Talk:Squirrelflight and Ashfur/@comment-5324136-20120825191530/@comment-7526900-20130508010723

Um...no...(in a lot of people's opinions) Squirrelflight COULD have been with Ashfur just to make poor 'ol Brambleclaw jealous. (And, it worked) So the two of them could get back together. I think if the story was smoothed out, spell checked, ad slowed down, with things that could actually happen it would be a good story. :3