Talk:Murder/@comment-5848758-20131213172147

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This is definetly an interesting plot so far. :) I love how you have set it in the past rather than the present day. Your sentences flow nicely and ASG, I have to praise your writing as it is superb. The creepiness just ties in so well with the setting (I've experienced enough scariness right now-today was the last day of term and we watched the Woman in Black. Dx TERRIFYING)

However, your chapters are really rather short and I would love to see more in each. I also feel that you rushed the entrance of the dogs, you could've built it up a bit more.

On the whole, an excellent story and I will be waiting for more. :D