Talk:Thunder Rising/@comment-8248793-20151031224053/@comment-25926899-20151101004928

thank u yes mischief is indeed cute altho i'm hoping as she grows up she gets more bad ass than cute

umm which cats in particular do you mean though?? clawface was not so nice but he hasn't had a part since then.. boulder and russetfur i never saw as anything bad they just follow brokenstar's orders. blackfoot is his confidante and i'm hoping to work on his character as a mix of bad and good--i thought in the books his switch from brokenstar's deputy to best leader in the clans was kinda cray and i wanted to develop him as not entirely awful from the very beginning if u know what i mean??

as for brokenstar himself its not that he doesnt have his own ulterior motives for everything. he's not showing any compassion, i promise. but i've never seen him as one to be particularly judgemental of a cat's background. he stole thunderclan kits probably in the hopes of training them as shadowclan warriors. two of his elite followers are a former rogue and a former kittypet. he's not trying to be nice offering mischief shelter, he has plans for her.

i was worried about making any of them more nice than mean, i wanna have a good mix for them all (even brokenstar needs a bit of a soft side), so if there's anything in particular you didn't like or anything you're worried about happening or any cat who doesn't seem true to their character?? i'd like to improve on that so any comments are fab.

thank youuuu for commenting firey <3 ily <3