Talk:Warriors:War in the Hills/@comment-26876778-20151013210942

Great story so far, but there's a little error in one spot: "Cloudflight sighed. What did he want?" It should be that Cloudflight groaned, because sighed  usulally means a sign of relief and groaned is more likely to be a sign of annoyance. But so far, so good. Keep up the good work! :)