User blog:Leopardkit/A Fan Fiction About Whitestorm

Hey, do you guys think a story from Whitestorm's POV would be good? Here is the basic plot:

Brindleface was his mate (he loved her & Willowpelt) and she died. Whitestorm loved her so much he couldn't even be around his clanmates. he runs into the forest and sits vigil on his own. He realizes that he must stop Bloodclan & Tigerstar before any more cats lose their lives. Fast forward to the Battle with Bloodclan, where he lays dying, goes to join Brindleface in Starclan.

Is it good? Tell please.

kthxby-- Leopardkit SunClan Forever! 15:35, January 30, 2010 (UTC)