Talk:Thunder's Edge/@comment-28796532-20161127152641

Nice but there are several things that do not make sense.Cats do not chew gum,not would they carry it OR use technology.The moniters in the Cat Cave are slightly unrealistic.How did Henry ever meet Sharpfeather anyway?It is unlikely.

And uniforms would not hide their identities like it would for humans.Cats recognize by scent.ThunderClan would know Captain Cat's scent as Sharpfeather and everyone who has met Henry would know his scent too.Also,Henry being only five moons is a bit crazy.He is a sidekick,he has to go into battle all the time,but it isn't realistic to put a cat not even old enough to be an apprentice into that.He should be around 8 or 9 moons,at least.