Talk:Unease/@comment-5488450-20130712123232

awee this episode is so so so sweet. Except I think Brookfall's wrong-I think she's not in love with Gorsefur anymore, because I'm just not getting those feels from her. I think Gorsefur needs to find someone who wants him. However, I do love how their situations completely flipped. It went from Brookfall trailing after Gorsefur to Gorsefur being desperate in his feelings towards her.

Well, I was awaiting Adderscar's return, with excitemenet, and you did it wonderfully! It's funny, suspensful, awkward and really sweet all at the same time!

I have this suspicious feeling that Waterstar is actually gooing to decline the peace offer cos she's a foxy freak who only cares for herself and her power(or maybe because she also believes its a trap). I really can't wait for her death-I would love it if it were done by a Badgerstripe cos I could almost forgive him then.

There were a few mistakes, like quotation marks where they didn't belong and you called refered to Aquasplash as Aquatail a couple time but other then that it was wonderful!