Talk:Cinderella; A Fairytail/@comment-8248793-20150215171445

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I have to admit I hated Stonepaw so much and Petalpaw of course. But then ending was likereally tragic <3

I really like how you wrapped everything up, and you really showed your feelings and descriptions in this story. I noticed some of your paragraphs were really long, so many divide them up into multiple paragraphs. I really liked how you shaped Cinderpaw, and she's a lot stronger than most cats would be when dealing with a problem like that.

Flash/Cinder is adorable, though I think you switched everyone's personalities around too much. Everyone seemed to be two different cats, switching when Cinderpaw talked to them.

Especially Snowy Bird. I love the little she-cat, but she has so many sides it's hard to keep track. I guess it's part of her traumatic experience, but it was a bit sudden.

Other than that, I found the story exciting and wonderful! I cannot wait for the sequel :) <3

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