User blog comment:Rainsplash987/I'm so ORIGINAL!!!!/@comment-5342796-20130126195846

Peach Colored Moon:

Characterization: 1.5/2

Descriptions & Style: 1.5/2

Plot Development: 2/3

General Guidelines: 3/3

Total: 8/10

Feedback: This story was just amazing. You took the charrie descriptions and worked them to your advantage perfectly; it was exactly how I imagined Eclipsepaw and Peachpaw. Your symbolism was great too. The plot and emotions might have been a teeny bit rushed, but that happens a lot in contest entries. Great job!

The Sea Lark

Characterization: .5/2

Descriptions & Style: 1/2

Plot Development: 0/3

General Guidelines: 0/3

Total: 1.5/10

Feedback: Chill Misty, I know you weren't done <3 S'fine, I just judged it anyway

Spilt Ink

Characterization: 1.5/2

Descriptions & Style: 2/2

Plot Development: 2.5/3

General Guidelines: 3/3

Total: 9/10

Feedback: This was just amazing Red. The description and characterization was vivid and alive, and the wording was intricate without being overbearing. I loved the plot, and the way you made things fit together. A few minor grammar errors, but no biggie, and the Clan was brought to life very well.

Love or power

Characterization: .5/2

Descriptions & Style: 0/2

Plot Development: 0/3

General Guidelines: 0/3

Total: .5/10

Feedback: Same for Misty, lawl Fuzzy, but it was really good... for the parrie there was. ;)

Shimmers Through The Blizzard

Characterization: 1/2

Descriptions & Style: .5/2

Plot Development: 0/3

General Guidelines: 0/3

Total: 1.5/10

Feedback: Excellent prologue Moon, I really wish you could've finished it.

The Flaming Deer

N/A- Lilly's finishing this in 3 days.

Note: these were all amazing, and I had to be REALLY harsh just to get scores below 10. As soon as the other judges post their scores, and Lilly finishes, we'll determine the winner! :D