User blog:Gingerstripe/Whispercrow's Vengeance - Collabb

Okay, so I'll be writing a collab, with only fifteen chapters at least. Here's the idea...

please, please please be aware that there ARE spoilers and please only READ if you are ABSOLUTELY sure that you will PARTICIPATE

 Brokenback is murdered by Timber, a rogue, and her daughters (Sweethawk and Whispercrow) furious. Especially Whispercrow.

This is the final straw. Whispercrow swears revenge on Timber, and is a changed she-cat.

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spoilers ahead

Emberflame chases after the she-cat, but she ignores his affections til he saves her life. Her best friend at the moment, Kinkedtail, is threatened and lies to her about Timber’s location. The deputy, Marigoldleaf, is killed mysteriously (by Timber.) She had protection, being weak and confined to the medicine den. Found dead in her nest, with a timber bark of wood on top of her. Whispercrow is made deputy.

 Heatherberry, a elder, reveals a secret to Emberflame and Whispercrow that Timber is her son, and that he has a weakness. Whispercrow, eager to hear more for her mother, asks for more, but Heatherberry refuses out of love for her son. Whispercrow rages, and Heatherberry is terrified, until Emberflame calms her down. During this, Whispercrow realizes how much Emberflame understands her.

The next death is Sweethawk, Whispercrow’s sister. There is not a scratch-mark on her, but she lays out by the waterhole, with fear on her face, her spine broken and deathberry juice squirted on her face and a timber bark.

On a patrol with Ospreyflight and Kinkedtail, Whispercrow realizes that her father, due to which Brokenback always avoided talking about, is actually not Pricklefur, as she’d guessed, but Ospreyflight, who has kits of his own (Loudkit, Fuzzykit) and is a single father. Brokenback is not the mother, as Whispercrow (in her fury) screams at Ospreyflight, but Sweethawk, her late sister. Kinkedtail is the only one who has witnessed this.

Whispercrow is paranoid. Everything for her is lost, and she is barely keeping up her duties. Emberflame is extremely worried. He stumbles back into camp, with a stump for a ear and a bleeding leg. He tells the camp that it was a rogue, but to Whispercrow, he says that it was Timber. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Furious that Timber had been hurting her Clan, and had murdered her mother, Whispercrow ventures out of camp, by herself, and demands to see StarClan and her mother at the Moonpool, but Brokenback is not there. Her grandmother, very kindly, tells her that Brokenback decided to go on. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Whispercrow is depressed. Ospreyflight is suddenly killed, tortured, beaten, cut, sliced for the fun of Timber. A bark of timber wood lays by him, and he is in a terrible state. Right after this, Emberflame, Kinkedtail, Heatherberry, Loudpaw and Fuzzypaw venture out on their own to find Timber.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.15;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Timber appears out of the shadows, and Whispercrow roars toward him. He flicks his tail, and a onslaught of rogues overcome them. Fuzzypaw is killed by Timber, and Whispercrow tries to murder him, but Heatherberry engages in a fierce battle with Timber’s deputy, Fierice. She is killed. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Timber flies at his mother, but Fuzzypaw’s ghost deflects him until Whispercrow has had enough. She leaps in and attempts to murder Timber, but he deflects her every blow. Until Heatherberry screams his weakness- his heart. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Reaching in, she murmurs something soft to his heart and bites hard, and Timber screams, and using his distraction, Whisper murders him for ever.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.15;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#93c47d;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Two moons later, a kit is found in the forest, and Goldenstar asks if Whispercrow, nursing Emberflame's kits, can take it in. However, Whispercrow sees the kit's pelt and knows instantly that is is Timber's offspring...and she raises a paw...

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<p dir="ltr" style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Can I rely on you?

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