Talk:Despondency/@comment-27725192-20170626015348

COMMENTING CONTEST

I love the sorrow woven in this story! Not just sorrow but there is hope and determination in Ravenstar searches for Goldenwing - but it's almost as if she knows she'll find her dead. It was really sad when she did, and I believe you delivered that scene so well as I almost cried :D Great job! This deserves way more attention.