Talk:Permanent/@comment-8248793-20130925044434

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Written in Fire :

I like this part because its starts some of the rebellion, and the real action. Redpaw becomes Redfur, which btw is a great name :D

I really love Smoke and Gray because they are just cute together, the actions caught me, swept me along th path. You have a great way of displaying actions and emotions, and your words just flow so smoothly. I'm jealous :3

Your story is like a stream, it flows very smoothly, and it never stops flowing. I really love this Roo.

There wasn't any errors I could find, and I certainly love Permanent.

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