Talk:The Chance/@comment-24645319-20131113070748

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I love your similies\metaphors. That really gives me a picture and makes me visualise the whole story better then regular stories. For example, I liked "Ashpaw muttered, amusement flickering her gaze". Instead of just "Ashpaw said, her eyes happy."

I agree with Cchen. Scar does seem a little shady.

This is awesome, I'm shan't stop reading this! :)

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