Talk:King/@comment-28076378-20170614143525

i tried posting this comment like two days ago but it wouldn't let me

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So I agree with a lot of stuff Firey mentioned; i don't really want to just repeat her comment so this'll probably be short.

Anyway, this is GrEat so far. Stranger is really interesting, I want to learn what her real name is. I have a feeling that she and Luna might become a thing ahahaAHHA that'd be dramatic!

I don't know how to feel about Angelus yet, but he seems like a cool chill guy, so i'll probably grow to like him C:

This is just a suggestion, but maybe make the chapter titles bigger or bolder, i'm having trouble spotting them if i leave off on a certain chapter; you could just move them to the center of the page or something.

I have a small question about the fliers and flightless, who exactly are they? what sets them apart besides one having white on them - is it like, one of them is swifter and quieter? I may have just skimmed over something explaining it more, so i'll go read back later

But this is great so far - all of your work is! Keep it up!!

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