Talk:Sleepless Nights/@comment-8248793-20151120043057

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I do love how you jumped straight into a flashback/action. I feel as though it would be a good emphasize on how the nightmares really cause Nightpaw pain and other plot stuff (I totally didn't read the summaries...I CANT RESIST)

I don't have much to say about Nightpaw other than the way she words her words (or you do it??) is interseting. I like the way you have her voice her thoughts, how it's complete yet it seems broken up by her fear and the horrors she experienced against the Sylphs.

The sylphs seem really rad tbh!! Of course there's not much info on them but I can't wait when we find out more about what the Great War was and what really happened.

You've woven really an unique tale so far and I know this is like super short but I seriously do like the story.

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