Talk:Radioactive (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-8248793-20141011172711

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I have to say, this was very well done! I read this some time ago, and I didn't comment yet, but I decided to comment today :)

I really like how you used the lines from the song to reflect the feelings of Mosspaw, but I don't think anyone would be so lovestruck that they would keep a secret for a murderer. But perhaps there's more to the story in the other songfics.

The plotline was very well done, and it was smooth and at a fast pace, like the song. I really liked how you timed each action, making Flamegaze look like a precise killer, and Mosspaw a naive apprentice.

All of the characters were well developed, and I enjoyed reading this songfic! I'll definitely read more of these :)

<3

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