Talk:Bellicosity/@comment-25630395-20170624171651

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It amazes me how you can flesh out such unique personalities in such a short amount of time. I already feel that Ivystar is someone who feels slightly insecure with himself but who really wants to do the best for others. With a few lines of interaction I can tell that Ivystar and Dustclaw have a deep bond with each other. Awesome job!

The prophecy seems very interesting and creepy. My only nitpick would be perhaps stressing the fear/anxiety a bit more? I feel like Ivystar was a bit too calm about the whole thing, or maybe that's just me.

I can't wait till you update, this is awesome!

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