Talk:Cherrystar's Salvation/@comment-34633311-20170527155204

Buzzy's comment seems to have summed up my main thoughts on this, but I have my own I want to add.

I'm literally so confused. I wasn't that interested, and the storyline was hard to follow. There was so much dialogue that I saw none of the characters in the way I'm used to. I didn't know any of the cats - you gave us names and no descriptions of them at all.

Also, brief, nitpicky thing here - some of the images don't really match the descriptions given. For example, Sorrelwhisker. Bracken looks like this, and your image was an orange tabby. This is minor and nitpicky, but just try to see what you're aiming for when going for a description.

I really can't see anything positive. The story was rushed and it didn't explain anything about the characters or anything. I can also see exactly where the story is going - and that doesn't make me happy. In general, it's pretty bland, and although I'm not going to completely blow this off, I would like to see some improvement before I return.