Talk:Chance/@comment-26936355-20170509124923



Woah. Another one of those really good stories.

Firstly, I need to get out my hate on Tansypaw's parents (btw my IRL cat is called Tansy she just got neutered today xD). oqwiuewuo.

Secondly, I agree with bee- the first-person narration is well done (which i couldn't do welp) and I definitely believe that this is a great start of a beautiful story! I can foresee that tansy would turn to brightclan, but i really hope that she would turn into a loner/rogue please xD.

i nearly cried when grayflower died D: poor tansy! her mother would've protected her from the cruel world ;~;

anyways i'm so sorry that this comment is so trashy ;~; i promise that i'd stay tuned for new updates! <3

>spoilers<