Talk:The Ocean/@comment-8248793-20150102220156

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Part One is done so here I am commenting :)

I love Wave the most, she's just like taking care of everything in her own quiet way and I just ahhh <3

Hollytail's my second fav, (even more than Finchflight hahahaha) but I think it's because we see so much of her thoughts she kinda becomes one with the reader. I really like how you express her emotions and how only Wave can really touch her heart.

I ship Finchfang so much. They are so lovely together. I hope to see more of them, and again, you make us really feel the emotions and we feel like we're the characters (Or I feel that way that is)

I really liked how you set up the story, and this is very eye catching and I'm hoping to see how the title relates to the story!

(<3 WAVE :D)

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