Talk:One Hundred Days of Challenges/@comment-8248793-20150628011220

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Hiddenpaw really confuses me. I'm thinking that you have magic involved in this because otherwise this wouldn't be possible right? But I do like your imagination and the way you just piece together human technology and cats (despite the fact that it doesn't work that way haha)

I seriously think Hiddenpaw isn't what Wrenpaw sees him as. Either he's really scared of the others and he actually does need protection, or he's tricking everyone and is on a quest to kill everyone.

Well since I already got spoilers I'm rooting for Ravenpaw not to die I suppose. I don't really know much about Brokenheart and I'm hoping for more on her c:

This is actually really good so keep going! I think you hinted that you wanted it to be confusing but I wouldn't make it too confusing cause it really throws off the reader and draws away their attention from the actual story.

<3

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