Talk:Lost Love/@comment-8248793-20151129191907/@comment-15560748-20151130000911

I'm having four sections - two for Hynn, and two for Birchpelt. I'm honestly thinking of just fixing and editing everything once I'm done with the whole layout of the story.

Now that I think about it, it kinda is like that. I'll go change it. It's a bit short; I'll probably add in details and other stuff to make it more elaborate and just better in general.

I think I'll keep the format the same. For some reason, it feels "familiar" in a way, and I'd like to keep it that way just for the story.

Thanks! The introduction was supposed to make you think a bit, I guess, but it was also somewhat of a basis for what the story would be (and there's foreshadowing there! xD)

Thank you for commenting; it means a lot to me <3