Talk:We Can't Stay/@comment-8248793-20141011004259

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Does nobody ship StormXSmoke? Or am I just weird...

Anyways, CAN WE PLEASE KILL GORSE. StormXGorse is awfully cute at some parts, but I really do hate him sometimes XD It's been in me for all eight chapters you have so far c:

I really love how you shape Stormshine's character, how she wants to be free, but she can't because of Mistshade's kits. I think you could have elaborated more on how Toadstep was the father, because that really threw me off for a second.

I can kind of see why Gorsethorn would want to kill the kits, but I dont like him at all. I hope Storm kills him :D

I really like the plot twist! It really made me go back and say "WHAT JUST HAPPENED?" I have to say, I really wanted Storm to ditch Gorse before they ever left camp. :P

Good job!

<3

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