Talk:Life As A Kittypet-Blazing Splash/@comment-7270915-20130612133750

Well, you do need to slow your story's pace a bit - perhaps you should add in a few more descriptions in order to slow it down.

Other than that, this isn't a bad story, even if the idea is a bit cliched. Just one thing I wasn't clear about - Lily and Splash lived together? I assume so, but it wasn't all that clear in the story.