Talk:Star Fox/@comment-8248793-20180127024022

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duh you know i'm gonna read this in my free time (and try to give you comments when i'm not procrastinating everything! i will do my best i promise)

okay tbh your intro already tops mine i'm jealous xD this is first off a splendid idea, and i think it's honestly super creative and super interesting (off the blurb alone i'd be excited to read this) but the prologue really hyped it up so that i would be very hooked. does that even makes sense? that sentence sounded weird tbh

oh man dude like the destruction of the clans hits me hard even though i have no care for warriors but like it's iconic y'know? it's def a good storyline you can follow and i'm already trying to rack my brain to see if i can catch your plot twists (tho knowing you you'll honestly pull something crazy that i'll never see coming!)

this is a short comment but i really liked the first chapter and i'm excited to read the rest :)

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