Talk:The Promise/@comment-24143898-20141211185504

Hi Blazey. :D

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This was interesting! You definitely hooked me in :)

Snowfeather seems interesting. I don't know how she's going to cope with life in both Clans.

The story was well written, although if I had to suggest something to improve, it would be some of the paragraphs. Some of the longer ones could be split into two or three of them. (Just my opinion, you don't have to change it if you don't want to :D)

Overall, this was good, and I'm looking forward to next week!

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