Talk:The Night Prophecy/@comment-24519368-20170422110104/@comment-27153792-20170422135105

Thanks for the imput! This is one Fireflyflight and I's first fanfictions, so I'm not suprised to see it had major flaws. In the sequel, The Frost Prophecy, I do try to make things more interesting by expanding on Ravenflight and Sealeaf, though looking back, I now realize that adding Sealeaf the way I did was a big mistake, but I needed there to be a kit from the same family for The Frost Prophecy.

Anyway, thanks! I'll try to make The Frost Prophecy better with this information.