Talk:Fate/@comment-25531638-20130912223549

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This is great :) Moonkit and Sunkit are really cool. For some reason I gravitate towards Moonkit's rebel personality, even though Sunkit is obviously a better cat (at the moment at least).

I love where the story is going, and how it is narrated. Kept me entertained the whole time. It moves at a perfect pace as well (which is something I still haven't mastered).

Just the one thing I thought was a little off was how deeply Sunkit and Moonkit thought about love and the future. Personally, I would cool down on the romance a bit. Silly kit crushes and drama are more likely than in depth thought about relationships and how it will work.

But I can't wait for more of this. It's really good :D

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