Talk:Darkened Soul/@comment-5342796-20130915123250

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Well, I reread this so I could make a nice comment, and let me just say, your writing hits me every time. It's so powerful, and one thing I love about it is you're able to convey all the emotions without overusing a ton of adjectives(cough, unlike me, who always does that, cough) or makng things boring.

Throughout this entire episode, there was a feeling of something trapped, something fighting to get out, y'know? What with all the events and pictures and flashbacks you painted so clearly, we were left clinging to every word to see what happened next. And Shadowpaw's final despair at the end as she stated the truth and in sorts, came to terms with it. That was a beautiful touch.

Id still love if these were longer, but awesome job like usual! :D <3

