Talk:Viva La Vida/@comment-1333071-20140201155746

First off... Coldplay is my FAVORITE. EVER. BAND. EVER. Did I say that I love them? Because I do!

I'm excited that you're doing them justice! I love the plot idea and Ivypool/star's personality seems to fit with the situation.

The only thing I have to say is that cats use the word moonhigh instead of midnight and that that last chunk of words up there (after Listen as the crowds would sing) needs to be broken up into paragraphs. You did a good job of paragraphs before, but a new paragraph is started whenever a new character speaks, a new action begins, or a new thought begins.

And again. I love Coldplay.