Talk:Polar Zone/@comment-25630395-20160727224145

im back :D

SPOILERS FOR PARTS FOR FUOR FOUR-SIX

PART FOUR

i really love everly's relationship with lucifer. like how she's not afraid to tell him exactly what she thinks of him. the line where she's like, my family's deaths aren't all that define me- that was perfect.

also, i'm pretty sure it's these are greer's private quarters, because quarters is plural. this was really surprising- i would never had seen this coming. why does greer have a magic tree stump in her rooms? like, what? is she a witch? bc if so i hate her a little less.

oh, ok, that ending was unexpected. gonna go read p 5 now-

PART FIVE

this is intense. wow.

i knew that she-cat was his mother, i knew it!! *dances awkwardly* i was a little surprised everly was able to realize so quickly it was lucifer as a kit, but i dunno, maybe it was scent or something. anyway, that was a big surprise. and i wonder what's up with lucifer's amnesia thing? i smell a rat (read: greer).

anyhoo, your development and characterization of lucifer is beautiful and amazing. i love how he seems to be showing/thinking more emotionally. he's so complex, i'm looking forwards to more of his development. also, that one line where he's like 'what am i if not for my fangs and claws'... that was perfect omg. amazing.

whoa, this no-love no-emotion thing is really serious. that was a really good speech by greer, i believed in it actually lol. and so greer is like, the leader of the snow guard, i think? i didn't realize she was so important... no wonder she's such a fanatic.

PART SIX

okay, scratch what i said above. this is one heck of an intense chapter.

so not all of the Snow Guard are mindless, emotionless machines like lucifer. and what the heck- greer has a daughter?? why is she so distant?? the fact that greer even had a daughter just blows my mind.

poor everly. i feel so bad for her- you're doing a fantastic job making the reader feel her emotions. i can so relate to everly. so, good job! have a sticker!

whoa, what's this collecting thing greer's doing? that sounds horrible- but at least shadowstar has more lives i guess. this just got super dark super fast.

and omg, i love the lucifer-everly dynamic. i know he doesn't care for her yet, but i feel like he values her. i feel like it's going to progress even further, and i really want lucifer to love someone. that would be the sweetest relationship ever. not to mention a lovely ship for my little shipper heart lol.

this is fantabulous! you're doing amazing!

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