Talk:The Traitor/@comment-17759525-20150816192240/@comment-5137480-20150816210957

SPOILERS

I tried to reply to this whole comment but it's so long I don't think I can. Thank you so much for this, it helps a lot!

PROLOGUE

...I may or may not have forgotten cats can't read

CHAPTER ONE

I did end up torturing Hollypool a bit more then I intended to- all the cats are based off people I know - all of whom will probably murder me if they read this. Mintwhisker, yes, is probably the one with the most hope they can pull out of this, even though it seems like Birchleap. That will probably be explained once I get to his POV. Also I'm not telling who ends it ;)

CHAPTER TWO

Samoa's a former kittypet. I think she's probably one of my favorite characters in this because she actually realized, while she was a kittypet(wandering in the forest) that something was so wrong with the world that somebody had to stand up and fix it.

CHAPTER THREE

If I didn't make that clear, Mintwhisker is a girl. The society is very, very broken. The fight has been going on for a pretty long time (I'd say 8, 9, moons?) Willowstar isn't mean(she's a very nice person in rl) but desperate times call for desperate actions, I guess. I, personally, thought it went a little too fast, but that's okay.

CHAPTER FOUR

no comment but there is foreshadowing here

Thanks for the comment!!! It means a lot!