Talk:Just Believe Me/@comment-5197876-20160813031333

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well, you pulled me in from the opening line. I have to say, that's one of the best ways to open a story that i've seen, and it's quite unique in my opinion.

I really like Rippleshine so far! She seems realistic, and she's got a good head on her shoulders. Hopefully she'll stay this way, while it would be fun to watch her totally break down, I'd prefer if she didn't.

The opening line is still really ominous, so I'm kinda hoping that she doesn't die, but hey, who knows? (It'd certainly be despair inducing if she did)

The snaketongues are really really cool, and okay, they're also kind of scary when you think about them, but I think they're very neat.

" The other other way."

Perhaps one day I'd find my pride again.

^^that was hilarious to me

Overall, great fic! I'll check back when it next updates!