Talk:Fire Lights/@comment-25971176-20150425205302

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Wow...I almost cried while reading this. I really loved this poem.

This is just so beautiful. Brownshade is such a sweet pairing, and you painted their feelings in this poem in such a perfect way.

The first four lines of the poem are so captivating and intriguing, and they hooked me right in!

I love how you rhymed it. It's not abrupt, but smooth, and like Sayna said, it flows wonderfully.

My favorite part was where it went like "He came from FireClan, His name was Brownhare." and "She came from the outskirts of ThunderClan, Her name was Shade." Those two lines can help any reader who hasn't yet read Cold or knows about Brownshade get an idea of their love.

And yes those two epic lines: "I wanted to know if we were still...going." "What makes you think we weren't?" I love that. It fits perfectly into the poem.

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