Talk:Heart of Friendship/@comment-26285531-20160102232715

YAY SHIPS SHIPS SHIPS xP



I like how you started out confused, like Bryce was missing home (which she definitely is). I'm also glad you introduced Feathershine in the second episode instead of waiting it out, like in other fanfics. I'm almost certain I thought it would be BryceXNightshadow and then Feathershine would come in and ruin it all. (Just a hunch xD) But I'm happy Feathershine is kind and isn't like Shineblossom, whose only role quite possibly was ruining everything for Sari. :P

Eee, Applepaw's so cute! I'm in love with her already! x3 The Vipers sound pretty bad, after taking away so much from DawnClan and DuskClan, and I'm curious to find out who exactly they are and what role they have to play in Rise. I'm also curious as to find out who those two Viper cats that Bryce sees are!

Awesome job! Excited to read more! :)

