Talk:Pumpkintail's Guide How Not to Make Mary-Sues/@comment-28114043-20160706165931

I have 2, if that's okay.


 * 1:

-Name: Carrottail

-Gender: Female

-Description: Small light ginger furred she-cat with green eyes

-Past: Born in RiverClan. Her mother Firefang died from green-cough in her kitting, and her sister Scoutwing disappeared when she was 2 moons. Her foster mother's kit is Brackenleap, who is her mate.

-Family: Yes, her sister and father Whiskerfur.

-Mate: Yes, she had a mate who died, Oakfeather, and another mate, Brackenleap

-Kits: Not yet.

-Traits: Quiet, Empathetic, Clumsy

-Like: Usually

-Bullying: Yes, for being so small


 * 2:

-Name: Scoutwing

-Gender: Female

-Descriptin: White she-cat with a black spotted coat and green eyes

-Past: Born in RiverClan. Her mother Firefang died from green-cough in her kitting, and she wandered away at night to try to find a dog that had threatened her Clan when she was 2 moons and was captured by a rogue called Russet, who took care of her until she decided to go back to her Clan and see her sister Carrottail.

-Family: Yes, her sister and father Whiskerfur.

-Mate: Yes, a loner she met, Thyme.

-Kits: Yes, a tom and two she-cats, Yewkit, Pearkit, Mothkit

-Traits: Friendly, Adventurous, Stubborn

-Like: Usually

-Bullying: Not really.