Talk:Drizzle/@comment-28057208-20160831084824

It's really good so far! I like the idea of the story and I like where this is going.

But I am so confused about how Oakclaw can get away with abusing his mate and kits??? Can't anyone see the scars and wounds? It's a bad sign for kits to have scars at a young age, so why does no one question it?

Apart from that, I think it has a lot of potential so far!