Talk:Fathers and Sons/@comment-4751506-20130620021031

Aw, aw, aw, Riverkit. :3 I love that little scrap of fur - and Gorsefur's parents are seriously adorable too, his mom is really sweet and his dad is just as I imagined to be - the one angry about the entire situation while his mother is just sort of meek, remaining silent, preferring to deal with the kits and take her grief quietly.

There were very few grammatical errors in this, but I got a bit confused by the dream-story part? Was Badgerstrike actually going to marry Streamsong? I thought Streamsong was a FireClan cat [though she sounds really WaterClan]? And was Badgerstrike betrothed to Streamsong? If Streamsong was a FireClan cat, and Badgerstrike a WaterClan, how does that work? Or is Streamsong a WaterClan? How did Streamsong x Thundercloud work? That part was just a tad...bewildering, and I got confused especially since you said it was a dream...and then the part with the cliff...I wasn't sure where the line between dream and reality was.

Other than that, there was a bunch of stuff I liked - I loved Brookfall with Gorsefur's mother, they already acted like mother and daughter-in-law's, which is so cute. :3 Brookfall was also really supportive of Gorsefur, and I thought that was seriously adorable. :3 There was a lot of fluffiness which brings out my overload of :3's, but, you know. It was so cute! :)