Talk:Red Mane/@comment-5186061-20130121003932

I am going to be sort of constructive. xD

The story has a great plot and stays on topic while keeping things interesting. I love how HailXRain is happening in the background. :D

I love the story but I think a little more ThunderXLily in there would be good because this is the sequel, ya know?

<33333333333 this so far! Can't wait for the rest. Maybe Rainy and I could attempt a HailXRain story *hint hint* ;)