Talk:Always/@comment-28076378-20170722041329

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this was really sad! The way you showed the flashbacks was emotional no i wasn't crying even a little, i just had a bit of dust in my eye. Poor Cerulean is alone now; her parents and sister will be watching her, so in a way, i guess she's not alone.

Her mother was so brave, fighting that badger alone after being sick.

"It" is misspelled as just "I" when it says "It surrounds her".

You did a good job on this <3