Talk:Heartstrings/@comment-5342796-20150629010135



I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH ALREADY! AND IT'S ONLY BEEN 2 CHAPTERS

You did a great job of establishing the setting of Softpaw's home, introducing her family dynamic, her relationship with her siblings and the other apprentices, and everything that's happened with her parents. She seems to be a romantic at heart, though her mother's death and her father's new mate has probably dampened that for her.

Awwie, does Sunpaw have a crush on Softpaw? He seems like a really sweet character. In fact, I love all the apprentices.

And I especially loved the part at the beginning, with the cat versions of the fairytales. It was so heartwarming.

Excellent start! You're an amazing writer, and I'm looking forward to more <3

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