Talk:Darkened Soul/@comment-25531638-20130913000445

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I think I've already read this episode, but just didn't comment. So here ya go :D

I love Sparkpaw's twisted POV at some of those points. It's just so wonderfully macabre and it really enhances the whole episode. The way you set up the layout was cool as well. Made things more um... idk the word but it definitely works out :)

Wow, leaving the forest seems like an awfully extreme measure to take. But is it supposed to be unreasonable? Or not?

My only criticism would be to make it a bit clearer when the POV switches between Sparkpaw and Shadowpaw. It was a little short as well, but I guess only the quality really matters.

So, great job! :D

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