User blog:Forestpaw13/Not so super-secret anymore...

Well, I've told some of you out of excitement about my new super-secret project, something I like to call The Oasis.

It's a story, basically.

Goal: have the dang freakiest story on the wiki.

Not goal: to have no interest.

I'm writing the whole thing RIGHT NOW on a notepad. Then I can copy and paste it onto here.

Anyway, I'll give a couple of things away.

Plot: a cat travels on a patrol to find prey for his Clan, but on arrival some strange things happen.

Characters: Well, the main character is named Snowtail. He's a white tom. Don't let anything confuse you. And the original leader of the patrol is named Sunstripe. He's a ginger tabby tom.

Um...: It's also probably going to be rated extreme. xD

Questions!

What do you consider freaky? I want all of you to be absolutely freaked. Totally, absolutely. I want you to nearly wet your pants. (But don't, that means extra laundry. xD)

What do you consider not freaky? Um, I don't want to have something un-freaky (that's supposed to be) in a purposely freaky moment.

What do you consider perfect in a:
 * environment
 * cat
 * moment

What makes you really, really mad that the cats could experience? Loss of a mate to another cat or by murder, disrespect... blah blah blah.

Are you really excited? (LOL)

Any suggestions?

In repayment for all the work... an excerpt from chapter 2.


 * Light shone through the trees in visible streaks in the sky. The trees were perfectly spaced, perfectly green. The leaves shivered as if they were dancing in a soft breeze.


 * Beyond the forest was a field filled with lush grass and surrounded by shrubbery. In the middle of the field was a tree, whose shadow was always perfect. The branches were perfect.


 * Everything about this place was perfect, I noticed.


 * I remembered Gingerstar's name for this place: the Oasis.


 * The prey must be perfectly plump here, too, I realized.


 * I kept a lookout as Sunstripe led us through the forest. We went slowly, marveling at the beauty of it.


 * There was something missing. A threat.


 * And then...


 * Sunstripe was thrown against a tree by what seemed like nothing. Nothing at all. I heard the noise of his body being crushed with the impact, and the tree creaked.


 * Sunstripe fell to the ground. He made no sound.


 * He was perfectly dead.

Mwahah.