Talk:Dark Secret/@comment-5342796-20121204004743/@comment-5342796-20121206012804

Okay, apparently I have to be constructive now, so here goes. This story is amazing so far, and I love the way you characterize the cats. I'd definitely run with that and have it play into the plot(idk what you're planning though) I can't really think of any negatives, except maybe have less ,s so the sentences aren't too long. (I do that too) Anyway, you know I love it, and hope you keep writing. A lot. A lot a lot a lot. Ciao!