Talk:Red Flowers/@comment-26432133-20170304032423

apologies for the short comment, as there isn't much to comment on atm ^^

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Whew, Poppyfur. At first it seems like she's being a brat, but really, that is her name for the rest of her life, so I get her. It's also nice to see someone who isn't like "OMG I GOT THE NAME OBVIOUSVILLAIN/OBVIOUSSUE/BORINGOLDNAME?? YAAAYYYYYYY"

I see a few punctuation errors here and there- just places that could use a comma or two, nothing all that big.

Whether or not she's intentionally supposed to sound like a salty, half-justified brat, she does come across that way. If that's what you were aiming for, great job!

I'd like to see where this story goes!! So far, another great job Fox! :D

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