Talk:Resurgence/@comment-25926899-20170711211126

/spoiler warning part one/

this is a rly neato unique idea that i could see being tough to take on but lets be real ur firey and ur a fabulous author you can pull it off. i only read the first part so far and it was really good except it seems to move a little fast. its sorta odd that she would immediately accept her friends word and skip the dose for the day and it would help if you maybe showed more of a trusting relationship between them before or made it sound as though she had questioned it/been suspicious of skye earlier? also slight grammatical errors/repetive wording but the writing itself is fantastic

the story is really interesting i'm curious how its going to play out -- ive never seen anyone use drugs in their warriors fanfic and i think its a risky move but i know you'll do well. i'm rly interested in the "mistakes" and i wonder how the drug has given the elites powers? rly cool idea i will read more later