Talk:Night Ripples/@comment-34633311-20160610124736

Another wonderful fanfic, Brams <3

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Wow, Nightclaw doesn't seem to favor Ripplestorm. Ripplestorm seems quite scared - (s)he (idk which one, it hasn't really been stated) appears reluctant to the thought of even battle itself.

I really only found one typo - but hey, on occasion you're the queen of typos so I really won't mind that

(I'm so sorry if this isn't done very well I'm horrible at constructive comments)

But again, another great fanfiction, Brams!

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