Talk:Keep Your Hopes Up High and Your Head Down Low: Part 1/@comment-25531638-20130805024900

Hmm, I thought I commented on this already. Guess I didn't.

Badgerpaw is a cool character, but he sure seems eager to prove himself. I thought it was a nice touch, how you didn't make him get it the first time. Because it makes for nicer character development when you have to make a cat actually work for something.

I would just recommend changing the times you said "half-a-moon", to "half moon". And if you're going to switch to first person, then I think you should change the beginning so it's the same.