Talk:Cherrystar's Salvation/@comment-34633311-20170527155204/@comment-25630395-20170527191929

People are just trying to give constructive criticism to help you improve. If you want to disregard that advice, go ahead, if you want to listen to it, feel free. No one is attacking you. There's no need to get upset or lash back at the people who took time to read your story. If you think they're being too harsh, you don't have to take their advice. But part of writing is learning to take criticism, and if you can't do that, don't read/ask people to comment.