Talk:A Jolly Good Leaf-Bare/@comment-5848758-20131219125527

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YOU DID THIS! *dies*

This is super so far. :) First off, I have to praise your writing, Red. Your use of language and description is amazing, but you did say 'grin' once when cats are inable to do so.

It also might be easier to link the cats to the users eg: Redpoppy as I find it quite confusing to see which cat belongs to whom. A fantastic start though. <3