Talk:The Maze Clan/@comment-26432133-20161230184835

noooo i lost my comment. now i have to retype it

Okay, I'm not sure it's all that good to be copying The Maze Runner's setting. At the very least, I think you should put a disclaimer or something at the top.

Flame, your grammar is improving and it still needs a little work. If you're open to it, I can try to explain grammar to you. Also, may I ask what you use to write? (tablet, laptop, phone, etc.?)

Misty, I love your writing. It really gives the reader a pop into Runningpaw's head, with the extra tidbits that a normal narrator wouldn't know, despite writing in third person.

I noticed that Flame writes in past tense and Misty writes in present tense. Maybe you guys could agree on a tense?

Flame, I like Lightningpaw's argument with his parents. Adds a bit more to his character.

Keep going, you two! This has possibility!