Talk:Evaluation/@comment-24143898-20150831082420

ayyayayayay (competition post)

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HEHEHEHE

I LOVED THIS EPISODE BRO HEH

Sorry, now I need to get my constructiveness hat on, and get on with commenting about the nice things. :o

Oooh, Sandpaw's a feisty one, hehee. >:D Sucks to be you, Sunpaw, you deserved what you got! Hah! I really enjoyed that bit, and that was one pf the two favourite parts for me in the eipisode (the second comes later hehe).

However, I thought that Shadowcloaw personally warmed up to Shnd a little bit quickly, and it should've been stretched out a little more.

Oh, and I hate Duskpaw. kill himmmmmmm

The second but was the choosing. OOOOOH SAND GOT SELETED YAYYAYAYAYAY <3

IF SHE DOESN'T BEAT ALL THE OTHER'S I'LL CRY AND DIE

IF DUSKPAW WINS I HOPE SOMEONE KILLS HIM BC I HATE HIM

I

HATE

DUSKPAW

I COULD RANBLE ABOUT IT ALL DAY >:D

Seriously, I really loved that bit, and you put up the suspence nicely, I prauise you on a job well done.

I noticed that this episode was longer than the others - I think that's a good thing! :D

Overall, it was a really good episode, despite a few minor mistakes! I'm really looking forward to Episode Four! :D

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