Talk:Gray/@comment-8248793-20170516022334

SPOILERS since i found time to read this ;)

I lowkey didn't realize it was Graystripe til you gave him his warrior name lol woops! I think it's super refreshing that you had old canon characters here because nowadays so many of our fanfics are completely created by ourselves and we often forget the actual arc of Warriors that inspired us all to be here.

This was clever! I didn't actually realize the nine lives were the ones he promised but I think that's a really cool idea to incorporate into a story, especially because Graystripe was definitely a prominent character in the arc and I can totally see him actually promising to give his life up over and over (even if we never actually got that context in the actual books).

You did a good job in describing Graystripe's development as he grew over time, from his maturity to his thoughts and his choice of words. I really loved his cute lil kit self, and my heart broke for Silverstream all over again when you wrote out her death (i forget how much i actually liked warriors LOL it's been too long)

but yeah! great story :D you really excel at details in my opinion so this 1000 short story test was def something I knew you'd be able to do and produce good work

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