Talk:Two Birds/@comment-26432133-20170121051954

Oooooooo I like these two so much. You did well to define their relationship- Talonkit, the one taking care of her brother, Creekkit relying on her.

From the prologue, I knew PebbleClan was going to be a bunch of poopheads. I like how you establish that, both in the prologue and the second chapter. And BULLIES ARGH * slaughters Wispkit and Flightkit *

Great job, Patch, can't wait to read more!