Talk:Just Believe Me/@comment-5342796-20160731124343



chapter two

WELL THAT WAS A CRAZY CHAPTER

I like her group of friends. They're like a group of discordant, unsure teenagers going on a roadtrip and not exactly always making the best decisions.

Dang, that mountain is strange :O I have no idea what all the weird creatures are. Moreover, what does Prophecy-Teller have to do with them... is he one? In disguise? Was he sent by them? Are all Snaketongues actually these strange cats, or are these like cats who guard Snaketongues? They kind of remind me of dementors, they're really creepy. The mist is really strange too; clearly no one is supposed to get to the top of the mountain, or are they supposed to try and die? Because Rippleshine clearly felt an urge to try to run up, or maybe that was just her?

Dramatic ending :O

chapter three

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD. HOW DID I NEVER READ IT BEFORE!

I just realized I'm fascinated by the tom she met and I don't even know his name. I have so many questions! So can Snaketongues completely manipulate their appearance to what they like,or are they born with one specific disguise as a cat they can wear. And if they're not cats, what are they? Just cats with powers?

I wonder if Rippleshine is going to tell her Clan about it. I mean, she still might, because that strikes me as in her personality, but then she'd have to tell them that she made a deal with him... Would she brag about it? It might be something that causes more trouble than it's worth. What if the other Snaketongues find out... I don't think they'd be very happy to learn that an outsider has their powers too. Or they might demand her to not be an outsider anymore... I don't know! We know so little about them :O There's so much suspense here ahhh I want to know what's going on.

The ending was really funny though XD They both got the sass, I think if they form a genuine bond, they'll be great friends

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