Talk:Snowclaw's Journey/@comment-26285531-20150723004801

Wow, this is actually pretty good for a start! There are a few mistakes here and there, though, and I'd suggest you edit them. Other than that, this is a fine fanfiction, and you have the makings of finishing this nice and smooth.

One factual error, though—in real life, cats may (or may not) have nine kits, but in the world of Warriors no cat could have nine kits. Icetail, that must be quite a handful!

Also, if Icetail had been looking for her kit, would she have brought all eight of her other kits with her? Just something to think about. This fanfic is great, I wish you would continue!