Talk:Drowned/@comment-24143898-20150330055019

(thou loves this story, and this also be thou competition post yay)

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This idea... it's just amazing. In my opinion, it's a dystopian twist to Warriors, and... it's absolutely stunning. The detail is very good, and the prologue really hooked you in.

Lightpaw and Risingpaw are awesome characters - I ship Risinglight, btw <3

Fernpaw's death... it was unexpected, but that scene was written beautifully. Poor Jaypaw.... he didn't deserve that.

Stormstar must die. Poor Shattered Ice.

Anyway, this is really good, and I'll continue watching, just like since when this story was first put on the wiki. <3

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