Talk:The Fall/@comment-25630395-20170731153302

wfwa judging

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Nice pilot episode! I like how you set this up, introducing all the characters and how they seem to be coping with the same event. These seem to be very interesting and unique characters. I like Ravenwing, and I feel like Snowfire's going to turn out to be one of my favourites, too.

My only complaint would bee that you have certain 'voices' more fleshed out than others. Ravenwing, Silvershade and Snowfire all have a unique tone to their narration, while others like Ashpaw are a bit bland. However, since it's only the first episode, I'm sure you'll flesh out their characters more later.

You were nominated for best ship! It's only the first episode but I'm already intruiged by Ravenwing and Silvershade's first meeting. I like the dynamic they have going, and although it seems to be a bit of a predictable 'forbidden love' I like both of their characters immensely.

Nice job- I'll only be commenting on episodes 1-5 but I'll read the rest to judge to the ship. I'll summarize all my thoughts about it in my comment for the fifth episode.

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