Talk:We Can't Stay/@comment-24740423-20141113005550

judging for my contest

~spoilers

okay first, this is one of the most unique stories I've ever read. like, a legit psychopath. you made me hate Gorsethorn, especially when he tried to hurt Mistshade's kits. and how you just like hinted at his psychopathic personality. the characters are pretty complex, which I like. and the names eee-

I found a few spelling mistakes, as Ginger mentioned in her comment.

I spent some of the story confused. like, when Stormshine referred to Mist's kits as hers, I kinda drifted to thinking the kits were Storm's instead of Mist's. then there's Gorsethorn who seems to be foreign or something?

Redwing's death was kinda sudden. there wasn't really any description of what Storm actually felt about Frogkit dying, but like still.

so anyway, I really loved this okay. like, the plot was amazing, and Gorsethorn's sudden change is just like hatred fuel lol.

I give this a 13/15~ c:

I apologize for my terrible judging tho okay