Talk:Wisdom/@comment-28076378-20170709134859

this is for wfa (well its the 9th, so i'm probably too late lmao)

this is great so far! i think dustdude is nice, right? i don't understand why everyones siding with redpaw when dustpaw didn't really do anything wrong.

this wisdom is interesting, and i like all the characters.

there are a few grammar mistakes i can point out when i got time, if you want :3

and omG you made me fall in love. i hated patchfeather with all my heart, but seeing him again, in action with a something called personailty, i forgot how much i cared about him. you really nailed the way i imagine him acting, being a flirty jerkface you want to smack, but at the same time you think he'd look cute if you put some little sunglasses on his face, but then he'd probably kill you - i need to shut up.

anyway, you made me want to think of a story for him again, and i thank you for that! ;;

the part where the rogues come in seems a little rushed, along with the part redpaw attacks emberstar. i was not expecting that lol

you've done a great job so far, that cover is pretty too! and thanks for having my son in it and reviving my love for him xD