Talk:Blazing Fires/@comment-26936355-20190619102010

wow- so much conveyed in such a short paragraph...

first, you successfully built tension right at the start of the story. this reels readers in, so i like how you arranged the first few lines!

sadly i don't have much to comment on yet, but i'll definitely stay tuned to your story. this seems so interesting- and please continue writing! may the stars light your path, too!