Talk:Round Off/@comment-5342796-20150622204045



Holy cow.

That episode was really good.

It was really well written. You did a great job of subtly leading up to the conclusion without making it obvious where the story was going right away. You let things unfold in a logical pattern. I seriously commend you for how amazingly developed this episode was; you knew where you wanted to get, and you wrote out the steps it'd take to get there with a reasonable succession of plot.

I love how Amberpaw's friends banded together with her in this episode. It showed how strong their bond is getting. And I thought Cherrypaw's desperation when she went to talk to Silverpaw was really understandable; she only wanted to save her friend, even if it meant another cat losing their life.

Violetpaw's death was really sad. You could say that it was justice, but it wasn't. She didn't even want to kill Flarepaw; she was belittled into it. It wasn't justice at all, it was sick.

I can see how you're slowly piling up the Beauty's crimes in the eyes of the apprentices. The more evil they witness, the more determined they will be to start their rebellion.

This show is absolutely wonderful. Nice job! <3

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