Talk:Gravity Of Love/@comment-8248793-20130717204500

SPOILER ALERT!

I like the flow of your story, it shows a lot of feeling. But I noticed that you made a typo. You wrote, buryed, but I'm sure it is spelled buried. I might be wrong.

The way you showed the flashbacks matched perfectly with the lyrics. I like this! Keep writing more!

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