Talk:Steelpaw's Rise/@comment-25531638-20130809163934

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This is good! I like how the cats didn't magically know what steel was and name their kit after it, but it had to be questioned. This makes more sense.

There were a couple times that I felt that it was going to fast. For example, I think you should go more in depth into Steelpaw's feelings in his apprentice ceremony and first battle. Maybe give him some flaws too, so he seems more likable.

Oh, and "Prolouge" should be "Prologue" and "Epilouge" should be "Epilogue".

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