Talk:Withstand It/@comment-25531638-20140218031842

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I feel so bad for Storm. She's such a wonderful she-cat, I mean, she can seriously do much better than Crowheart. I thought that it was really sweet, by the way, that Dewheart came down to talk to her. There were just so many emotions in this episode, even if there wasn't any sort of fighting.

The flashback was really great, too, it also held a lot of emotion. Leaf's death was really sad. I feel really bad for Shade and Storm.

The one thing that I'd suggest you do is describe the land that they found a little more thoroughly. Like, it has rabbits and birds, you told us that, but what about the trees? And fields? I take it that they are looking at the land from higher ground, from a distance, so I think you should just describe it a bit more.

Can't wait for the next season!

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