Talk:Rise of the Sun/@comment-28079582-20160520030418/@comment-27838201-20160520093834

this is the first real comment to our story appart from us explaining stuff to each other in the comments you really know how to brighten up someones mood i took a good look at your story too you know how to put dramatic affect i never knew you were such a good story writer to be honest you can put alot of affect dont forget we have other stories to like Strangers Eternal flame Vineclans form Vineclans form book 2:the five apprentices Frost clans begin ...i think thats all of them dont forget to check out our blogs too if you like! i'm open for other collabs with other users as well when ever you like it might take me some time to answer back if you request but thanks for giving credit to Foxsteps and Pumpkintail they did alot of the story that gives me the ideas and gets me going to be honest i thought we did a good job fox does the coding pumpkin deos the pictures ive said alot i just wanted to say thanks for commenting and reading! -Flame