Talk:She Looks So Perfect/@comment-25630395-20150816134414

SPOILERS AND CONTEST POST

Appleshadow was adorable, but I felt it was kind of rushed. This is a songfic though, but if the whole series is gonna be around them, I guess you could have slowed down the pace a little? It was just, I felt like Blackshadow's feelings and confession happened too soon and almost seemed a little rushed.

The ending is pretty strong though, and from the lyrics, I think the song fits the story. I like how it's not just center around their romance... there's the thing with the disease, which makes it more interesting.

I shall read the rest! Great job, Firey!

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