Talk:Linked(Series)/@comment-25531638-20130730013817/@comment-25531638-20130731011225

My Linked actually wasn't a stand alone.

As for the story so far. It's amazing, very well written! I like how Poppy's mother isn't super mean or anything, she just has best intentions, even if her rules are a bit ridiculous.

Poppy seems like a cool daredevil, and I'd like to know her better.

There's just this one sentence: I had just come back from an awesome chase with dogs alongside a new friend-Amber-and as soon as I returned to our home-a little patch of grass surrounded by streets and twoleg life-she had to just spoil it. I think you should describe her home at a different time, not in this sentence, because it just sounds a bit awkward (you can leave the bit about Amber).

I can't wait for the rest of this :)