Talk:Heart of the Beast/@comment-26432133-20170409222453/@comment-8248793-20170409230805

LOL i'm so amused by your reactions XD it was exactly how i'd imagine you reacting to all the plot :P

ONE -- i'm glad the beast seemed spooky enough without any indication to who he could have been/who he will become to ashlyn

TWO -- lol yeah in short stories when a girl and a boy meet you know they're the ship LOL bc i didn't have enough time to make a complicated love story :P plus i love ash and ray :D I'm glad ray is seemingly calm when it gets obvious afterwards that he def doesn't have a good time being the beast!

THREE -- except you realize he doesn't actually have two sides ;) one's just a mask that he's forced to wear

FOUR -- yes! this is a beauty and the beast reference because ravyn is based off of rhys from ACOTAR and that is a loose retelling of batb! so my story is technically a loose retelling of that as well lol

FIVE -- arguments are actually my favorite to write in a love story, more so than love scenes (human ones...cat ones are so BORING lol)

SIX -- "bring him home" made me think of a meme for TOG xD but you haven't read that yet hehe but yasss i'm glad you ship them a lot <3

SEVEN -- LOL yup the adult stuff is definitely implied, bc i'm so used to reading/writing original novel stuff that i've grown used to mature stuff but i had to extremely censor it here LOL same with what you said about aurora's lines in this chapter bec she was gonna say something along those lines tbh c:

EIGHT -- apparently eight died in your comments lol idk where it is

NINE -- YES GO :D

TEN -- that whole chapter was like "idea? nah...idea? YES"

ELEVEN -- i get the feeling characters always have more extreme qualities than real life xD idk anyone who could be that selfless tbh i'm sorry about jas D: i decided last min to kill her bc i'm used to writing wfw heartbreak (i loved jas ahhhhh her and everett were cute)

TWELVE -- thank you! i'm glad you liked the colors I had a hard time figuring out how to relate them to her lol

<333 i'm glad you liked the story :)