Talk:The Young Apprenticeship - The Secret Rebellion Series Book 1 Set 1/@comment-1839575-20111110051840

I like it so far, but it's a bit unrealistic that Spotpaw wouldn't think it was all normal, having grown up in the Clan. Also, they're a bit mature for two moons - maybe make them a little older? Say three or four moons? And I'm a bit confused about why Goldenstar would let Bloodpelt maul Poppypaw if they needed more warriors. But I love the idea!

Also, I reckon it doesn't matter who Spotpaw has as a mate so long as they're the same age as him, and NOT a med cat cos that is overdone. :-)