Talk:Hawkcry/@comment-5342796-20130514014537

This is amazing Creek! I love it so far; the plot is intriguing and original, and the charries are captivating and interesting, instead of being dull and uninteresting. I'll definitely keep reading this. One teeny tip is that it makes it easier to have the names of the chapters as titles, so they're easier to find.

I have no clue what's gonna happen in the next chapter... o.0