Redfang's demand

Note: this is way in the future, Bramblestar is long forgotten

ThunderClan cats
Leader: Redfang (has not traveled to moonpool yet): dark red tabb tokmwith yellow eyes and black stripes

Deputy: Snarlclaw: dark brown tabby Tom with dark amber eyes and black paws

Medicine cat: Graywillow: light gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Warriors

Clawtooth: scarred dark Ginger Tom with gray eyes and white paws

Timberclaw: light brown tabby Tom with yellow eyes

Quiverpelt: big dark gray Tom with amber eyes

Treeshadow: mottled red-brown Tom with dark green eyes and black kegs and ears

Raggedfur: thick pelted-Ginger Tom with green eyes

Flameheart: ginger-and-gray tom with green eyes

Rivershade: black-and-gray Tom with dark blue eyes

Frostyfang: huge gray-white Tom with dark blue eyes

Brackentail: golden brown tabby Tom with amber eyes and white tail tip

Secretscar: black Tom with a torn ear and amber eyes

Apprentices

Thrashpaw: jumpy black-and-white Tom with green eyes

Nightpaw: black Tom with icy blue eyes

Whitepaw: huge white Tom with amber eyes

Queens/ she-cats

Mistflower: dark gray she-cat with blue eyes (mother to Flamehearts kits: Skykit: fluffy slender silver-and-white tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes, Flowerkit: tortoiseshell she-cat, and Stormkit: dark gray tom with amber eyes)

Finchwing: pale brown tabby she-cat with lighter chest and paws with green eyes

Ashcloud: pale gray she-cat with black legs and ears with pale blue eyes

Silverbreeze: silver tabby she-cat with light blue eyes and white paws

Rainshine: slender silver tabby she-cat with light blue eyes and one white paw

Blossomnose: tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with green eyes

Elders

Graypelt: old gray tom

Squirreltail: old ginger Tom

Fangclaw: old dark Ginger Tom

summary
Redfang is leader now, he makes the rules. When Skykit is born alongside her sister: Flowerkit, and her brother: Stormkit she realizes how unfair it is how Redfang treats them. First off he only let's toms be apprentices to warriors. She-cats can be medicine cats or queens, and they are fed very little. The she-cats are taught how to be proper queens when their about old enough to listen. Also Redfang is so strong, if you disagree with him he kills you. Skykit wants this to stop. She secretly spies and plots to get rid of Redfang once and for all.

chapter 1
I leaped up on to my mothers back.

"I win!" I yowled then scrambled excitedly off.

My sister: Flowerkit was at my mothers stomach gazing up.

"Stormkit is becoming an apprentice today." Flowerkit rolled her eyes "were going to become apprentices in becoming queens."

Skykit rolled her eyes to. Only the toms could be warriors under Redfangs rule, and she-cats must be queens. For every she-cat in the clan (except Graywillow the clans medicine cat) were queens living in an extended nursery.

"why can't we become warriors?" asked Skykit turning to her mother, Mistflower "we have all our ears and whiskers! We can fight and provide food for the clan if given a chance."

Mistflower looked sadly at her daughters "it's Redfang's rule, we'll just have to get used to it. I was in the nursery with you when he got named leader. He never went to moonpool. So I think he only has one life."

"nope, he doesn't" it was Flameheart as the Tom padded in with a fat juicy mouse for his kits "he received his lives from the dark forest cats, I heard him talking about it. Even though every other cat wants him to go to the moon pool, he refuses."

"hi daddy!" Skykit and Flowerkit bounced to their fathers side "Were's Stormkit?"

"Stormpaw is out training battle moves with Redfang." meowed Flameheart annoyed "you need to get your apprentices names so come over her, the father gets to name you apprentices and mentors."

Skykit and Flowerkit looked up to their father:

"you'll be Flowerpaw now." he meowed "Silverbreeze, please teach her about being a queen" then Flameheart looked to Skykit "you'll be Skypaw, Rainshine, please teach her about being a queen."

The sisters nodded and looked at their new apprentices.

"okay Skypaw come over her." meowed Rainshine "I'll take you to the training corner were we practice fighting moves, invade of an attack on the nursery and the camp you'll have to learn to defend yourself. Plus I was a warrior before this whole charade so I know a lot of good moves."

Skypaw nodded, her eyes lit up.

"so the first move goes like this."

...

After a long day of training, Skypaw curled up in a nest with her sister who had practiced with her. It was a long and tiring day of training.

When Skypaw got into her dream she saw a cat. Stars gleamed in it's fur, it's eyes a pale yellow. Skypaw panicked.

"who are you?" she asked.

"fight it, find out it's weakness, save your clan."

"what?" Skypaw tilted her head to the side "do you mean save the clan from Redfang?"

Skypaw took a step forward but was knocked back. The cat murmured one more thing to her then left:

"it's all in your paws Skypaw, don't let ThunderClan down."

Then the cat faded a together and Skypaw woke up.

it's all in my paws? thought Skypaw confused ''this means, I'm pretty sure, that I have to save ThunderClan myself! But how doi do it?''