Talk:Try Me/@comment-1703139-20130605030230

Okay, so Strongheart died. And I crapped myself. I shook my computer a little. And then I kept reading because I was like 'Rainy wouldn't do that to me, she's a good person' and you DIDN'T. <3

Okay, comments...erm...you have a fantastic grasp of all the mechanics and your dialogue is amazing. More description might be nice and I would LOVE for it to be longer. Other then that, you are fantastic. <3