Talk:The Magic/@comment-4792737-20120107040951

This is a really good story, I can't wait to read more. I feel sorry for Spiderpaw and Thrushpaw. If you ever make Hollyleaf appear in the actual story parts, please don't make her like Bumblestripe and Mousewhisker, she's my favorite character! I understand that It's for the sake of the storyline that Bumblestripe and Mousewhisker treat Thrushpaw like that.