Talk:My Dirty Little Secret/@comment-28076378-20170611231508/@comment-7235369-20170612000749

thanks so much patchy! yep i assumed there'll be spelling errors since i wrote most of it on my phone during school lol, i'll correct those right now!

i tried to make it more realistic and slower paced than the first itteration (but don't worry, brownfire is still a jerkface). and i love ashenblaze, too, my poor, misunderstood, terrible son.

and you bet there'll be a twist even better than any m. night shymalan movie ;) maybe look for signs?