User blog:Shigura/What do you think?

I just had an idea, about a Clan full of evil cats and what not. StarClan betrayed the Clans, and were forced to become ShadeClan's prisoners. Here's a scrap of what I've written...   Blood.  Blood.  More Blood.  All I could see was blood. Syl had torn the body into tiny pieces, leaving nothing but a demented corpse and blood. Blood, blood, blood.  "Wild...?" Leaf whispered, afraid Syl would come back. His eyes were wide with terror...  I sighed. "I'm fine, Leaf."  Leaf was scared. Truly, impossibly scared. I couldn't believe it, either. Syl had just killed and torn one of ShadeClan's best fighters apart... even if he was a prisoner. I noticed that Felix and Nightmare were eyeing me suspiciously, and I slunk back into the corner of the prison cave. I dared not anger ShadeClan's Warriors any further.    Should I continue? If I should, what should I call it? I'm completely stuck on names. XD   Lovestar "Even ThunderClan loves Me." 22:49, February 6, 2010 (UTC)