Talk:Two Hearts Divided/@comment-16166566-20130726160310

OMGURD THIS IS SO AMAZING! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! WE SHOULD DO A COLLAB! Ok so the story was fantastical. I loved it so much even though it made me cry. It sent chills downmy back when Sparrowflight was joining StarClan. I loved how you described everything so well and I really enjoyed this amazing story! But I wished you explained how Sparrowflight and Frostfoot met, in maybe the Prolouge? Ehh that s just my opinion. You also have a few grammar mistakes but thats ok. I give you  9/10