Talk:Shimmer of Teardrops/@comment-8248793-20141028011023

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I do agree with Brighty that this story is unique, it's not at all original, and that's a good key to writing a good story sometimes.

I did also find the pendant part confusing, I didn't understand who Siyea was, and how she had a pendant and what it would do. this will perhaps be explained later on, so I'm not too worried. (43% cat?)

I had a problem with Siyea knowing all the Clan cats' names, like I know you want to clarify who they are so you can continue on with Redpaw the next chapter, but rogues shouldn't know the Clan cats so well, unless it's something only Siyea can somehow do.

Still, I found this interesting, and I'm certainly thrilled to find out more!

<3

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