Talk:Into An Unfortunate Destination/@comment-7235369-20131011115148

I really love this, it's so well-written, a great use of adjectives and verbs. There is something that makes me want to keep going, because the plot is really interesting.

~Spoiler Alert~

Mist seems really bold and brave to me, ready to do anything, but she has a soft side. I have a feeling Broken and Tumble will turn up again and be important to the story. Mist gives the impression of confidence, and I can't wait to see what's up the road for her!