Talk:Shard of Ice/@comment-5197876-20130918041455

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Nice concept! I like the ideas put into this. Ash's death was a little sudden, and maybe I'm just tired, but I was kinda confused during this.

But it's very mysterious, and I like the betrayal that Snarl shows. It goes by fast, maybe slow it down a bit, but very enjoyable, and I can't wait to see more! I'll follow it for sure. (Yawns)