Talk:Catch Me (If You Can)/@comment-8248793-20171104144946

SPOILERS the fallen rose

this was a good start! I've always loved your fics and i like your interpretation of "The Fallen Rose" and how you described her to be more of a symbolic rose that fell into a sea of nothing before she found the tom!

i'm assuming this will be a continuous storyline/related stuff bc you like a challenge ;) i'm interested to discover if this will be a myth/legend section of your storyline that the characters will look back to or if it'll play into the later plot! (if this is continuous of course!)

I love your description and I'm totally jealous of your ability to describe setting so flawlessly (i only write dialogue ahhhh) and this time the repetition of "she" at the start of each paragraph definitely didn't mess up the beat of the story but rather gave it an apprpriate rhythm! I love the way you wove this into a description (myth) (i think this is a myth section? i did intend it to be but it's all for your interpretation of my prompts!)

sorry this is short, i'm so unused to commenting now O; but good start! i'll do my best to follow along with all the prompts (on the weekends, not weekdays)

<3

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