Talk:Blind/@comment-24156522-20130711053215

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Well, I reread the first chapter since you were working on that. Only issue (and it was a small one) was a couple places where the words didn't quite flow. Both were not much's: 1)"It took me not much time" sounds a little awkward and could be better worded as "it didn't take me long". 2) " not much reason to take offense" - same problem, could be reworded as "little reason to take offense".

Its an amazing story, and I (impatiently) await more :D