Talk:Enemies and Friends/@comment-26285531-20151026011820



This was great! I like how you put a lot of descriptions into each movement during the training battles. Because usually the author thinks they're descriptive enough but from the reader's point of view they can hardly visualize it.

In the sentence "We would have been on time if a few apprentices were so slow." I think it should have been "were not so slow" Also yeah, between the -s it was kinda confusing without the spaces.

plz i know enough about amberXbrown from sea (thanks Sea) but I don't ship them ATT ALL *runs away*

Flarepaw is such a jerk, because she's Redstar's daughter n'all, but she doesn't deserve anything! D:< snobby beauty cats. Ginger seems okay, but n00bs r cool so stop making fun of us D:

dis is great firey :P <3

