Talk:Into An Unfortunate Destination/@comment-25531638-20131130035202

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I love how you expressed all of the emotion in this. Misty's emotions were so depressing and sad, I just loved it. Especially the way you introduced the story to us. It gave me a good picture of what Misty's life was like and who her siblings were.

And Misty already has great character development. She seems like a quiet introvert, yet she has a lot of sass :3 I like that.

The cliffhanger at the end was great too. I can't wait too see what happens next. keep writing :)

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