Talk:Fire in the Sky/@comment-8830647-20130823020152

WOAH! THIS LOOKS SOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!

constructive critiscism: i think Darkpaw and Ripplepaw would be fighting over Lunarpaw, like the 'she likes me more' and all that guy stuff.

KEEP IT COMING! I LOVE THIS STORY! AND RAQLLY INTERESTING PROBLEM! :)