Talk:Power of Love/@comment-8248793-20140729231627

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Okay that first line really pulled me in because I wanted to know what was going on in StarClan that would make them restless. Also I think the second time the StarClan leader said "Cats of StarClan", it should be "the old leader began again" not just "leader began"

The prophecy really got me, and that made me want to read more because the prophecy wasn't an ordinary one, and I think it includes a love story and I LOVE heartbreaking/good love stories so impress me :3

I would suggest not capitilizing things like "Worry Mouse" or "Warrior ceremony" because they're not like actual important names, but that's my opinion.

I find it cool that you made the main charrie a shadow of this frail brother, but making him more important than we realize by foreshadowing the prophecy.

I really like this so far, and I think you should write more soon :D

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