Talk:Death At Dawn/@comment-26285531-20150720194815

Ahh, Briarkit, Bramblekit! Nuu, I feel SO sorry for them!! They were only kits..they weren't supposed to die. <<33 R.I.P.

Flamefur's death was sad, but in another way it's good. Now he can reunite with his lovely kittens in StarClan again! :DDD

Anyways, I did love your writing, as apart from a few grammatical errors you have good quality storylines and writing!