Talk:A Bloody Secret/@comment-8248793-20130924043440

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I really do like this.

Though some parts just went too fast. Like you go in, you kill. You go in, you kill. I recuit you. I bring you here. Maybe lengthen out your actions, though I have the same problem.

I like the first chapter took place. Talking about a she-cat. But who? Then you bring in Blazeflow, who was his partner. It made me think... Who was this che-cat who Redshadow wanted dead?

Because Blazeflow is a part of the Clan, this only made the story twist, and made it more interesting. I wonder if they'll be found, or will they succeed.

I really love the feelings, and the thoughts of Redshadow's and how Blazeflow feels guilt for what she is doing. Keep going!

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