Talk:The Sibling Code/@comment-24143898-20151223234342

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Can I just say that what you have so far is really, really good? It's amazing, and it's a good hook for what's to come C:.

I don't know what to think of Cloverkit. She seems okay, but... some of the emotions (which were portrayed with emphasis, and was in the right places too, a good job well done on that) were quite haunting, so I'm a little bit worried for her future (that picture (which you drew yourself, knowing you???) might've given a small hint). However, thus far, I like her. C:

I suppose Clover and her newborn siblings, as per the title, are going to create some sort of 'code' when they're older, yes? Her siblings are so cuuute, btw, they're adorable <3 I hope to see them develop more as the story goes through.

There were a couple of grammar issues in a few places, but none of which that affected the writing.

All I can say is great job, Patch! I'll definitely be watching this <3

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