Talk:Half and Half: The Dark Forest Returns/@comment-25090026-20140827144317

Sorry I didn't comment earlier, but I'm on holiday in South Africa, and I don't always have connection :-) I haven't been that constructive lately, so I'll do my best. I like your opening a lot, and how you started with Skystar. Everyone who read the first book will know how evil she is, so they'd be instantly drawn in. The only thing I am confused about is why Snakepaw doesn't know about the Dark Forest, and why he doesn't know about Skystar. Surely Halfstripe or the elders would have told him? Anyhow, CARRY ON OR I'LL SEND THE NEWSPAPERS ON YOU! LOL :-)