Talk:Double the Darkness/@comment-27493627-20170808203719

I love the bond between the siblings! They can so clearly trust each other with everything.. it's awesome to see a bond written like that. The description is awesome too! But I did notice some grammar punctuation errors, i.e. a run-on sentence, commas in the wrong place. Do you mind if I edit it? It's okay if you say no, that's all I was going to fix.