Talk:Time/@comment-27725192-20170708212258/@comment-7235369-20170708215701

thank you so much! this story has been in the works for a really long time, meaning I've always had the idea but never set out to write it. so I figured I would as I work on MDLS, as a calmer story.

amberpaw is a bit of a prick, and hopefully if he grows close to maplepaw he'll be softened by her and learn to be more mature. who knows though? he's frustrated and didn't have a super close family growing up, so maybe his kindness was stunted.

yeah, I thought that too. I'm writing the next part now and I'm gonna try and make it more part of amberpaw's thoughts.

thanks for the comment!! <3 it rly means a lot!