Talk:The Story of Icewrath, Featherswirl, and Craneheart/@comment-5848758-20131124150034/@comment-5331607-20131230233313

Yeah, I decided I'm going to try and fix it up... Like it really needs some fixing up... The characters and stuff. When I first started the story I just rushed for the whole shipping thing to start because I had been planning the thing months before I joined the wiki.

In regards to the names... I just love having names that sound different and unique, especially when it comes to main characters.

So I'm going to try and fix it up and save some of the happenings from these chapters for when they're older. I actually don't know how such a rushed couple of chapters that make no sense in the love triangle plot could get more comments than my well thought out and NOT RUSHED story, Blind.

Anyway I pretty much plan to:

1. Give Featherkit some stinking faults xD

2. Make the story way more descriptive.

3. Throw the love thing out of the picture until later.