Talk:Rookies/@comment-5342796-20130618150922

Okayso. For some wacky reason, whenever I see that Rookies has been updated, my mind tells me it's "just Arti editing one of the old War episodes". Well, yesterday I had the thought of why you edited Rookies so often. I mean, surely your grammar and spelling weren't that bad? And then a lightbulb went off: "OH YEAH, THAT'S THE WAR MOVIE."

Forgive me, I'm just an idiot, and yeah...

For one thing, the squad better come rescue Shadowsong. Which they probably will... hopefully... but y'know. Just threatening a little to get 'em going. Also, going backwards, I really liked the cats you picked in each part of the undercover mission. The kit-naming code was also very interesting. I could never have deciphered that... which is really sad, considering it's not that hard to figure out. Heh. Oh well. No one ever recruited me for a war. Hmph.

Going even further backwards, nice foreshadowing with Oakclaw wondering why everyone was taking things so seriously. I like how that came back to haunt him later. Not because I want him to be haunted but... it was a nice touch.

Can't wait for more! And this time I will know what Rookies is when I see it's updated. :P