Talk:Showdown(Part 1)/@comment-4751506-20130608233819

It's a showdown, and nobody's come to save you now...

...right, I know I'm not the best singer, but still. As usual, Red is going to start out with the negatives and move on to the positives. First off, the grammatical errors were few and there wasn't much confusion (who knows how these are negatives, but, y'know. #YOLO) between cats (...and pelt colors. >.>) or theories and whatnot. This episode was pretty fantastic, and I could tell it wasn't rushed or anything. I love how you write it for the enjoyment, it's fantastic. :3

Now, onto the positives - which, as previously stated, are my favorite parts of the comment. I loved how you still created such sexual tension in this, without making a bunch of overt lovey-doveyness. The Gorse x Brook bit at the end was seriously adorable, but it really fit into the entire concept of the war - they're soldiers, but they're in love, and they don't want the other to get hurt. It's cute. :3 On the romantic downside, there was none of my Adderfall in this. :c Just grouchy old Adderscar grouching like he normally does (though I was surprised, normally Oakclaw grouches. Eh, you know what they say. The war changes people. -nods-). Another part I loved was Thundercloud. Originally, I was like, 'Wow. -cloud suffix. Girly.' But Thundercloud is the epitome of anti-girly, despite his name. I am infuriated by him, but I love him at the same time. He's like an evil Adderscar / Oakclaw / Shadowsong. Me gusta.

I can't wait for Part Two. :3 (and Season FOUR OMGD:DSLFJSD:LFJ:SLDJKFSD:FJ :D)