Talk:Shattered World/@comment-8248793-20171104151506/@comment-28076378-20171105070127

it wouldn't let me comment eariler for some reason.

-spoilers-

ah i'm glad you liked it! i wanted to try and make it a little different... i was tempted to name character rose something though xD

i'm so happy the description is good, i've never wrote anything like this before, it's pretty fun! i am trying to make it sound like an elder telling a nursery tale to a kit.

yeah, i do think i could have made it a bigger part of the story, oh well. it was just a really quick idea i decided to go with. but writing this has inspired me to perhaps make a fanfic in more detail about Emberstorm and Featherstar.

glad you liked it! <3