Talk:Rise of the Vipers/@comment-26285531-20160102004121



YES FINALLY I'M ALREADY IN LOVE WITH THIS SHOW <3

The episode started out detailing on how hopeless Bryce's life seems, and how much she tries to fix it. You explained their personalities really well in the first chapter, which I find surprising because cats' personalities are usually thoroughly explained later on, but you did a great job doing it!

I'm already quite curious on Nightshadow's intentions, and whether he's a 'good' influence on Bryce or a bad one. (psst I can already see Night|x|Bryce coming xD) I can't decide if Nightshadow has ulterior motives or not; he hasn't shown any signs of being an enemy yet but he's nice enough towards Bryce in the end. (I got kind of confused about Bryce being a girl as well, but it's nice that you clarified earlier on in the episode. :) )

I can really tell the Vipers and the Coalition is kind of like BloodClan/ThunderClan, where they're equal to each other but one is unfairly attacking the other. It creates a lot of suspense and I'm really excited to read more of this! <3

