Talk:The Rising Star/@comment-26432133-20161223032236

With Ashpaw, I get Thornclaw-Tigerpaw deja vu. I really hope this little apprentice won't be a crazy self-absorbed murderer who starts AshClan and wages Clan War II.

I really like seeing Ravenwing X Silvershade, mostly because I just love shipping characters. But it isn't clumsily written like Cinderella, so kudos to you!

A couple touch-ups here and there would make the reading experience smoother, what with proper periods and commas and the its/it's thingy.

Keep writing! This is great!