Talk:Of Time and Tales/@comment-8248793-20171104145638

SPOILERS the fallen rose

(hahaha starting all my comments the same lol)

Cute! I love this opening already, and I'm hoping to see if this will end up being incorporated somehow in your later plotline (if you have it continuous!) though this is less of a myth/legend rather than a storyline arc that has been shortened for the prompt ;P

The beginning was a unique start, with your descriptions of Rosefoot and how slowly but surely in those lines, we found Blueclaw falling in love. It was a great way to do it because in a longer storyline, those could have been separate until you got to a more climactic part, but for a one-shot, this was perfect! I loved how he analyzed her traits separately until he arrived at the conclusion that yes he loved her.

I don't think the romance was rushed at all or even separate from this one-shot. I felt that you really wove it in well, even Rosefoot's love back, which you didn't have to question because it was shown in their interactions. It worked well with the prompt, as you took the name and placed it with your characters, and I had a little panic attack with Blueclaw when she died tbh.

<3 it so far! i'll do my best to keep up (though only promising the weekends haha the weekdays will be hard)

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