Talk:Let It Burn/@comment-8248793-20160223024258

SPOILERS part four

Oh my dear goodness this thing is jam packed with action and suspense. I'm so glad you're writing this again because I absolutely love this.

Excuse me Hunter XD Phoenix and Elliot are kinda a thing (hopefully; though I caught that gesture he made =DDDD) But Hunter seems pretty nice and I do like his inability to deal with Phoenix's sass. Watch him get burned ;) (SEE WHAT I DID THERE)

Anyways, gosh I loved the limited action in this chapter yet to crazy details and the plot really catches up. Already we've got so many questions about the North End cats, Phoenix's family, and maybe even Hunter! And now you add in some Gia and I just (head explodes).

You've certainly got a lot planned and I'm really excited to know what Asta has done and perhaps if she's the cause of everything that is going on. What is firefever to her and is it really deadly? What happened in the Sky-Fire times and was Asta involved?

Phoenix is as sassy as always and I love her perspective. It's so differently from PZ, of even Vale, yet it holds your taste in it.

Great part as always!! <3

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