Talk:Plan/@comment-4751506-20130608025737

NO. You can not keep doing this, Arti, seriously. Brookfall needs to stop being a hormonal she-cat and like, hooking up with every tom. I swear there was Brookclaw in that and let me tell you, it was not pretty. Don't do that ever again. Brookclaw will never happen because Shadowclaw is more important [and I'm combining names now, squee!].

Anyways, minimal grammatical errors, but I was reading too fast to really look for those. I love this too much, but I didn't want to get to the end and yeah. ;~;

Now, onto mah favorite part of the comments, my likes and uber-random ships! As previously stated, I detest Brookclaw and you should rid this epi of it immediately! There was a tiny bit of Adderfal in there, so woop woop, and I loved the part with Oakclaw making Brookfall spill. Their relationship there is proven to be brother-sisterly, and I really loved that because they would make such a cute pair of siblings. Also, I love how Thundercloud was just completely unconscious throughout the whole thing, like, totally backfired.

And Brookfall OMG. "Am I really that fat?"

I. LOVE. HER. TO BITS. <3