Talk:Blizzard's Theory/@comment-8248793-20160216041822

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Hm, calm and relaxing, certainly a good way to do an episode. I can see the preface is more of a soothing season, where the leaders just kind of figure out what to do before they really get into amazing action.

Rainbow is you isn't she? I'm not saying you're completely like her, but she seems to reflect you a bit. I'm also unsure if Blizzard and her are dating lol like they were, and they aren't at the same time. Of course if you want them to have a relationship, I would go into it more and give insights on perhaps what made them like each other.

Ooh all these cool ideas! The marks are super interesting, and I can't wait to see how it all plays out in the end.

Also just saying but the nickname "Fir" seems very unnecessary for Fire. It just...almost don't make sense as a nickname. It's just how Flare can't have a nickname y'know? I think it would be sweet if Blizzard and rainbow had nicks for each other because I think they were a couple.

I would add a bit more description, especially with your dialogue parts, but other than that, I thought this episode was fantastic, and I'm starting to see your characters develop! Each of them are developing their own voice, and that's perfect :)

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