Talk:Dead And Gone/@comment-25630395-20160818155330

sorry for the really late comment omg

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so first off, i really like the moral dilemma on this. i think it's a great concept, a double agent who's loyalties are confused, and they keep wondering if they are making the right choice. the narration point of view is very interesting, and i like it. it really engages the reader and leaves the character up to the reader's imagination.

the format really intruiged me. at times it got a bit confusing. i kept thinking the events happened right after each other, when in fact they were going backwards in time, right? still, it was interesting, though i think it could've been clarified a bit beyond the words 'flash backwards'.

i really do like this, and i think you've done an amazing job, brighty!

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