Talk:Scarce Grief/@comment-7662967-20140818031014

Yay! It is CrowXStorm! :P Sorry, I can't help but like them together.

I really liked the tension you achieved here, how Storm doesn't see the obvious, how Crowheart is mad at her because she doesn't see the obvious. XP

And I like the way you show both their feelings.

The only thing that's confusing is, if Storm knew Crowheart loved her before, then how could she suddenly forget when she met up with Dewheart?

Anyway, that's it. I really like the series so far! XD