Talk:Resurgence/@comment-27725192-20170721181037/@comment-8248793-20170721181956

Thanks for the comment! :)

one - i'm glad you found it fast paced but you're right about the lack of setting :P i tend to suck at visual representation and I always forget to add it in! thanks for alerting me to that and I'll try to be more descriptive and detailed in the next few chapters. sorry for making you really confused because I'm trying to integrate raise questions for readers to be curious and integrate the past into the storyline so I don't have to do set up for the first few chapter!

two - yes haha I love the Mistakes <3 To clarify (not really explained at the top woops! but more in the story) the Forgotten are the Clan cats who were driven out of their territory when the Serpentine came. Nyssa and the others are Mistakes, who are the kits experimented on but they didn't develop powers from the cresimen.

three - Reese is my favorite :) Nyssa is a close second. Glad you saw the development/change in Skye! He's meant to be the "oh no bad guy!" at first but shown to be way more in depth because I don't like flat characters.

four -    sorry about not answering your questions! it's only chapter 4 haha hopefully as the story goes on you'll understand more :)

five - yay you ship it! i mean it shouldn't be too romantic yet since the story started so i'm glad you agreed that rowan shouldn't say it yet! But I wanted readers to be aware of the ship and the deep past they have to make Rowan say in his thoughts that he is in love :) Good question about Arya ;) I wonder what is wrong ooooo jk i'll tell you soon enough hehe

six - ayyy lol you're meant to be freaked out at the beginning and wondering if everyone is okay. And yeah! Nyssa is very flawed in general so her plan was meant to just blow up on her (especially with her decision afterwards). The Mistakes are actually very safe from the effects of cresimen because they were already rejected from the drug and it's the drug that is causing Elites to collapse right now.

Thanks so much for commenting! I appreciate it <3 I hope you keep reading the story as I update and enjoy it! Your comments will be considered and put in use :D