Talk:Dogwood's Writing Guides/Sues and Cliches/@comment-27838201-20161029140854

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Name:Amberflame

Gender: She-cat

Crush/Mate:Falcontalon

Personality: Strict, Strong, respectfull nice but sometimes can be like an angry fox

Backstory: AmberFlame was born into a litter of three with Flarekit and flamekit she was the only one in the litter with blue eyes But she was alone most the time because Flamekit had Feircekit and Flarekit had Nightkit one day a loner kit fell into clan camp and broke his paw her being the young kit she was went over to help and brough him to the medicine den the tim kit soon joined as Falconkittand of course she became Amberpaw under the mentoring of Ravenfrost she had flaws many such as she was better at hunting than fighting and she couldn't climb to well even though she had strong  hind legs one day her mother- cloverheart was brought into camp dead scenting fox on her dead mother out of pure rage she dashe dout of Camp Flaconpaw followed her. the two found a fox with blood on its mmuzzle and attacked it it backed off due to being weeked by clover heart but left Amberpaw with scars one on her leg a nicked ear and a bite scar on her tail as moons and moons went on Amberpaw became amberflame and Falconpaw became falcontalon one day one of the queens- Silvertail (named after her light grey tail) had kits that snuck out of camp Amberflame rushed off to find them both the kits had wondered off to the thunderpath- a monster was coming Dapplekit ran off but Cinderkit was frozen in fear Amberflame leapt over to cinderkit and tried to run but once she saw the monster was a fox-lenggth away she threw Cinder kit to the other side and was able to get out fo the way but her tail was hit she was asleep for 4 days and was lucky her tail could move at all but the fur would never grow back she soon became mates with Flacontalon and had three kits Redkit Birdkit and Splotchkit- Foxpounce soon came into camp panick and yowled "Dog attack!" and a pack of dogs flooded into a amp Amberflame died in that battle right in frost of her kits.