Talk:The Fall/@comment-24519368-20170420201125

First thing I noticed was that the grammar could use some work. Mainly dialogue and appropriate use of apostrophes. Also it might be just me, but Ashpaw's character seems plain to me, like he is a vessel in which to convey a message or author's intention to the reader, like the characters of Tolstoy's War and Peace which are vivid and fleshed-out. On the contrary, I really like Leafwind's optimistic character. She appeals to me. I'm intruiged as to how Silvershade and Ravenwing's relationship will develop and whether it will be different from a run-of-the-mill forbidden love plotline.

I can't say much, as I've only reviewed one episode.