Talk:Alliance/@comment-24143898-20160129014911

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THIS IS REALLY GOOD AAH. I WANT MORE NOW THIS IS AMAZING

Okay, now I'll get onto a more serious note heheeh.

I like the character development that's developed in this pilot episode, it really brings across what the characters are like. At the moment, out of the main character, I like Jem (the nickname that he has makes me inclined to think he's a girl at times xD) better than Britt, but I haven't seen Britt's pov yet so yeah.

For some reason, I like Fish as well, despite his attitude - I see parts of myself in him. I do hope that we'll see more of him <3

And the battle scene (was it?) with the Behemoth was, I felt, at he right pace, along with the episode, not top fast but not too slow either. It was a good speed to read it, and that was good <3

This was really good, Rainy/Sea (whoever wrote this, or was it both of you?? idk i'm not sure)!!! I'M A FAN ALREADY OKAY YAY. I can't wait for the next episode, and I didn't see anything in need of fixing, hehe.

<333

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