Talk:Two Birds/@comment-17759525-20170626132427/@comment-28076378-20170626142726

ahh thanks for reading I just came up with PebbleClan to sound something like RockClan, that was actually the name of the roleplay clan i came up with these two from. huh, i don't know why i just didn't call it that.

The names will be resolved in a future fanfiction i'll write about their parents.

I was thinking Falconpaw was going to either getting them in trouble, or actually being nice. Oh, thank you for pointing out typos! i usually type really fast if i know where i'm going with an idea, so i misspell words a lot.

Talonkit has some problems. I'm thinking she was worried Stonepaw was tricking them and would take Creekkit from her, just like what happened to her mother. Deep down she feels like the whole clan will do it one day.

yeah, i've always thought the ceremonies were quite boring to write xD yep, it's the spider lie. He knew cause he can tell when she lies; she acts different in his eyes. it's kinda based on me knowing when my brothers lying. lol, i just thought the snake thing was silly to add in. i know this is a serious story, but i like adding a bunch of things that make me laugh. yeah, i've always spelled "its" as "it's" i've never actually realized there was a difference. i'll fix 'em soon!

I was kinda just wanting him to have a chance to be the "hero" for once. i was thinking since they were in that gorse, wisppy and stone didn't have enough room to fight properly, so they thought creek could lure him out so they could attack. but instead, it just chased creekpaw. i'm thinking T was on a different patrol looking for him.

oh yes it sure does hurt her

If you could read the other chapters, that'd be a lot of help. i've been worried those have not made sense or are rushed. Chapter six isn't done yet though.

Thank you so much!!!