Talk:Gems/@comment-25531638-20130607012534

Lets see...I read this again to give a helpful comment.

I like it so far :) it's a very creative idea. But I agree with Gingerear. Maybe describe the gems more, because they are very intriguing.

The names suit Violetrose and Firebloom perfectly. Their characters seem like an interesting part of the story, and another thing that would be nice if you described a bit more :) And one last piece of constructive criticism (hope you don't mind): Maybe they should be a little more unsure and secretive once they found the gems...?

But other than that, very cool and interesting, and I can't wait to see how the rest of the show comes out :D