Talk:Claws Unsheathed/@comment-24495864-20130724033909

I love the prophecy in the prolouge. It's so cool! But could you maybe divide the sentences when a different cat talks? It would be helpful and easier to understand. I like the names, too. I like how there's a fight in the first chapter, but could you put more detail into it? Anyway, keep up the good work! :3