Talk:Fiends/@comment-27725192-20160810165125

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Whoop de doo, nice story! So I like this prologue because at first it's calm but it later works its way to the big climax which is what a prologue to a story needs! I feel that Blackpaw is insecure and doesn't really want all this great destiny blah de blah. He doesn't seem very excited about his alliance with Rosepaw. Maybe he's better off as Violet's mate lol

Riverpaw doesn't seem all jealous that his brother gets the "better" destiny and I like his cool attitude! Aurora and Willow seem very supportive and somewhat daring too!

Now, as for Violet, I think all she wants is to protect her sisters and live a happy life. But Mothfly wrecked that, didn't she? ;) I have no idea why she has these gadgets and how in the world did she find out about Violet? :o Anyways, killing Mothfly was not a good choice but necessary. I hope the Clan doesn't attack Violet!

Anyways, awesome chapter and I cannot wait for more! :D

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