Talk:Drenched In Scarlet/@comment-8248793-20131122032800

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I love all this terror Sunheart goes through, and how she knows everything, yet can't let it out. Sunheart is definitely getting to be a great character, and her personality and description is perfect for a normal cat.

Some errors though:

-The last paragraph. You wrote "The find Mousepaw's body." That doesn't make much sense to me, so you might want to fix that.

But all this is great, and I still recommend adding details to show the vivid actions and what happened to the characters :)

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