Talk:Rookies/@comment-5342796-20130606012124

I know you only updated a little this time, but I still have to write my long, intellectual comment for this.

Okayso. I love this like so much like omg I love it so much. *dies*

I really like the way you've set up all the characters we know from War previously. I can see how they've matured since then - or now... or... this movie - but I can also see the underlying part of their personality, the part that doesn't change. Although GorseXShadow is just weird to me... Still, I really like Oak & Shadow's relationship. It seems like a very reasonable place for them to start, especially knowing them.

I also love how you somehow manage to show us things without downright telling us. Like, Shadowsong's whole personality. And Grayfur's attitude about Willowheart. Pure genius. I really like it when I'm able to discern things from the way the author writes, not just what they tell me. It takes talent to do that.

That's my comment. Whoo. <3