Dovepaw's death

as the pale grey she-cat made a splash into the water from playing with her kittypet friend,Brownie,she scrambled to the top,but sank back into the water.Oh,no!i should have saved her!i should have saved her!Brownie thought. he couldn't let Dovepaw just die in a river!he called for one of Dovepaw's friends.a dark tabby instantly leaped on top of him.he pushed him off and said," Wow,Brambleclaw! your fast!" brambleclaw nodded."thank you.now what do you want,kittypet?"Brownie look over his shoulder at dovepaw nervously."Dovepaw.Dovepaw is dead,sir!" he replied.a couple moments later,they heard coughing.Brownie rushed over to Dovepaw instatly."Dovepaw!" he shouted."Dovepaw! Your alive!"she got up and shook her fur."Brow-oops! I mean Oakcross!"she said,purring."i love you!" Oakcross gasped,then closed his eyes half-way."and i love you too."he said softly.soon,from another side of the clearing,another dak tabby pounced out."you dare say you love her!"he shouted."she loves me!" "TigerHeart!" she shouted."get off!i love him more than you!"Tigerheart gasped.Dovepaw didn't move."he is joining thunderclan. you are in shadowclan!that would be better!"Tigerheart left, and Oakcross became an official warrior.Dovepaw became a warrior too.she was known as Dovepelt.they soon had kits,a happy family.No one could ever break them apart.ever.