Talk:A fallen rose/@comment-5197876-20150330232947

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not bad for a first fanfic! I like Fallenpaw, even if she's not the most developed protagonist in the world, she's very interesting. I'm also curious about what ShadowClan is going to to in the future.

I noticed a couple mistakes here and there, but there's nothing that screams error, which is good.

I'll keep an eye out for any future updates.

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