Talk:A fallen rose/@comment-24143898-20141201180433

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The plot is good, and this is not bad or a first fanfic, in my opinion :)

I did, however, spot quite a few spelling mistakes (such as Graypaw getting called Grawpaw in the allegiances, and Fallenkit getting called Fallenpaw twice before she received her apprentice name).

Also, if you want better headings, put two of these: = on either side of the word that you want to be headed.

Like this
Overall, it's not bad, though, and I will be watching this space :)

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