Talk:Clash of Honor/@comment-5197876-20130922134758

Wow. SPOILERS

Suspense! Always a great way to end a story. Not too big, but not something lame like, "Will he eat the mouse?" XD

Shard's character is becoming very developed. And vicious too. I kinda hope she'll stop, but I think it's a good addition to te story.

I would recomend slowing down. It was fast paced, which is cool, but it was a little too fast.

I'll def follow this series later. It's an interesting idea!

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