Talk:Permanent/@comment-5331607-20130915175057

Ok so....


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This is so freaking amazing Robo.

First off, I love how you built up the Division (instead of Clans) with how they're leaders all take the same name when they get a new one and how it is preferred that their mates are pretty much the same pelt color, and the Counters.

Second off, I also think that Redpaw letting the Counter apprentices go with herbs was a very nice addition to the story.

Third off, I absolutely love RedXPebble!!! OMG!!! They were soooooo freaking cute. Period. I mean, they were the same pelt color, which was good, but you actually knew that they were totally right for each other. <3

Fourth off, I love the idea of rebellion that you added into the story and how you kind of made the rebellion follow Redpaw around in.


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