Talk:Abandoned For Nothing/@comment-5488450-20130908174703

SOB. SOB. SOB.

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Okay this one was fantastic, easily the best among the three. I wasn't confused for a moment and everything seemed to clear up here and I understood exactly what was going on. You did a fantastic job building upon the grief of Shadowpaw.

Her lonieless and confusion is well done, we see she's not as crazy as everyone thinks and sometimes assuptions are really the worst thing people can make!

The cliffhanger was fantastic however I'd like to recommend breaking up the 2nd to last paragraph because the speaker switched a lot and it took me a while to sort out who was saying what.

Short, a bit, bu fantastic.

Keep it up, Brighty!