Talk:Cinderella; A Fairytail/@comment-25653434-20150502022307

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wow blazey, wow. This is absolutley amazing!

I love the way you use the clasic cinderella story and combine it in so cleverly( that might not be a word) with the warriors theme, brilliant! I feel bad for Cinder Paw but I love how she finally feels she belongs in the end. I also love the twist with One Eye decendants! Snowy Bird is quite an interesting character.. I like how she has a bad side but also a good one.

I have seen a few spelling mistakes here and there but noting major. I vited it a 9/10 because I think you deserved it but there are small portionas that are a bit confustication at times like the battle, I wasnt exactly sure if she was Cinderpaw or Thistleapaw but it became more clear wwhen ithe disguise disolved.

Cant wait for the sequal <3

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