Talk:Hearts in Halves/@comment-8248793-20150821183822

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Ah okay I'm starting to think I have a faint idea on why this show is called "this war of mine" At first I believed it was a war between the two Clans but it's obviously deeper than that.

You did a great job in kind of like creeping us out with a clarification of Brightstar fainting, Dappleface's weird situation, and Windpaw's really creepy dream. And of course Leopardheart's mysterious death...I can't wait to see more.

Trance! I love that cat already. I'm hoping she isn't the reason the whole Clan is like fainting and whatnot, and I'm hoping she like does some kick-tail moves and saves the Clan lol I think you did a good job of showing who she might be but really covering up her identity and just making us wonder who she is and what role she'll play later on.

I'm suspecting that the deathberry streaks was there for a reason and Windpaw almost had it figured out before Eaglestorm took the body away... I'm interested to know what happened to the medicine cat (?) and why she was found dead with deathberries near her? Like I believed you mentioned a wound...O: Wow okay this is getting intense.

Dappleface's wake up was really sudden and for a moment I actually thought she like disappeared and evaporated like in Windpaw's dream haha. I really want to know what she meant by "weeks" when she's only been out for days...

Great job! You've really drawn me in and I'm really eager to read more <3

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