Talk:Goodbye/Keep Your Heart Young/@comment-4751506-20130708225057

This is so freaking upsetting, Artimas Hunter [I said 'hunger' the first time. Oops.]

Like, not even saddening because it's 'oh, they're so cute but one of them died, oh no,' but just the fact that the way you write is so final. But it's wonderful, and it's the fact that you're putting so much emotion into it that makes it so brilliant. I loved how towards Bramblekit's apprentice ceremony, the little writing tidbits became more and more condensed. It was building up suspense and I just wanted to keep reading and reading and reading and I didn't want it to end! You're a fantastic writer.

And I absolutely loved seeing people I've heard of in there. This is my own version of an elder's story; with Shigura [Shikit, I presume], and Wetty, obviously, and Icekit [Iciloo, I assume]. It's just so like, I don't know, it makes me feel like we're really a Clan, however cheesy that might sound. <3