Talk:Capture/@comment-8248793-20160110061627

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Ooh cliffhanger! Darn do I love this story! I'm still glad that you've revised it; I loved the old series but this version is definitely a better version! You must have really gave thought to it and I do like how it's been developed and how much you've changed the certain characters.

Aaryi is by far one of my favorite character. That's rare because I usually don't like the main character as a favorite. But I like the way you shape her, with a bloodthirst to kill before she realizes that she doesn't want to kill and Kayn reminds her of such.

Kayn is interesting I'm pretty hyped to see how she'll end up helping Aaryi since I know she's probably fighting Aaryi in the "champions fight against one another" thing since Skell just won this morning...

You really put a spin to Undefeated! Like I said before, I love the new version and how you really showed us each character and each twist of the plot. The first one really "captured" my eye and I'm all for Fall :)

Also Skell seems chill. I hope Krilla and him are as cool as last time ;)

<3

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