Talk:Sunnypaw's Faith/@comment-7662967-20140710210600

This a cool idea :) IT'S SO AWESOME YOU NAMED CHERRYPAW CHERRYBLOSSEM CAUSE I DID TOO!!!!! :P Anyway, I really like what you've got so far, although Wolf is right, you probably should make a new line every time some one talks. (Don't worry, I did the same thing when I first started) There are a few unexplained things here, like who is Cherryblossom's mate, and you say Jayfeather is elderly, and I'm not sure how he aged so fast, but other then that, this is great! I will be following! :D