Talk:Why?/@comment-26285531-20160214010248

I absolutely loved this. It's not more than a bit like a regular fanfiction, which is what I loved about your story. You're basically stating every thought, feeling, and memory of Cinderpelt and displaying them on the page, and your writing came out so precise and to the point that it almost felt like I was right there, and the story was replaying on the screen even though I've read it in the books countless times. I've never thought about writing fanfictions about this, and I'm really amazed at how you managed to incorporate the first person with a cat who's already passed away, all while narrating in past tense.

This was really good, and if you decide to write anything else like this I'll be a complete supporter!!