Talk:A Heart of Ice/@comment-8248793-20131207004232

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I think this is great, and I really like this idea! Icepaw's obviously a determined cat, and her personality really makes the whole story fired up.

I like the way you shaped Icepaw, a warrior with courage, yet someone who fears her decision. It's normal for lots of us, and she's really a normal cat.

The way Loud set up the prologue is great! It really brough tme into the reading, and made me want to read the whole thing.

Tangle's part was detailed and interesting, keeping me hooked. I think you both did well in writing this. I seriously loved this, and I hope she finds the catmint in time!

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