Talk:The Trouble With Toms/@comment-25630395-20150623080515

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Another Pucktastic episode! (hahahaha).

At this point, I don't really like Daisypaw. Idk why, she's just that girly cat who gets under my skin. But it's so hilarious how she's all like " and then he's late! That's right, ladies and gentlemen, Specklepaw was ''late!" ''Oh I totally ship Breeze and Speckle. It was be super hilarious if she and Daisypaw had a rivalry xD.

I find Breezepaw very appealing, because she's not perfect and attractive to all the toms, getting all the attention, that sort of thing. She kinda reminds me of me. I am the pessismest queen >:)

The part where Breezepaw dislocated her ankle is kind of confusing... because one moment she's on the branch and then there's dialogue? It was a bit sudden, maybe having a blackout before the dialogue would have been better, but I got it after re-reading it :)

Wonderfully written, Rainy!

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