Talk:Torn Heart/@comment-11493954-20140118201201

I sang this in my head, and it actually has a tune. Really good lyrics, since you wrote it. :)

It's kinda old and short, but the story that is there already is really sweet. The lyrics work with Stormgaze, like how he is scared to get attached to someone or broadcast his feelings, but loves Foxfur.

Those were very good discriptions of Foxfur's beauty and Stormgaze's feelings.

Also, Stormgaze's cluelessness as to why Foxfur is important to him is sweet.

I suggest you add your name category to this. :P

Continue soon, and I really hope you are going to finish this! It has great potential!