Talk:Rivals/@comment-8248793-20160621230721

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Oh wow that was intense and man do I like the way to write these. I like how you make sure we don't actually know what's going on until Kenna finally says so. I was trying to figure out the murderer the entire time and when you finally said Lance, I was like "???? HOW DID THIS HAPPEN????" but it made sense.

Perhaps you meant for it to be like this but it seemed rush that Anna broke it up with Chase without it really seeming like they were in a real relationship and Warren coming in and just breaking it off with Chase as well. Of course, Kenna has no background knowledge on them, so that's pretty okay. I just felt we should have known somehow it would happen with Warren.

Also I love Chase so far. He's great, a flirt, and he isn't even going for Kenna. He's exactly how I would think he would be, and I think he and Kenna would make great friends/partners!

I get the feeling we'll see Warren and Anna really soon, as well as Warren being really competitive against Chase. I'm guessing Chase and Kenna will have to fight to try to solve a case with Warren on their tails.

Great episode! It was full of action and you implanted all the details well! There was no way we could have figured it out but at the same time it made sense!

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