The best feeling ever

"Berrynose! You can come in now!" Jayfeather yelled.

Finally! thought Berrynose. He raced inside to see the most beautiful kits in the world, with their mother laying beside them. "Poppyfrost!" Berrynose exclaimed. "Your so clever, so beautiful, our kits are going to be the best in the clan!" As he flooded with happiness, he noticed how the gray she-kit had a quivering nose, like she was already testing her senses to the world. ''She'll be a fighter, I know it."

I dunno, I just wrote it for writing it, let me know what you think on the chat page. -- ♥Shine star♥  02:13, March 12, 2010 (UTC)