Talk:Firestar(Part 2)/@comment-5488450-20130114225252

Uhhhh

No.

Not okay.

Not okay at all.

Not okay in the slightest, tinnsiest bit.

Artimas Hunter, I hate you for that.

I hate you so much.

>.<

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY BOYFRIEND?

What have you done to my pride? The sence that I was the slightest insiest tinsiest bit of a good writer?

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY DEAR GORSEFUR???

And I'd like to point out, to our little Brookfall that she is NOT in fact Gorsefur's mate. I am. She doesn't even like him as much as me >.>

It was MARVOLOUS. The onlt flaw I can find is that the ending... didn't really feel liek an ending. It was more of a cliffhanger. I mean, I get you want to keep us hooked, but it doesn't feel like a series conclusion. ESPECIALLY WITH MY GORSEFUR STUCK IN FIRECLAN O:

The rest was great.

Too great.

Jealous-making great.

Okay?

Stop writing so good before I am tempted to quit writing, because I don't live up to the competition AT ALL xD

It wasn't useful but I am at a loss of words. *shruggs* N00bpoint will have to slide this time. I am in awe.