Talk:Every Night (Night Visions Songfic)/@comment-8248793-20141024204602

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Interesting! I definitely thought this was just short but sweet, it wasn't as rushed, but I felt as though you didn't put enough detail in each section to really make this complete.

I think you should have explained more about why Suzanne was treating them like dung, like was it because she didn't want Martha to have kits with Moss? Or what? I thought Martha was really sweet, and I love the relationship between her and Moss.

I find Dapplestar a little...terribly at being a good judge. I mean Moss left the Clan to join a rogue group, now unless they're totally clueless about who's been attacking the Clans, then Dapplestar should have been a bit suspicious about Moss coming back.

This was definitely a great addition to the songfic series, and I can't wait for more!

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