Talk:Pompeii/@comment-8248793-20140322033010

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mm Wolfheart fror the win <33333

Oakstar has an amazing personality. Rarely does anyone uses a protective leader as a personality. They use evil, strong, angry, and all that stuff. This is great and creative :)

I love it so far, but I would suggest getting into a bigger plot more. Sure this is amazing and I love it so far, but it's just Swiftfire talking. There's no real big plot going on to me. (no offense and all, the idea's still great)

I hope you write more soon :D

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