Talk:Scarce Grief/@comment-1703139-20141227020424

"I knew I loved him from the start and that he loved me enlightened my heart". That rhymed and I just thought that was weird lol. Anyways...

Some spelling and grammar, nothing huge.

This episode was pretty well paced, considering it was mostly a character study. Both Snow and Dawn were really cool- Dawn gave some cool new insights to her character and Snow destroyed all kinds of stereotypes by being so cool about Crow and Storm. So that was good.

Storm kinda moved on quick. I mean, she's young and all, but that was a little weird. Like..if she wants to grieve, grieve. If she wants to rebound, rebound. But chill girl. xD

Other than that, the tension was really well done. :D

REEDTAIL!