Talk:Flowerkit's prophecy/@comment-25630395-20150207013411

Hey!

This is a good story, and I am very interested in the plot! Flowerpetal seems like an interesting character.

Just a few things I wanted to point out about grammar and the story.

You can start a new heading by clicking on the drop-down menu at the top which says 'Paragraph', and select what kind of heading you want. Or, you can go into source mode and put two equal signs before whatever text you want to be made into a heading, like

this
Also,

"I will leave you 2 alone now." said Willowbreeze. I'm kind of picky about this, because although it means the same thing, in dialogue it looks neater to say 'two' instead of '2'. But I'm cherrypicking, so :P

The plotline was a bit rushed, like you didn't take the time to explain the characters in that much detail. But it's your first fanfic, and for a first fanfiction its really good!