Talk:Arrival/@comment-8248793-20131002044631

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I like it so far, though Angelstrike's death was so quick. It was obvious that everyone would think that Cloudfeather did it, and that she had to be out of camp when it happened. But I read Fox's Bite first, so I might just know what's happening :P

I really like the suspense, and how it sems to have a dark secret behind all of it, the plot is quick and asending fast, which makes me really want to read Strike Two, which I can hopefully do by today. I dun wanna wait!

You had a few mistakes, like right at the beginning, and I'm off to read the next!

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