Talk:Hawks That Swoop and Lilacs That Wilt/@comment-1333071-20121129033824/@comment-5259793-20121204020020

OMG I'M SOOOOO SORRY FORK! I swear I didn't know your story was called that. SO SO SO SO SO SOOOOO SORRY! D:

Thanks for the tips, this made me feel awesome, but allow me to explain the cheesy parts:

1) The forbidden love part was part of the contest this is for actually, I honestly HATE forbidden love

2) He has flaws, the she-cats just don't really see them. Being a jerk is a flaw (because he's a huge jerk) and when he tripped Twilightpaw in the story that's like the only time he felt bad about doing that to her.

3) Lol when I Googled those facts I felt so proud of myself for some reason xD But the grinning part kind of adds to his character (I mean, if Hawkpaw was a person, I could totally see him as a hair flip, grin, "How you doin'?" kinda guy). Sometimes not making it as realistic as possible kind of adds to the character, pardon the awkwardness of that sentence :S

I'm so glad that you like it :D When I saw the comment I was like "OMG IT'S FORK! I FEEL SPECIAL SOMEBODY NOTICED ME! :D :D :D" I'm working pretty hard on this, so I hope you keep reading and aren't disappointed! :)