Talk:Flaming Springs/@comment-27725192-20170629005718

SPOILERS

PROLOGUE

First, typo in the heading, it is Prologue, not Prolouge. ;) Wow, I wonder who they are and why they would want to hurt an innocent kit. Wow, those are interesting names! I hope they do find the poor kitten!

CHAPTER 1

Sheesh Matilda, calm down! Stop yelling at Flame (Flame XD) and let the poor cat get up without you screaming all over him! Ooooooooooooh will he find the lost kit? And what is the kit's gender? I can't wait, time to read the next chapter (yeep i'm typing this up as I read)

And uh...okay the second chapter is not done yet XD So I will just wait and do it later. But I did notice some spelling errors as there are many missing contractions. But overall, this is so interesting! Keep up the outstanding work!