Talk:The Ledgend of the Cinders/@comment-4751506-20130914213214

this is great! You clearly put a lot of thought into this. There were a few grammatical / mechanics errors, but it's poetry so most poets / most readers will let it slide. You were really able to pull off such eloquence in a poem, which a lot of authors can't do - the sophistocation of your words combined with the rhyme really flowed together. You have a talent. :)