Talk:Cold as Ice/@comment-40173582-20190716234914

I like it, I like it. Very original, but at the same time in common with the books. I don't like Nightpelt being the murderer, however. Personally, I would have gone with Snowckaw being the murderer as she's still bloodthirsty, but sets up other cats such as Nightpelt. Then Wolfheart injures Nightpelt, and Nightpelt fakes her death. But soon, Wolfheart overhears Snowclaw and learns he's the murderer. Then he feels sorry for Nightpelt and attacks Snowclaw. Then Snowclaw tells Wolfheart something like "Nightpelt is alive, she tricked you, she wanted you to be in pain" or "Nightpelt did it, I was protecting you" or something that catches Wolfheart off guard, leaving Snowclaw to attack. Wolfheart is knocked out, but Snowclaw leaves him, thinking he is dead. Wolfheart wakes up in a twoleg den, and is a kitty pet for a short while. He falls in love with Casey, but leaves her to find Nightpelt, while Casey is pregnant with his kits, causing him to get mad. Meanwhile Snowclaw says Wolfheart had just killed Nightpelt, and that he had killed Wolfheart in revenge, leaving him to be accepted into the clan. Many followers join him, and he builds his army of lies and cats to kill all the others in two moons at the gathering. Meanwhile Wolfheart has more visions, and is swept away by a flood. We wakes in an empty den. He sits but hears someone coming. It was Nightpelt and a she-cat named Candie. Candie and Nightpelt are mates, and Nightpelt doesn't want to return. Wolfheart eventually convinces her to come with Candie back home. They journey for a while, facing sickness, dogs, hunters, and two legs, but then find Casey. Casey has her kits, Jay, who is blind, Dove, who is sensitive with her senses, and Lion, who is the strongest. Casey hates Wolfheart and assumes he was mates with Nightpelt. They talk, and she offers to come to the clan, as her twolegs are poor and can't care for her. They travel back home, and spot Snowclaw. They lunge at him, killing him swiftly. They return to FrostClan, and explain what had happened. FrostClan apologizes, and they are accepted. But the war is still going on. (The next book will be switching from the newly named Jaykit, Lionkit, and Dovekit's point of view.)