User talk:SalemtheCruel

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Thanks for contributing to the Warriors Fanfiction Wiki. Happy Editing! Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Forestpaw13 (Talk) 14:30, 2010 December 31

Suuuureeeeeee. Can I get a link? FP 13  December Cheers 14:33, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

That sounds really cool! Good luck! :D FP  13  December Cheers 14:44, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hiiii, I'm Wetstream. You can call me Wetty or Wolfeh. Welcome to Warriorsfanfic wikia. :D Wetstream 01:06, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, I'm Whitestar7. If you have any questions, you can ask me or other experianced users. I hope you have a great time! Super  Whitestar   01:10, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I read your story and it's great! I commented and left one suggestion. Super  Whitestar   01:59, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hi! I am Jayfeather forever. Wow, we became official members of WFW at th same day: December 31st :) February  ღ Happy Valentine's! ღ 02:00, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I just read it! It's great! Super  Whitestar   02:05, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, if you want I can add the 'this page contains a fanfiction by this user' template to your story. Do you want it? February  ღ Happy Valentine's! ღ 02:17, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ideas
Hmm, maybe something happens to the mother. I don't know, though... Super  Whitestar  02:18, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Check the talk page of the story. I posted a comment there.

By the way, I don't know if you do or not, but if you want a siggy, I can make you one :) February  ღ Happy Valentine's! ღ 02:25, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

So, when you say SalemtheCruel, does that mean you watch Sabrina, or just like witch trials? ;-) Beyond the Night   Teyla Emmagan 00:14, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, I love Sabrina!!!!! So no, I wouldn't laugh. :DDDDDDD And Salem is a very cool name. ;-) Beyond the Night   Teyla Emmagan 00:56, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, thanks :)  I like your writng style. Very creative.  :)   SnapeFan1 (Talk )  13:08, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh by the way, since I reviewed yours, can you review mine, lol I havent gotten any reviews for this story and I want to see if its good. Its called Rainbelly's Destiny. Thanks :)  Oh and keep writing ShadowKats :)  It gives a very different veiw on how many types of clan cats there could be  :)   SnapeFan1 (Talk )  13:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

cool :) the name you used that meant scapegoat sounds like that character might get in deep trouble soon. And there always has to be someone evil in a story, her evil son. I like your type of writing.  :)   SnapeFan1 (Talk )  13:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

You know whats weird? How if its a guy evil cat or person, I fall in love with them, and when its a girl I want to be like them lol :)  Seems like those two will be brewing up dangerous trouble in ShadowKats  :)   SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  13:20, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

The image of that cat just kinda freaks me out, lol :)  But thats an excellent description for an evil character  :)

Hmmm maybe have them be completely seen by the highwalkers when you introduce them and when the trouble comes walking along? :)  <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  15:14, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

that'd be a good description. A little less creepy :)   and when I mean that they be seen by the Highwalkers, I mean maybe have them maybe get in an argument or something and start yowling or fighting and the Highwalkers hear their yowls and look where they are and see them? something like that maybe  :)  <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  15:21, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah between Azazel and Abbadon :) I'd love to see how you make it come out  :)   <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  15:26, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

nice! Love the new update! :) <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  15:54, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

maybe have them be spotted by Highwalkers in the outside world or maybe attacked by dogs something with action :)   <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  16:03, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

true :) But I like how your stretching your imagination on something that you know will happen later on. I do that all the time with my stories (i have small paragraphs of stuff saved on my laptop for like the fifth story in a series when I'm no like book three or something) lol  :)   <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  16:11, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

oh I HATE GETTING WRITERS BLOCK. Thats like the most annoying thing in a writers life, lol :)  And for the medicine cat, maybe you could have her looking for herbs and stuff like that  :)  <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  16:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Alright cool :)  And hey could you help me? I'm writing this fanfiction on this wikia, Fallen Dove, and I have writers block for the neck chapter. Any ideas?  <font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="darkgreen" >SnapeFan1 (<font face="Vivaldi" size="2" color="darkgreen">Talk )  16:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)