Talk:The Twoleg Prophecy/Part 1/@comment-26981210-20160402151104

I read part of it, and I really like it, however I'm so sorry but the grammar is so bad I can't keep going. I love the plotline, but bad grammar just drives me insane. But you're definitely on your way to being a good author, I think. Just fix your grammar mistakes and describe things in a bit more detail.