Talk:Captured By The Lonely/@comment-17759525-20140104000003

Intriguing title :3

Efin though this is still r33ly short, Imma do my chapter-by-chapter, and I can add to it l8r :3

SPOILERS

PROLOGUE

Aw, the start is good. I like how it starts off with a warrior ceremony, but no one likes the cat :c And the scene with Breathpaw is furry cute. (Cool names, btw :3 )

GTG FUR DINNER WILL EDIT THIS L8R