Talk:One of a Wild Heart/@comment-26980659-20170305150042

When the cats think, you shouldn't have the ' there. Just some advice!

You should put comas on a few dialogues. Like this: "Show me what you can do," meowed Rainpelt.

And the last little thing I have: Even kittypets don't know twolegs are called humans or twoleg nests are called houses. They don't understand Twolegs!

Otherwise, this is good, and I think it will be a great story!