Talk:Chance/@comment-26432133-20170510143743

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I love, love, love how Tansypaw's being dramatic and overreactive. She thinks they're all being mean to her, when in reality they seem pretty nice. I have mixed feelings about Lilyclaw. Like Bee said, she could be manipulative, but it also could just be Tansypaw overreacting again. Plus it also could be Foxpelt being Foxpelt, considering his temper tantrum about the chanting. And like Firey, duuuude I could see this as your contest entry too, Tansypaw looks like she's gonna go villain. Is DestinyClan the Clan she's in, or is it some kind of StarClan? (sorry if all this just flew over my head). I'd suggest you change DestinyClan's name, it sounds a little awkward. I love Spicefur, his dose of common sense and sweet name is landing him Doggo's Fav Character in Chance <3

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Overall, I love this story, great job, Fox!