Talk:Otherwise/@comment-8248793-20140526172310

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Whoa, mysterious much? You're great at foreshadowing, and I love the way you weave the suspicion and the creepyness into the writing with the words you use. Very good :D

Okay that last paragraph sounded lame :3

I love how you foreshadowed love and like somewhat betrayal or like being controlled. I can't wait to actually find names in this story xD It gets kind of confusing trying to read this story without names lol. (well I know the ginger tom's name now butttt)

I really love the way you used your title into this story, but I can't see the font or download it, so I'll have to skip the full effect :P

I also like the way you don't reveal much in all this. Like I use the prologues to show the bad guys or a preview, but you just give them snippets of the story, without revealing anything, but making us feel suspicious.

I really like this so far, and I hope to see more soon! c: (wait if I like it that means you're going to win xD)

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