Talk:Long Live (Songfic)/@comment-8248793-20150223035459

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This is gonna be short sorry

AHHHHH BLUEFANG IS REALLY CUTE AMG and I love these new scenes you added with Tiger/Blue.

Owlpelt should go away xD I disapprove of her and Blue, though I like how you made her say things that made Tigerpaw seem like a villian.

You wrote in the fox scene: "A fern does not a fox make." I'm not sure if that was a fancy way of saying it, or you misplaced the make C:

ANYWAYS GOOD JOB KEEP GOING <3

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