Talk:Hurricane(Songfic)/@comment-25531638-20130910042358

I know I already left a comment on this, when it wasn't finished yet, but I will leave another one :D

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OMG I love this so much you have no idea I will probably spend a long time just thinking about how clever the plot was and how I wish that I could write like this.

First of all, I absolutely adore Streamfall, Aquasplash, and Dapplefur. I think that they brighten up the story :)

Giving Graystar that history, then having it tie into the story, was excellent. The end was so shocking. At the part where it said that Graystar wanted to kill Streamfall, I was shocked then, but when it got even deeper where Graystar said that the reason Rockheart was staying away was because of her threat. That just... I don't know. It was an excellent touch :D

The ending scene is perfect as well, and really beautiful and sweet. This was definitely not the traditional love story songfic, and I definitely think that this is absolutely EXCELLENT.

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