Talk:My Dirty Little Secret/@comment-25110166-20170724062947/@comment-7235369-20170727164402

WHOOP LONG REVIEW OH MY GOOD GOLLY GOSH

I've been waiting to use DLS as the chapter song for so, so long- and I figured that this would be the best chapter to do so. As for Brindlefrost- she and Brownfire probably did the dirty deed off screen of course, either before or during their first outing, I'd assume.

It was so surreal for me- the original page has been up for like, what, a year now? And those words that have cursed me for so long by being the blurb for the story have finally, FINALLY been put into context. And you know things aren't gonna get much better from here on out.

NOW THAT'S WHAT I CALL CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. Whoops, just kidding lol. Brindlefrost obviously blames herself, because y'know medicine cat, but Brownfire did play a big role in it. He's stubborn and headstrong and wanted her.

Yeah, you're not supposed to really like Brownfire- he is kind of a jerk. As to how his parenting will play out? You'll... just have to wait and see. Brindlefrost, too. I like writing her more because she tried to to the best thing but it obviously a little selfish.

Ahhh, Tulipheart. She'll make another appearance before the end, but you just have to wait for it. While the ending won't be super unhappy and hopeless, it won't be a happily ever after tale at all....

Thanks for the comment! I really love reading yours and I'm so happy you're enjoying the story <3333