Talk:From Paris With Love/@comment-1703139-20120902205107

A great beginning- I'm looking forward to more! Just two things- the beginning coding with the Prologue, do you need help making that an actual title thing? And also, when he doesn't believe it at first, I like that, but what he says kind of confuses me a little. Not the starting over thing, but the having more kits. I see Ravenflight as kind of a chracter who isn't just going to try and start over, he's going to hold onto his grief no matter how much he tries not to. It doesn't really fit with his character for him to act like the other kits are just forgotten, not dead. I dunno...but other then that, great job!