Talk:Shadowpelt/@comment-26285531-20150801015029

Ooh, it looks good! :D I can't wait to read a bit more of it :)

Just a few technical things you can change if you feel so inspired: 'smelt' would be better as 'smelled' and I feel as though the story was a bit rushed, as was the chapters.

The grammar is good, what which I like since I am a total grammar Nazi, and I like the prophecy (prophecy, right?) "Beware not the forest, but the cats within..." Very mysterious. :)

Anyways, keep writing amazing and I'll be on the lookout! :D