Talk:Amongst Poppies and Stars/@comment-8248793-20140805170218

I realize this is a year old fanfic, but whatever

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Eek Red, this is beautiful, and I nearly sobbed when I thought either Redpoppy or Stargaze had died. I have to comment on how pretty the cover is and just the story content itself too. 'Course the beginning was sweet and all, but you really caught me when the battle started.

I really like how this started with just a friendly apprentice talk, then a normal warrior ceremony. You made it innocent and full of happiness, and then you brought down the real part of the story.

Okay when Stargaze was flung aside, I nearly started crying cause I thought she was dead or something.

The ending was something I can't describe in words, it's just really sweet and heartbreaking when you think that maybe Redpoppy had died or Stargaze had died. But the last line was just like... ahhhhhh <333

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I really don't care if this is a really old fanfic lol owo