Talk:The Second Lost Clan/@comment-24495864-20130806131735

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This is great so far! But I'd suggest capitalizing the first letter when a cat starts to talk. Like instead of (example sentence) " you will go hunting." It would be "You will go hunting."

And a couple of the names confused me. What are 'gale' and 'yule'? XD

Anyway, for your first fanfiction, it's pretty good! :D

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