Talk:Time/@comment-1956227-20170708225540

WFWA Commenting

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Okay, now, kinda rusty with commenting, but I read this and was immediately interested. The imagery I was met with was quite immediate, so good job on that!

I want to talk about Amberpaw for a minute, he's a very interesting character in my eyes, and his flaws are very glaring (That's okay!) And it makes me wonder what will happen as this story goes on.

I like the idea of this story in general, the ending sentences definitely stick out to me the most, the titles of the chapters being tied into the end of the chapter! I can't wait to see more, you're doing a good job!