Talk:Warrior/@comment-5342796-20151029000428



WOW OKAY THAT WAS REALLY GOOD

I mean obviously I was expecting it to be good because it's written by you and the blurb sounds amazing. But it was REALLY good. Like, I can't wait for more.

I love the entire premises of the story. Ravenflight is an absolutely great main character; she's tough and a total boss, and she can clearly kick butt--but she's also got her faults, being a little impulsive and clueless as to how actual war works (though of course that isn't her fault, because that's something that can only be learned through experience, and unfortunately I get the feeling she's about to get her first lessons).

All the characters seem really well placed, like you have a reason for each one being there and I can't wait to see you flesh them out. General Blackthorn seems strict but rad, and I'm interested to see why the Raiders are so bad and learn the history of the conflict between them. I'm also really interested to see how this war will play out, and the role Ravenflight will play.

Amazing story. The title fits perfectly. Love you, Firey <3

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