Talk:Better World/@comment-5342796-20151227033518



Whoa, that was intense.

I love the set up of this; the way you keep the sentences short in between lines. And I love the coding; it's simple and doesn't take away attention from the story, but it's very tastefully done.

I'm curious to where this series goes :O I especially like how you don't outrightly tell us everything that happens, like how you indirectly established the actual rogue attack and left us to gather what had happened.

(Way to go Stormstar, you dun screwed up dude)

Nice job Mist! I love your writing style; it's so distinctive and poetic <3

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