Talk:Bloody Shadows/@comment-8248793-20150815173007

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I honestly think this is your best fanfic so far, Sea! It's so well done so far, and I don't feel rushed or anything. I even know Shadow pretty well, which is good. (like in Fire Rainbow, despite being a great series/improvement in your writing, you never really explained the cats a lot). Here, I know the background of Shadow and some of her history.

I kind of question why she takes them out. Doesn't that wake them up though? Like all the shaking and the fact that they are being carried by Shadow to the lake? O: Well I mean unless Shadow can somehow do that without being too disruptive xD

I really like Shadow so far actually. Despite the fact that she seems quite insane and the fact that she's completely bent on being a murderer, killing all four Clans slowly. She seems to be a pretty unique and diverse character. I usually like main characters with flaws, and heck she's flawed.

This is a great start, Sea! :D

<3

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