Talk:Beautiful (Fanfic)/@comment-8248793-20141103154317

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(i is commenting on the last part that I didn't comment on, but I may rant about the whole story since I forgot where I last left off with my comments c:)

I really liked this story, and of course I loved the sequel too c: The ending was really well put, and I was really surprised because I hadn't caught on with your hints XD

Midnightpaw was really drawn out, and I'm glad you didn't like make the whole Clan hate her, I hate it when charries are despied like that, there's no realy solid plot to that I guess. But I did like your plot, and how you placed each little detail where they were to hint things such as Coral's "death".

Um, like I said, I really like the ending :3333 <3

END SPOILERS (sorry lame comment)