Talk:Violet Dusks/@comment-24143898-20170123052238

I figured I should comment on something that's not on my reading list... so yeah, I'm commenting on this :D

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Chapter One:

I'm slightly surprised that Wingstar would let a warrior and four apprentices go on patrol... wouldn't think a leader would do that. However, it does bring across Rabbitpaw's so-called 'popularity' - it gives the impression that some of the older cats see potential in her.

It's also interesting to see some... contradiction, of sorts? Everyone sees Rabbitpaw as a role model and confident, yet she doesn't feel that way. Idk what to think of her at this point, but yeah, like the others say, she does come across as a little annoying. I think she's a little bit self-centered as well, and not the bravest cat - so the vibe that I'm getting from her at this point in time is that I'm not going to like her that much.

Out of the other apprentices, I really like Mintpaw! She seems really sweet <3 Shrewpaw also seems nice enough. Idk what to think of Gorsepaw and Mistypaw, however.

Dustybrook... hmhmhm. I'm curious as to why he has a crush on Rabbitpaw - my gut says it may have to do with Rabbitpaw's popularity, again. I'd like to see more of him, although I also find him kinda annoying.

Aahhh Rbbitpaw's gonna go bad somehow... I think? Twigpaw's prophecy, to me, does indeed seem believable, anyway. I think Twigpaw's coming across as a much more likeable cat to her sister, and like Dustybrook I do hope that she makes an appearance again, so that we can see some more development of her.

Overall, the first chapter does come across as interesting, and I will comment on the other chapters when I have the chance c: There were a few minor grammar and spelling mistakes, but none of which were major, so yeah C:

Also, I will be signing the fans list :D

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