Talk:Ghost Baby/@comment-25531638-20130925040243

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The prologue was great, as well as the rest of the story. I think this style really suits you :)

Okay, I will admit, normally I hate "love at first sight". It just doesn't make any sense to me. But I think you did a good job of putting it in a good way and stuff, even if it was a little odd that their love confession was at their first meeting.

I like their meetings :3 It's almost like I can really see what the cats are like as theirselves, although of course, that's the whole point.

But one question: How does she know that she's pregnant, after only seeing Grassclaw for one or two nights? (unless it's been more and I just didn't catch that)

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