Talk:Wintergreen/@comment-8248793-20151110030850

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Hm okay Wintergreen seems interesting and I'm actually glad you really show the setting of what place she's in. Most authors - including me sometimes - don't put the actual difficulties of being a rogue and how hard it should be. You really highlight these difficulties and show how Wintergreen tries to get on with her life.

You also did a good job at giving Wintergreen a background and a seemingly long life at being a rogue. I'm just a little intriguied on the Orphic Flower and why you mentioned it so early. We don't get really any info in this episode on it other than at the beginning and perhaps you could have jumped right into the plot without introducing your main plot afterwards, yes? c;

But I find Wintergreen to be a unique but simple sort of cat and that's not bad! You have a whole show (I think) to develop her and most characters should start out sort of plain so you can give them some major changes.

Good episode and Mystic is a promising show so far! :)

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