User blog comment:A Snivy's Feather/THANK YOUS IF I DIE N THE PLANE/@comment-26432133-20170401163413/@comment-26432133-20170401220146

I WILL MAKE A PUBLIC STATEMENT FOR ALL TO HEAR:

RUINED SUCKS.

VERY VERY MUCH.

look look here's all my reasoning:

1. love interest brought in just for the sake of love interest.

2. pecan was just like "oh yeah lets trust this gal bc she's hot and nice even though my loyal sister who I've trusted and who's been looking for me for forever has some valid complaints about her"

3. leafpelt (or is he leafclaw?) just died. he just...died, and they didn't kill him

4. ruinpaw was the worst main character ever, the plot happened to her and she didn't do anything to the plot

5. there's tons of useless extra info all throughout the story ew yuck

6. pecan sucks, ruinpaw sucks, ashheart (did i name her that?) sucks, silverstripe sucks, leafpelt sucks, nimblestar's meh, everyone sucks except for bubbleslash

7. ruinpaw sucks

8. ruinpaw sucks

9. ruinpaw sucks

10. read another one of my stories. anything started fall 2016 or later is much much much better and leagues less cringey tyvm