Talk:Starstar's Rise/@comment-25531638-20130607234419

Completely, utterly captivating! Just when I don't think there's something interesting going to happen...and on her vigil I felt the suspense, like Darkwind was going to leap out at any second >:)

If you don't mind a little advice from a noob, I would say elaborate on Starfur's personality more. She seems like a cool cat, and I would like to know more about her.

But I like how she has a history. And how she messed up a lot as an apprentice.

Please finish it sometime cause I love it!