Talk:Dead and Gone/@comment-8248793-20141016015502

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Okay this is utterly amazing, I'm so glad you posted like five chapters at one :D

Now the only thing that irked me was teh POV changes. I didn't know who was the narrator for some of the chapters until 3 paragraphs down. I thought it was a bit distracting and it made the flow of the story less smooth.

I shipped MallowpawXBlackpaw. Meadow was a bit rushed, and I personally think Meadow would be better as single :P

I love the context you put in here, it's so detailed and enriched, I love the way you tell the storyline in general.

I'm going to read the next book, and follow the series :D This was very well done, and I really liked it!

<3

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