Talk:If the dark forest won/@comment-25531638-20130607225505

Nice job. You aren't rushing the story as much, and it has a much better flow to it.

As for LittlecloudXApplefur...I did not see that coming. Except you told me the other day, but I forgot, so yeah... I think it's a bit weird how much older Littlecloud is, but I also think it is kind of cute.

Looks like all the Clans are coming together and going to rebel >:)

Keep it coming!