Talk:The Discovery/@comment-25531638-20130915194733

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Now this. This was amazing. It is a mystery to me how you manage to come up with such wonderful and unique ideas for stories. How it began, was just so sad that it kept my attention. I loved it. And the way that you described Frostflower's situation, it just made my stomach churn, because I could definitely imagine how uncomfortable she is.

But one question: How is it possible for a cat to hold a whip or a club?

But I have to admit, the part where the clubs snaps over her back is great. It made my heart stop, because for a second there, I actually believed that Frostflower might've died.

The whole scene where Dawnwhisker talks to her about her past is great, and the whole idea is really cool with the "Bind" thing. Just the tension I felt when I found out she only had one moon.

I think the other cats, like Coalfur and Peachpaw and so forth, they are all very well developed and make good additions to the story. Just so great :)

And it's good how Frostflower isn't the perfect little Mary Sue princess, and she can get frustrated and confused at times.

This was awesome. Pure awesome.

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