Talk:Spy Camp/@comment-8248793-20160813233036

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That was certainly an interesting way to open up the episode. I think I'm going to like Diane, but I'm not so sure about the rest of the cats lol Diane seems curious but level-headed, though a bit rash when it came to decisions...

I'll be honest, this was really rushed. Everything flashed by so fast I barely had time to process one thing before the next happened. Maybe slow things down? Like she was barely in spy camp before she was sent out. What about training? What about making friends or having a proper group?

I liked how her family accepted it in the end though, because I feel like it'll help Diane later on.

To be honest I thought the make up thing was weird because doesn't it really make the spies obvious? Like black eyeliner and red lipsticks will not make them less visible O:

But I like the concept and idea! My advice to you is to definitely slow your pace down and describe things instead of letting the dialogue take over the entire story. Nice start though!

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