Talk:The Quest Begins/@comment-8248793-20151113041300

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Ooh new character! I'm glad you introduced Lazuli this quick into the show bc I don't think you would have made much progress just by having Wintergreen all alone. Your pace is well timed and it's not too slow, or of course too fast. Since this isn't an action type of show (yet), your pace is at a perfect speed!

I also love the way you portray Lazuli. I'll be honest she doesn't appeal to me that much, but I can definitely see how you wanted her to attract Wintergreen and win her over with her seemingly beautiful appearance and kind actions.

I don't really trust Lazuli and I'm excited to see how Wintergreen will face the challenges that are surely ahead of her. I have to admit the fact that she leaned into Lazuli was a little fast considering she was a rogue who trusted nobody before meeting this new cat. That was the only part I felt went a little too fast c:

But you've woven an intricate tale and I'm glad you've asked me to read this :)

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