Talk:Redpelt's Tragedy/@comment-11651046-20130719183007/@comment-25531638-20130719210332

Of course you should continue writing. That's what you should always do, if you like your idea.

I like the idea of the cold, snowy night think, where the climax will rise up to be. But I would suggest maybe making the prophecy a little less obvious. And there were a few grammatical errors as well, such as typos and incorrect use of tenses.