Talk:Blood and Revenge/@comment-8248793-20130712145602

SPOLILER ALERT

RIVERKIT!!!!! NU! Why him? Arti, WHY???

So Brookfall and Gorsefur back together? Yes. I want them together,safe from the war. FOREVER.

Shadowsong is FireClan. Wow. But she isn't reallyFireCLan. She is also part WaterClan. So she could just stay in Waterclan, right? But Lionwing seems like she wants to kill her part sister anyways. I mean Lionwing doesn't seem to like anyone, except Snowflight, and maybe Thundercloud.

BUT STILL, WHY RIVERKIT??? That was just plain evil of Thundercloud. I hate him. You should kill him off. NOW!!! But how Thundercloud get his hands on Riverkit? I know it was probably he sniuck in used a trick got him out, that kind of stuff. But I had to ask.

Adderscar was poisoned. But isn't he smart enough to know that not to trust berry things? Or was he just mad and wanted to prove himself right so he just ate them? And who gave it to him? One of the FireClan cats, right?

I saw a few grammar mistakes, actually one. You wrote "Have I ever told you how much is sucked when you were gone?" Is it supposed to be "Have I ever told you how much IT sucked when you were gone?"

I loved this Arti. Can't wait for the next episode! <3