Talk:Rage- First Mate/@comment-27393649-20150315145106

Aww, this is so sad D: I like the namesss, as always c:

I like how you made the scenes sound dramatic, like "He felt like a million bees had stung him".

And..."So much blood".. That was very...Wow..

I love this, even if it is sad. Good job, and keep up the great work! <3