Talk:One Hundred Conversations Between Souls/@comment-15560748-20150912201537

SPOILERS (competition post)

One -- Wow, that was good. I really liked the opening, you made it intriguing in a special sort of way, and I couldn't take my eyes off it. It was great. Your word choice helped set the tone of the story, and you did a great job. It didn't move too fast, nor too slow. It's at the perfect pace, which is hard to get, and I congratulate you.

Two -- tbc