Talk:Dawn And Dusk/@comment-27838201-20170305154046

Ok so for starters i really like this story mistclan isss DUMBBBBBBBB just sayin' anyways i've noticed few mistakes her and there suck after Dawnfire got her warrior name you still called Dawnpaw at one point. what was the point in the dream exactly? I dunno. But how was Dawnfire able to fight when she had been blinded?

ok this was a really good story and i'm happy have read it.