Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-24143898-20151031014450/@comment-5342796-20151031022313

Ahhh Brams, your comments are so thoughtful, I can't tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to do this.

Everly's personality is very complicated; I've shown her to have negative sides--cowardice and a hint of manipulation--but also honesty and selflessness, which seems to conflict, but it was intentional. The truth is, I'm trying to show that even though next to Lucifer, she seems an angel, she's not. She's not perfect by any stretch.

I'm glad you liked part 3; fight scenes can be tricky and it's relieving to hear you found it suspenseful enough.

Obviously Greer, Everly, and Lucifer are the main characters at this point, but new cats will enter the story and assume major roles. The Snow Guard will also take up a major role; it will be more like what a Clan usually is in a Warriors fic. A lot more will be revealed about the Snow Guard's history and how Greer came to power (because you bring up a good point: she's a bit unstable to be a leader). The Snow Guard is bigger than a Clan, but not bigger than all the Clans combined.

Once again, thanks a million for reading this! I love you, Brams <3