Talk:Before The Storm/@comment-8248793-20131122041328

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Great start! I love Sunkit's innocence, and the change of her heart that will happen when she becomes Sunheart.

I can't wait to see her struck by that lightning, because it's such an unique idea, and it really gets me excited. I hope you write more soon, and I really do love this first part, it makes me wonder what will happen next!

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