Talk:Snowstorm/@comment-25653434-20150412025525

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Wow I really liked this episode! Poor Reedtail though. I like how in the begining yu decribe the fighting she-cats like their personalities, it is really good so you have some information about everybody!

I see some minor gramatical errors here and there like two words together or a random somewhere but other than that its really good! I am looking forward to reading the rest!