Talk:The Other Flower of Dusk/@comment-9017167-20130611200229

When I first started reading through this my thought was, "Poor Duskflower! D:" Then I read through the rest of it and was like "YAY!" One thing I'm confused about, though, is when Cloudshade says, "Mothers know these things." That implies that she broke the code and had kits...?

Overall, though, very good job! You have a beginning that drew me in: Duskflower's crush doesn't like her knowing about herbs. Then you solved the problem, and brought it in to a good conclusion! Yay Icy!!!