Talk:Cinderella; A Fairytail/@comment-26136175-20150215042130

OH DEAR OH GOSH OH NOOOOOO

Stonedapple (sob)

Oh well. I planned part of her death so, okay then.

But this was so much sadder than I thought it would be!

I honestly do hope Petalshine goes to the Place of No Stars. She's been a jerk. At least she cares about her sister.

Very good character build-up, Blazey, I have to admit. Stonedapple becomes a true half-sister, not a jerk anymore, Flashstrike still proves his loyalty, Shiningstar's still a fish-brain (did I just say that out loud?), and Snowy Bird...... you had make her evil, didn't you? :P

Continue!

And if Snowy Bird somehow dies, then can you use the original Petalpaw-death that your fans have put down in the comments?

(see my struggle in constructive critism)