Talk:Prior Trials/@comment-24143898-20150824083717

competition post as I need to comment c:

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Oooh, hat bit of the beginning was really cool., I really liked that. I hope that turns up again later, bc I wanna know what it wassss

Sandpaw, from what I see so far, seems like a great main character, I want to know more about her.

Is more about ShadowClan gonna be revealed later? Oooh, I like these things like this, the things like being in a desert and a monarchy put a great spin on things <3

(Wow, I'm saying a lot of 'I likes', hopefully that's a good thing <333)

Early deaths hehe >;D

I saw a few minor spelling and grammaer mistakes, but this was really good for a premiere, Fallen! Your writing has honestly improved heaps since when I first met you! <333 I'm gonna comment on the second episode now!

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