Talk:One of a Wild Heart/@comment-26432133-20170305200209

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okay Flame I really like this!! Your grammar has gotten a lot better, and Kate/Wildpaw's a nice character! I love how she questioned her decision to join BranchClan. Sunshine's a sweet character, and I hope we see more of her. My only complaint is that your chapters could be a little longer, but this is still really good! Great job, Flame! I can see all the improvement from the past, and it's awesome to see you grow!

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