Talk:Uncontrollable/@comment-28076378-20170514231125

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I meant to post this yesterday, ah well

This is an amazing story so far! The idea is really interesting too.

I'm curious as to why TideClan inslaved the Nocturnals. Why don't the Nocturnals just use their powers to defeat the Clan anyway? It should be pretty easy for them, since they have powers.

I like Applepaw, she's pretty cool - is her power a rare one? I feel bad that she and Sunstorm lost her mother. Somewhere in I think chapter 2 or 3 (ughh i usually write this stuff down)Tidestar is mentioned to be male.

I'm indifferent about the Nocturnals, I know they could be good cats, but they were pretty mean to Applepaw, I mean, I understand, she could have gotten them out, even if it meant she'd be caught, but she was worried about her safety and her fathers. But I guess you'd do just about anything to get out of there.

Hopefully Applepaw succeeds, she and Sunstorm stay safe and Tidestar chils.

I didn't notice any grammar mistakes either ^^ I'll definantly be waiting for the next chapter. Great joB!

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