Talk:Color Blind/@comment-25531638-20140206010343

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Ok, so I really liked this episode. I think you did a great job of building up the climax of it all to the battle. The only thing was that the beginning of the battle seemed a little bit quick and rushed. I would suggest describing the rogues and the surroundings more too.

But that scene where Crowheart rejects Snowbreeze was so sad. I ship CrowXSnow, so yeah. But I think you wrote it very well, especially with how Crowheart seems unsure if he really wants to stay with Storm.

Another thing I would suggest, is her feeling a little more guilt about repeatedly killing those rogue cats. It makes her a little more relatable, I guess. (although I dont think any of us have ever killed someone so we can't relate to that part)

But over all, good epsiode :3

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