Talk:Rogue/@comment-28076378-20170711004828/@comment-28076378-20170712232716

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Chapter 1

Breezefeather is an awesome character! I love how sarcastic she is, and her siblings are cool too. I have a feeling if you had a story for Runninghare he'd be my top fav <3

I like how you sorta skipped their kit and apprentice hoods, you showed some important scenes that happened to them along the way until you got to the day they were made warriors. idk i like that, it's fun for me to read.

I've always wanted to smack Oakthorn. Why does he hate Breeze so much?? He doesn't act as... grossed out with Redfire and Runninghare. I know he's not the dad type but still. I remember from Lost Sundusk was awesome and you're evil for doing what you did to the poor dude

I think his relationship with Breeze is interesting. She should consantly talk about him beind his back like a good kid :)

THIS IS AMAZIJNG AND GREAT. I THOUGHT THE FIRST ONE WAS GOOD, BUT THEIS THIS IS GOLD.

ah this story reminds me of when i was young and stupid. good times.

great job ging! <3

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