Talk:The Ocean/@comment-8248793-20151127030422

I can't wait until Part Two is done to comment

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Okay I really do love the relationship between Wave and Hollytail, how they seem to calm each other and they practically need each other (you could tots do Wave/Holly haha) I was pretty surprised when Wave burst out like that it was actually then i realized wave was right about Holly (idk if you intended that to happen, but it seemed as though we were Holly so we are as "blind" so to speak as she is)

Also due to the last portion of the story, I think Wave killed Foxfang. Everything adds up. She wanted Hollytail to stop bc she knew that if she told Hollytail she killed him, Hollytail would break the promise and kill her for justice or something. And then the dream totally indicated Wave doing something that Hollytail didn't know about and Longstar's suspicions...

Wave's story was really sad and I really hope she can find true happiness with Hollytail and that Holly doesn't ruin their relationship :c

Like Sea said, your character development is super fab! We get new developments as the story goes on and we realize these characters are so flawed, esp like Hollytail and even Wave.

Great story, I'm so glad you're still writing this :)<3

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