Talk:If Tigerclaw Hadn't Killed Redtail/@comment-1829516-20160801202508

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I like the idea of a story revolving around the life of Ravenpaw if Redtail had lived. Typically it would be from the perspective of Redtail or Tigerclaw or such. As you write more, I'd also like to know more about Firepaw. Did any of his origin story change with Redtail surviving? Would this mean Firepaw never eventually becomes Firestar?

One of the problems is that the text is sorta clumped at times. It makes it a bit difficult to read if dialogues from multiple characters are in the same paragraph or if huge paragraphs are being used.

Looking forward to you continuing!

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