Talk:Big Brother: ThunderClan Season 3/Week Three/@comment-5848758-20131130142629

I have decided to to constructive comments after every section of the spoof. So here goes

SPOILERS AHEAD. You have been warned.

What was funny about the show? What was your favourite part?''' This season is turning out superbo. I loved the play and the kits making the contestants do things. Daisy twerking?! Dx Let me rub that horrredous image from my eyes. Liked this especially:'''

'''Big Brother: (runs over to the trapdoor remote and releases everyone) GO! GO!'''

'''(everyone runs out) Rosepetal: Mistkit, you nearly killed me. For that, you must die. (runs towards Mistkit) Yaaaaaaaaa.'''

'''Mistkit: AAAAAAAAAAAAH! '''

'''Rosepetal: (swipes Mistkit) Do you like that. Does that hurt, Mistkit. Feel the pain you made me feel.'''

'''Leafpool: Hey! Seakit's in the water! Charge at him!'''

'''Graystripe: CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGE! Seakit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!'''

'''Spiderleg: GET HIM! GET HIM! '''

Yellowfang: (grabs Seakit) I'VE GOT HIM!

Big Brother: (uses remote to open house door) PUT HIM OUTSIDE, QUICK!

(everyone runs towards the door)

Seakit: HELP ME!

Daisy: (is running to keep up) I'M ACTUALLY INVOLVED IN SOMETHING EXCITING!

'''Oh Daisyy. xD'''

Also enjoyed this:

Ravenpaw: What do we do now?

'''Big Brother: Um... I actually have no idea.'''

Spiderleg: LET'S HAVE A SILENCE CONTEST!

'''Leafpool: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! (faints)'''

How are you liking the characters?''' Rosepetal being boring is a really funny gag as is Leafpool's phobia. Daisy and Yellowfang's feud is hilarious and I just love Ravenpaw for some reason. And RunningXIvy PLEASE SHIP THEM! When they threw up in each other's mouths I gagged. Dx'''

What would you like to see more of?''' Definetly Yellowfang and Daisy's feud because I like both of their characters. (There isn't much else really)'''

What would you like to see less of? Redtail's madness as you did the cuckoo thing with Willowpelt.

Who do you want to leave/stay?''' I want Redtail, Thornclaw and Spottedleaf to leave. I'm rooting for Daisy, Yellowfang and Ravenpaw'''

'''Who needs more lines/a better developed character? '''Thornclaw as he just stands around and is there when you want him. Same applies to Spiderleg.

'''How can I improve episodes? '''Well there isn't much but I think you should shorten the Nominations part as it drags slightly.

I just realised that you watch American Horror Story when it's rated 18 and you're under that age. *tuts* Naughty Tangle. xD