Talk:Flicker/@comment-7410018-20150904074644/@comment-8248793-20150905004339

all these comments are just making me so happy amg <3333

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--1.-- Yeah Lux has an interesting development and tbh I don't really recall what my main focus was for her, I kind of let "her" develop herself as she kinda just got plopped into situations. I might have to revise this chapter because I definitely didn't explain too much of the situation because I wanted to setting to be mysterious but also because I knew what the whole situation was.

Hm true, I'm not sure if I want to change the not knowing the situation because I want the readers to try to figure it out and learn it after awhile (and maybe cause some of it might just become a plot twist instead) (but you're definitely right)

--2.-- Oh huh O: I always thought of Lux as a feminine name.

--3.-- Yeah he wasn't supposed to be the love interest. There wasn't even supposed to be romance in this story since it's mostly Lux's ways of coping with a difficult situation. Then Ricky popped in and I just loved how they seemed to be partners so yeahhhh xD

Hm I don't remember what Robin Hood's like so it wasn't intentional

--4.-- Yeah I see your point! I just couldn't think of any more to write after that. There actually wasn't supposed to be a cell scene in there (but I wanted more words to the chapter before I ended it xD)

Hm idk, hopefully it'll be a bit less confusing...but I won't count on it.

--5.-- It's not really a volcano tbh. It's more like rocks that are set on fire. The rocks are really flamable and with those rocks, the Enforcement can really control the Fire Range.

--6.-- Daw thank you so much!! <333

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