Talk:Squirrelflight and Ashfur/@comment--20151214030822

Absolutly loved chapters 1-7 then... well... it sort of got jumbled, crazy, confusing, inconsistent, rushed, and... um, well just really Really REALLY unpleasant to read. Please check grammer/ spelling and slow. it. dooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwn. Thanks, and I do not mean for this to be offensive, just constructive.