Talk:Living In Stereo/@comment-1703139-20130724203027

Awwww, I LOVED this. A lot. A lot a lot.

Okay, there were VERY FEW grammatical errors, but one thing that did keep popping up was sometimes you would change from third POV to first, for like, one word or a paragraph. It just happened sometimes, but it was still kinda disorienting.

Okay, onto EVERYTHING GOOD. Which was the story. It fit the song, and I like the font you used for the lyrics. It was kinda playful, mischevious, pretty. I thought it fit in pretty well. The song was awesome as well. The chracters were so lovable. Everyone from Thunderpaw to Willowbreeze and back was great. And our two stars, Bramblepaw and Daisypaw were amazing. They clashed and fit together so perfectly it sounded like something from a song or a show or a book or pretty much life. The shy girl, the cocky but sweet guy...perfect.

And the story itself was beautiful. To be honest, I can't write love stories. At least not ones with happy endings. So usually I'm kinda bored by this type of thing, but you managed to make it so funny, so sweet, so sincere that it was hard to stop reading. (You don't even know how much I freaked out when I realized you wrote half of it and left me to wonder.  Bad Robo!)

All in all, a beautiful, perfect songifc. Thanks for the great read! <3