Talk:First Plans/@comment-24766822-20150817202404

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Ha, I liked the beginning. Lots of little bits of witty dialogue, though the conversations are often fun when apprentice (or teen) romance is the topic, huh? XD

Snowpaw and Lionpaw should be super careful with their openness of affection. :( I really don't want them to die, since they're such great characters to the story.

Hmm, Amberpaw definitely has a major crush on Brownpaw, but he seems to think of her more as a very good friend than a possible mate. Amberpaw shouldn't push him too much. That might scare him off. XD

“We’re not pieces to be used and disposed.” I like the chess reference (I really like chess, but I'm terrible at it).

Aw, GingerXCherry is so CUTE! <3 <3 <3 Most favorite pair EVER!

I can't wait to see their plan in action! *Can hardly contain excitement

Like Fire and Lies, this episode shows another mix of interesting emotions, albeit this one is quite a bit more lighthearted. In Fire, we see Darkness, Insecurity, and the looming storm clouds of trouble on a nearby horizon. In this episode, however, we have a more positive emotions, but they aren't any less important. Love, of course, is one of the highlights of this one, but we also have confidence, the confidence that contrasts the fear Fire in a way.

I thought this one was a very interesting episode, and you're still keeping me hooked with every line. Let the rebellion begin! <3 <3

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