Talk:Easy Pickings/@comment-24766822-20150816224120

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I think this is a really cool episode!

YAY!!!! AMBERPAW KICKED FLAREPAW'S TAIL! WHO-HOO! That was the highlight of this episode. Seriously XD.

Oh, and THESE LINES:

''We reach the Hollow with five minutes to spare and Flarepaw glares at us. “How come you’re so slow?” she goads, “Something wrong-?”''

Applepaw cuts in coolly, “No, we lagged behind because we didn’t want to see your face so early in the morning.”

''“Or hear your voice,” Finchpaw adds, “So you can just shut up.” The priceless look on Flarepaw’s face is worth it. Even the instructors behind us are trying not to smile. Apparently not every one loves Flarepaw other than us.''

HAHAHAHA. I loved this brief exchange. I almost fell on the floor laughing. I'm glad Blossomflecks sided with Amberpaw's group. Maybe she isn't as bad as we all think.

Shadowpaw's father is a Catmintoholic? I remember watching an episode of Little House on the Praire (A show I dislike, but there was nothing else on) which was about a man who would beat his boy because he drank all the time (don't worry, the boy was saved by Laura's dad). I'm glad Brownpaw won and all, but I'm really worried about Shadowpaw (fang). I hope he'll be okay, even though he probably won't be. :( It also bugs me that the instructors just kind of pushed him out; the Beauty really are heartless, or if they do have hearts, they're made of bronze and crumbling stone.

ARGGGHHH THE DISLIKE FOR FLAREPAW HAS BEEN DOUBLED!!!! Poor Rainpaw :( I really liked her, and already she's been kicked out. DARN YOU FLAREPAWWWWWWWWWWW...

The end was so sad, but it thickens the plot, so I'm game. :D

Um, there were a few minor errors, where Brownpaw says "Familt" instead of "Family", and “I’m she she’ll be fine” instead of "I'm sure she'll be fine". There were a few others, but they weren't major.

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This one was a very good one, Fiery. I ate up every word!