Talk:Heroes/@comment-26432133-20160904192135

This is very interesting. Whichever cats are turning their Clans against them, it'll be great to see who they are and why they're doing it. (is it Sol? Sol's kit? Sol's spirit visiting those warriors? as you can see, I am fixated on blaming Sol). I did catch a brief change of tense in Stormpaw's chapter, and a lack of a quotation mark at the end of her words that threw me off a bit. Don't forget to fix that!

Heroes is great, and I hope you continue it! (if thou do not, i shall murder thee)