Talk:Prison Camp/@comment-5342796-20160206161346



Okay I know you said this episode was short because you ran out of ideas but it was JAM PACKED WITH GOOD STUFF. I loved it!

First of all, the couples <3 Beautiful. The way they love each other is evident in the smallest of their actions--and why the other loves them is evident in each of their behavior; it would be so easy to fall in love with their respective traits, intelligence, loyalty, etc. They are all so strong, so unique, and together they form a remarkable group of young cats who have dealt with so much. The character development is amazing, looking back at when they first started out as apprentices, naive and unsure of what they wanted to fight for. They've learned to be brave, to make difficult decisions, to rely on themselves and each other. Just the fact that they have thus far resisted the urge to become like the Beauty and to become like Shadowfang and his more extreme rebels is incredible; they are truly committed to what they believe is right, though they are forced to do things that haunt them in the process.

Who are Flareheart and Scarlet talking about? I like how you included the line at the end where he's like, "Think you know who I am?" I have a feeling that no matter how many guesses we make, we'll never be able to guess the full story. I'm very intrigued and excited, dude :O  Will this be a gamechanger?

Rainstorm <3 She better be careful. I feel so bad; she must be going out of her mind with worry.

I love Amberfrost. She's changed so much. Some might say that her pragmatism is bad, but I think it's very realistic after all she's been through. She's a strong leader, and even if she seems insensitive sometimes, it's only because she bears the burden of all the pain and suffering she's ever seen. She has to find a way to carry it and cope somehow.

This was an amazing episode! <3 I'm so proud of you Firey, your writing has matured and developed so much, and it was good to begin with.

Love you

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