Talk:Fall/@comment-8248793-20140929011952

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In all seriousness, I like this one better than the first one already x3 It's truly a sight, seeing Aaryi changed and turned into something that wants to fight, fight, and fight.

My only problem with this "book" so far is that I don't get why Aaryi became this bloodthirsty she-cat who can't remember her friends.

I really liked how you introduced the first part tho, reminding us that she's Aspenpaw, and that she's living a world that isn't hers.

I definitely like this Aaryi better, I dunno why, she's a lot more active and different than she was as the shy Aspenpaw.

Oh my god, please don't kill Skell. I loved him, I really did D:

<3

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