Talk:Permanent/@comment-8248793-20130921035909

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Written in Stone:

I dunno if you are part of the reading club anymore, cause you took yourself out, but I shall read and comment of this.

I love how the emotions vary, from happiness to sadness. And they way the characters express it. It isn't just oh "I'm sad." It was like "My tears fell as my heart poured out." Wonderful :D

And the way how Redpaw came over to Fire Division. (Later known as FireClan)

I really, really want to spill what happens, or is revealed in Written in Stars, but I'm trying to pretend I only read Written in Stone xD

Redpaw and Scorchpaw and Graypaw are adorable together. They are perfect friends, though Pebblepaw should still be here. In the little time you had, you shaped your characters into perfect, loveable cats. Which is a perfect way to draw an audience's attention

I really like the flow of your story, and that is what I have to say. <3

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