Talk:Long Live (Songfic)/@comment-8248793-20150311012857

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I will continue to comment on each update :)

I find it cute that Bluefang is still thinking of Tigerpaw when she probably long forgot about him really. The kit scenes are still adorable and I wish you would write a story of them when they were young <3

Seedflower is so rudeeeeeee Tigerpaw is mineeeee she cannot insult her without getting away with itttttt

Anyways, I love how you express Bluefang's emotions and how he sees everything in a different light. He's more calm, and I have to say I like his perspective more than Tigerpaw because he has so many sides. I also find it realistic that he's nice on the outside but inside he's falling apart. It's not that uncommon for people/cats to be unstable inside even if they're happy and cheerful on the outside.

This is lovely as always and I await your next update <3

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