Talk:The Story of Marshkit/@comment-32946794-20160507064738/@comment-24143898-20160507195741

(advice for stories is how you think the author should improve (eg. grammar/spelling/tense issues), but if you can't see anything, just say what they did well! you won't get chased up by staff for that - in fact, if you just say a couple of things that are good, that's allowed c:)

(and it's all right, just don't do that again)