Talk:Warriors:Bloodlust/@comment-27393649-20151004030135

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I love how you make it seem so drmatic at the middle of the blurb, and it really helps to catch the reader's attention :3 And I absolutely adore the descriptions and all of where Oakdapple is going, and it really put's us in suspense as a 'mysterious' illness kills off a whole Clan. Well, most of it, atleast :P

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I would recommend, however, that you don't link the cat's names, because this wikia is only meant for fanfictions, unless it's linking to a story called 'Oakdapple' or 'Windpelt'. Othewise, they'd be character pages, which I'm pretty sure aren't allowed.

Other than that, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the story! Keep it up, I'll be watching! :D