Talk:Burn Them All/@comment-24143898-20170121061206

let's comment on this new chapter five, seeing as you combined the original chapters one and two... hmhmhm.

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Chapter Five (New):

Marigold... hmm. I've now got this gut feeling that Frost has something to do with taking over LightClan, considering that Marigold says that Smolder's not going to take it over. I didn't see that coming at all, considering Smolder's personality.

...Yellow seems slightly, um, suspicious when she is talking about Marigold as well. I've now got this feeling that our Yellowfang-like friend has more to the plot than what I first thought she would.

A hug? I'm not sure how a cat would hug, so I'm slightly confused about that (when Sand and Torch apparently hug at the end of the chapter). I'm not sure about that, but that's the only thing that I saw in this chapter that I kinda was like '...?' for.

Keep up the good work, Dog :D

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