Talk:Snow Falls/@comment-8248793-20130827164830

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Bella and Strike <3 Make them join the Clan, I beg you. Unless you finished this series already xD

In the epilogue, Bella said. "Soon or later." Shouldn't it be "Sooner of later"?

But yeah, I like this story, but you kept having Winter and Snow have these conversations. This time, these breaks between chapters are quite confusing, though I caught up right afterwards. When Winter talks to Snow, he says "Snow." Each time xD Might need to change that.

But other than those things, I really love this story. <3

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