Talk:You Can't Take Me(I'm Free)/@comment-27725192-20170629203532

COMMENTING CONTEST

First of all, I've read FPWL and I love it so I thought I'd do this for the contest.

This songfic matches Ravenflight so well because he ran away from his Clan and went on an adventure with Paris and fought of anyone who tried to hurt her. I do think this could be a little longer though, and more of a special for the series. There are also a lot of big spaces and I think they could be removed to make the songfic look a little neater?

But this is really good, though!