Talk:The BumblexDove effect/@comment-24.57.204.29-20130316125959

Kinda short and many Spelling errors/issues/uncomplete sentences. Also for some sentences you use commas instead of periods. For example, at the end of Chapter 3 the last sentence was "Thank you," It should have been "Thank you." Because there were no words after it. It was the final sentence, the final word. Don't use a comma unless there's something after it. I like it, through!