Talk:Gray/@comment-28076378-20170630050913

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huh i thought i already commented on this in the past.

There is so much emotion in this, it's so beautiful! Graystripe changes from a care free apprentice to a loyal warrior. I don't know if you intended on this or not, but wasn't Graystripe's mentor Lionheart? not a big deal tho

The part where Silverstream dies is heartwarming yet depressing. Graystripe would have done anything to save her. The idea you had to use the quote like that was very clever!