Talk:Whispering Echoes/@comment-29491342-20160716173740

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I'm baaack! (For Firey's experiment)

I like Sparrow. She seems cool, and always is able to make her point.

Stream seems like the perfect match for Thrush. Thrush is a hotheaded tom, while Stream is his clearsighted, kind mate.

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The only problem I really have is the paragraphs. Don't forget to make new paragraphs every time another character speaks. A good example is the fourth chapter.