Talk:Silverpool's death/@comment-7410018-20141103162132

Spoilers~

I was confused as to how this was a full fanfic. I will warn you, since it is only a paragraph long, it could be classified as a stub and deleted. I would suggest maybe expanding it into at least a few more paragraphs.

Although, your descriptions were really good. It was easy to imagine was was happening to Silverpool.

Yeah, I wish that I could write a longer comment, but it's a really short story so I'm not sure how to expand :)