Talk:Blood and Secrets/@comment-27153792-20160712220559

WOW, this fanfic is full of ups and downs, and honestly, I was always on Pinepaw/fur's side of things when something happened!

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Okay, where to begin on this? Let's see...

Pinepaw/fur was a good character, and PinexFlame suprised me a bit. (Which is good, because I like suprises!) I feel that the way you've set up Pinepaw/fur, Foxheart, and Flamepaw, and just the storyline in general was quite clever.

CHAPTER ONE: It was a good setup chapter, although it was a bit boring.

CHAPTER TWO: It actually kinda scared me. In a good way.

CHAPTER THREE -- SIX: They were exellent! I can imagine stuff like RavenClan blaming Pinepaw for vandilising, and Blackpelt's situation was very realistic. I could also could see Pinepaw and Flamepaw getting closer.

CHAPTER SEVEN: Ohboyohboyohboy. This chapter stunned me, but it was great all the same!

CHAPTER EIGHT: Fishpaw! This chapter made me kinda get annoyed by Fishpaw, and it was a great chapter.

CHAPTER NINE: welp, PinexFlame is a now official, I guess. I liked the way that you made Flamepaw confess.

CHAPTER TEN: aaaaand now I hate Thornheart! Poor Pinefur, nothing ever goes her way.

The ending really leaves it at a cliffhanger (because I'm assuming that's the ending, considering that you have the words 'blood and secrets' in bold, and the way that Chapter Ten ends...), so I'm hoping that you'll make a sequal, because this was great, and I'm giving it 8/10!

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This story is just amazing. I hope to see something as good as this is the future!

--Lokilog