Talk:Fallen Snow/@comment-24143898-20170131223009

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Knowing what's happened to Snowfire and her Clan in recent times, I'm not surprised that she's a little wary of Sootstar/WindClan. I would assume she'd feel the same way about the other Clans too (especially ShadowClan, after what Darkstar did). I think it bring across how upset she is from losing her family/mentor, and that she's gonna need some time to heal herself from it.

As for Darkstar himself... I think the war has damaged him too. Sure, he's seen as the villain-type cat after the war, but from the comment that ShadowClan isn't really sure how good of a leader he is anymore, he must've gone through some stuff. I'd like to see a little more of him, and to see what he's like now.

So the four cats are starting to come together, I guess. Ravenwing's seen Snowfire, and has talked (a lot) to Silvershade - they've obviously formed a friend-like bond at this point. I'm now curious as to how Snowfire and Ashpaw are going to... clash with each other I see something bad happening involving those two.

Oh, and Ashpaw is a massive fluffball in Ravenwing's part... he comes across as that typicall, eager new apprentice. Considering it's his first Gathering, I like his confidence. I hope that stays... because he'll need it, knowing his mentor.

Ooh, a slight change in POVs, considering Snowfire's returning... and that Gathering, I thought for a moment, was going to turn out badly. I guess it turned out better than I thought... :P don't have much to comment on that though.

Now, considering that all of the main characters have come across each other in some way, I wonder how this is going to affect the Clans... something's going to happen, I just feel it.

One thing I noticed - the wrong version of its is used in the first paragraph.

This was a good episode, Bird :D

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