Talk:Vengeful Anger/@comment-25531638-20140218025351

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Wow, this episode was pretty cool, even though it was a little bit short. I think you described the feelings of the cats pretty well. And I also liked the flashback to when Reedtail was captured by the rogues, I thought that was pretty cool. (And the rogue names. you come up with good rogue names :3) And the thing I thought you did best was building up to Reedtail's death.

I got a little bit confused at times though. It's probably because I need to refresh my memory of this show, as I haven't read it in a while, but I was confused when they were all standing around Reedtail for some reason. Do they have to let him die, or are they trying to help, I'm just confused sorry.

Other than that, there were a few typos here and there, like in the beginning I think you said "lung" instead of "lunged" and in the middle of the flashback you said "weel" instead of "well".

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