Morning Dawn

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WolfXPrime              Hatred runs through blood like worms dig through dirt. It is a way of life

Something I Made Up Inc.

Prologue

Shredtail, Jaywing, and Dewblossom were discussing the power. "I think that Icekit should be the one. She is smart and quick-thinking" Dewblossom argued, "And a nuisance too" Shredtail added. "I think it should be Gingerkit. She is a good fighter and has great eyesight."

Jaywing spoke "It should be Morningkit. She is quick thinking, a great hunter, and has above average eyesight." Dewblossom muttered "I guess..."

Hailstar padded over, his amazing silver white pelt glowing, along with Gravelstar, Berrystar, and Falconstar. "We all think Morningkit should be the one." they all spoke at once. "It is decided" Jaywing muttered "The one shall be Morningkit.

Chapter One Ginger and Ice will pay the price, the Morning Dawn will shine bright. Morningkit glanced outside the nursery. Her mother, Jewelfeather, had told her to play with Grapekit, Direkit, and Falconkit. She saw them trying to start to play Shadowclan invasion. "Hi guys can I join too?" She asked, her amber eyes glittering. "Sure" Direkit and Grapekit said. Falconkit just shrugged. She knew he was a grumpster. Grapekit became Grapestar, leader of Riverclan. Morningkit was Morningshine, Falconkit Falconswoop, and Direkit Direstar, leader of Shadowclan. She pounced on Falconkit-swoop, and they wrestled over, claws sheathed. Suddenly, a burst of anger seemed to take over Falconswoop, and his claws unsheathed. He scratched Morningkit's back, nipped her ear, and scratched at her legs. Morningkit was terrified. She yowled for Jewelfeather, then Falconkit stopped abruptly. "Morningkit!" Jewelfeather screeched, hissing and spitting at Falconkit.

Direkit and Grapekit came over, confused about what happened. Direkit nearly fainted when he saw Peacockwing, his mother, chewing out Falconkit. Then he saw Morningkit. Her ginger-yellow fur battle scarred and bruised. He hated to admit it, but he had a crush on Morningkit. She was only 3 days older than him. Then he realized; his apprentice ceremony was in five days! She had to recover in two, otherwise her apprenticeship would be delayed. He wondered why Falconkit hurt Morningkit. I wonder why he thought. I wonder why...

TBC tomorrow :P