Talk:The Swallow/@comment-28076378-20170202033605

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This was well written. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes. There were a few spelling mistakes, I think it was mostly in the last couple of chapters, but besides that, looks good!

The plot of this was pretty interesting... I knew from the moment she and Scorchflame met... I knew (i did not go on fcrp for spoilers. i can just read the future)

My favorite character in this was Hirondelle or Flashdusk <3

I don't really have much to say, but you did a nice job!

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