Talk:Rookies/@comment-5342796-20130723174940

Oh my God that was just such a perfect ending. :c *sobs*

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You've got me so muddled up now Arti. xD I thought I wouldn't be able to love this team as much as I love the squad of the main War show, but I did. And forget what rubbish I said about Robinfeather. She broke my heart at the end. I was literally screaming at Oakclaw inside, wishing he would do something for her. But I get it. I just... I don't know. It was so sad to see her broken like that.

And I also thought Grayfur was dead. And I apologize for yelling at you on IRC for that. :3

This whole thing is amazing Arti. There's something so bitterly beautiful in the way the characters change and develop through/because of their experiences. I feel like someday I'll come back to this and reread it and just start crying because of how wonderful it is- and because I've missed these characters so much.

Shadowsong. Oh Shadowsong. Just... you poor thing. It does explain a lot about her, actually. But going backwards, all the parts when she and Oakclaw were together were just perfect. Even though Oakclaw infuriated me every time he went with Robinfeather in front of her; I felt so bad.

The GorseXShadow part was kinda hilarious. Poor dude. But the part with Brookfall at the end was just so cute, I was like, "dawwwwwwww."

And the ending scene was perfect. It feels so... final, but yet you know what's coming. The main series of War, and all that happens there, and you realize what these characters have already been through, and what sweet innocent Brookfall is going to go through... and you're like... just whoa.

Speechless. Even though I managed to write this decently sized comment.

Don't ever stop being you Arti. <3

Oh and one last thing.

If you kill me you'll never know where the treasure is. x3