Talk:Rise of the Vipers/@comment-24143898-20170110205114

i remember reading this like a year ago when this first existed, and I never commented xP.

but now i'm commenting since you put this on my reading list and yeah. i'll at least try and get the first season done for now - probably comment on more that that, knowing your works xD

Anyways, that's beside the point... better start with this comment.

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shootshootshoot I now have this super bad gut feeling that one of Bryce's sisters is going to get taken by the Vipers *shudders*

I can see that Bryce comes off to be a selfless character - she seems to care more about her sisters than herself, from what I've seen so far (and she's not that old too :o). I'm looking forward to seeing how she turns out to be as a character, as she appears to be a good one at this point.

I assume from this that Applepaw is Nightshadow's sister?

I think that as the season goes on that the Vipers and the Coalition are going to take an important role, and that Bryce somehow is going to be involved with it. Are the two sides fighting some war or something? That's what the episode seems like to me. Also, is the Coalition made up of two (or more) Clans or something that have joined together to defeat the Vipers? Or are they just a group with multiple leaders (considering that there's a Hawkstar and an Amberstar in the Coalition, it makes me curious).

Wow i'm not sure where this is going to go at all. It's definitely keeping me guessing, and I like that c:. the kits, especially, I'm worrying over - Emerald seems vulnerable especially. I do hope Cloud and Sara help them, poor kits </3

I couldn't see anything that bothered me/needed improving in this episode. I did enjoy this, and i'll comment on the next episode (and the rest of the season) later c:

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