Talk:Storm of Conflict/@comment-5488450-20130804233348

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Wow, this was really really good! I know you said you didn't edit it, but I personally think this was the best eoisode so far :3 I didn't detect any mistakes-maybe because I was reading too fast. The plotline was really well formed and I loved this so much.

I'm starting to be won over to the side of RyanXBreeze as opposed to SpeckleXBreeze but I don't know because he won't be staying in the Clan is they do decide to help and...

eh.

That last part with Fuzzears was really really well done though. You better allow her to make it out of this alive, and if she must die please tell us about her sun, I beg of you!

My one piece of advice is to write the next episode now :)

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