Talk:Two Birds/@comment-1829516-20170710045118/@comment-28076378-20170710134416

thanks for the comment <3

i love my talonkid, but sometimes i want to smack her in the face. i'd never want to smack creek in the face, i love him too much, even if he's being stupid.

i wanted to use hell and god cause i thought it would make it sound more dramatic lol

i'm thinking about adding an extra chapter about talonpaw after creekpaw helped stonepaw and wisppaw, how she starts to change; i do think i should have shown more of it.