Talk:Fire Fight/@comment-5342796-20130710140136

Omg Red, this is amazing! I'm gonna start with the whole outline of the story. The setting and the way things work is just so unique and intriguing; that alone is enough to get someone to read the story.

Hollypaw is like... just beast. No questions asked. Just purely awesomeness. I seriously love her as a main character. I feel like she's not one of those she-cats who pretends she's super-tough and magically wins every battle(you did a very good job of being realistic, and I always love that) but a real cat who truly wants to prove that she-cats can win the fights. She's not crazy to hurt other cats, but she's determined to be the best she can be. One of my other fave characters is Tigerpaw- and then Winterpaw. Idk why, but when you described her barreling towards Hollypaw I got the cutest picture in my head. <3

I can't wait for more! :D Great job, Reddyboos!