Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-8248793-20151214025804

SPOILERS part twelve

Ahhhhh I do love Lucifly <3 I really love how Everly breaks him open. Ahh I do love this story and all the feelings that come with it<3 You've really woven a great tale!

Lucifer and Everly going sledding together made my heart melt. Like they are so perfect together because Lucifer needs someone reckless for him to realize he's missing out on life's wonders. Everly needs someone like a rock for her to realize when it's too far. THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER.

I love the emotions (mostly the happiness) expressed in this! The one thing I'd have you add is maybe how the others reacted to Everly being with Lucifer? Like I get that they were having a moment (CUTE BTW) but like they just disappeared haha

part thirteen

OH GOD LUCIFLY IS THE CUTEST THING EVER IN THIS FIC I CANNOT EVEN

Ugh poor Lucifer. I'm trying to follow the whole train of thought in the boreas lux but tbh it didn't make sense lol. I'm sure you intended that to happen but I'm not too sure who Lucifer was supposed to be in the train of thought lol

Everly is so brave! I'm scared of the moment when Everly finds out Lucifer murdered Dawnlight, but hopefully she'll understand it's because of the ascara...

You've done so well with this story! I'm so happy you edit this so often and that you update. No matter how dark PZ is, I'm always willing to run for it because it's so intriguing and full of awesome suspense!

Love you<3

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