Talk:From Generation To Generation/@comment-8248793-20171104150809

SPOILERS the fallen rose

I'll be honest I didn't actually expect them to fall in love so fast. I mean after he said they would meet I knew it would come but I'd advise that you try to broach that topic differently! there was no feeling/description from Rosethorn that helped guide us to the conclusion that they were ever in love.

But nevertheless, I like the idea because this could be easily be a story later characters could reflect on as a warning but again, I'm just speculating in a plot that would be related haha (i didn't specify in my blog so it's okay if this was a separate plot from everything else!)

I enjoyed how you set up the moons, with each quote sort of seeming like a continuation of one dialogue. It's a good way to show that over the moons they were having the same discussion but couldn't keep away nonetheless.

Fallen rose indeed! A good story :) I wonder if she'll end up coming back C:

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