Talk:Silverpool's death/@comment-5197876-20141105161628

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This story is very short, so I'm going to warn you that it could be labelled a stub. You may have to expand this in the future, because you probably don't want it deleted.

While short, your scentences flowed well, and the descriptions were realistic. I can't say a lot on this story, honestly, as it's too short for any meat.

But it's not bad for an early fic. Good work!

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