Talk:The Night Race/@comment-25531638-20140509030056

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This is one of the most unique stories I've seen on here. I think it's creative how you decided to use cheetahs instead of cats, and changed up the names of the ranks.

I'm really curious to find out what it is that they're running from. This mystery is what helps keep people interested.

And it broke my heart when I read about Spirit Pace trying to leave the kits behind. It's such a terrible thing to do to innocent kits, and I was glad when Foot Wing went back for them :)

I also loved the poem at the beginning, it was amazing.