Talk:Vale/@comment-26432133-20170720045321

hohohooooo I remember reading this last year and falling in love. Too bad I didn't know how to leave a good comment rip.

wfwa judge's comment-

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This is really hecking cool! Breezepaw, through her interactions with Daisypaw, is a cool character and I really like her. While I was reading the first episode, I had one nitpick, which was that Ivyrose and Goldenburst felt a little bland, though they filled up later on. It's fine; I mean, how much can you do in a single episode with a lot more characters trying to shine too? They're also really sweet and, like Wetty mentioned, do well to illustrate Daisypaw and Breezepaw's friendship. And Daisypaw and Breezepaw are my favorite friend-ship. I honestly can't remember a time when there was a platonic ship done so well that I shipped them- as friends, of course.

To summarize my reactions to this show: WOW WOW WOW - OH NOOOOO WHY'D YOU HAVE TO DIE NONONONONO - awww that's so sweet <3 - and all that went on repeat for the whole show xD

As Ryan/Breeze was nominated for Best Ship, I'll comment on that. Wow, they're so adorable <3. I could sense the ship as soon as Ryan walked in- whether that was intentional or not, I dunno. Ryan's something for Breezeflight to lean on which is really sweet, and I have a love-hate relationship with the way she felt like he'd betrayed and left her. Hate it because Ryan/Breeze, love it because plot haha.

And Vale was nominated for Best Concept, whoop whoop! Now, I don't exactly understand that, as Vale's jam-packed with "concepts" each season, personally i would've nominated best potential but i'm a judge so rip so...I'll just comment on Vale in general? Your narration's amazing, and the characters are so loveable it blows my mind. My only real nitpick is that the Life-Rock felt kind of out of place with the setting, which hadn't before set up any element of magic and gave off a more down-to-earth vibe. But that could be just me lol.

Yet again, Vale was nominated, this time with Breezeflight for Best Protagonist. And holy smokes, there is no way I could agree more, especially since Breezeflight is leagues better than my character who was somehow nominated Best Protagonist. We don't speak of her, shhhh. Anyways, Breezeflight's amazing- her narration, like I mentioned before, is perfect and she, as a character, is just great. And (which happens so rarely in fanfiction) she activates the events, kicks them into motion, and when you combine that with the really good first person storytelling it feels so tangible it's wonderful.

Overall, Vale's awesome, hurry up and write more it's just so great.