Talk:Down, Not Out/@comment-8248793-20131231000317

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Yesss! You wrote this :D

I love the way Brookfall meets the she-cat from Berry grove and how she realizes what's wrong. Then all the sweet and gooey stuff with her kits ;)

I love Shadowsong and Snowflight right now. Though I hate Moonclaw. You make her so loyal to waterClan, yet so mean and ruthless.

The last part was so perfect, and a great ending scene for this, poor squad xP. I hope Moonclaw realizes how much she should forgive, and that she should realize that Snowflight's actually usefull to WaterClan, and all that stuff. But of course, that would make the plot no fun :3

I really like how you make the squad lucky, but not lucky enough to go past things without trouble. It really fires up the plot :D (it kinda reminds me of an old TV show my brother is watching, but all good plots are like that :D)

I really love this, Arti, and I hope the next on comes out soon!

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