Into the Shadows

My first story in a while!

Main storyline:

All Cloudfire wants is to be a good warrior, and a good mentor. All he wants is to recognized, to be noticed. He dreams of Larkwhisper, the prettiest she-cat in SunClan. He wishes he were deputy, or even leader.

Then, Thunderclaw appears, a cat with stars in his fur, and a glow in his eyes. He has an answer, a way to make all Cloudfire's wishes come true.

But the price Cloudfire will pay is higher than he imagined.

Enjoy! COMMENT!

Chapter 1
This den is too sunny, Cloudfire thought as he woke a little earlier than expected. The feeble thornbush the warriors slept beneath did little to shield them from the sun's brilliant rays.

"And Ashpaw wonders why we're called SunClan," he murmured as he stretched. Pausing only to give his fur a few licks, he carefully stepped over the sleeping warriors and went out into camp.

Sorry, I can't edit anymore. :(