Talk:Fire's Idea/@comment-26285531-20160105042101

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This show is turning out good so far! I like how your eventually making it clear each cat's personality and their mischevious/serious attitude in every episode. Great job! I would probably advise to stress Fire's shock when she think Rainbow has amnesia because it comes out kind of improper and spoof-like. Maybe italics would work better?

I'm sorry there's practically nothing on this comment D: I wanted to do it today so I don't forget! Anyways, I really think this show is coming off to a great start, awesome! :P

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