Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-8248793-20151107200215

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I seriously do love Everly. Lucifer doesn't pull me in at all because of the way he's so detached (he's still a great charrie for this story tho!) but Everly<3 I'm totally rooting for Lucifly bc she's really changing him. Like the fact that he's realizing that he can feel. I have the feeling Everly's recklessness is going to get her captured and Greer is gonna try to kill her and Lucifer will save her and woohoo

Anyways...

I really liked this chapter because you showed the two sides of the Thorn Mountain and the Snow Guard. Like Greer and Lucifer (before) had been the cold side and of course the Collection is part of that too.The warmer side (if there is one lol) is the rest of the Snow Guard. I feel as though all of them know what a Collection is...

You've built a lot of suspension and I like the darkness of this story. It really draws me in bc I seem to love dark stories now xD

Good chapter!! I can't wait for more<3

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