Talk:United/@comment-8248793-20150906145507

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Oh okay nevermind then it is Scorch...I don't know if it was intended but I feel as though you're giving away a lot of the secrets easily. Unless...it isn't Pouncestep who's giving information away. But I feel as though it is O: And Scorch is almost positive to be the cat spying on them.

Also I like the prospect of them fighting. It's hard to form a group from different Clans and expect them to be best friends and you did a good job of making the situation realistic.

(is it just me or is this situation really like Cold's first season...?)

Anyways, I like how Wisp is growing out of his shell! He's grown so much since the first few episodes and I like how you're slowly developing him instead of pushing him forward and changing him drastically because he's "bonded with cats".

Good job, nevertheless :) <3

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