Talk:Stay Beautiful/@comment-8248793-20160217020724

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Ah your writing is splendid! I enjoyed seeing you adapt to Amberfrost, though I'm a little more interested in how you write Snowflare and lionclaw's scenes :) They're the tough but fun ones!! I think you've kept Amberfrost's usual sense, but with your own touch. I'm not going to be super judgy, cause this is half an au I think? Plus it's your fic :)

Though I do want to point out Silverfrost and Duskheart shouldn't be super angry about Amber and Brown falling in love since they themselves are in love. You'll get more background on their past too, if you remember that Whiteflicker hates them ;P

But ahh it makes me happy that you like this show enough to write a special for it and I do think these little cuties should stay beautiful because they deserve it :)

You really captured Amberfrost's emotions and I can't wait for the others <3

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