Talk:The Snowy Moon/@comment-26432133-20170524154602



First little nitpick- I don't see why Nightpaw would be filled with terror when her name is called? I mean, there's probably a reason, but you didn't make it clear enough and it leaves the reader wondering if you made a mistake or something.

Besides that, I love the potential for this! Gingerpaw's so funny. The cats are all so fun and I really wanna see where this goes. Now I didn't read much of the original The Snowy Moon, but this is a heck of a lot better! Great job again, Nighty!