Talk:Fire and Lies/@comment-24766822-20150816232106

Competition Post...

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Okay, now I see what you mean. Yes, I see that this episode is rather critical for the plot.

So, in this one, we get to meet another apprentice: Applepaw. She's seems to be a smart, likeable character so far, and I can't wait to read more about her.

Yay, I just drink in the words when Flarepaw's out of character.

Hey, am I sensing LionXApple here?

Welcome to our show, "More Cruelty from the Beauty Cats"! Today our show is "Murdering Poor Prisoners" starring the Evil Cats from the most twisted society on the planet! lets give 'em a hand, folks!

Sorry, I had to do it. :) But, returning to the program, that part was a little nerve-racking. The description of the condemned prisoners made me shiver in discomfort, and I could almost hear their dying cries, followed by the hesitant cheers of the apprentices. It sickens me to think that such an activity is entertaining.

But then, we briefly see the tail-end of a rebel attack, which was a interesting addition to this episode. This world is clearly very unstable, and just the vibes of this story are making me nervous. You do have a way with playing with other peoples emotions, huh Fiery?

And then, we have an even more terrifying revelation: that Amberpaw is now suspected of being a turncoat in the whispers of the apprentices, which is definitely a BIG problem.

You be careful, Amberpaw! DX

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There weren't very many problems in the text, either, be it grammatical or otherwise. Nice job on this one, but I've got a bad feeling about this whole thing...