Talk:Time/@comment-25110166-20170709173304

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Excuse my messy commenting

I love this so much. It's three chapters long and we've got more character development than certain characters got in five series??? gorgeous.

I love the way this is set up in Amberpaw/fang's mind. Because as we go down in intervals of time, we also see Amberfang more to the core than at first glance. At first he's a feisty, headstrong dude - and I admit, I liked him. I got kind of a... almost a Tigerstar vibe from him with the whole "i did it right and I don't need anybody" thing he had going on. It made him a flawed character. It made him more human. Well, cat. You know what I mean.

But as time goes on we find out that there is more to the tough shell. He's scared of getting close to someone, which makes me wonder if he's lost anyone before due to his fear. Maplesplash is adorable and a very likable character, which has me wondering if she's going to die. And if she does, I wonder how Amberfang will react?

Anyway, I can't wait for all my questions to be answered with the last chapter. This also might just be me, but are the chapters getting longer as time gets shorter? I love how this is set up and I love the repetition with the lines at the end as well. It's a good writing element. :)