Talk:Flames of Love/@comment-1829516-20140118190120

It was a pretty interesting story.

I had a few problems though. I felt like Brackenheart becoming the deputy was really sudden, and he didn't even have an apprentice yet, meaning it was against the Warrior Code for him to be deputy. I also think Morningflower loving Brackenheart was a bit random. Like it just jumped out with no foreshadowing. I just found it weird it wasn't mentioned before, but just randomly popped up?

It was said when Morningflower asked if Brackenheart loved Snowbreeze, and he was like: I don't know. ):

It was cool that ThunderClan was changed into some type of dystopia kind of place. You can tell that ThunderClan and ShadowClan have pratically switched places over the seasons. They even take other Clans' cats :O

I liked Redclaw, he was a rebellious cat who just wanted freedom. I'm sad he had to die ):

This story is leaving my yearning for more. I have so many unanswered questions D: