Talk:Famine/@comment-5342796-20130819162302



OMG AWESOME JOB WITH YOUR CHAPPIE FIREY! It was really good, well thought-out, and you did a great job of taking my plot and fleshing it out into a really good story. Can I make one teeny tiny suggestion though? It would help if we got to see a little more of what Sunstripe is like through his actions and stuff. However, you did a really good job conveying his thoughts. Again, twas awesome! ;) <3

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