Talk:Feathers & Fur/@comment-1839575-20131124003326

''"What is this!? Firestar letting owls into the clan!?" Lionblaze shouted. ''

That just cracked me up, because it seems so much like something Firestar would do and everyone else would complain about! xDD This is a really fascinating idea and I'd love to see it carried further! I have a couple of suggestions though - there's an editing team now, right? Maybe hire one of them to fix up your grammar; it will make the story easier to read :) Also I'd suggest not putting too much effort into making Sunny's accent come across in the typing. Focus more on the words he uses, like 'wee' or 'lass' and 'laddie' (stereotypes, I know, but they get the point across) and readers will supply the accents in their own minds. Creating an accent in the text itself can often lead to confusion and annoyance as people try to figure out how to pronounce each weirdly spelled word.

That's my two cents, anyway! Keep writing! :D