Talk:Pumpkintail's Guide How Not to Make Mary-Sues/@comment-26918124-20161030031458

 I have 2 cats here. Please review 'em.

'''What is your cat's name? Lifeheart'''

'''What is your character's gender? Male'''

'''What is his/her description? A white cat with a gray patch on his leg.'''

'''Tell me about his/her past! '''His mother was a clan cat while his father was a kittypet. His sister lives with his father while he lives with his mother. Lifeheart had dreams about his father and then saw him outside clan territory and met him. His best friend left for another clan later because his father was the leader and Lifeheart had no real friends in his clan.

'''Does he/she have family? His mother is a clan cat and his father is a kittypet. He also has a sister who lives as a kittypet.'''

'''Does he/she have a mate? Not yet. He does have an intrest in someone though.'''

'''Does he/she have kits? If it's female, how many kits she had? Tell me amount of litters and kits in separate ones! No.'''

'''Describe your cat with three words. Smart. Brave. Friendly.'''

'''Do other cats like him/her? He fits in but no real friends.'''

'''Did your cat ever face a discrimination or bullying because of something? As an apprentice he was teased for being Half-Clan but it stopped later on.'''

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'''What is your cat's name? Lionstar'''

'''What is your character's gender? Male'''

'''What is his/her description? A flame-colored tom.'''

'''Tell me about his/her past! His father was the leader of a clan and very ambitious. Lionstar's mother decided to raise him in another clan. Lionstar grew up with no knowledge of his father until they shared dreams in the dark forest where his grandfather trained them. Soon he left for his father's clan. After a battle his father died and he took the spot of leader and is trying to continue taking over the forest like his father.'''

<p style="font-size:16px;">'''Does he/she have family? A mother and deceased father in different clans. He also has 4 kits. 3 born to one clan 1 born to another.'''

<p style="font-size:16px;">'''Does he/she have a mate? Fishfur and Smallleg'''

<p style="font-size:16px;">'''Does he/she have kits? If it's female, how many kits she had? Tell me amount of litters and kits in separate ones! Fishfur had 1 surviving kit who Lionstar has never met. Smallleg has 3 kits.'''

<p style="font-size:16px;">'''Describe your cat with three words. Brave. Strong. Ambitious'''

<p style="font-size:16px;">'''Do other cats like him/her? They don't trust him.'''

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<p style="font-size:16px;">'''Did your cat ever face a discrimination or bullying because of something? Not really.'''