Talk:On the Side/@comment-24519368-20140706191538

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An excellent start to the show, Firey! Well done! I liked how you introduced the two main characters before the start of all the action. Shade's backstory seems interesting, and I like her personality. :) You made an error: I had a think pelt, as does all the kits born to such weather. It should be 'thick' instead of think. This the second time reading this. And now I can't think of anything else to say. This is really good though! A nice, calm episode to start off the show! :)

Random potato.

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