Talk:Ending Beginnings/@comment-25531638-20131129000318

Well since I have read through this to edit it, I might as well comment.

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Wow. There are a lot of really good descriptions and metaphors in the story, and it makes it seem more realistic and the descriptions just make it sound more beautiful. There's a lot of the emotion in the fanfic as well, which was really sweet.

And honestly, I wasn't expecting the kits to be Dovewing's, I thought that was a nice touch.

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