Talk:The Open Rift/@comment-26432133-20170709185534

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This is an interesting concept! I like the idea of Arith and Atari's to-be-mates thing. I wonder about the Clans- are they the Clans we know, like ThunderClan, WindClan, etc., or new Clans? This idea of different worlds and rifts is cool too! Watchers like Anaka are intriguing. I wonder why they're called a "watcher" not a "ruler" if the so-called ruler doesn't even disobey them. I also adore the prologue, it's well-written and piques my interest. It keeps a good hold of the mystery of the reader not knowing much, but is fancy enough to make me interested and want to read further on. Great job!

-hides behind hands- Don't tell me what happens next or answer my questions haha, I wanna learn for myself as you write on! Keep up the good work!