User blog comment:BeautifulSnowfur/How To Finish A Story/@comment-17759525-20160106134036/@comment-25250489-20160107023041

No. no, I didn't say that your writing, or Capture, was confusing. I just meant that basically I read a paragraph and then I go back and find a part that I didn't notice before. But it's not a bad thing... I think...

Like I understand it fine, it's not confusing. But then I look back and read something that I don't remember reading before, like just a simple word or something to describe the situation.