Talk:Darkened Soul/@comment-8248793-20130913020711

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A very good way to rap up Shadowpaw's growing horror. It makes me feel the darkness rush around me, and I can hear Shadowpaw's screeches.

It was still a short episode, but I have that problem with my stories, or episodes too. More info on Sunpaw's new side, which I still haven't found out about. :3

This was well-written, and the descriptions were very vivid. Most of the actions, I could picture in my mind, and see it very clearly as it played in my head. Very well done.

I don't remember seeing any spelling mistakes, but this episode is very exciting, and I'm off for the next. <3

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