Talk:The Story of Marshkit/@comment-32946794-20160507064738

I like it really, but there are some orrors you might want to fix:
 * as much as i hate to admit it, Marshkit is a boy
 * it was Tumblekit who was taken by eagle in the mountains, not Marshkit
 * to-bes need to be 8 moons ols to left the nursery

also im sure that tribe would return marshkit to shadowclan, but i like it otherwise.