Talk:Crime/Pilot/@comment-5342796-20160718012843



Okay, so I see you've decided to go for a lighter, more high school teen movie vibe, at least in this first episode. It's interesting! I'm not a huge stickler on the whole cats have to act exactly like cats thing in fanfics, because let's face it, this wiki wouldn't exist if we all believed cats could only be written about that way.

I'm also assuming that Smokepaw has a lot of growing up to do, and judging from this show's title, major events will happen that will shape her character development. I'm curious to see how/if Prettypaw, Musclepaw, and Dustpaw will evolve too.

It was a short episode but a nice start! I like your writing style c:

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