Talk:Shattered Destinies/@comment-7270915-20130710014228/@comment-1839575-20130710020737

There's a difference between constructive criticism and plain criticism. If you want to fall over with boredom, by all means, do so. FYI I specifically copied that scene from the book for the purpose of making this as close to canon as possible. I also wanted to use that particular scene to prove to people that the presence of Snowpaw hadn't changed things very significantly in ThunderClan. Also if you've memorised the scene where Dovepaw and Ivypaw become apprentices then it's not my fault you're falling over with boredom.

Maybe next time, try leaving your constructiveness with less of the criticism. I don't need to know how steady you are on your feet - but if you'd said something along the lines of "I noticed that the apprentice ceremony of Dovekit and Icykit was exactly the same as the one in Omen of the Stars and I wondered why you had done it that way?" then I would be less annoyed right now.