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NAME : Twistedfoot --->nickname : Wormy, Brokenfoot, Dirtface, Half Blood

Clan: ShadowClan

Age : 31 moons

Rank : Deputy? (If I can get it) or Warrior

Apprentice : Breezepaw (his sign up is coming soon.)

Appearance : How should we describe Twistedfoot? From the outside, not the inside. He was a handsomely bred tom with elegant dark gray tabby fur. No, it isn't black. He can be distinguished from his brother, Greywhisper because of his twisted paw. When he was still a kit, his paw got twisted. One scar neatly seals his look. One scar that comes from his his flank to his neck. Three smaller scars are on his nose. For someone this aggressive, you would have seen aggressive shredded ears. No, he had one small nick on his left ear with a splash of white on his muzzle.

Personality : Twistedfoot knows how he acts. He knows why everyone fears him. From the moment of his birth, he was a fighter. But of his disadvantage of his paw, he was jeered by many and he knew that he had to toughen up himself. Twistedpaw knew that he needed to be aggressive, sarcastic and cruel. He is sometimes bias to his enemies' kits because of what their father had done to him. He is is alert like any warrior and a great fighter. But his downfall starts with his inner self. He snaps at almost everyone as well as being cruel to his apprentices although his apprentices end up turning into great warriors. Sly, cunning, malicious can describe him. He retorts to every insult. He is easy to loose temper with. He blends into the shadows until he attacks. He is outright bitter and calculating. He is amazingly smart but he uses that for his enemies. You might be next.

But he has a second layer in him that is seemingly hard to find. Only his former mate, Mousefire, found it in him. Love. But he conceals it to show that he has no emotion.

History : Twistedfoot was born outside of ShadowClan. His mother who was a warrior named Mossfang liked a kittypet named Jules. Although the relationship dissolved before Twistedfoot was born, the consequences were already set. So Mossfang gave birth to to four sickly kits, two dead at birth. Mossfang named the kits Greykit and Larchkit. They lived without knowing the clans for a moon before Mossfang needed to bring them back. But on their journey back, Larchkit trips over a root and twists his foot, permanently because proper treatment wasn't brought in time. Bitter Mossfang renamed Larchkit to Twistedkit to remind her of her bitter mistake. Everyone thought that Greykit and Twistedkit were sons of a great rogue but then a rumor slips right after their apprentice ceremony.

"Maybe their father is a kittypet!" jeers Rowanpaw, half a moon after their ceremony. The jeers were felt all around camp. Insults were shot after another. "Half blood." "Once a kittypet, always a kittypet." "Not a pure forest cat." "Drive them out." This toughened Twistedpaw into the Twistedfoot we know today. But one small insult makes Twistedpaw explode. Rowanpaw just says that Twistedpaw might had inherited his father's clumsiness and lazy skills. Then Twistedpaw attacks Rowanpaw with his claw unsheathed. Minutes later, Rowanpaw was near dead. Twistedpaw's mentor, Poppyshine started to walk towards him but then Greypaw attacks Poppyshine from the behind. Some say that was an extreme showing of loyalty. Others say that Greypaw and Twistedpaw was just trouble.

Then in the middle of Twistedpaw's apprenticeship, a new kit was apprenticed with her sister, Petalpaw. Mousepaw and Petalpaw was a mouthful to take care of. But Mousepaw stirred something in Twistedpaw's heart. Someone no one had seen before. Love. But Rowanpaw saw something in Mousepaw too. But Twistedpaw had gotten there first and charmed her. Everyone knew that they were going to have kits together. After Twistedpaw's and Greypaw's warrior ceremonies, Mousepaw cheered the loudest. But Rowanpelt doesn't give up so easily. He feeds Mousepaw lies after lies about how he killed his mentor, Poppyshine (she died from greencough), how he killed his father and his two unnamed littermates. Mousepaw was smart enough to not catch this on but Rowanpaw accidentally slip the fact that Twistedfoot attacked him. And then Mousepaw didn't trust Twistedfoot any longer.

After Mousepaw's break up, Twistedfoot still felt love for her and his brother, Greywhisper. But when Greywhisper mysteriously dies and Mossfang drops dead, Twistedfoot knows that Rowanpelt didn't give up. Then the shocking news came upon him. Mousefire was pregnant.

Mousefire's labor went well but when a mysterious killer sweeps through camp, it kills both Mousefire and Rowanpelt but the only kit that was unnamed was alive. Twistedfoot was chosen as Breezepaw's mentor but Twistedfoot hated how much he resembles his father. And he treats him that way.