Talk:Encounter/@comment-25630395-20160829002538

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wow! firstly, i'd like to congradulate both of you- the writing styles are similar, and the switch is not choppy at all. this is quite a feat considering that you are writing from two very different povs.

i feel like this episode was more about introducing characters than touching on plot, and that's fine. i like the pace, it's just right. hunter is very interesting to me- he's violent, sure, but i want to know why he's like that. he's a bit of a jerk, but, you know, character development. noelle is cool, she's got spunk, even though she's peaceful. and why, evil children, did her mother die? D:

i don't ship them yet... i see chemistry for a good friendship, but i don't see romantic attraction. i think they're the ship- if that's where you're going- that needs time to develop. if they develop, i'm sure i'll like them together eventually.

one problem was the pov switch. it was smooth, but writing in the first person means it's hard for the reader. i had to keep reminding myself of who was speaking, and who was narrating- adding extra reminders in would really help.

overall, this is amazing, and i will read the other episodes!

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