Talk:Bluestar's Revenge/@comment-8248793-20140416042053

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Okay one thing I recommend is to only put one question mark. becuase ??? seems a bit too much xD maybe describe her shock in words, not extra ?'s x3

I do like how a book can change how Bluestar thinks, how she acts. I'm interested to know more!

This was a great start, and I hope you guys write more of this soon :)

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