User blog:Awesomecats4/Shining Failure!

As most of you know, I've been trying to do a story called 'Shining moon'. Well, if you have read it, you might know how awful it is. To me the prolouge is good, but the first and second chapter stink! I don't know what to do! I don't know why the chapters got so choppy and messed up! I need ideas!