Talk:Rogue/@comment-17759525-20170718130223/@comment-25110166-20170727020846

oooh my gosh im smiling so big right now. this is so so sweet <3

The Allegiance cats are (obv) very different from the Clans and they make sure they're pretty clearly not involved with them. I think it's mentioned that they are rogues that were chased out when the Clans first settled - this takes place at the old forest - and slowly, like in the Clans, more outsiders joined and introduced them to new things. The reason they steered clear of the Clans is because they are understandably afraid of them because they were chased out before just cause there are so few of them. As they divided themselves and formed basically a new way of life, they also developed casual ways of talking and embedded it into thier "culture" if you will. (sorry for the rant lmao)

We will not find out much more about Screech because i like how we (and Breeze) never know how much she is actually capable of. She ain't done though :p

Thorn is kind of a twist on our regular leader - he's a chill guy. Probably wouldn't notice if someone tried to murder him. I like him as well.

I loved writing the WindClan chapter so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yes it was for a reason - for things that will happen later. I'll spare you the spoiler details but that chapter will definitely become important by the end. The betrayal that Sundusk felt from Heatherdawn... the betrayal Heatherdawn felt from Ashpoppy... it all circles back. This story is about a whole lot of betryal, after all! I like the parallel as well. :)

Oh man I was really nervous about Swallowfur's whole... thing. I kept the chapter format the same as I did when I first wrote this years ago (which was actually trash) and it was so sudden that I wondered if people would understand what happened. But in the end I guess it did fit! And yes, we get to see Breeze's character evolve. She went from just being a generally sarcastic gal with a good heart but by the end? Who knows!

Ah yes, fatal mistake, u caught me: I kind of uh, forgot Winter was in that scene when they were discussing Sorrel's birth mother. To be clear, Winter does not know that Breeze/Sorrel aren't related. I'll change it up a bit and make it clearer later as well. :p It looks like the rest of mistakes are typos, which I can fix easily! Thanks for pointing them out and thank you again for the lovely review!!