Talk:Tiptoe (Night Visions songfic)/@comment-8248793-20141011173843

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Wait, I thought Mosspaw was in MeadowClan? One spelling mistake I often saw was that you would spell the "clan" part without captilizing the "C". idk, usually we capitilize it (shrugs)

This one was rather rushed, and I felt as though you could have elaborated in different parts before continuing on to the next event.

I really like Flamegaze, and how she doubted her own actions. I don't actually ship MossXFlame, because I think Flamegaze is too malevolent to be Mosspaw's mate, and Moss is too innocent for my taste x3

Despite the pace being too fast, you still did well with your characters, and the plot line was rich and full of new twists! I really liked this one :)

<3

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