Talk:Even So/@comment-5137480-20150708144843

(trying to step up my comment game :P)

Okay, so even in the first few sentences, Lash seems to be a very endearing character to me, and definitely mature. You can kind of just feel her anger at this system she lives in, and, frankly, if I was in her position, I would agree. It's just... It's really good writing, and she is a character you can feel sympathy for. Especially with the line "It was like I was being saved from something that wasn’t a threat, something that I had expected to be my savior." You can see, her life is already so bad that death was her savior.

There is a bit that I hope you could clear up for me: there are only four full-grown cats plus the overseer? Did this group just start, or is it just small? It strikes me as a little strange that a group like this only has five adult cats.

I'm looking forward to more, though, and keep up the good work!