Talk:Nebula/@comment-26432133-20170302063606

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Okay that was pretty good! Ik it's not done yet, but still great! Nitpicky Dogwood incoming, though, about to whine about how Nebula and Supernova are quite odd names, considering cats don't know much about space stuff. I like Padre and Conocido, they're very interesting. You just don't see enough LGBT on the wiki.

My only real complaint is that because the chapters are so short, when coupled with how fast the story is going, we don't get much characterization from Padre, Conocido, and Supernova. We can see their interactions and relationships with each other, yes, but as for their personalities I can't get a feel for them. I can see Nebula's closeness to Supernova (which was very well-written btw ^^), Padre and Conocido's love for their kits, and Raji's close relationship to Padre and Conocido (even though she's dead, props to you for that). But I don't feel their personalities, except for Nebula's. A lot of writers have trouble giving the narrator character, so congrats on that!! I'm confused as to why Supernova wanted to be a father but then gave Helix away?? Without bothering to visit or keep in touch with his son? Idk, it just confuses me

Ahh, I like Talon. She presents the eagles' side well, and I'd like to see more of her (and I have a feeling we will).

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Overall, really great story so far, Stork-Goddess!! :D