Talk:Proposition/@comment-26432133-20170220222543

WHOA WOW OKAY THIS IS LEAGUES BETTER THAN THE PARAGRAPHS I'VE READ OF BLAZESTAR'S FIRE AND DIFFERENT ONE

I WANNA JUMP AROUND SCREAMING OFF THE WALLS BOUNCING UP AND DOWN HYPER SUGAR STORY HIGH

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Also this isn't just a great story but it's also a great pilot. It sets up the characters and the conflict and the point of the show well- your hours spent binge watching Netflix have come to fruition. And everything is super clear- our main characters Amanda, Frostwing, Ibis, Nolan, Helios, and Odin, the conflict is these corrupt cats as well as the war, and the point of the show: " Your challenge is to prove that the most immoral of cats can become heroes. If they can, we'll adopt your plan. If not, well, say goodbye."

And I love Odin's challenge. It's a big challenge and it seems like this show will just slaughter the evil-all-the-way cliches. Killing cliches is great! Can't wait to see you do that!

Odin is a very interesting character. I love how he's pointed out every leader's flaws and he's all-knowing, just like Google, which raises a lot of questions and mysteries.

And overall your writing is just amazing. I love the detail and it feels really elegant.

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Amazing job, Blazey!! (of course, now that I've read this you know exactly which two fanfics I'm reading next....muahahahahaha)