Talk:Into the Wild (Rewritten)/@comment-28057208-20160911062416

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So far this is really good! I must say I am very curious about Samuel and Caramel and who their little kit is. Maybe they have a connection to Rusty/Firepaw? I don't know, I can't be sure yet. But this is really intriguing and I think I like the Spottedleaf-Bluestar sequence here better than the original one in the books.

Just one nitpicky thing: Isn't Spottedleaf a little too young to have an apprentice yet? But that's just me. Maybe she wasn't too young, idk. Anyway, I really like the story so far!