Talk:Moon Prophecy

Hi! I really love your story so far. However, you seem to be having some troubles with tenses. Don't worry, I'm not critising you, it is often hard to firgure them out while you are writing. I get a friend to check them for me before I post each chapter (or part of chapter =D) Would you like me to be your Beta? A Beta is like an editor who helps the author/writer with this sort of stuff. It often helps to have outside eyes. Tell me if you would like to to help or not (I won't be offended if you say no, so don't stress it!), and keep writing! (I promise i will follow this one) =D -- Dawnfeather talk! 12:55, 8 July 2009 (UTC)