Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-8248793-20160116215405

SPOILERS part fifteen

it still says unfinished XD

Ahhh the ending!!! I hope Everly's okay. I don't want you to end the story here because I ship Lucifly like they're so cute and they certainly work.

The use of "being a monster" always gets me (as I've used it before too ;)) the effect it has is just so strong to me. Like you're not just a cat who does evil, you're a monster. Different from a cat itself. Idk it's a powerful word and I like the way you have Lucifer incorporate it in his pleas.

I love how much Lucifer is changing. I hope he finds a way to live without the ascara and that he and Everly can defeat Greer and live happily ever after together and forever :) <3

Sorry this is short but I'm so happy you updated woo!

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