Talk:Reprisal/@comment-27725192-20170507020041

Prologue.

Oh. My. Flipping. Cow. How do you write so well aaahhhh? At first, I hated Minnowstar for just killing her clanmates like that? She threw everything away and was just...vicious. I loved the part when they went into the Dark Forest and were confused which showed a lot about their character. They followed love blindly and didn't see their faults.

But this - this is what I LOVE most: the offer. I see that the plot is mainly about Minnowstar and Flashstar having another chance at life and I can't wait to see how the story goes! You two have an amazing plot planned here, I can see and I can't wait to see how you deliver it. ;)