Talk:Tensions Rise/@comment-25630395-20150824140559

SPOILERS+COMPETITION POST

THIS IS GETTING INTENSE I LITERALLY CANNOT EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR VALE AHHH

You have really great imagery. I especially loved the line where you said that they looked like multicolored ants. That put a really strong mental image in my mind :)

This episode balances out drama and action well. We have thoughts about Speckle/Breeze when bam. There's action.

Like Sea said, it went a little too fast before the readers could grasp what was happening, but that made it a little more realistic too. I also didn't quite get what Breezepaw did for Daisypaw, but that may have been because I was so excited to see what happened next :D

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