Talk:On the Wing/@comment-28076378-20170124151246

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I thought this was a nice story. I don't like songfics a whole lot, but this one was different. The song fit in well, and i love it when someone takes a happier sounding song and makes into something that's not exactly...

I am curious to see who is watching/stalking her. I have a bit of a feeling it'll be one of her adoptive family members, since the scent is the same, but maybe not... maybe it's a new character. probably not. I'll just have to read to find out. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes, or anything that should be fixed, so nice job.

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