Talk:Shaken Battle/@comment-25531638-20130807041150

Oh yush, I think I will enjoy this show very much :)

The story is excellent, and it's a great way to introduce readers to the show. With something exciting and interesting and dark, which leaves them (and me) wanting to know what will happen because of this!

I just think when she's talking to herself, you should probably skip to the next line each quote. It's easier to read and understand.