Talk:Leaving Sanity/@comment-8248793-20131025213541

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I have to say, this was a great way to describe what happened to Ashfur. Though in the warriors book this did not happen, but it seems like a great way to show the Dark Forest.

The ticking was mysterious, and it made me wonder what will happen. Then the way you wrote the character's name at the very end was great. This whole thing made me feel like he did something, he knows he did something bad, then it was Ashfur. That was great!

I really do love this, and I think you'd be a great writer!

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