Pricked on Every Thorn/Feedback

Story Criticism
Here is where you leave your thoughts on the story and plot itself

Remember to sign! -   I'm only human and I bleed when I fall d o w n...

Character Criticism
This is where you leave your thoughts on the characters of the story and how they behave.

Remember to sign! -   I'm only human and I bleed when I fall d o w n...