Talk:Falling Shadows/@comment-1597182-20110807202448

I really freaking love this, but the prophecy is a bit odd.

“Great danger is coming to the lake and only black and hawk can stop it,”

Black is an adjective, and it would make more sense if it said the hawk or a hawk. And I don't think the warriors are so dumb that they don't recognize the fact the there's a Blackpaw and a Hawkpaw XD.

But really, i think this story is fantastic!!! Write moreeeeee