Talk:The Valley/@comment-24143898-20160107055809

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First of all, I'll say that from reading this episode, I can tell that Fire Rainbow (Take Two) is going to be even better than the original. C: I mean, I liked the original version, but I like this better, if I had to pick a favourite.

To start with on the episode, I'll say that I like the new format that you've been using - I like it better than the format that you've used in the past (not saying that I didn't like that format, it just didn't appeal to me as much). The story seems to flow better now, and because there's not so much dialogue in general, it's become more descriptive, which I really like.

The nicknames - I feel that cats should have more nicknames in the Warriors series, so I like this. (I really like nicknames - I have a lot, hehehe.) Flare-Bear was the most unusual, I felt, and I like Bliz the most. Rainbow's one (Rain) is a logical one :P.

I'm guessing that the story is mainly going to be set in the valley, yes? I'm judging by the title of the episode here c:.

I have one question, though: is the group that they have at the moment somewhat like a Clan, or is one? It's got quite a few references to a Clan-like structure, but I'm unsure on what it actually is. c:

I haven't done too much commenting on the actual episode (oops), but I will say that this is really good! I will continue to read and comment! C:

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