Talk:Shards And Fragments/@comment-8248793-20171105001739/@comment-27725192-20171105020139

Oh, thank you! TBH, I was worried my idea would be weird and wacky but I guess you proved my wrong here, :P

Yup. Like I said to Dog's comment, I'm still learning how to set up the basics of the world and keep the plot moving on, but hey I'm getting experience now XD But actually, your understand is pretty on point. That's the main idea I was trying to get through in this chapter, that they are this organization that are separated into teams once they are of age, and every moon they fight to reach to the top or risk being sent down lower and living in poor conditions.

Ayyyyy thanks!! I'm not sure if my current plot ideas will please or disappoint but I'm kind of that person who gets this random idea in the most random time and place and changes what they've been plotting for weeks Lol! So, we'll see.

And thank you for hosting this contest! I know I'm pretty behind on all this (I've written nothing for Prompt 2 save for the beginning quote thingy lol) but I couldn't resist joining because it's truly a beautiful idea and I knew I couldn't miss it <3