Talk:Collar of Bones/@comment-5342796-20130730205537

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Still really enjoying this story! I agree that Flameclaw could be made more of a relatable character by adding flaws and texture, but I think you've taken a good step towards that by mentioning her parents. I don't know why, but the end of chapter 2 just really got me. The cold, how she felt inside, her jaw, everything combined to make a perfect ending scene to the event. It was really really really well described, and very well written. Looking forward to more :D

