Talk:Inside The Mind/@comment-8248793-20130914143558

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I like this so far, Tangle, though some few spelling errors. :3

You spelled "gound" instead of "ground" in the very front of the story.

So into the main parts... I love the idea of going into Sparrowflight's mnd, and how the kits are now with Maplefern, and also in danger. Great danger.

This story is very interesting, and the way you did this, making them go into the mind, and everything, adds a new layer of twists in there. Anything could happen. I <3 it, hope you do more!

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