Talk:Sunset On a Good Day/@comment-8248793-20151124012205

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Intriguing once more! Hm Sunsetpaw I guess is just a friend Aspenpaw is going to get to know? I'm not sure if I'm leaning towards any affection that may bee occuring between them...

Talon seems to perhaps be an important character and perhaps one of Aspenpaw's allies. I'm really excited to learn more about these Birds and what possibly they could want with teh apprentices and why they slowly pick off the Clans if they want to destroy them (perhaps their intentions are different from what we might know...)

The beginning got me bc even though you had Aspenpaw be knowledgable about human terms, but I'm just confused on how she possibly could know "knives" and "gunshots/bullets" perhaps a bit of insight on that would have been nice instead of skipping over it (or you could try a creative way of explaining the pain she felt!)

This was a great episode and you've certainly got me interested :)

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