Talk:Fate/@comment-17305039-20130930204828

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Fiery, this story is pure awesomeness! Like, if I had to rate it from 1 to 10, I would put it as 10.5. I love how the kits are telling their stories from when they are just elders and they are telling it at the same time to the audience. The details just reel me in and their emotions are portrayed so well. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the sequel.

Now, about Petalkit.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING A CHARACTER TO ME IN A BOOK I CANNOT EVEN- sorry, I got excited. Anyways, I love how she is so energetic and loud, a LOT like me. I want to give some more info about me so it can help her character later in the future, but it might not matter since the story really only focuses around Sunkit and Moonkit (I know they're apprentices now, but I shall still call them kits for now~).

Appearance: I have long, dirty blond hair with natural streaks of lighter blond hair in it and blue eyes. I'm also pretty tall for my age...So, yeah...

Personality: Yes, I is bouncy and quirky, but I'm also kind of smart (I skipped a grade). Also, I'm kind of a perfectionist and I'm hard on myself when I make a mistake. I also don't like to do a lot of girly things, like wearing dresses and make-up or going shopping.

I think that's about it, I can't wait for the rest of the series!

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