Talk:Wisp/@comment-8248793-20141124051211

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I'm already enjoying this! You had a similar problem like I had in Cold where I thought Wisp was a girl. I seriously thought that, and I was like "what. why is he a guy."

I also thought you were a bit reptitive on the "Wisp lives alone" part, you said it many times, and it kind of tripped the flow of the episode.

On the bright side, this was a good length for an episode, and I felt Wisp's panic and all the emotions he felt going throguh this. If you wrote this all in one sitting, I'm proud of you xD It takes me several days to write an episode lol.

I can't wait to see what Wisp will do, I'm hopefully trying to find someone to ship him with xD And a lot of times, you confused me with the group of rogues and it seemed to me he joined them, because you didn't mention him spying until afterwards.

But I've enjoyed this! Keep going :) <3

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