Talk:Flamekit's Prophecy - The Journey/@comment-25754481-20151228164324

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This is pretty good, Flame! (I feel so weird calling you that bc that used to be my nickname... XD) The introduction rushes a bit, and maybe you could slow the story down? It's a lil hard to understand everything that's going on. Also, it's a little unrealistic in the part where a cat just automatically dies if they get bitten in the neck?? This is really good, but the speed of it's just to fast, and some parts of it don't make much sense. I love the mystery in all of it tho!

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