Rainwhisker's Revenge

'''This is my first book so please comment. This about Rainwhisker when he lost Sootfur. Enjoy!'''

Allegiances
Leader: Firestar- Fire colored tom with emerald green eyes

Deputy: Sandstorm- Pale ginger she cat with leaf green eyes and barely visable stripes.

Medicine Cat: Yellowfang- Dark gray she cat with yellow eyes

Warriors: Skystorm- Pale gray she cat with frost colored eyes

Shiningfur- Golden colored tabby she cat with bright amber eyes.

Pebblesong- Dusty gray she cat with pebble like markings and Blue eyes.

Mistysong-Mist colored and white she cat with bright green eyes.

Stormear-Black and White tom with dark blue eyes

Redfur- Russet colored tom Gray eyes

Ambershock- Handsome brown tabby tom with sliced ears and green eyes

Queens: Lizardcloud graybrown she cat with yellow eyes ( Mother to Sunnykit and Dawnkit)

Elders: Darklight- Dark brown she cat with odd colored eyes.

Chapter 1
Rainwhisker drooped his head. How could he have lost his mother Willowpelt and also Sootfur? This isn't fair, he thought. I must talk to Firestar. He padded away. He called into Firestar's den Firestar? Yes?, a voice answers him. I think ShadowClan is to blame for the deather of my brother. Firestar looks back at him in shock. Why do you think that? I found this fur in Sootfur's claws. Firestar sniffs it. His eyes widens. It smells like Rowanclaw's he said. May i organize a patrol to attack them? No, Firestar resonds. Its just to risky. I snort. Whatever. I walk out of camp and stalk twards ShadowClan.

Chapter 2
Along the way i see Sandstorm and her patrol. Thinking quick, you duck into some brambles. They walk away. You slip out again and continue to ShadowClan. Suddenly you can't take it any more and you race to ShaowClan's border.

To be continued...