Talk:Border/@comment-28076378-20170507032749

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First off, there are no grammar mistakes that I've seen which is awesome. Now onto the story. I read the blurb for this series and it sounded really cool! Just curious, but were Pebble and Rattle Tribe cats perhaps? or just loners/rogues? Poor dudes :( I think Rattle kinda made a sacrfice by carrying Pebble, with her extra weight, it would slow him down for sure, he could have found shelter for himself, but he stayed with her and was only thinking of her

The Avalon sounds familar... idk. But Streak seems pretty cool. The reflection pool is cool too. When Rattle went to the achren, why was there a barrier between him and Pebble? Is just that Avalon cats aren't allowed to cross? aw man i feel so sorry for Pebble, I'm curious if they actually were mixed up or if Pebble did something bad or...

The ending, the way I was picturing it, was awesome, like a scene in a movie. I was totally confused with who those cats were and why that one guy was doing what he did to poor Fern... Which makes me excited to figure it out! The plot wasn't rushed to me, which is a problem I see often (in my own work even). Great job!

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