Talk:Darkening Horizons/@comment-8248793-20140729040701

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I really liked the beginning of this, though I think you should have kept it so it was one cat per Clan, and perhaps you should have explained more about how SkyClan came to be next to the other four Clans and stuff.

But other than that, I thought this was pretty good. Though you really threw me off when you introduced Flossie and changed her name, I think you should have called her "Flossie" during the choosing StarClan thing.

But I really loved this story so far, it really brought me in and Socks was a very unique character, but a sudden appearance.

Quickpaw <3

I'll read the other books soon c:

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