Talk:State of Grace (Songfic)/@comment-5342796-20130628142846

AWESOME!!! Double kudos for you for that ending; it was perfectly matched with the song's ending and wrapped up this part of Redpoppy's story perfectly.

One thing I really appreciate about this is that it's not just two cats fighting/in love. You put them in an extremely well-developed Clan setting that enchances the entire plot. Even though we can clearly see Stormfall is an important character, it's not unrealistically making him the center of her life... I mean, of course she notices him, but... you also mention the rest of the Clan and... I didn't phrase that right. XD To paraphrase: great setting.

The characterization was also really good. You showed Stormfall's sadness at what he is/did, which gives us some sympathy for him, perhaps. But more for Redpoppy. Because while Stormfall is quite insanely cool, Redpoppy could do so much better. x3

Eagerly awaiting the next one Red!!! :DDDDDDDD