Talk:Red Vengeance/@comment-7270915-20130604005118/@comment-7270915-20130604012429

Well, let's start by trying to make this episode a little longer. Reread what you're written. Think about. If you think you could add a little about a character in one spot, or describe the scenery in another spot, and add it. Go into a little more detail - that will slow down the story.