Talk:Jailbreak/@comment-4751506-20130609230741

It's a moose. ...no seriously, there was a freaking moose trampling flowers on the TV.

I honestly love War, so much. :3 Okay, so, as usual, you know I start out first with the negatives then segue into the positives. There weren't as many errors in this - that I found at least - perhaps because the action and the way you wrote made me read so quickly, mainly 'cause it was so action-packed and stuff. Anyways, it's the first epi of the season so there's not much reason for confusion anyway.

And then, just...wow. I totally thought Shadowsong had been killed after the Thundercloud attack, but unfortunately I had seen Rainy's comment about how she didn't die, and, well, yeah. On the other hand, Snowflight and Lionwing. Just...they're so epic. Just as Rainy said, their care for their Clanmates shows they're really cats too, they're not just cold, heartless villains as a lot of other authors make their own antagonists out to be.

Whee, I love you Arti. [I say 'whee' so much now, what's happening to me? o-o]