Talk:Shook/@comment-5342796-20160831110634/@comment-25221217-20160831203025

Thanks for commenting!

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I really wanted to reader to know everything they could about Rio and her family before the whole story started, just because I think it's much easier for them to understand why they do certain things, act a certain way ect. I wanted the characters to be almost hopeless, to have a sense of hopelessness about them. Things aren't going their way but Rio has to hold it together to help her sister.

I really like the idea of each sibling having a different father. It gives them more of an age difference, and personality difference, yet they're all related.

Yes, Orion has abandoned his family </3. I have big plans for that idea too! You're right on that part, he is a very frustrating character, and I felt myself wanting to change him. But he will remain away for the time being.

The Warehouse has gone! I didn't include much description for that scene, for Rio is the one telling the story and she spared dramatic detail. The story is now only beginning!

Thanks again for commenting! <3

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