Talk:In The Paws Of Fate/@comment-8248793-20131207151115

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oh wow! That prologue was very well-written, and pulled me right in! Sadly, you haven't written much yet.

The prologue showed us all these mysterious views, and it gave us suspense and the feeling that I wanted to read more. That first chapter really made me feel nervous and wanting to read more.

Though the next part of your story is very short., it showed excitement, and many other emotions. There isn't much to say about this short story, but I loved all the emotion and suspense you put in here. Keep going! <3

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