Talk:Half and Half: The Story of Halfstripe/@comment-26998763-20160101182950

This was really awesome! Just, in Chapter 18, it says," Eaglesong mewed, as the ShadowClan deputy padded over. "Are you saying that  him ," he flicked his tail at Nightshade, "is the  father  of your kit?"

Eaglesong said," Are you saying that him is the father of your kit?" Which is incorrect grammar.