Talk:Eclipsepaw's Destiny: Chapter 3/@comment-25531638-20130619010201

Well this is very interesting. I like how ominous and sort of macabre it is. Your writing certainly captures my attention :D

Just a couple things: When you use the quotations, you're supposed to capitalize the sentence, like "I ate the pie." And it would also be better if you put all of the chapters on the same page, it's much easier to read. If you must make a separate page for each, then type it as: Eclipsepaw's Destiny/Chapter 3.

But keep going!