Talk:Scarred Trust/@comment-24143898-20160315075253

I promised you I'd comment on this Firey, and I'm doing it C:

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(this is from like chapter four onwards, I realized that I in face commented on this earlier on :o)

Okay, this was really amazing, I really really enjoyed this, first of all. I really liked Leafstripe's character: I felt as though you developed her well, especially in the latter part of the story.

The emotion, too, also strikes me - it really does come through a lot, and it's something that I want to do well as well - I really do look up to some of the things you've written. Your writing is just go... heart-tugging, etc. (I know, you've probably heard this before, but still, it's completely amazing I swear.) I really do love it <3

Alderleaf's death was so sad. Poor Leafstripe </3

Also, I really did like the ending as well... I wasn't expecting that to happen (however, now that I reflect on it, that was bound to happen, lol). Leafstripe nuuuuu </3 So emotionallll

I also like how Mouseclaw realized that she was wrong in the end, how she realized what she was doing was wrong... I think she made the right decision, deciding to support her sister in the end. <3

I LOVED THIS FIREY <3 AND IF YOU EVER MAKE A FANS SECTION FOR THIS, I WILL SIGN IT <3

ilysm

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