Talk:Shadows on the Moor/@comment-5342796-20130619200947

Aw, poor Leaf...

The idea for this story is AMAZING. I really like the concept, and I can't wait to see how the plot will progress into it. One thing I was confused about was why the leader felt the need to name Leafpaw that... I mean, he gave Emberflower a normal name. Maybe you could clarify?

Overall, though there's only a little up, it's excellent. Well-written, and I can't wait for more. :D