Talk:Half and Half: The Dark Forest Returns/@comment-25630395-20141109094056

Skystar returns... MWAH HA HA. I used to hate her, but now that I know her back story I feel kinda sorry for her. There was one sentence I found a bit confusing, the one where Halfstripe thinks; ''Sometime, Rosestar's going to be expecting Cloudsky's kits... ''Can you reword it? It makes sense, but it's talking about the present tense and Rosestar already had kits. Overall, really great! 4/5