Talk:The Dark Forest Arises/@comment-25531638-20131022024218

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I always like a "darker twist" to things :)

I think you do a really good job of describing evil characters in your stories/songfics. Blackfur definitely had me interested in the songfic. Just the one thing that I would recommend is for you to give Blackfur a bit more of a soul... if you know what I mean. Keep him evil, definitely, but maybe give him some emotional pain with his whole life, pain that leads him to revenge.

I also like how you gave detailed descriptions of how Blackfur earned a title in the Dark Forest, instead of just being like "And then Blackfur tried to kill the leader so he could be leader so he went to the Dark Forest".

Like the song lyrics as well :)