Talk:Antebellum/@comment-24207294-20161011022024

whoa

this was really really good

the way you wrote everything; your style, perspective, word choice... oh my god

it blends together so well, like how your words are paced and the story line is so creative.

there's this one part that goes " In my heart of hearts". i'm pretty sure that's supposed to be "In my heart" but i'm not sure.

ugh i'm not the best with constructive comments so i'm sorry