Talk:When We Fall/@comment--20160822152803

This story is really good! I am exited to see more of it come out! I love the way, like in most of your stories, you don't tell us everything at the very beginning. I can't wait to find out more about what happened with her parents, and why she considers herself at least partly responsible for it. Like I said, it's awesome and keep up the good work!

(Sorry it's so short, I'm bad at commenting)