Talk:Far In The Horizon/@comment-5342796-20140524235814

I'm only on the prologue and I'm already entranced! This is great so far. There are a few minor spelling/grammar(like tense) errors, but other than that, your writing style is flawless! I'm intrigued by the differences between the two main characters' personalities; I think it'll make for quite an interesting love story. Can't wait to keep reading--in fact, I'll go do that now XD