Talk:Tails of The Clans 2/@comment-24519368-20170422111446

"OCS:"

ffs

"Cocopelt...(cocopelt101)"

We're in for a treat, lads.

"Lapis: powerful and kind she-cat rogue (stormver 101"

Okay, now we've gone too far.



The start is really confusing. If fact, this whole story is really confusing. Who are all these new cats appearing every new chapter? Does the narrative change clans? WHYYY? What purpose do any of these characters have except to be self-inserts?

chapter 4 doesn't exist lol

The use of all-caps and excessive punctuation isn't necessary, nor is it grammatically correct.

This was so weird I had to stop reading it halfway through.