Talk:Mapleshade and Birchface/@comment-39013859-20190415220445

Hey. I have read your story and it is REALLY good, but maybe it would be EVEN better if you could start sentences and cat's names with capital letters, start a new line when someone else is speaking and maybe read over it, to fix up any other grammar. Brilliant story, I can't wait for more! p. S when I read it, I thought it was Birchfall and Mapleshade, and I was really confused until I realized it was Birchface!