Talk:The Four/@comment-27725192-20170627233446

COMMENTING CONTEST - BONUS FOR TIER TWO

Okay so here's your OC's story XD It's great expect I've found numerous grammar and spelling errors which kind of made it hard to follow. Chapter five was quite short, and wait...isn't Whiteflower Patchfeather's sister? That ending was pretty sad ;-; Great job, Patch!