Talk:Training/@comment-4751506-20130607205032

'*whispers * So many ships...

..haha, okay, now that I'm not terrifying you with my Adder x Brook fantasies, let's get onto the feedback portion of this comment!

Anyways, this had a few more grammatical errors than the last one, but that's a part of writing, so it's not too big of a deal. There were a couple of confusing parts (mainly the EarthClan / pacifism thing I asked you about on IRC), but other than that, there were next to no flaws. Now, onto the part of my comments that I always love writing - my likes and my uber-awkward and weird shipping patterns.

Adder x Brook is totally happening and you can't deny it. Originally, I was the biggest Brook x Gorse fan ever, but I'm starting to like the combination of their dry personalities, mixed with Brook's nervous seriousness and Adder's laidback humor. I just love them both and they make me so happy. On the other hand, I'm sensing some Gray x Briar here - and Briar's a bit of a prick, but I adore Gray. :c Red is unhappy with Arti's romantic relationship senses. Regardless, I love the romance mixed in with the rest of it all, because it adds interest. :3

I love you Arti, and I can't wait for (season four &) the next episode!