Talk:Forced to Flee/@comment-24519368-20140711175245

Time to judge... a day before the results are announced. Wow, I should have done this earlier.

Anyway, I liked how you kept each verse short, so it wasn't a whole lot to read. Which is good for younger readers. :)

When I read poems I expect a few rhyming couplets, but those are only my expectations, not the actual rules.

I'm giving this an 8.5/10. You're doing well so far, as this is the third poem I've judged.