Talk:We Can't Stay/@comment-8248793-20141022045335

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Holy fudge that was just... feels.

Okay to be absolutely honest with you, I didn't ship GorseXStorm in the end. Like I know why Gorse went insane because he loved her so much, but I think you could have taken a different tatic to getting to this conclusion (like perhaps Gorse decides that Storm needs another reason to leave the Clan, he hates the kits etc)

I have to tell you that SmokeXStorm was my OTP in this fic, they were definitely cute enough so that I cried over Gorse's insane betrayal. So yes, I did feel extremely sad when Storm couldn't bring Gorse back to what he was.

He was so sweet omg.

Smoke is best for Storm tho, so she doesn't have to leave her kits c:

This was great, Brighty! Can't wait for the epilogue :)

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