Talk:Losing Home/@comment-11651046-20140206124324

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This is beautiful so far! I love the idea of cats from two clans being mates, but they have to give the kits to another clan alltogether, it ads a bit of a twist, you culd say? Honeyfern seems like a pretty good mother, I guess, though Stormlight doesn't seem very nice...

I couldn't find any spelling errors, and this is very good, even though its still really short!