Talk:Sister or Love/@comment-10700348-20150407205829/@comment-26184789-20150411004028

OK, epic attempt:

I loved this series because you brought so much detail into it. When Sunpaw was trapped with Featherfall and the evil-rogue-whos-name-I-forgot, you dove deeper instead of saying: she was trapped. Moonpaw finally saves her after she gos to StarClan. Blah blah blah, no one is intrigued. You added detail (my favorite word :D), and it made the story P E R F E C T x 10. I'm glad you came back to making it :D I would have died if u didn't (no, seriously. I clicked random page and it put me at Sun and Moon (Series) and then I read it and was like I NEED MORE THIS IS AWESOME!!!)

Still watching for it. And gosh I love your cliffhangers