Talk:Warrior/@comment-5342796-20151206173526



OH MY GOD

OH NO

WHY D:

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS FIREY

MY BRAVE SELFLESS SWEET CARING LITTLE ARTIC

HE DIED FOR HER

I'M SO HEARTBROKEN IT WAS SUCH A SELFLESS MOVE AND NOW HE'S GONE AND SHE'S ALONE AND I JUST

GAHHHH

It was such a beautiful story, the way they collided, fell in love, and learned how much they meant to each other, enough to die for each other.

I'm really glad you left enough of the story unfinished so that Gwyn could pick it up. I'm really excited for the sequel but I'm heartbroken for Gwyn, seeing the  tom she loved die because of her, because he loved and would choose another she-cat over her... Much as I love Artic and Ravenflight, I love Gwyn and I just want her to be happy :( I'm so conflicted.

This story is so perfect. Some cats, fueled by love and strength and courage, learned to be warriors. Others made mistakes and failed--but there's always second chances. Or third chances. There's always a way to step up from what you were and where you've been, and I hope Gwyn learns that.

Back to drowning in my own tears now. It was a thousand times worse because of all those adorable, sweet, earnest scenes with Artic and Ravenflight before his death... and thinking of all they've been through, just for him to die now, ARGHHHHHH, WHY FIREY WHY!??!?!

Amazing job. You're so gifted and I'm so in love with this story <3 It's truly a remarkable work

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