Talk:StarClan's Calling/@comment-17305039-20130908193329

WARNING: SPOLIERS

I think this story has a lot of potential. The characters all have their own personalities and that's what makes them interesting. However, I think there should be some sort of allegiances in the future with all of the cats of the clan. Because right now, I have no idea what clan these cats are supposed to be in. I also think that there should be a few cats that don't think that Pumakit is a murderer, but there might be some when you finish this chapter. By the way guys, Mistdapple might a jerk, but she just lost her mate. Sure she's overreacting, but she might be in a lot if pain right now and might be yelling things she doesn't mean. She is a jerk though, so are her other kits, but I just think they're suffering from so many emotions at the same time.

I hope you finish this soon!