Talk:Pumpkin Moon/@comment-24143898-20170730050820

yeah so I did promise that i'd do the next part of this comment (after so long... apologies, life is busy). regardless, here's the next comment for chapters nine to eleven

(i'll do twelve/thirteen/fourteen and fifteen/sixteen/seventeen in future parts, considering that i'm doing this in groups of three chapters at a time)

anyways, now that I've got that out of the way, here is the comment!

SPOILERS

Chapters Nine, Ten and Eleven:

Bushie strikes me as being a little bit nervous around all these cats that she doesn't know. Understandable, really, considering that she's just come across them. Apart from that, I think I like B