Talk:Spy Camp/@comment-29927652-20170124054209

SPOILERS!

I love how you introduced the rules of the story! It helps readers understand what they are about to read, and hints a little on what the plot maybe about :) It's nice how you started with a cat talking about it's life and how it had become so confident.

And the names of your cats are very creative! Nice job on that! Only, do cats know what the city Orlando is...? This is a bit puzzling.

It is a bit hard to read (for me) with the italics.

And yes, it is a bit rushed. I had to re-read the first paragraph to tell what was happening, so a good idea is to take time to explain the characters' mental thoughts nd questions. Explain what they are doing a bit more slowly, so that the read can infer what's happening. But from this, I can tell that you are excited about writing this! :D

Also, I found a little error XD ''"Can you guys quite eavesdropping?" ''You probably meant to write, "quit." I am so picky...lol.

I like this story a lot! I will keep adding to this comment when you keep adding chapters :)

NOW PLEASE ADD THE FANS SECTION...I would totally sign! Lol.