Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-24143898-20170113073600

...And as promised, here's the other three chapters c:

SPOILERS

Chapters Three, Four and Five:

Chapter Three: On first impression of Sand, she appears to be... somewhat shifty? Idk. I have this feeling that's she's going to come back.

Yellow seems quite... wise (must be the Yellowfang influence xD) - she seems to know a lot about Kindling and that stuff. I feel as though she's done this with a cat before her, for some reason (idkkkkk). As for the Kindling controlling their powers... ooh, Torch needs to learn how to control them, before Smolder figures out... bc that'd be goodbye Tor - AH SHOOT SMOLDER OVERHEARD NO

NO WHAT WHAT IS THIS FROST CAT AND WHAT IS IT DOING OMG WHAT NO SMOLDER WHY

okay now I really hate Smolder *fumes*

Chapter Four: totally know that Torch was going to live yay. I'm getting a liking towards her more as the story goes on, she's turning into an awesome character C: but wait, how didn't she burn??/ maybe she's not a Kindling... maybe she's something completely different??

oh so Smolder set Torch on fire... o.o that's really creepy. Obviously, though, he has more control over his fire-making powers than Torch does rn... I think??

Sand is hiding something. Totally obvious.

I'm pretty sure Torch is right when she came up with the idea that lighting things on fire is connected to her emotions. That was an idea that I thought of when reading Chapter Two, after she set the flower on fire... but I wasn't really that sure on that yet :P

That ghost cat is Frost. I'm pretty confident of that... and that Frost cat is really creepy. Enough said.

Chapter Five: woah what Sand overreacted there. Definitely hiding something. Definitely.

(this comment is hardly constructive... ah well bUT THAT'S WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GET HOOKED ON SOMETHING WHOOPS)

Sand has powers. water powers. o.o ohh and that why she was really shifty. understandable. they seemed to have been an ordinary Clan, BrightClan. they obviously weren't affected by Smolder's takeover, that must be a LightClan thing. and idek if the two Clans crossed paths o.o

okay that's my thoughts on those three chapters

I saw a couple of lines where two different cats were speaking on the same line of text (one was in chapter three, I think I saw another in chapter four as well?), but that was the only thing that I could spot

Good work, Dog! Can't wait for more C:

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(this is one long comment... shoot :O)