Talk:Recount A Thousand Sins/@comment-8248793-20151110030236

SPOILERS Chapters Five-Eight

Because I'm not sure where I left off...

Yay more development on the characters :) And since there's a lot of chapters for this story, I think you're going at a great pace now, with little details being revealed. It was just that since the POV switched so often, it didn't seem like they didn't develop. But I mean this is only the second time we see them and their minds so you're fine C;

I love Shypaw and omg Shy/Sky is interesting and I can kind of see them together. Their personalities certainly match well enough. Of course it's only been eight chapters and we've only seen each charries' POV twice so there's still not much yet.

I like how you slowly introduce the plot with each little twist and how Wildpaw's fear seems to foreshadow something dangerous that will kill one of them.

Great four chapters and I'm sorry I don't really seem to cover anything from these sections :c

I'll comment on every chapter from this point on!

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