Talk:Watershade's Story: Prologue/@comment-30373033-20161031024320

I edited it slightly.. I felt like it gave the black cat a more menacing feel. And it also provides a few more spaces for choices. Possibly killer doesn't want to be here, but is afraid to leave because of Breezepelt? I made it so it makes us feel that Breezepelt wants the clan to suffer. He wants to let the cats see the medicine cat. I hope this is a good edit. :)