Talk:Featherpool's Secret Loves/@comment-24519368-20170619221555

I am really excited for the continuation of this! I love the mystery built up at the beginning. Featherpool from what I've seen is so cool, just strolling in the middle of an argument for her love. I'm fond of her already!

The phrase 'piercing icy blue eyes' is used so well here, I am in awe. It reveals appearance and character all at once.

Keep up the good work; I will definitely be stalking this page!