Talk:New Problems/@comment-2143393-20150421231558

So I read through season 1 of this series, and I salute you on writing such a great series! *salutes* Anyways, I'll try to make this a constructive comment, but to sum it all up the entire thing was great and I'm honestly have trouble finding any flaws. :) The real-ness of the cats and the emotions was spot on and the buildup was great. Minkpaw's enemy-to-friend was excellently paced and very well written. Your descriptions were great and I caught a few words I didn't know, prompting me to search them up, which is a good thing! Now I'll be using them in the next chapter of my fanfictions. XD Springclan's happy-go-lucky attitude at the beginning was amusing. As the story went on you started to reveal the flaws within the clan (gossiping, suspicion, etc.) and that was a really great move in my opinion. The entire story was well paced and well written, keeping me reading till the end. :) I'll definitely be reading more of this series.