/@comment-25630395-20150623081538

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This episode was so heartbreaking </3 I love how you describes Fuzzears as this nasty old female who likes to insult the youth of today. You created this dread and prejudiced impression for the readers, which was why I was really surprised and touched to see her cry and have Breezepaw and Minkpaw comfort her. Nothing weird intended, but I love old people xD and Fuzzears reminded me of my grandmother (not in the degratory way, my grandma's kewl). Which was why I love her so much (Fuzzears, not Grandma).

I like how you showed some beginning of friendship between Minkpaw and Breezepaw. You're pacing their relationship really well, and it's not like, all of a sudden: " Minkpaw, let's be BFFs!"

Cannot wait to read morez. :)

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