Talk:Solo/@comment-5488450-20130127190319

Arti this was GREAT!

I love how much Brookfall has changed, but yet how little she has changed at the same time. Her heart had hardened with greif loss and all the pain of the war but she still hasn't killed before.

And killing someone really, really ruined her.

I also like how she now turns to Oakfall. Now that they have both lost their partners they turn to each other.

And when she killed him.

I was all like, "WHOAH!"

It was really heartwrenching, and the only thing I can really think of reccomending may be to slow down the death a little. I am a fast reader and my eyes sort of skipped that part and I was confused before I had to go back and read it again, slower that time.

Other than that I can't think of anything. Perfecttttt <3