Talk:Shadows of Love/@comment-7270915-20130611133337/@comment-25531638-20130612211914

True, but I'd agree that that's a little extreme. Brooktail is really mean to leave a wounded apprentice alone, whether she hates them or not. Great job on this! I especially like how it's fast paced enough to keep things interesting. I also like how you used 'swallowing a live rat' as a comparison with Splashpaw and her hard work and punishment. I will go read the next book now!