Talk:The Last Sunset/@comment-11493954-20140127042942

SPOILERS

Okay, here to judge/recomment.

The title of this is brilliant, by the way, and I love how it coordinates with the end. :)

Those little deaths were quite mysterious, and I must say it was smart (but still sad!) to kill of a cat with a relation to Nightfall such as Featherpelt. :(

Also, I love how you threw in a little bit of Nightpelt suspecting Sunsetfur. And how she killed him. And why. You are excellent at making shockers embedded deep in the plot that I can't sense beforehand! I coud go on forever on how you made Sunsetfur kill herself, and all those other twists.

By the way, you said "collaspses" once. I didn't catch any other errors, so you are pretty good in that department.

Overall I give this a 18/20. This was a huge shocker, and all those little plot bits tied in very nicely!