Talk:Rise from Ash/@comment-9017167-20130614134946

You have some spelling mistakes, such as dissapeared (disappeared), Sprak (Spark), comforatble (comfortable), and ansecntors (ancestors, lol), and grammatical errors, etc, etc, 6lah 6lah 6lah.

Now that we have that out of the way...

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY. I was debating whether to keep reading after the prologue, because of the fire (fires are happening irl in the state I live in), but I did, and I am SO GLAD I did! This is a great story. Two cats who love each other, but can't be together because of the groups they are in... I don't care how old this story is, it's really well written! Great job Robo!!!!

I like how you have names that are actually in Warriors, although I don't know if you did that on purpose XD Like Raven and Tiger, and Bramblestar... :3