Talk:Icyflower´s Journey/@comment-8248793-20140216152604

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This is great so far :)

But I would suggest doing the quotation marks like this: "Icyflower!" like both of them over the words instead of having one under the words.

Also, you have a few spelling mistakes, like when Firestar was speaking, you spelled "mysterious" wrong. But that's fine, it's just a spelling error.

I really like the prophecy, though there was some weird break on the last word. I really like this plot, and I can't wait for more :)

I would suggest adding more details to your story after dialogue, instead of making it just them talking. It helps readers visualize what's going on. But other than that, I think this story will be great :)

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