Talk:Locked Secretes/@comment-5342796-20160116175315



This show is really good. The plot is fast-paced and intriguing. So there is a rebel force! I didn't see that coming about Glade's ties to it, though. That was a nice twist; it wraps Sandpaw and everyone she knows into this thing with the rebels.

It's very interesting that her first instinct was to tell the monarchy and warn them. I like that. When we've been raised a certain way, it's hard to imagine anything else. Instead of just the fundamental belief that monarchy is bad, we see that this is all Sandpaw and her generation have ever known. The rebels might be fighting for a cause, but they are also violent and manipulative.

There are a few grammar mistakes, but other than that, I couldn't think of anything else to fix. Your characterization and plot is fantastic, as is the pace of the story. You keep readers on the edge of their seats. Excellent job C:

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