Talk:Moon and Sun/@comment-25531638-20130918043429

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Let me start off by saying that I like Shadow very much :3 He seems like a silent yet sweet type, and I definitely ship MoonXShadow.

And it was a great idea for them to start their own Clan instead of joining another Clan like I predicted, and that would be the end of the journey. And the reason why StormClan is called "StormClan" was a good idea :D

The love additon was great. And the difference between Sun and Moon, yet how they liked each other so much.

It was great to see how the characters grew all throughout the story. I would have trouble making a collab this organized.

The only criticism I would have is to slow things down at parts, and fix the title of Chapter Eleven. Oh, and minor detail: You didn't finish the coding on all the headings. Just so you know x3

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