Talk:Sweet memories/@comment-5848758-20131114194621

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This has some good stuff in it. I like the different personalities and characters-they're different.

But your spelling is quite bad as is your grammar. Run each chapter through Word if you want to check this.

And the actual length of the whole thing-it is very short, as is each of the chapters. Perhaps you could go into a bit more depth?

I like the basic idea though-I will definitely be reading the sequel!