Talk:Give Your Heart A Break/@comment-5488450-20130326191754

The ending was fabulous.in fact the whole story was just fabulous! I think you did a really good job summing up Crowfeather's pain; but then proving it wasn't permanent. The song went really well with this too! I'll admit, my favorite part was Noghtcloud trying to get Crowfeather falling for Whitetail! I like how you combined real and fictional characters to come up with this! I think I spotted like one mistake-I don't even remember where and that was it! Overall, this was wonderful 8D I give it an 8.5!