Talk:The Prodigal Son/@comment-4751506-20130607022902

...I can't say the word I said on IRC in the comments, so what I'll say instead (slightly less vulgar) is, 'shiz just got serious.' And boy, did it.

For starters, since I'm in the mood to write a long comment, let me just say that there were no grammatical errors that I could see, which I always love because, like you, I am a bit of a Grammar Nazi and it bothers me to no end when there is something amiss in the mechanics section of the story, it makes me mad. But there were none in this epi, so kudos to you for that. :3

Next, I love the switching points of view. When you first started doing this, I got really confused and, I have to admit, I didn't like it as much as I do now. But now I love it, because we get a taste of what's happening with Brookfall, as well as the rest of the squadron wherever they may be. It's really nice - and refreshing - for the points of view to switch, 'cause then we get to see all that's up with FireClan. Also, with the POV's, I love how you don't do one of every single person - it's nice, 'cause it added mystery with the entire Badgerstrike situation. Me gusta, Arti, me gusta very much.

Finally, can I just culminate this and say how much I love War? Since it's the summer and I know you're trying to catch up, I love checking every day to see if you've made the next epi. These are getting better and better, and it's marvelous and astonishing to see how far you've come. I love this.<3