Talk:Kiss It All Better/@comment-25531638-20130610230721

Well this is a pretty good songfic. Personally, I thought that Spottedleaf's death in the book was a a bit abrupt, and they never really had true love. But this songfic described it in a little more depth, so it actually made me kind of sad.

You are really good at writing songfics! You do not need to redo/delete!