User blog:Leopardkit/Opinion on a random Non-warriors writing

Okay. Hi. Greetings. Salutations. Hola. and... HELLO! Well... In english class, we have to write poems, and I need your opinion on it. We have to chose one poem that we wrote to share to the class. I need to make sure this is the right one. Can you give your thoughts?


 * ___Dew Drops___
 * Tears from the
 * Sun above
 * Dance to the ground.


 * Summer frost
 * Ices on
 * Desert haze
 * That is our
 * Warmth
 * And Hope.


 * Hidden in Grass Blades,


 * They are secret.

I know it sucks. Any idea how to fix it? (please...?) Oh, and I wrote a poem about grass (yes, you just read that right) that my writing partner liked, but I lost it! I am upset now!