Talk:Fading Until You Can't Tell Anymore/@comment-24192114-20140126032838

Wow Falcon, this was amazing!

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I find this really relatable, in some parts, but it has very many suprising turns. I like how practical you make it, while still giving an element of desperation, that reaches out of this world. There were a few grammatical mistakes, but it was easy to overlook them while reading this amazing story! You made it sound so believable, with the claws of darkness burning from the inside out.

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Keep writing, this is such a great story!