Talk:Brightshade's Secret/@comment-7270915-20130602135614/@comment-7270915-20130603152945

Goodness, Snakescar is certainly battle-hungry - and, as Brightpaw put it "the worst mentor in the Clan." I just loved those sarcastic thoughts of hers at the end of the first chapter.

To be honest, I'm surprised Fallenheart didn't snap at Snakescar for trying to talk back to the deputy. Oh, by the way, you misspelled Fallenheart in the paragraph you introduced her - you spelled her name as "Fallenheasrt".