Talk:Honeywish and the 4 stars/@comment-26980659-20161115005711

DUN DUN DUN

But some things to improve in your next story:

A cat can't be expecting kits one day after they mated. That's just... Impossible. They just officially mated, and one day later, Honeywish is expecting kits? I'm sorry, it just might be a little confusing for the readers :)