Talk:Jayshadow's Pride/@comment-35538529-20180513234657

Hi there! Your story was great. I loved it!

Here’s a little tip: You don’t have to put “end chapter __”. Instead just carry on with the next chapter with “chapter __”, and continue to write.

Here’s an example:

Chapter 8 (You write everything you want to write for that chapter and yeah)

Chapter 9 (And then you write everything you want to write for this chapter)

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I hope that makes sense (lol I’m not good at explaining)

Great story though. It’s awesome for a first fanfic!