Talk:How To Make An Entrance/@comment-8248793-20131125182613

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I noticed you spelled perform wrong right at the start of the ceremony.

I love the way the plan worked. But one question is how did they make the decoy? Like before, I would suggest having the battle a little longer, so we can experience the heat of the battle.

Pebbleheart's peronality doesn't change much, though he expresses more love everyday. (this doesn't stop me from shipping Minnow X Sun) Sunheart seems more like herself, and it really does help the plot move along.

The ceremony was very creative, and I definitely love reading the part where Darkshadow just runs after being formed into a cat by the spell. I just love it when the vilian seems to have full control over everything.

I certainly wish for more Two-Sided She-cat, so I'm off to read the next!

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