Talk:Far In The Horizon/@comment-5197876-20140525042457

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Congradulations on your win! XD

Okay, FITH is brilliant. The idea is completely original, and I love (jeez, almost said lobe) it to bits. Rainstreak and Moonsong have very diverse personalities, and I think they have a great clashing dynamic.

Your writing style is amazing, and it is a very fun story to read. Like Rainy said, there are a few tense/grammar errors, but no so many that it takes away from the story.

I await more :D

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