Jaypaw's thoughts

OK i had to change this my friend had sent me this and told me to post it but it turnned out to be copyed so i hope you like this version
Jaypaw woulk up from his dream, he had been hunting a mouse in the lush green forest but now his world was plumited into darkness. But it wasn't the blackness that disturbed his or even the fact that he could only see in dreams. The thing that disturbe him was the fact that even though he proved himself everyday and supprised his mentors regularly everyone treated him like a kit. Special treats and Gental treatment didn't cover up the fact that people whould stutter and change there words to fit his blindness so as much as he proved himself he felt like he would never treat him even.