Talk:Wrath/@comment-7662967-20150415025606

This is great XD I love that poem at the beginning, it adds a nice (but spooky) flair :D

You have a nice plot going, and I'd like to read more :) You make the characters very life-like and relatable :3 Poor Volepaw! I feel so sorry for him .. and I have the feeling it's not all his fault Tansypaw died. I bet Brokenstar had a lot to do with that .. and not only by making such young cats fight. He did something to make Tansypaw attack .. cause that really didn't seem like her (Maybe I'm hopelessly off, but that's just my gut feeling XP)

Uh oh .. I have the feeling Stormpaw might cause trouble for Volepaw ...

Great going! It's suspenseful and creepy (in a good way) and has me wanting to find out what happens *Squeeeee* KIU (keep it up) X3