Talk:Dying Inside/@comment-24143898-20141002054057

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Oh, wow. I like the way how Hazelheart has a permanent injury - it adds a whole new perspective to the story.

Chapter 1 - I am convinced that Echosong is meannn D: Poor Hazelheart. Oh dear.

This is great so far! :D (I have decided I epically fail at constructive criticism XD)