Talk:CrowXLeaf: Jayfeather's POV included

Good story
A good story, and good plot. Interesting and great idea how you put in what Jayfeather can see. It really helps the story. Remember to use " instead of ' for quotes, speech, and thought. 4/5 stars.

24.154.27.146 14:15, 20 January 2009 (UTC)Flamefeather