Talk:In Nobody We Trust/@comment-5342796-20140102032214



Wow, this is really interesting! First of all, I think the title's awesome, call me morbid or whatnot, but it's eye-catching :)

Second of all, thank you for showing Breezepelt and Tiger's relationship so well, because a lot of times we don't realize that cats don't always have to fall in love to be mates, because well... they're cats.

I find the idea of the kits being dropped off at a Clan intriguing, and unless I'm horribly mistaken, that'll be a factor in the plot of the story?

Excellent start, overall. I only noticed one typo; you mispelled "protruding". Other than that, nothing.

Keep up the great work! :D

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