Talk:The Beauty System/@comment-5342796-20150420005103



Oh my gosh, I love this already. The entire concept is so unique, even for a dystopian type story. I don't know how you come up with your story ideas! They're all so amazing!

I love Brownpaw already. I love how you contrast the lives of the poor and the Beauty, how the Beauty live in a world of plenty yet are bound by all these restrictions, and how the poor lack so much but have lives full of love and family. The description in this story is so amazing.

Snowpaw is pretty cool. Rough around the edges, and maybe a bit too spirited (she's probably gonna get herself in trouble, lol) but I have a feeling I'm gonna like her character.

Also, Brownpaw's parents are so cute. I feel so bad for them; they must feel like they're losing their son forever. Especially since he's now more priviliged than they are... awkward. I hope that family gets to reunite sooner or later.

What a great pilot! So excited for the rest of this show. <3

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