Talk:Half-Blood/@comment-24542920-20140414021648

-Spoilers- Okay, first of all, Sedgewhisker BETTER just be in shock, cause I don't think Shadowsong can take another crazy, raving lunatic. XD Just saying... I think the beginning was a little bit of an akward piece of writing, but as the story progressed, the writing was smoother. I think Gorsefur really shore how much he had grown as a commander. He was more confident, and he knew how to manipulate Shadowsong.

Can't wait for the next one, and great job on this one!