Talk:A Songfic: Wide Awake/@comment-1703139-20130212220839

This is really good for a firsdt attempt! I like how you formatted, but I would say work on making the story longer. This song fits PERFECTLY (nicely done :D) but there's only a little story. I want details! Right now you have a great plot, but follow through with some more feelings and details. You did that towards the end. I like this. :)