Talk:Cherrykit's Mystery/@comment-25531638-20130609171346

This is pretty good. Some of the chapters got kind of short, but it didn't bug me much. It was fast paced, but fast enough to keep my interest. I also like how creative you were with Cherryblossom's powers.

Just one thing: Cherryblossom seems...a little too perfect. Maybe have her mess up a couple of times, just to make her seem more realistic?