Flee the Dark/Feedback

Hello! Welcome to the Feedback page of my story: Flee the Dark I have made this page for, of course, feedback. So don't be afraid to leave something here. This subpage was made primarily for reviewing purposes. So other members could leave thoughts, ideas, and constructive criticism to the story.

Now don't be confused: this is made for full on reviews, not for 'This is pretty good' and such. You have here the story line feedback, where you can either talk about the story as a whole, or some people prefer to go through chapter by chapter.

Then you have the character feedback. A place to review the characters of this story: Jayrift, Dawnsky, and Tigerarch. There will be more characters, but these three are the focus.

Don't be afraid to hop on and tell me what you think, alright!