Talk:You Know Nothing/@comment-5488450-20130801183546

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Well, I thought this was really really cool and with a great twist too! To have Crowfeather actually know about the kits, even when we all thought it was a surprise for him was nice. And then there was just something so cute when Squirrelflight said 'the gray one looks just like you'. I also like the lyrics a lot!

Just one question I have and that is if this is like a mesh of some songs and your own lyrics or just entirely yours because some of this seems familiar to me like where it says 'We ain't lovers, but more than friends' that's from Tonight I'm Getting Over You by CRJ and like 'I'm the new notch on your belt' was a bit like that one like from 'I Knew You Were Trouble'. Nonetheless, I love the lyrics and I love where the songfic is going so far! My best piece of advice would be to FINISH IT :D

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