Talk:Amberglow's Mistake/@comment-8248793-20130917045502

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I love this story still :D

Amberglow is a perfect character that makes a mistake, yet stills learns from it. Characters like that always the story interesting.

But I thought she was too violent, explain some of the violence, like where and how did it come from. I know she was angry at the tom, but it wasn't enough to really trigger anger and murder.

Other than all that, I didn't find any grammar mstakes, and I really love how this was organized :D

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