Talk:With Scarlet Claws/@comment-24766822-20150417044200

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I've seen several "What if Tigerclaw became leader of ThunderClan?" fanfictions, but Phoenix, this is most definitely one of the best! I've always had a fondness for dark and cataclysmic stories.

It's very interesting that Longtail would be in support of Fireheart. I would have expected him to side with Tigerstar and Darkstripe, actually. Interesting twist!

Swiftpaw! Now that was a pleasant surprise! So far, I don't think I've read any fanfictions with Swiftpaw as the narrator, or even as a featured character. Good choice! Wish seems to like him, but I don't blame him for being bitter.

Oh, the unfairness of it all! Poor Bluestar, a victim of the greatest darkness ever; Fireheart, now plagued with guilt and grief. Swiftpaw, trying to stay strong in a world controlled by terror! And, of course, the overwhelming tension in ThunderClan. You capture every emotion very well, I must say.

I didn't notice any errors. Your writing style is very lovely! And the prologue with Swiftpaw and the kit really drew me in. This is so cool, Phoenix! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :D

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