Talk:Breaking The Shadow/@comment-5488450-20130729002842

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Wow, this episode was really cool! Airpaw's love of Echo is really sweet, I think and the twist it adds to the story is marvulous, especially considering that we have Firepaw as well creating quite the love traingle :3

The cursing part, screaming at the stars and just laughing at Stormstar was all really amazing<3 So many little scenes here were just warm! Your word choice was good and it was a short episode but the length seemed fit for the plot you chose for it :)

The only thing I might point out was it felt a little rushed-not the plot bu the writing. Several times, I caught words(for example fumed at the really beginning) being repeated within a few sentences while using the same purpose and sometimes that stumbles with the flow of the story :)

This is great, though, I'm steadily working my way towards the finale so you betta write faster :D