Talk:The Call/@comment-8248793-20160816014835

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Hm, quiet and calm episode I'd say, until the last part. I'll do my usual way of commenting for this, which is to go by each section.

Snowfire still comes up to me as a strong, independent she-cat and that's what I like about her. I'm glad that she's able to hold up on her own. I'm also curious about Vinespeck's mentor, which is Sunpelt from the special. Of course you're not done with it and I'm not finished reading it but I'm assuming we'll find out in the actual show as well since it was brought up.

I don't know if this is intentional, I'm assuming it is, because it's really obvious that Ashpaw knows his mentor is scheming something but is Ashpaw like super trusting or does he not care? Like he gets to go to all the meetings but why?

Ravenwing is starting to grow on me, but I'm still not that into cats who like joke around even though the situation doesn't call for one. I feel like you paint him in a good light but I think sometimes there should be a cat who doesn't appreciate his humor in dark times. Just my opinion.

Silvershade is a good character I feel, and I'm glad we're still getting POVs from her. I'm not so much of a Raven/Silver shipper but time will make me start to wonder if I'll like them or not. We'll see. Also at the end, you meant RiverClan patrol brought in Rockfur not ShadowClan patrol I think. But who attacked him? O: I'm edging to find out.

Overall, still a good episode! I'm excited for more :)

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