Talk:Stranded Together/@comment-5342796-20130622182201

Wow! This is really interesting! :D I'm going to start off with constructive criticism, and move on to praise. Okay, well, the beginning was very well-written(you have great writing style), but it was a little fast-paced in the first chapter. Also, I wasn't exactly sure why Rainsplash and Darkstream were so tired that they just got into a box when a random cat told them to. xD They'll have to work on that.

Other than that, this is really good. One thing that you added in that I really liked was location. I can't wait to see how you weave Mexico & all its factors into the plotline. Also, I think it's cool that Rainsplash & Darkstream don't really seem to know each other yet. That leaves a lot of room for a real friendship to be formed, which will be wonderful to watch. Spice seems like an interesting fellow, and I look forward to see more of what he's like.

Keep it up! :D