Talk:Tiny Paws/@comment-25531638-20130815163946

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I love how you placed the battle towards the beginning, to get us pulled in right away. The transition between the battle and taking care of the kits was great as well.

Oh, and that little twist with Ryan. Great <3

I do ship BreezeXSpeckle. That scene with the kits was adorable, though I do feel bad for Daisypaw a little bit. I also thought it was funny that all this drama played out in front of the kits XD

And of course, Brightkit is the one that goes missing. To be honest, she might be one of my favorite characters, even though we don't see much of her. I just love how she's sort of quiet, but is really naughty :P

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