Talk:Fate/@comment-5197876-20130822224316

Hey Firey, this is great, though I do have a few things to point out

SPOILERS

Too bad they're father isn't here."

They're should be their.

And you keep saying hands. Shouldn't it be paws?

IDK

Anyway it's great. Oh, and isn't Moonkit the one who's in love with Thornkit?