Talk:He Won't Tell/@comment-8248793-20140913153325

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Don't worry about short episodes XD I used to do that too (my secret is to type it up separately, cause I can't finish an epi in a day)

I liked this one a little less than Shards of Secrets, but the concept was still original and unique. The fact that her brother is loyal is of course, just adding onto your whole plot thing, but I do like the friendship between her and her brother (if they were not siblings, I would ship them)

I think that you could have added to this by changing the season blurbs a bit, so it's not just focused on one little thing. Have it have some major things, and be vague in your blurbs so you can add a lot.

But other than that, this was a great second episode, and the last line makes me want to push you to write the next XD

<3

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