Talk:Forgotten Forbidden Fear,Chapter two, Book one/@comment-7526900-20130607042803

I envy your writing talent and urge you to write a chapter three. I think this could be a very popular story with work and effort. I notice a couple grammar and spelling mistakes but I think only me, spellcheck, and someone else with a keen eye would take heed of them. As I already said before, I hope you continue. I really can feel the pain that Burden (or whatever you may call her) is wittnessing.