Talk:The Seeker/@comment-8248793-20151129191559

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in an attempt to comment more, i'll try to follow more stories I guess

Okay I really really like this intro! You jump right into the story and really give me the chills with this "Seeker" being. Super unique, and I'm glad I pressed this to start reading :) Your coding is on par btw and it really gives me sort of a mysterious being feeling.

You really described Cassandra's fear when meeting the Seeker and her worries for her mother on whether or not to tell her about the Seeker finding Cassandra. I admire the way you shaped her courage in facing the situation alone, and your description of the being itself really gave me an insight on how terrifying the creature is!

I like how you've developed so many feelings and characteristics already, and I'm definitely interested in reading more :)

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