Talk:Holding it Within/@comment-27725192-20170629205144

COMMENTING CONTEST

I love this! It really goes with Cinderpaw's feelings for Fireheart and how he never noticed her. I almost must say it was very sad to read too. I also feel like it was pretty short but then again, we didn't see CinderpeltXFirestar much though.

The poem rhymed and went quite smoothly imo, and the title also matches the poem very well. Also, if this was your guess, then it was spot on because CinderXFire is actually real XD

This is really good. Great job, Firey!