Talk:Snowstorm/@comment-1703139-20141226021041

Okay, constructive stuff first.

Some more grammar errors; you said 'its' once instead of 'it's' I think. And you said something about them getting down on their knees and begging... cat anatomy might make that tricky, maybe just begging would be a good way to describe it? lol.

Also, I think that part about 'you are storm, you should know how to save cats from them' or whatever was kind of forced. I mean, it might be something you think but it's kind of a weird argument to make out loud. I dunno, maybe that's just me. xD

I feel like RiverClan needs to stop sending two cats out on these missions, they always lose someone jfc. You'd think they would have learned by now. *shakes fist* I didn't even know he and Minnow were a couple (maybe I skipped that part) so that was kinda sudden. Like, Storm's already feeling bad and then Minnow has to go and make it worse xD

I thought the snowstorm taking Reed was pretty realistic though. I also thought it was interesting that Dawn would be more angry with Storm (the rogue) than apathetic about Reed getting lost (since he's a rival Clan and all). That's an interesting dynamic- she might now want the other Clans to steal her food, but she likes them better than the rogue.

This episode kinda helped solidify that yeah, even though it's just cold and snow, it is dangerous. And not just from a starving perspective.

Anyways, looking forward to more. :D