Talk:Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry/@comment-25531638-20131013044342

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Wow, that was great. The first few sentences pulled me in automatically, so I just wanted to read more.

All of the descriptions you put in the story were amazing, but what really captured me was how deeply you went into Mousewing (or Mousestar)'s feelings. I think you really gave her a great character, even though the story is really short. That was one thing that confused me. Is this meant to be a short one-shot type thing, or are you going to add to it?

All of the lives that you came up with for Mousestar were very original too, and I like the way you described her encounter with each of the StarClan cats. The ending was great too ^_^

But once again, I'm a bit confused, just refer to the question above :3

But either way, it was awesome.

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