Talk:A Fresh Start/@comment-8248793-20160717163114

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I really like this new pov with Snowheart. It's refreshing from the kind-hearted Silverleaf who wanted to save everyone. Snowheart is more sharp, more into herself rather than others. I want to see if Mousetail's theory is right, especially since we don't get to know how two of her kits are thinking, and with Lionpaw being how he is.

I don't know if this is planned to not happen, but I'm interested to see perspectives from Snowheart's other two kits. It doesn't have to be full chapters, but I just kind of want to know what they think, especially of Snowheart and perhaps Lionpaw himself too.

Lionpaw's name amuses me and I think you did that on purpose, making him timid and shy while his name shows strength and courage. It's obvious he's the kit who needs his mother to most, while Snowheart just shuns him. I get the feeling the rogues will come back and this time Lionpaw will be lured in by them (or maybe his siblings...) because of Snowheart's lack of warmth.

Snowheart may love her kits but I agree with the warriors that she should have cared more. I'm curious to know how this will affect everyone else, but right now I really love your character development, despite only having three chapters up.

Jaystar and Briarstar's plot scares me, especially since ShadowClan is on the other side of the rogue territory it seems. But I think we'll figure out how that and the prophecy relate!

Great story Wetty! Your writing is absolutely astounding and I'm excited to read more!!! <3

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