User blog:Forestpaw13/New Story!

So... I was just walking around and thinking... and then I came up with an idea.

So, here's the first bit of the Broken series, which is about a ThunderClan apprentice named Emberpaw, who meets a dog and becomes friends with it. Will he lose his loyalty to ThunderClan or figure out a way to save his friendships?

Broken Arrows

 * Gold blended into black.


 * There was a cry of pain, and for just a heartbeat, the colors were their own. Only then could a cat on the sidelines see: fierce training.


 * Then the colors would blend again. The gasps of pain only came from the golden cat, never the black.


 * Finally, panting, they split apart.


 * "You've got to watch for this," the black cat snarled, batting the gold cat on the ear.


 * The gold cat snarled. "Why should you care? I'm not you."


 * "It's my job to," the black cat muttered. "Otherwise I wouldn't care."


 * "I was well aware of that," the gold cat snarled.


 * The black cat took a deep breath. "It's so hard not to get angry at you. You're taking too long to learn."


 * The golden cat stared. "I'm learning just as fast as my littermates!"


 * "It's not fast enough."


 * The gold cat made a noise of scorn. "I'm out of here. Nightfang, get over yourself."


 * The gold cat ran away, and Nightfang called after them, "Why don't you?"


 * The gold cat didn't look back.


 * After a while of running, he stopped at the river dividing their territory from RiverClan's.


 * He washed his ears and stared at his reflection. Emberpaw, this is you, they thought. Be proud of it.

Anyway, this is all I've got for now. All I want (and need) to show you, anyway. :) Do you like it?