Talk:Fallen Snow/@comment-26432133-20161226165707

Oh noes Fogheart is touching Brighty's son. xD

On to the constructive part of this comment! I like seeing the bitterness and tension of the Gathering. I like the idea of the war going so far as to kill a medicine cat.

Darkstar annoys me, as well as him being in ShadowClan, mostly because in the canon, the Erins seem to think "We need a villain or just anyone evil? ShadowClan!" It just feels overused. Brokenstar, Tigerstar, Blackfoot, Rowanstar, Needlepaw or whatever her warrior name is, and though I haven't read the new book, I heard other users saying that Violetkit's adopted mother (or maybe it was her mentor) was downright abusive.

I'd like to see Snowfire struggle more with her Clan, especially after the Gathering.

Because this is a story that therefore needs a conflict, I bet you a hundred gajillion bucks that the war is gonna start again. Preferrably with Snowfire causing it, because it's a great opportunity to give her a huge mistake.

And Birdy, keep writing! Your stories are freaking awesome!