Talk:Vengeance/@comment-5848758-20131109113011

Spoilers

I really like this, Eevee. You're a good writer.

The prologue was so...Omigosh how cruel were Blue's parents? Blue is, as Tangle already mentioned, a very relatable character, and you really make us feel for this kit.

However, I do have a complaint: The font. Some of the letters are very hard to read and it makes me squint at the computer screen. I already have glasses thank you very much, I don't want my eyesight getting worse.

But apart from that, this is a really good story so please keep writing. :)