Talk:Seeking Revenge/@comment-5331607-20130917030240


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Ooh! The title drew me in, as it's very mysterious. It tied up well with The Darkest Hour, and I enjoyed all elements.

Susan't story is very well put together, and Shade's memories make it beautiful. I admit, you wrote it so beautifully that I felt like I was going to cry, just a bit though. lol

I felt so bad for Susan when she was forced to change her name, and even worse when Spike died, and if it's even possible, even worse when I found out she had killed her own brother.

Some parts were confusing, but I loved the essence of mystery. It's phenomenal. You keep writing, my friend! :D


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