Talk:The Valley/@comment-8248793-20160102010624

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ooh! I love your new idea! I'm super interested in how the valley might come in contact with the idea of letting the future decide your past. Perhaps the valley is just a home but i'm waiting c:

I love Rainbow's sass. I'm hoping to see more development later on but I love the base of the character you have so far! Also, her and Fire seems to have a good relationship, which I also hope to see more. Flare is interesting, but a bit of the dummy cat who's just loyal and stuff O: Blizzard seems to be a cool tom but I don't know much about him yet.

I think it's too fast for Blizzard to confess? Yes, I get that they've been in love before the show started but idk the only clues we got were Rainbow ran for Blizzard and tripped on thin air. Also I doubt confusing the dog means Rainbow nearly died but that scene was a bit confusing??

But in all seriousness, I loved your pilot and I'm definitely liking this one better than the last! <3 (Also I'm glad you're not only having short lines because those got a bit hard to read tbh)

<3

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