Talk:The Gathering/@comment-8248793-20130710004327

Like Arti. I have never been shocked by your amazing writing like this. This one was just perfect. Perfect enough to make me cry.

Though I found some parts which made me think weirdly. In the middle, explaining about Badgerstrike, you said that Badgerstrike was supposed to be Stormflight's mother, Thundercloud's forbidden love. I am sorry, but isn't Badgerstrike a guy? Just hearing that he was supposed to be Stormflight's mother, ok, that was weird.

But everyhting else was fine, and NO JUST NO. EarthClan join against WaterClan? NO. Wait though, why against WaterClan, why not against FireClan? What did WaterCLan do? It wasn't their fault that Summerstorm got attacked. It was FireClan's fault. Can you explain that?

Gah, all those love parts. Just perfect. You described the parts perfectly, cutting off at the exact moment, holding suspense, but also ending the parts. I absolutely love this.

<3 you Arti. Write more!