Talk:To Merit Bliss/@comment-27725192-20170712145956

JUDGING FOR WFWA

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I love your description in this rainstorm! I have to admit, at first I thought this was a prologue, the leader being the main character in the future. But you surprised me and so far I can only believe that the dream was true. As for Yarrowpaw, she's the MCA, right? So why can't she interpret dreams? And I feel like she knows it's true but she's denying it for some reason

BEST POTENTIAL (unfinished story)

I believe this story does have great potential! There is clearly a mystery shown at the beginning which will unravel from there. Brighty did a great job pulling in the readers with just one chapter which is why I believe To Merit Bliss has great potential for an unfinished story. Best of luck!