Talk:The Discovery/@comment-8248793-20130918035112

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I read this before :3

I like how Frostflower was oblivious of her origins, it made her less rebelious, and more frail. THis gives evil some advantages, which of course makes the story awesome, because you can't just have the good side win everything.

Her personality is perfect. Sweet, but slightly fierce. Not exactly shy, but not one for the stage. Exactly what a princess should have. Because this only makes us feel the princess the right way. Because she is more like us now.

I really love the appearance of the tom, though it was a bit sudden, and maybe explain how he fell through the ceiling. Though perfect timing, and what a landing. :D

This story held lots of emotions, and feelings, and I could feel every one of them. Good job! <3

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