Talk:Hurricane(Songfic)/@comment-1703139-20131231221211

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HAWT DAYM

I mean *cough* that was a very nice read.

Seriously though, I loved it. I also admire you for putting all the ohs and ahs in the song into here. I never really know quite what to do with them.

Seriously for real now, the characters were vivid and the plot was insanity- in a great way though. It was a love story and a revenge story and just...awesome. I also like how you have some of the Clan blindy trust Graystar. If we're going by the Warrior books, most cats would follow their leader off a cliff. Not everyone goes around disobeying leaders, so this was perfect.

Ugh. I don't know what else to say. It was perfection. Perfectness. Um...the only thing I would change is that a couple times you said things like 'the water had risen three feet'. Cats don't know what feet are (as a form of measurement, I mean) so maybe like...foxlengths would be better? I dunno, it wasn't a big deal.

GREAT SONGFIC