Talk:Darkened Soul/@comment-5488450-20130908165138

To be entirely honest, this episode felt a little confusing. Idk, maybe I was reading too fast but Sparkpaw's entry felt a little sudden and I wasn't entirely sure what was going on. You did answer some of those tense questions from before but I, beyond curious, was confused in this one.

Putting that aside, this was fantastic! I love the debth, and wow did you really take me in. The leader's hesitance was well-done but, again, I felt a little confused. What were they running from, I thought Sunpaw was dead?

Again, it's pretty short so I still feel as though you could make this one big story instead of a show.

But awesome :3

[sorry these are short btw it's just since there are three pages Im kinda breaking it up ;3]