Talk:Promises (One-shot)/@comment-8248793-20140901173135

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I love the picture btw, but the title's a bit faded and blurry to my eyes (shrugs)

I had only one problem with the entire one-shot, and it was the fact that we had no background stories on Irispetal and Darkstorm. Since it was a one-shot, you couldn't actually like start from their start to their finish, but I feel as though you should have had some flashbacks. Also, is Darkstorm dead, or how did she "murder" him :O

Anyways, I did love the plot idea, it would have worked well if we knew what really happened. You had a few confusing parts, but it didn't kill the flow of the story.

I definitely liked how Iris didn't seem evil, but you portrayed her later on as someone who was just trying to love Darkstorm, but went the wrong way with it.

I utterly hate Darkstorm c: I don't feel as though Iris deserves him, but maybe she changed him by "murdering" him, I dunno.

The promises part was slightly confusing, but only because I didn't know about all these promises, and you just brought them up as you went.

Other than that, it was a great story, and I thought you portrayed them both perfectly, and the flow of the story was smooth and wonderful!

<3

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