Talk:A Spear through my Heart/@comment-11493954-20140118202014

Great for a first songfic! The lyrics are great, and really do discribe Bushpaw's feelings. :)

Like I said on your other self-made-up songifc, the descriptions are beautiful.

"Bushpaw remembered her shining eyes. The sparkle within them. Her playful eyes that were troubled. Bushpaw could never forget them."

Add more on!