Talk:Locked in Love/@comment-5446929-20140507005846

I read the prologue so far...

OMFG THAT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL I LOVE YOUR WRITING WHY ARE YOU SO TALENTED? You have a really poetic way of writing and it just flows and I don't know how to put my thoughts for this comment into words but I really /really/ love the personification: "But the water was greedy, and it swirled around her, attacking her and pushing her down."

Soooo good, I absolutely love it and it brought tears to my eyes tbh